The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12 - Page 43

Originally posted by: hgrhr

pinky...when are you updating yaar!!

in 1 hour......😊

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

hey nice part
i've been silently reading ur ff for a while now but i guess i shud make myself known
anyways i love ur ff its very intresting
soo plz pm me when u updt
n continue soon

thanksssss a lot for your comment.....i'm glad u liked it......more than that i'm glad that you removed time to comment......will surely PM you.......😊

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

dosto ne aapki update ke asha

mein iske back ke sabhi update revise kar diye aab to naya update post karo

cho sweet adi.....really sorry for this delay.......😊

Originally posted by: luv-myur

Take your time pinky.

Actually focus on u'r exam first-no probs with the dalay.

Good luck with both!

thankssss......😊

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

ok now i think missed ur second part u have posted it but u didnt pm me thats not fair.....and waiting for 2mrws part...and pinky there is no need to think a lot u know because whatever u right i enjoy reading....

this is anu dear...i have changed my user name.....ok now take ur own time and come with ur rocking update....

sorry anu but i didnt send PM's to anyone......thanksssss for liking my ff......😊

Originally posted by: angelz

hey im finally catching up on fanfics, got back frm india abt a week ago but now im free must say keep up the gud wrk

thanksssssss a lot......😊

RECAP:

Gunjan-Samrat-Mayank plan a surprise date for nupur.Nupur is overwhelmed.Mayank takes her inside store room.

PART 9-C:

Mayank & nupur entered the store room.The room was completely dark.Nupur was scared of darkness.Mayank held her hand & walked alongwith her.Nupur cant see anything & not knowing where they are going just held mayu's hand tightly.Mayu stopped in his feet & so did nupur.Mayu whispered in her ears to close her eyes.She did as she was told & a small smile was playing along her lips.The great tingling sensations started back in her stomach.Sensation of nervousness as well as excitement.She was excited to know what mayu had planned for her.Mayank came back & stood behind her back & held her waist in his hands & rested his chin on her shoulder & whisperd:

M: aankhen kholo…

Nups tingling sensations & heart beat had already increased as mayank held her waist tightly & his hot breath was on her shoulder but his small whisper just multiplied her heart beat.However she opened her eyes slowly & was mesmerized.In front of her was a picture of an entire beach.It was just not a normal picture but electrically animated.The entire wall on that side was covered with the beach picture.Sounds of waves were filling the room.The lightening was such that it actually exhibited that the waves were in motion.There were 2 coconut trees on both the ends of beach.The beach depicted a beautiful sunset enlighting the whole room in golden colour.Mayank had placed a solid rock just ahead the coconut tree.It picturized as if the rock was just beneath the coconut tree.Mayank held her hand & made her sit on the rock.Nupur was just simply surprised at mayank's brains.He never left chances to surprise her.This was something really unique.She was lost in her dreams when mayank's pinch bought her back into this world.

N: AAAAAHHHHHH…..(rubbing the place where mayank pinched)…..pagal ho gaye ho kya?Is tarah se koi pinch karta hai????

M: main kya karta…..kitni der se tumhe bulaa raha hu par tum sunti hi nahi….

N: well Mr.Mayank Sharma ismein bhi tumhaari galti hai….

M(confused): meri????

N: never mind….tum nahi samjhoge….

Mayank looked at her hand where she was blowing to reduce her pain.Her hand was red.May be he pinched a bit too hard.He sat more close to her & tried touching her hand but she took it away in anger.Mayank felt hurt.

M(sadly): I'm sorry…..main nahi jaanta tha itni zor se lag jaayegi…..

Nupur looked at mayank who was observing her hand sadly.She mentally kicked herself for being stupid & over reacting.She was sad for spoiling his mood.

N: its OK….itni bhi nahi jal raha…

Mayank looked at her & smiled while she smiled back.He took her hands in his & started blowing softly.Nupur just stared at him.How he always cared about her.He could not stand even a small sadness on her face nor could she ever see him sad.He kissed her hand & to its magic the pain just went away.Mayank looked up to find nupur staring at him.He was also drowned in her eyes.Both sat there silently for sometime staring at each other & unknowingly both were being pulled forward by some force.Their heads were moving on its own accord asking each other to forget everything & enjoy this moment.Their lips were inches away & eyes closed waiting for a kiss to start but this time both didn't want to take an initiative for kissing unknown to the reason why.Both were for once scared to kiss each other.They simply just waited for other to start but time just passed with both waiting.Than out of frustration both opened their eyes together & looking at angry looks in their eyes for not kissing both bursted out laughing.Than nups rested her head on mayu's shoulder & both entwingled their fingers & sat there for an hour.Nups was busy looking at the sunset & admiring its beauty while mayu kept admiring nups face.Nups believed that she was in some dream.Yes she always dreamt about sitting with mayank in some silent place where they could be together without anyone disturbing them.She believed mayu could never do this because he was unaware about her desires.But she was wrong.She closed her eyes & rested on his shoulder while he lay his head on her head.But the silence was disturbed as nupur started coughing loudly.Mayu was shocked to see nupur coughing so much all of sudden.

M(patting her back): tum theek toh ho????kya hua achanak…..

But nupur just kept on coughing & started showing her hand indicating she needed water.But there was no water.

M: woh nupur yahaan paani nahi hai…

N: KYA????tum humaari date par paani bhi rakhna bhul gaye????

M(smiling): kahaan gayi khaasi????

N(surprised that she revealed): woh…woh….toh chali gayi…jaise aayi waise gayi…

Mayu gave her a suspicious look.

N: fine…..maine natak kiya…tum kitne boring ho mayank….maine socha main thoda khaasne ka natak karoogi toh tum mujhe pyaar se paani pilaoge….fir hum kuch baat karenge….

M(smiling): main jaanta tha tum natak kar rahi ho…..ek number ki dramebaaz ho par tumhaara drama mere saamne nahi chalega…..main tumhe bahut ache se jaan ta hu….(pointing at other corner) woh dekho….

At one dark corner suddenly lights came & there was a statue of coconut man selling coconut water.Nupur looked at the statue of man & all artificial coconuts placed than at mayank in disbelief.

N: tum chahto ho main naqli paani piyu???

M(rolling his eyes): no silly….dhyaan se dekho…..

Nupur saw but didn't find any difference.

M: tum yahin ruko….

He got up & went to the opposite wall.On reaching the wall he turned & looked back at nupur than pointed at the lorry of coconuts.He took up a coconut & than nupur realized that among the artificial ones there was a real coconut with 2 straws placed in it. Nupur brightened up on seeing the coconut….Mayu came back to her with the coconut water.

N(excitedly): mayank…mere liye naariyal ka pani….tumhe yaad tha???

M: ofcourse….tumhaari pasand-napasand ki cheezein main kaise bhul sakta ho…..main jaanta hu tumhe naariyal ka paani kitna pasand hai….yeh lo….

He gave her to drink but she pulled him down & made him sit on the rock.

N: hum dono saath mein peeyenge….

Both started drinking water from the same coconut while staring at each other.Mayank bought his straw very close to nupur's so that their lips were almost touching each other.Nupur blushed at his act & than laughed remembering how he couldn't kiss her few minutes back.She still believed she was dreaming all this & she'll get up soon to see this dream break.The coconut water was over but both of them didn't realize because they were busy staring.But there was disruption in their straws as both the straws got interconnected which made them realize that water was over.Mayank softly took her hand in his.

M: tumhe bhuk lagi hai??

Nupur nodded realizing she hadn't had her dinner.She didn't even know what was the time but heck who cares?She was with mayank so why to worry about sleep?Mayank held her hand & took her to the 3^rd corner of room.He removed his lighter & lit a candle. A small but beautiful table was kept there with 2 chairs.Lovely fresh rose petals were placed on the table with a big candle glowing in between.2 plates were kept & some closed bowls.Nupur opened up a bowl to see her favourite Paneer tikka & other bowl had dal while the 3^rd had rice & roti's were placed in a plate.Curd was also kept there alongwith her favourite gulab jaamuns.She looked at mayank with disbeilief.How many sureprises had he planned for her?each surprise would outbeat the other.Indian food was her favourite.Mayu knew how much she misses Indian food.being a model she would always be on some trip or other & would hardly get to eat Indian food.Her eyes overcame with emotions.Mayu cupped her face & kissed away her tears.

N: mayank…tumne…

M(placing his finger on lips): ssssshhhh……kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi…..

N: par mayank mere liye itna karne ki kya zaroorat hai?

M: jawaab tum jaanti ho….aur waise bhi tumne subah se bahut kuch kha liya hai par maine nahi….please mujhe bhookh lagi hai….

N(shocked): kya….tumne kuch khaaya nahi?????tum pagal ho gaye ho kya???(cocking her eyebrow)kya main jaan sakti hu janaab poora din bhuke kyu rahe????

M: kyunki tum pareshan thi…tum jaanti ho main tumhe udaas nahi dekh sakta…..tumhaari tabeeyat bhi theek nahi thi…..pata nahi kaunsi baat ko lekar tum itna pareshan ho…..

Nupur looked down with a pang of guilt.He didn't eat anything because of her stupidness.Her anger & decision broke him completely.She had almost forgotton about the serial killer & everything else but now everything came back in her mind.Mayank looked at her face with a ray of hope that now she'll tell him whats bothering her.Her different expressions were so not understood by him.A havoc again started in her heart & brain regarding her decision.Whatever it is she wont let her date spoil she decided.She took mayank & made him sit & herself sat opposite him.Mayanks hope subsided as she started acting normal in front of him.She served in both the plates but than decided against it & took only one plate.She took the 1^st piece of roti & made mayu eat it.Mayu was sad that he had almost made her spill the beans but yet couldn't achieve.But he didn't show it on his face.'One more push mayank' he told himself & decided to wait for another opportunity.He smiled & made nupur eat.

N: mayank yeh khaana tumne banaaya hai…..

M: yeh tum pooch rahi ho ya bataa rahi ho?

N: naa pooch rahi hu na bataa….main jaanti hu yeh khaana tumne banaaya hai…par kaise???tumhe in logon ne kitchen mein khaana banaane diya?

M: paiso se sab kuch hota sweetheart…..main jaanta tha tum mere haathon ka swaadish khaana bahut miss kar rahi thi isliye maine socha tumpar itni mehrbaani kar loo……

N(sarcastically): yeh right…..waise ek baat bataaoo?

M: bolo….

N: khaana bahut tasty hai….aur main sach mein tumhaare haath ka khaana miss kar rahi thi (winking & smiling).

Mayu was caught off guard at her flirty behaviour.

M(mischeviously): aur kya kya mere bare mein miss kiya?(winking at her)

Nupur blushed at his double meaning comment.

N: shut up mayank….

Both fed each other whilst playing & throwing remarks at each other.Once again nupur forgot all about the serial killer & became normal.After their dinner mayank got up & before nupur could question disappeared in darkness.The beach light was gone & the candles blew out causing the entire room to again dissolve in darkness.Nupur was scared.She started walking slowly & taking mayank's name.Sweat formed on her forehead & palms.Her heartbeat increased.She was on the verge of tears when suddenly a spot light came on her.She was shocked at the sudden light.Opposite her another spot light came in which mayank was standing & smiling.Relief spread through her body.She ran towards him & hugged him tightly.

N: tum jaante ho na mujhe andhere se darr lagta hai…

M: sorry jaan par tumhaare liye ek aur surprise ka intzaam karna tha……

N: ek aur surprise?

Mayu nodded his head.A soft music started playing somewhere.He held out his hand for her & kept his other hand on her waist.Both the bodies came in close contact with each other.They started dancing slowly to the beats of the soft music.Mayank twirled her & bought her close.Just than many rose petals fell from up on both of them.Nupur looked up to see many roses falling on her soft skin.The entire floor got covered with rose petals for them to dance on it.Nupur closed her eyes & rested her head on his chest.Mayank immersed his head in her neck kissing it softly.She was more than happy about this date.She never thought a dream date could be more better than what she always thought.She still found it difficult to believe mayu had done so much for her.The Mayank Sharma who was very boring & totally padaako could understand her dream so well.The Mayank who would take nupur to museums or restaurants on their date could make an evening so special.Yes since the time they fell in love mayu would always take her to some boring or noisy places where they would just crack some fun & come back.They would never romance on such dates.Hence nupur had always dreamt of a date on a beach where only the 2 would be there or some quite private candle light dinner & some dance on some soft magazine.Never had she known mayu actually knew about her dream.

M: kya soch rahi ho itna….

N: kuch nahi….bas yahi ki kyat um hamesha se mere sapne ke baare mein jaan te the?

M: hmmm….waise toh main actual beach pe yeh sab plan karta par yahaan dur-dur tak koi beaches nahi hai aur waise bhi rules kaafi sakht ho gaye hai aur mujhe tumhe dur le jaane ki permission nahi milli…..

N: tum hamesha se jaante the toh yeh surprise dene ke liye itna intzaar kyu karwaaya???

M: maine socha tha yeh surprise main tumhe tab dunga jab main tumhe shaadi ke liye propose karoonga….mujhe lagaa ki tum jaanti ho main tumse kitna pyaar karta hu par shayad main galat tha….

Nupur stopped dancing & looked into his eyes.She could see hurt in his eyes.

N: main jaanti hu tum mujhse pyaar karte ho….. main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hu mayank….tumhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki mujhe koi shaq hai?

M: kyunki agar tum woh nupur ho jisse main pyaar karta hu toh tum mujhse kabhi koi baat nahi chipaati….tum jaanti ho nupur hum ek-doosre ko bachpan se jaante hai…choti se choti baat bhi humne ek doosre ko bataayi hai….par aaj tum itni badi ho gayi ho ki tum mujhse baatein chupaane lagi ho….na jaane kyu aaj mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise tum mujhko khudse dur karne ki koshish kar rahi ho…..kyu mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise tum mujhpar vishwaas nahi karti….kyu tum mujhe apni dil ki baat nahi bataa paa rahi ho….

Tears formed in nupurs eyes.She could no more control her emotions & fell on floor crying.He also sat on floor & took her in his embrace & started carrassing her back.

M: bataao mujhe nupur tum itni pareshan kyu ho?

N(crying): mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai mayank….tum soch bhi kaise sakte ho mujhe tumhaare pyaar par koi shaq hai????tum jaante ho yeh sach nahi hai….

M: toh phir sach kya hai?

N(still crying): maine aaj subah tumhaari aur doctor ki baat sunlit hi….main jaanti hu woh ladki liza thi……

Now mayank understood why was she so sad…..

N: tumne mujhe kyu nahi bataaya mayank?

Mayu (making her look in her eyes): kyunki mujhe tumhaari fikar thi….main chahta tha yeh news tumpar koi sadma na pahunchaye….mujhe lagaa iss date ke baad main tumhe liza ke baare mein samjha doonga….main nahi chahta tumhaari tabeeyat aur kharaab ho….I LOVE YOU NUPUR…..tum mere liye bahut kimti ho….main tumhe kho nahi sakta….. (tears formed even his eyes urging her to understand his feelings)

N: I LOVE YOU TOO MAYANK…..tum bhi mere liye bahut kimti ho isliye main nahi chahti tumhe kuch ho…

M: kya matlab???mujhe kya hoga nupur???batao nupur….

Nupur hesitated but she didn't want to hide anything from him now.

N: mujhe usne dhamki di agar maine tumhe mujhse aur iss case se dur nahi kiya toh woh tumhe maar daalega….

Mayank was speechless after he heard this.Sadness was replaced by anger in his eyes.

M: how dare he????uski itni himmat…..usse kya lagta hai uski dhamki se hum darr jaayenge???

N: par mayank woh pagal hai…kuch bhi kar sakta hai….

M: aur hum hamaara pyaar kissi pagal ke liye qurbaan kar denge???kya humaara pyaar itna kamzor hai???tumne soch bhi kaise liya uske liye main apna pyaar bhula doonga???

N: ussne tumhe kuch kiya toh main khudko maaf nahi kar paogi…..

M: mujhe kuch nahi hoga nupur….suna tumne mujhe kuch nahi hoga…..agar woh mujhe maarna chahta hai toh woh kabhi bhi kaise bhi maar sakta hai….agar mere naseeb mein jeena likha hai toh woh kuch nahi kar sakta…..kya tumhe mujhpar vishwaas hai?

Nups nodded her head.

M: toh bas….ab hum saath milkar iska saamna karenge…..tum mujhse kuch nahi chupaogi….aur usse bilkul nahi darrogi….

Nupur once again nodded her head but tears were still forming in her eyes.Mayank kissed away her tears.Nupur looked at him & crashed her lips on his all of sudden.Mayank came out of the shock & kissed her back.Both fulfilling each others emptiness.The kiss told him that she'll not hide anything from now onwards.The kiss promised that they'll go through all this together now onwards & will prove their love on this path.They'll punish that devil who tried to separate them.The kiss was full of promises & faith.They tried to incorporate all their sorrow as well happiness in this one kiss.This one kiss is a memory for them coz this proved that their love is their strength & not weakness.They broke from the kiss & rested their foreheads together.

N: I promise mayank ab main tumse dur jaane ke baare mein kabhi nahi sochungi…

Both smiled & remained like that for sometime.

Finally done.Dont know how you all will react.Sorry if its not upto your expectations.

Sorry for the delay in updating but with my college's hectic schedule it gets really difficult to update regularly.I know this part 9 stretched a bit too far but it was important for nupur to understand her feelings & tell mayank everything.I haven't read this part again so sorry if there are any mistakes.😊

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after reading this i have only one word... OMG 😳 ...

Mayank did so much for nupur.. wonderful... Mayank and nupur dint kiss in the first was good i liked that... then romantic candle light dinner then a stop music dance and then finally nupur teling the truth i really liked the emotional bonding... 😳 .....

Then finally they kissed each other wow...... 😳 😳 😳

I know i have tortured you to update the part.. i am happy now... 😊 😊 😊

love you dear... 🤗

will wait for the next part.... 😉

Awesum

WOW is all i can say.......only if u see me now ull c a tear stained face....lol.....i cried..........me d emotional freak.....awesome part!!!!! really too gud......

luv
ananya