[FF] [Sajan+Mayur]-Sweet; blank pages. Note pg20

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zainab.A

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

u r an amazing writer!!! wow!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww! poor gunjan!!!!!!! :D :D!!
loved it yaara....
continue soon!!

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Priyanka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

aweome blossom .i can imagine nupur on skateboard and takihg support of mayank and bear hug.....wow!!!!!!!! sajan was as usual awesome.😊

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shrishti gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Awesome update! You rock! Nice concept! Update asap!

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

hiii

thanx for the pm

it was gr8 yaar

but mayur part was less...but it was sweet !!!...culd easily imagine that scne

the diary part was cool

awesum work

hope to see more of mayur scne

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Hgrhrnwl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Hey Aastha

Firstly, thank you so much for liking my VMs!! And for the compliment about my name...its actually the first time someone complimented me on my name!🤗

And for the PM too.😛

So I just read the new part...really new and interesting style of writing yaar! I'm really liking it!

Aww....poor Gunjan na...she's really taking it too hard. Y'know what....her entry in the college made me remember this book I read, twilight(my fav). The main heroin, she was a lot like this too...nervous and dreading the new college and the unwated attention! lol

And I was missing mayur scenes in this one yaar....hopefully we'll get to se more of them in the next one...?

Sajan interaction was was really cute!

Keep it up!

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-Grace-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Asthuuuu🤗🤗🤗

Firstly sorry for the late reply😳*kaan pakring*....and no thankus im glad colour coding worked😆

Now comming to the update,

@Gunjan's diary: loved the concept how she's writing her private thoughts, and feeling...😳it was adorable!..Luved JHOOOTAA😆🤣🤣

@Papa-Gunji scene:awwww its sooo emotional n cute! very well written👏👏👏

@Gunjan n old songs:woww..gunjan old songs...cool...its diff and beautiful that u chose old songs it is something unique, all ff writers prefer new song, but that was very smart of you😉😆👏

Gunjan must be luking gorgous in a hoodie😆😳

@MayUr scene: i luv the tomboy avtar of nups, it suits her totally😆, Nups+skateboard+mayank=Perfect scene!⭐️god thing they are friends here..hehehe..and its cool that nups a tomboy here not a film encyclopedia🤣

@classroom n gunjan:awww poor her, and samrat...aur koi kaam nahi hai kia😆..lolz...bugging her around...perfect scene again⭐️

Keep writing!!!

You are a FAB writer, and an amazing Friend😳

It was a pleasure to meet you!

Update soon

IQ~

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ashred12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

poor gunjan....hope she gets new friends soon...sajan moment was very cute....do update soon...

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astha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
@ u have different style of writing ...👏

Thank youu😳

👏@ Good scene with that dairy .. it helped us 2 understand her mind set .😊

Aw cheers, hoping to make things easy to understand later on to😆

@ that plane and fat woman scene was hilarious 😆

LOL!😆😆 I was thinking of what could make poor gunji suffer on the flight. Ms fattie came along. I might bring her back plus its someones req to😳

@ Mayur part was so so small...plz add more in the next chapter😉

Aw dw, there will be lods of mayur. Ive got many scenes planned for them. i just thought this chapter can be just about gunji movin and stuff and i wanted her to meet nups and mayank first😳😳but thought naa sammy. After all the future lovers should meet😉😆

@ I think in future we will see some conflict b/w mom's new man and Gunjan ??😉

Ohh those scenes are being written now. Im thinking when to add them. Maybe after few chapters 😳😳 can say that some are goin to emotional 😛

@ sam and gunjan meeting was a good scene 2....

Thank youu. 😳😳

good work ... keep going and pm me ......😛

Sure! 😃

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astha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: angelz
loved the update and thnx 4 the PM
poor gunjan..she relli misses her dad

and nupur on a skateboard??lmao awesome..and love mayank as always...sammy was cute too continue writin <3 dia

Thank you and no probs!

Yeah poor gunji. 😭

LOL nupur on A skateboard, NOW thats what asthu wants to see in real. It will be so cute man. After all our Ms Drama Queen is bubbly and adorablee not forgetting beautiful! 😳😳 Tomboy suits her badd!! 😆

Sammy is cute, so i guess in ma FF he seems cute to. Hope to keep that up! 😆😆