[FF] [Sajan+Mayur]-Sweet; blank pages. Note pg20 - Page 6

Originally posted by: zainab.A

u r an amazing writer!!! wow!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww! poor gunjan!!!!!!! :D :D!!
loved it yaara....
continue soon!!

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

aweome blossom .i can imagine nupur on skateboard and takihg support of mayank and bear hug.....wow!!!!!!!! sajan was as usual awesome.😊

Originally posted by: shrishti gupta

Awesome update! You rock! Nice concept! Update asap!

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

amazin update...........

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hiii

thanx for the pm

Its k 😃

it was gr8 yaar

but mayur part was less...but it was sweet !!!...culd easily imagine that scne

the diary part was cool

Aw dw more mayur in the next part i promised. Got few scenes written up and few more to go 😆😳

awesum work

hope to see more of mayur scne

Thank you and dont worry you will 😳

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Hey Aastha

Hey 😆

Firstly, thank you so much for liking my VMs!! And for the compliment about my name...its actually the first time someone complimented me on my name!🤗

Oh ma freaking bugs😲😲 u got to be kidding me. Your name is so beautiful. I love it! 😳 its weird no one never complimented you😕 Chalo never mind. Maybe i was the first one to realize 😆😆 Jokes apart. Its actually a really nice name. 🤗

And for the PM too.😛

No probs

So I just read the new part...really new and interesting style of writing yaar! I'm really liking it!

Aww....poor Gunjan na...she's really taking it too hard. Y'know what....her entry in the college made me remember this book I read, twilight(my fav). The main heroin, she was a lot like this too...nervous and dreading the new college and the unwated attention! lol

Oh i LOVE twilight. * Not much talking about it, if i start will end up writing a eassy 😆😆* I got inspired from there. Ive just started reading the book since ive watched the film! Some how gunji relates to bella in the movin business. Plus gunji is the shy one infront of new people😳

And I was missing mayur scenes in this one yaar....hopefully we'll get to se more of them in the next one...?

Dont worry next part you will see more.. i promise 😳

Sajan interaction was was really cute!

Thanks 😳

Keep it up!

Originally posted by: blushpink13

Asthuuuu🤗🤗🤗

Iqraaa😆( Hope i spelt is right😳) 🤗🤗🤗

Firstly sorry for the late reply😳*kaan pakring*....and no thankus im glad colour coding worked😆

LOL! Yeah, thanks for being honest. Now hoping the people wont get confused!😳

Now comming to the update,

@Gunjan's diary: loved the concept how she's writing her private thoughts, and feeling...😳it was adorable!..Luved JHOOOTAA😆🤣🤣

LOL! im glad you lot liked gunji diary entry. I actually enjoyed writing it since i write that way to😆😆

@Papa-Gunji scene:awwww its sooo emotional n cute! very well written👏👏👏

AWWEHHH! thank youu!😳

@Gunjan n old songs:woww..gunjan old songs...cool...its diff and beautiful that u chose old songs it is something unique, all ff writers prefer new song, but that was very smart of you😉😆👏

Gunjan must be luking gorgous in a hoodie😆😳

LOL! Yeah i guess its unique, But also cause i LOVED old songs. My mum kinda use to find it weird since im like interested in them, even old films. Any kind. 40z-80 😆😆😳 And oh yeh wada raha is my faavvvv song. The lyrics are so beautiful. My god, old is deffoo gold and rishi kapoor. EEEEEEEEEEEE in the song he looks so yummyilicous😍. Ahhh its random, i actually liked his father as in Great Raj kapoor. He was a outstanding actor and perfect in looks! 😍😳
I must sound weird naa. 😆😆

Im sure gunjii looked gorgous. I would wanna see her like that in the show. Mayb one day samrat and gunjan can go for a walk and he lends her his hoodie and she wears the hood to😳😆

@MayUr scene: i luv the tomboy avtar of nups, it suits her totally😆, Nups+skateboard+mayank=Perfect scene!⭐️god thing they are friends here..hehehe..and its cool that nups a tomboy here not a film encyclopedia🤣

LOL me 2. I love nupur in the show and even more in this FF. its actually fun writin stuff to do with her! 😆😆. YAY Equation😆 *Hi5* Mimi is going to be so happy to see this😆😳 Yeah good things they are mates and not ready to kill eachother. Doh they will have few nok jhoks but its not gonna drag! I want peace!!😳😆 LOOOL film encyclopedia. I gonna use this line. Can i pleasee😳

@classroom n gunjan:awww poor her, and samrat...aur koi kaam nahi hai kia😆..lolz...bugging her around...perfect scene again⭐️

LOL! Ab sammy kya kare. He didnt he would meet gunji😆😆 Well he isnt bugging her
He just keeps making touch contacts with her.
The second time he didnt wana buh kya kar! His bad luck😆😳

Keep writing!!!

You are a FAB writer, and an amazing Friend😳

It was a pleasure to meet you!

Samee here babes. It was a pleasure to come across you😳

Update soon

IQ~

Asthu

@ Aastha : Oohhh...you read twilight too! Great! I found another fan on the forum!

Originally posted by: mimi0295

RESERVED

i KNEW you would be first LOL! 😆

edited:

LOL Asthu, I reserved this spot before I got your PM 😆

LOL creepy much, that its right after i posted mine. LOL! 😆😆 mimi magic😆😆

I is good 😉

Very good! 😆

OKAY! Back to the part, ooooooh lallalalallla "First Sight" 😍 I'm dreaming already! 😆

EHEHEH! Abhi aur sights bhi left ha! 😆😳

@ Gunjan's diary-

Aweeeh poor baby! 😭 I can totally feel her pain. So much happening in her life all at once! Moving- which is like hell, esp. if you're attached to the place you're living in, her DAD's like not in her life atm, and that must suck! I cant imagine not seeing my dad for 3 months, I would DIE!

Yeah poor bacha! *hugs* I know TOO much happening in her life and she is just 18 still! Daddy is needed. LOL *SNAP * i cant think what i would i do if i dont see my daddy in 3 months. Probs text, email, phone do anything to talk to him! Par chalo she can at least email him and talk on the phone.

AND her mum and Aaron's marriage. 😕 I already told you this- but I'm really looking forward to Aaron and Gunjan's future scenes. I kind of want her to let him know that he's not her dad, and he never will be... but she's willing to accept him, it'll just take time.

Some step-dad/daughter bonding session. OH OH, and maybe Gunjan's dad can drop by one day... I'd like to see how he acts around his ex and her boyfriend. That'd be awkward 😆

Oh yes Aaron and Gunji scenes coming up! It will be mixed emoticons bonding first. Like anger, hate and disagreements but later it will turn into a emotional bond! LOL gunji dad. Oh yes and there some fun will start. I hope i can pen down the scenes right😳😳

LOL 🤣 You're fat woman thing just makes me laugh every time! It's like the 10th time I'm reading it 😆 Pooor Gunjan!

I already said this yesterday, but I'd like to see fatty aunty make another entry 😆

LOL😆😆! oh ill bring the fattyy auntry backk for a lil while! 😉

Aweeeeh, nobody takes her out for dinner? Stupid Aaron 😡😆

And I loved how you described Gunjan's feelings towards her dad not being around. She sounds really close to her dadu too! Bless. 😊

She is very close to her dadu. She has thing, where she talks to him in french + english

when she is sad! 😆😳 Man im thinkin some random stuff. Hope can pull it off right😳

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!! Tu,tu hai wahi-din ne jisse apna kahaa. Tu hai jahaan, main ho wahaan, ab toh yeh jinaa tere bin hai sazaaaaaaaaa!! Mil jaye iss tarah, doh lehre jis tarhaa, oooh mil jayye iss tarah, doh lehre jis tarah, phir hona judaaa haan yeh wadaa rahan!

I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee that song! RoKa 🥺

i LOVED the song man and the Roka version to! I was remembering the film and Roka!😭

EEEEEEEEEEEE Rishi kapoor and Roka Moments with the song in the BG! 😍.

LA LA LA LA LA! 😍😳


Im sure gunjii looked gorgous. I would wanna see her like that in the show. Mayb one day samrat and gunjan can go for a walk and he lends her his hoodie and she wears the hood to😳😆

I'm so glad you put in the RoKa touch. Gosh, I miss them like hell. 😭

Dont cry! RoKa should be remembered with smiles not tears. I hopet o see KaShu together again😛

OMG u stalker! LOL! u write out ideas that i have got planned! I was writing a reply to iqra i think i wrote that i want a scene where sammy lends gunji his hoodie and she wears the hood to😆😳

@ MayUr scene- AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!!!!!! I can so totally imagine that! Nupz skatboarding, grabbing Mayank for support and then embracing him in a bear hug 😳 Hayyee, I love MayUr to the core!!

Me2. Mayur cant be ignoreeed man! They are so adorableeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and sizzling together! 😳

@SaJan moment-

I tired to catch my breath hearing the chair move next to me. I grabbed my pen and started doodling idly inside my book. I gasped feeling a leg lightly crease past mine.
Oh my god! I could feel my cheeks warming up. I looked down to check if the person was trying to play footsie. He wasn't.

BEST DESCRIPTION EVER!! LOL "playing footsie" 😆 I loved playing footsie in g.5! LOL But then it turned into violent kicking 😕😆

LOL! I used to play footsie and my goddd samee it would turn into violent kicking and i was the one left crying over my bruisedd leg and foot😆

Aweeeeh! I love Sam's reaction when their hands touch! 😆 "looks like someone bit it" hahahahah!! I could totally picture that!

Hayyeee, Im so dead. I hope there's more MayUr in Part 3!!!! 😃

LOL! Well the guy felt the current and guys dont really no the feelings so they either think something is wrong with them, they are ill! The girl was struck by lightning🤣 ya phir something bit them🤣 Boys i tell you😆😆

Totally loved the update, and yesh- you eat fast. Mimi khush hai 😉😆

LOL! 😆😆

But you have to update the next part SOONER THAN SOON!

ill try cant promise after all Skl + CW + HW = NO TIME! 😭😭