MJHT FF:SARGAM(rhythm of love)part:12 uptd(oct 30) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Love the concept....can't wait to read the story 😊
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heyy nice inrto of Character
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey juvvi!!!!
nice intro..




do cont soon..
me waiting..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome!!!!!!!!sorry for the late comment,plzzzzz pm and post the 1st pt soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That's gr8 Juveria...Now Continue SOON.....
Am waiting
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character sketch is cool
waiting for the update now
Posted: 16 years ago
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~Sargam (rhythm of love)~

~*~Part 1!!!!~*~

A girl wearing knee length dress( same to coll..usually she were this kinda clothes to coll)

dia dress

waiting for someone... she turns around

Dia:dodo!!! tumne pata kiya hai who sab kab aa rahen hai..show shuru honey bas 15 min baakhi hai aur yahan toh kisi ka pata hi nahi'

Uday:D maine pata kiya who log toh nikal gaye aabhi atey hi hongey..waise don't worry humari doll concert ke liye late nahi hogi aur 15 min baakhi hai..15 min main toh bahut kuch ho sakta hai..

Just then both hear a car honk..

They both turns..

Dia:very good guys tum logon ne last minute arrive karne ka promise kiya tah kya???

Nups comes out wearing:

a black nd white top with black leggings ( she usually were these typ clotes to coll)

nup dress

nups:heya D'

dia:hii dear..tum log itni late..

nups:D chillax..you know main concert ke liye kabhi late nai hoti..aur abhi 10 mins hai concert shuru honey..anyways angel aagayi???

Dia:no yaar..

Samrat comes

Samrat:hey candy hey uday'.u people look tensed..

Nups:angel abhi nahi aayi aur tumhara buddy bhi..

Samrat:oh!! Itni si baat aur tum log itne tensed..buddy bas do min main yahan hoga hawa ki tarah..zara peeche toh dekho

They all turn.

A bike stops a girl wearing simple salwar kameez (she usually were these kinda clothes to coll)

coming towards nups, D, sam and uday'

Nup's nd D: finally'.

Gunjan comes nd hugs dia nd nups..

Nups:oh la la somones looking gorgeous!!!

Gunjan:nd someones looking hot!!!

Dia: hey guys wat about me???

Nup/gunji:hmmm you'???

Nups:you looking hotgeous'

Guys comes to the trio..

Everyone:hotgeous???

Nups:yup!!nupur jo bhi banati hai sensation ban jaata hai..

Sam:actually sis is absolutely right..(and gives hi5 to nups..)

Mayank:agar ye sab drama ho gay ho toh hum andar chaley???

Nups:anyways guys lets get in..(makes her face and goes in..)

Mayank:yeh apna muhh itna bigaadti kyun rehti hia??

Sam:dude pitna hai???agar Jhansi ki rani sun legit oh??

Nups:bro!!!

Sam:uff mercury on rising..

Nups gives him a cold look..

Nup:angel ,D aur U-D-A-Y chalo..

Uday:uh'(sam nd mayu are giggling at uday)main sonch raha tha kuch cool drink aur snacks ho jaye..tum chalo main aata hoon..

Nups ,gunji, dia, leave..

Sam,mayu share a laugh..

Uday:tum dono has rahey ho??hunter waali hai..pata nahi sam kaise jhail te ho??

Sam(dramatically):main masoom baccha mera haal toh main hi jaanta hoon'

Mayu:haan bechara baccha'ab chaley..

They all go in..

All guys sit in their seats..

Nups:U-D-A-Y where are the cool drinks???

Sam and mayu again giggling..

Uday:wo..w..cooldrinks hot ho gayi aur snacks ghar par chaley gaye..

Nups,gunji,dia:wat????

Dia:what are you saying dodo??

Uday to himself:mujhe hi nahi pata main kya kya keh raha hoon??god help'warna main aaj hi aapke paas aajaunga yeh teen deviyan mujhe aapke paas zaroor bhej dengi..

Nups:stop murmuring uday..

Just then a voice

Voice:main bhi aagaya aur cool drinks aur snacks bhi haazir..

They turn to the voice..

Girls trio:wow Benji!!!u such a sweet friend..

Benji joins the guys..

Sam:oh ho aaj kal ladkiyon ki bahut tariff mil rahi hai..

Benji:lkya karoon humterwaali ke hunter ka koi shakh nahi hai..

All the guys giggle again..

Nups:do you guys mind keeping your mouth shut!!!..?

Sam:weather bahut hi kharaab hai..

Nup:bro!!!!

Sam:shhhh!!!guys shhh!!!

They enjoy the music concert'till evening..after the concert

All are at car parking area..

Dia:so guys whats the plan???

Nup:D what plan..our next destination Sharma house..

Gunji:yeah right!!!

Dia:then what are we waiting for??

Nup:our drivers!!!

Nup:BRO!!

Gunji:MAYANK..

Dia:DODO

Mayu:yes angel!!!

Uday:yes di???

Sam:yes devil???

Nup:huh!!

Sam:I mean hunter'ahh imean sis'

Nup:that wasn't funny'lets move..

Sam:before we leave let me know where are we going???

Nup:bro now don't be silly..sharma house..

They all leave for Sharma house..

they arrive at Sharma's '

nups runs to the door'

nup: auntyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy(shouts)

mayufrom behind..

mayu:ahem 'ms.nupur shergill' tum door bell use kar sakti ho kisi ne mana nahi kiya'

nup: mayank'.. tum na apna muh band hi rakhoge toh aacha hoga'

nup is about to shout aunty'.

shilpa aunty opens the door'

mm: beta darwaza khulgaya..!!!

nup hugs mm.

nup: aunty howz u???? aap se miley kitna tym ho gaya !!

mm: haan beta humey miley hue bahut hi zyada waqt ho gay ahai 'hum parsoooonn (day before yest) miley they'

everyone there laughs'

all: aunty hum bhi aye hua hai'

mm: haan..andar aao'tum logon ko andar aney ke liye invitation chahiye..

every one goes inside the house'

gunjan:main sabke liye pani lekar aati hoon

gunji serves water to everyone..

gunji goes to kitchen'

sam: aur aunty meri pudding kahan hai???????????

Gunji: yahan'yeh lo tumhari pudding..

Sam: wow!!!!(grabs the pudding bowl)

gunji serves it to everyone..

sam: ummmmmm'yummy'.

Nup: aun..

Dia: uff!!! Yeh ranvijay'god please help me out'

Nup: kya hua d??

Sam murmurs: wow!! Aab ranvijay ki baat hunter wali tak pahunchgayi hai'

Dia: doll..yeh ranvijay na..(tells about RV) mujhey kal se kam se kam 50 baar call kar chukka hai date pe janey ke liye..but mujhey uske saath nahi jana hai..

Nup: ranvijay' hmmm.. D agar phir call aya to mujhey phone dena..

Again dia's phone rings'

Dia: uhh!! Again'

Nupur snatch the phone from d..

Nup: hello'

Rv:hello babes..

Nup:helo,hie rehne do'let me clear you onething mr ranvijay..next time se agar dia ko call kiya toh tumhari khair nahi ya toh apne liye hospital main ek bed zaroor book kar lena!!!and I mean it..

She cuts the call..

Everyone bursts out laughing..

Nup:tumlog hass kyun rahey ho???yahn koi comedy show chal raah hai kya??

Sam:sis chill!!! Hum toh bas rv ko imagine kar kar has rahey thay'bechara ab toh hospital main bed book karwa raha hoga'

Again all of then burst out laugh'

Mayu:guys but kya who samjhega???

Sam:dude'wohi toh hum keh rahaey hai'his lowness samjhne waalon main se nahi haitabhi toh who ab hospital ke bed book karwa raha hoga'

Mayu:dia becareful..ranvijay is not good guy..

dia:yes I'll be..

nup:D don't worry..we are with you..

gunji:okay guys me getting late..bye everyone....

gunji leaves.....

~~~~*~~~~THE END~~~~*~~~~~

Hope u all liked it..

Do comments....

Muuahh!!! loads of love!!!

Edited by thejazzgal.s - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part dear..!

Keep it up and continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
hey juhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very nice part...
keep it up dear....
mujhe pata hai....
gunjan and mayank.....
no i wont tellll
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome!!!i luved the first pt!!!plzz pm me and do cont soon!!!
ynaiita

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