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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!!! what a cute Ridz!!!! i loved AR part...hmmmmm i ll have to eat channe now cuz i being STML day by day😆😆😆 overall its an amazing part aneesha...👍🏼 but ??? AK friendship breaks no😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome Part

Very cute n funny 😆
AK breakup 😔
cont soon !!
Edited by angeldmg16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey lupin n angel..thanks for likin..🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys....here 's wat happend next...

Episode 5

Scene1

@rehersal hall

Angad:kripa...hamari play ke liye shopping to baki hai...but ofcourse tum hari to classes hai..."

Kripa "angad don't worry..armaan aur ridhima hai naaa."😉

Angad bursts out laughing..."armaan aur ridhima..dono America aur iran ke bichde saathi lagte hain mujhe to...wo log mane ge kaise..?"😆😆

Kripa.."don't worry ..wo sab sab tum mujhpe chod do..abhi romance start kaaren..?

Angad.."alrite..par plan kya hai..?/"

Kripa.."wait n watch..!!"😉

Scene 2

Inorbit shopping mall

Ridhima.."arre ye kripa ne mujhe bulaya aur wo khud kahan chali gayi..?"😕

Armaan.."arre wheres kripa..?"

Armaan and ridhima aren't facing each other...n u have guessd it rite..kripa has trickd both of them..!!😆😆😆

Suddenly ridhima sees armaan."tum?"😡

Armaan jumps -"tum??tumne kripa ki awwaz imitate karna kab se seekh liya..?mere saath shoppin karne ka itna hi mann tha to u should have told me.... main ladkiyon ko mana nehi karta hun..!!"😳

Ridhima "mujhe kripa ne yahan bulaya..!!"{indignantly..}😡

Armman "u slow motion...in case u haven't realised..kripa ne hum dono ko trick karke yaha par bulaya hai..we r supposd to shop together now..!!"😉

Ridhima "no ways..!!"

armaan" see....many ways.. left rite..aage peeche..!!"😆

Ridhima "shut up."😡

Ridhima goes selects a salwar kameez...

Armaan "ridhima..tum dehradun se yahan par kya Egyptian mummy ya phir farah khan ke bte ki aaya banne aayi ho..?"😆

As rdhima starts .."sshhh...dekho hamara play ek modern adaptation hai..u gotto be wearin minis n skirts..!!"

Ridhima.."nehi..!!..u get lost..main apna dress khud chun sakti hun.."😡

Armaan..."wat ever..!!"

N armaan goes from dere..

Ridhima "chala gaya..itna lamba lecturre deke chala gaya..!!aakdu kahika..!!ab main kya karu ..in mein se kaun si dress lun..??"😡😕

Just then ridhima's eyes land on a black dress...and she takes it...

In the trial room...

Ridhima.."ye main kya utha layi hun..this dress is soo complicated.kahan par khuli hai aur kahan par band kuch samajh hi nehi aa raha..."😕😕

How ever ridhima wears that and opens the door...

Armaanis just outside..bt hasn't seen her yet..ridhima.."ye akdu kahan gaya..?"

Armaan opens the door..to find people staring @ them..armaan some what amused n some what embarrassed...grins... catches ridhima's hand n takes her away..to ridhima's bewilderness..!..😕😕

Armaan graba ridhima and pushes herself n himself back into the changing room....{the changing room gets locked automatically..}😉

Ridhima is thoroughly bewildered.."armaan have gone mad..ouch..leave me..ye tum kya kar rahe ho..?"😡

Armaan gives a sly grin..n looks @ the mirror behind...ridhima..now totally confused..looks back..n is horrified to find some of her back buttons undone..!!😉

"armaan-"ridhima cannot stop it..she stares @ armaan..armaan meanwhile realises..he n ridhima r vrry close..close enough for him to hear ridhima's heart beats..to see his reflection in ridhima's eyes...n he cnt stop himself frm starin @her too..😳😳☺️

Mean while....people knock @ the door..makin ridhima n armaan jump in fright..n finally armaan releases ridhima...😆

As ridhima lowers her face down..armaan tries to look else wher..but every where he looks he sees ridhima...[because well ..no he isn't hallucinatin...they r in a trail room full of mirrors...!!😆😆]

Ridhima tries to button up her dress..but is unsuccessful...armaan ...keeps oogling @ her while ridhima continues with her frutile attempts..armaan finally gets his senses back as some one bangs very loudly on the door..

Armaan-"main kar deta hun.."..some what sheepishly...😉

So armaan buttons up ridhima's dress..to ridhima's utter embarrassment...😳

Armaan " too..umm chalen..!"

Ridhima nods...

Armaan "chalo..main dress select karta hun.."

Armaan selects the dresses..n surprisingly for ridhima..she likes all of them..!!😉

@the parking lot...

Ridhima "armaan...thanks...!!"

Armaan "lift..??"😉

Ridhima.."armaan tumne suna maine kya bola..?"😕

Armaan "some wat..par main wo sunna nehi chahta..warna muje majbooran tumse dosti karni padegi..nd i don't want to be ur friend agar tum meri wo simple si chaar sharle nehi maan sakti.."😆😉

Ridhima scowls.."u r unbelievable..!!"

Armaan "lift..?"

Ridhima "auto..."

Armaan "naa karne mein zyada time nehi lagta hai...okk best of luck..is bar bhi agar auto nehi mila..to main post man ki cycle bhijwa dunga..dont worry.."😉

As ridhima looks @armaan dangerously..armaan some what smiles n goes away...

Some way ahead armaan to auto rickshaw wala.... "arre bhaiya..waha mall ke paas ek madam hai pink suit mein..un ko baitha lo.."😉😉😉

Scene 3

Next day @RAS......

Angad-" arre ye kripa kahan reh gayi..muje hi jake dhund na hoga.."

Angad arrives at thecorrior..to find kripa conversing with her friend....

"hey kripa..ye tere aur angad ke beech kya chal raha hai..suna hai u gave him lift-shift n all.."😆😆

"shaina..swety.. i know kabhi kabhi nazren dhoka kha jati hain..but still think some thing before saying such ridiculous things..jab kripa ka boy friend hoga..he will be "the man"...angad..!!for god's sake...look @ his status...roz 'roz ek hi shoes..ek hi perfume...!!the height..!!usme aur mujh mein kuch common nehi hai..-"😉

Angad hears this..n is shattered...and he goes away angrily...😡

-"but,ka dil bahut saaf hai...and he is a gem of a friend...wo mera boy friend na sahi...par ek acha ,n newly baked dost hai😉...aur main uske fashion blunders ko neglect kar sakti hun..he is a very dignified n determined boy..."

"kripa kabhi hamari mulakat bhi karao use..."😉

"ha ha..sure sweety..par abhi chalti hun..kaphi late ho raha hai.."

Next scene

"hi angad.."

Angad "kahan thi..?"

"wo.."

"apne doston ke saath..nehin..??"as angad says this..he moves closer to kripa...

"angad,ye tum kya-"😕

"bas abhi abhi tumhare muh se apni perfumes aur shoes ke defects ke baren mein sunta aa raha hun...!"

"angad,suno.."

""tum suno kripa...tum suno...jab mein tumse mila,mujhe aisa laga shayad tum un dusron ki tarah2 faced nehi ho.shayad tum achi ho..sachi ho..mujhe mere appearance se nehi parkho gi..par main galat tha...-"abgad grabs kripa tightly....."tum bhi un dooro nki tarah nikli...why kripa..why..tumne ye jhoota dikhawa kyun kiya..jo bhi sochti thi bol deti..m used to it..."😡

"angad.tumne shayad sirf aadhi baat suni hai.."..kripa is tearful...😭

"aur mein puri baat sunna bhi nehi chahta...u know wat kripa..u r nothing but an arrogant brat..!!"😉

"enough angad...!!bahut ho gayi.tumhe puri baat nehi sun ni to thik hai..fine..!!😡

Just then armaan arrives...to see angad n kripa looking daggers @ each other....

"people..kya chal raha hai..??"

Angad n kripa jump....

Angad "kuch nehi...wo reherse kar rahe the..hey...hi ridhima..!!"

"hii"

As the 4 start rehersing..angad n kripa avoid each other completely..which doesn't go unnoticed by armaan nridhima..😉

"ridhima..tummne inme kuch ajjeb nehi lag raha..??"

"haan..i think they have fought.."😕

"main kuch karta hunn.."😉

"kya..??"

armaan grinning....

"fan on...bahut garmi hai.."😆

Ridhima makes a disguted face.....

"angad agar gussa bhi hai..he will cool down quite soon..i know him..ny waz uski aur kripa ki to achi dosti ho gayi hai...kuch chota sa jhagda hoga....?"

Next scene.....

@kripa's home....

Kripa is sleeping on her bed..crying her heart out..."pehli bar ek aisa dost mila tha..jisne bina koi shart mujhse dosti kit thi....jisne mujhse dosti kit hi..mere paiso se nehi...n i lost him..."😭

@angad's home.

.angad is very angry..n is throwin every thing down--thud-crash --"mere saath to ye kai bar hota aa raha hai..phir kyun aaj main itna zyada hurt hun..."😡

thaddam- thaddam

dats it for now..tell me he were the scenes...😉tell me how was the AR trail room scene..😉

Edited by aneeshadgr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
Nice update Aneesha 👍🏼

This line was awesome 🤣

but every where he looks he sees ridhima...[because well ..no he isn't hallucinatin...they r in a trail room full of mirrors...!!😆😆]

AR kuch kuch hota hain (not the film 😆) scene was nice 😉

AK friendship break up?? 🥺.........let Chipku-Gum make them patch up 😉

this line was again very funny 🤣

"main kuch karta hunn.."😉

"kya..??"armaan grinning....

"fan on...bahut gami hai.."😆


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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
thanks paro...🤗
nice idea..chipku-gum wala...🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
By God Aneesha
🤣


This

Some way ahead armaan to auto rickshaw wala.... "arre bhaiya..waha mall ke paas ek madam hai pink suit mein..un ko baitha lo.."😉😉😉


😳

Then this

Armaan "ridhima..tum dehradun se yahan par kya Egyptian mummy ya phir farah khan ke bte ki aaya banne aayi ho..?"😆

😆

Then That lift scene☺️

and then

That fan thing

🤣

and all the remaining humour...By God


Great goin👍🏼


Muah😉



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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
@ steff...thanksssss
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
OMG!!! aneshha u cracked me up🤣My fab lines:

"main kuch karta hunn.."😉

"kya..??"armaan grinning....

"fan on...bahut gami hai.."😆

🤣
but AK friendship breaks thats sad😭
Splendid part aneesha just loved it...well written👍🏼



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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
thnk u😉

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