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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
nice story 😉

liked da trial room scene....
..no he isn't hallucinatin...they r in a trail room full of mirrors.. 😍 🤣


"kya..??"armaan grinning....

"fan on...bahut gami hai.." 🤣


Angad -Kripa fight 🥺



Edited by nisha80 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
nice part...
i hope ak r frnds soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
neha 's fan...{wats ur name..??}
Edited by aneeshadgr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
waaaaaaaaw awesome part yaar i loved it 😊
& Thanxx 4 Sharing ^^
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

EPISODE 6

@ RAS

Angad and armaan are there @ the rehersal hall..rehersing..their play is scheduled for the next day.....

Armaan- "tere aur kripa ka dance rehersal bacha hua hai..nehi..??"😉

Angad.....lost and distracted..."kya..?"

Armaan-" dude..tu kahan hai..??ab laga mujhe tere saath ek voice recorder pakad ke baat karni padegi...har baat repeat karwata hai...watz the matter..?ghar pe sab thik hai naa..?"😕

Angad-"haan yaar kuch nehi hua..."

Just then kripa arrives...and she n angad look @ each other angrily...armaan doesn't miss this...

Armaan.."aankhon hi aankhon mein ishara ho gaya..hmmhmm...sahara ho gaya...!!"😆😆😆

Angad looks @ armaan....😡

Angad-"rehersal start karte hain..kuch logon ko zyada der mere saath rehne se ghutan hone lag jaegi..!"😡

Armaan raises his eyebrows,and looks @ kripa questioningly...but kripa lower her face down....

Just then ridhima arrives...

Kripa breaks the awkward silence.."hii ridz.."

"hi kripa,hi angad..!!'😛

Armaan-"main yahan par kya hun..statue of liberty..??hi mujhe bhi bolo..!!"😉

Ridhima..."tum bhi to hi bol sakte the...!!"

Armaan"nehi..main sirf ridhima tumhari 'hai hai'hi kahunga...!!"😆

Ridhima kicks armaan .....{wont tell u where..your guess is as good as mine..🤣!!

Ridhima.."bahut ho gaya armaan...ab main tumhe nehi chodungi..!!"

Armaan openin his mouth with shock.."nehiiii"{melodramatically..!!"😆

Ridhima runs behind armaan to hit him...

Angad somewhat angily n grumpily....

"stop it both of u..kaal hamara play hai..jo kit um dono ke liye sabse zyada imp hai..u must be knowing isi ke results pe tumhe group kiya jaega..training ke liye..so buck up..!!"

Armaan n ridhima nod their heads and get back to their rehersal....

Angad looks @ kripa....."kripa.. hame dance practice karna hai...dont worry aaj mere perfume aur joote alag hai..bade bade logon ke saath baithna uthna rahega..to ham jaise logon ko kuch to karna hoga..nehi...??"..kripa looks hurt...😕

Angad puts on the music...and AK dace 2gether....

...."kripa... u know wat..mujhe aab kuch kuch samajh aane laga hai..ke tumne ye jhooti dosti ka drama kyn kiya.."

Kripa.."meri dosti to sachi thi angad...par tum hari sooch galat hai..!!"

Angad smirks..."cut the crap..is drama event mein jo senior first aayega..use shahid kapur ke saath music video mein kaam karne ka contract milega...soo it was very imp for u to be in good terms with me...!!"

Kripa breaks free fron angad and lashes out...."stop it angad..u know what.. u r sick...!!arre ek music video mein star karne ke liye mujhe tum jaise ek mamooli employee ke help ki koi zaroraat nehi hai...!!! i can star in a 100 music video's with any one..!!but u r the last person to be of any help to me...!!"😡😡😡

Armaan and ridhima are looking@ the scene with wide eyes and open mouths...!!

Armaan and ridhima look@ each other..."ummm..dude..bebes..kaal play hai..remember...ye kya kar rahe ho tum log..?"

Ridhima.."armaan how tactless..!!"

Ridhima goes to kripa.."kripa..eat happened..??angad itne gusse mein kyun hai...u were so comfortable 2gether ..phir ye takraar kaisa...?"

Angad.."forget it ridhima...letz reherse..!!"😉

Ridhima..."but angad..-"

Armaan.."letz reherse.."ridhima looks @ armaan reproachfully...but armaan doesn't budge..n so 's with angad....

Ridhima then gives up..!!"okk !!fine..."😕

Armaan ' s cell rings just then...."hello..!!"

"oh..!! hi dad...!!"

"ohh.. i forgot...thik hai..i will be there..!!"

"thik hai....main invite kar lunga...!!"

"byee..!!"

Armaan "kal ghar pe party hai..and u all r invited..!!"😉

Ridhima.."kaisi party..?"

Armaan "dad party karne ke liye koi waja nehi dhundte..itz another day in or life..thatz a valid rason enough to party..!!"😉

Ridhima looks apprehensive....

Angad..."kal ki baat kal socho..armaan,ridhima..tum dono ke scenes perfect hain...so guys just relax now..u have got to be the best on the stage.."

Armaan "kya main aab azaad hun..?"angad.."Julie,tina,rani manisha are waiting for u ..apne usual places par..!!"

Armaan "ooh..cool..i hope i don't get confused this time..sab ladkiyan ek jaisi dikhti hain...!!"

Ridhima looks @ armaan with pure loathing..armaan smiles n winks @ her..!!!.. n goes away....😆😆

Scene 2

Ridhima iz returning home....when she sees armaan romancing with a girl.....she grins...!!

She goes there..😉😉

"hii tina...abhi abhi armaan apne dil ka haal mujhse bayan kar raha tha...he really loves u naa...how romantic..andheri raat..soonsaan sadak...aur/...."😳

Armaan "aur ..aur kuch nehi..arre ye to roz hi hota hai..mmerre ghar ke peeche aise hi dikhta hai roz...mera driver..mere maid ke saath ..u know..!!!😆

Dolly-"armz..ye kis tina ki baat kar rahi hai..ise mera naam batao..!!"😳

Armaan-"ermm..sweety...naam se ise kya karna..ise bas apne kaam se kaam rakhna chahiya....naam to har kisi ke paas hota hai...ismein kya khaas baat hai..!!"😆😆

Dolly "armaan ye tum kaisi behki behki batien kar rahe ho..!"😕😆

Ridhima "haan armaan jisse itna pyaar karte ho..uska naam to tum hare dill pe likha hona cha hiye..!!"dolly "errmm noo dil pe nehi...main chahti hoon vosab ko dikhe..haath pe tattoo..ya phir forehead par tattoo better rahega..nehi..??🤣

Ridhima "tattoo.??"😕

Armaan "forehead par..!!!"😲😲😲

As ridhima bursts out laughing..armaan glares @ her...ridhima looks @ armaan.."don't worry is ka naam to tum ne mujhe 100 bar bata ya hai..-"armaan to himself."aaj yr mera roasted chicken bana ke hi rahegi..!!om jay jagdish hare..-"😆

"-tina..!!..rite..?"😉

Tina looks super angry..."u jerk..moron...tum kausi tina ke bare mein bolte ho ise..??"😡

Armaan bewildered.."tina..nehii main ise ganna gake sonata tha..tina nehi..eena..eena mina dikka...!!u know.."🤣

Dolly tskes out her sandles...but ridhima stops her...armaan looks relieved..ridhima "isme heels nehi hain.. ucan borrow mine..."🤣

Armaan..."oh..!!holy shit..!!bachao...!!!..dekho.. main bush nehi hoon..main sush bhi nehi hoon...ouch..bhago..!!!"

Ridhima bursts out laughing...!!"cartoon kahika..!!!"😆😆

Scene 4

Next day@ RAS....

The 4 are getting dressed...kripa's getting dressed in her room.😳...angad's standing outside..waiting for her to cum out..because itz already late...angad begins to knock.. then withdraws her hand..."use jab aana hoga..tab aaegi..!!"😕...and he begins to go away....but then he stops..😆"par hamara play next hai...hmmp..wo aajayegi..!!"....and angad goes away....!!

Mean while back stage...armaan looks @ ridhima super angrily..remembering last day's scenes..ridhima mean while is too conscious about her dress .and nervous about the play..to have any thing else to worry...😉

Angad comes there,just as it is announced that itz their turn..

Angad.."all the best both of you...rock the 1st half..!!"😉

Armaan and ridhima go on the stage..and give a mind blowing performance..leaving the audience enthralled....😳😳

Angad meanwhile..."arre ye kripa kahan reh gayi..un ka act kabhi bhi khatam ho sakta hai...!!!..damn it..!!"😡

Armaan and ridhima finish their parts and come back..armaan "dude..wherez kripa..??"

Angad ,in a state of frenzy.."pata nehi..damn it..!!!ab kya Karen..?"😕

Ridhima.."main jake dekhti hun.."

Angad and armaan mean while,try their best to explain the situation to the audience,but are soon booed out,and disqualified..

Armaan "shit..!!kripa kahan reh gayi..!!"

Angad justs looks on angrily...

Ridhima mean while..is searching for kripa...she reaches the changing room.."kripa...kripa..!!"

Kripa shouts from the bathroom.."ridz...ridz..m in the bathroom..the door's jammed..jaldi kholo..quick..!!"

Ridhima 's absolutely shocked...and she opens the door asap..

"kripa.-"

"bbad mein..now letz run..!"

Ridhima and kripa arrive..but as we all know..itz too late..

Angad looks @ kripa...and start shouting @ her..

"kahan thi tum..?..zaroor pehle se is play ke the end ki planning kar ke rakhi hogi..nehi...for ur kind information..we r disquaified..!!"

Kripa looks on devastated.....as ridhima interrupts.."angad...kripa ki galti nehi hai..bath room ka door jam ho gaya tha..she was locked inside..!!"

Armaan...."wat..?"

Angad looks @ kripa apprehensively..as kripa looks @ everyone other than angad n says meekly.."sorry.."

Armaan "itz okay kripa..this was sheer bad luck..!!"

After a while....

Announcer.."okay....soo the winner is ......{as ak n ar looks on dejectedly..} rohit n group..!!!"

"but..a special mention to our fresh talents..who did wonderfully,armaan n ridhima..they have voted as the best actors today..!!!"

Armaan and ridhima are thrilled..n so r angad n kripa..."wow...fantastic.!!"👏

Armaan and ridhima are naturally on cloud heaven...armaan hugs angad..while ridhima hugs kripa..then angad n ridz hug,armaan n kripa hug..then AR turn towards each other..n well armaan kinda stops himself frm huggin her..as ridhima looks confused ,n apprehensive..!!

Thaddam thaddam

Precap..watch out for sum cute romance between AR😳..n ...some fireworks between AK...!!😆😆😉

btw...give longer comments...😉... i njouyd writin this epi..!!!😆
n pls dont be a silent reader..!!
n do suggest any improvements..!!😉
Edited by aneeshadgr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
heyy.. i thought of thanking alllll ma sweet ,polite,awsum readers..!!
mere paas thoda hai..par u know naa..mujhe thode ki hi zarooraat hai...
soo heres a big hug frm me for readin ma ff..n replyin back...
🤗
thank u
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Edited by aneeshadgr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
Hey that waz an awesome part. Loved it. Plzzz continue soon. Cn u plzz PM me when u update. Thnks!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved dis update.....
hope ak sought out der probs soon....
ar scenes wer cute....
cont soon n thanx 4 d pm....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
hayee what a hot avi ann!!!one of my fab AK promo!!!😍😍😍
my fab lines:

Armaan"nehi..main sirf ridhima tumhari 'hai hai'hi kahunga...!!"😆

Ridhima kicks armaan .....{wont tell u where..your guess is as good as mine..🤣!!

Ridhima.."bahut ho gaya armaan...ab main tumhe nehi chodungi..!!"

Armaan openin his mouth with shock.."nehiiii"{melodramatically..!!"😆

Ridhima "haan armaan jisse itna pyaar karte ho..uska naam to tum hare dill pe likha hona cha hiye..!!"dolly "errmm noo dil pe nehi...main chahti hoon vosab ko dikhe..haath pe tattoo..ya phir forehead par tattoo better rahega..nehi..??🤣

😆😆😆😆😆😆 stupendous update ann too good, love the part!!👍🏼👏👍🏼🤗

n thanks 4 d treat ummm" yummy "cake n cookies !!!😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey that waz an awesome part. Loved it. Plzzz continue soon. Cn u plzz PM me when u update. Thnks!!!!

of course i will pm u... m not doin family planning here..😆
thanks for likin it....ma 1 more new reader...🥳

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