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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
wowwww!!! lolzz omg dis is soo gud:

armaan..."i mean wo 3rd floor par kho gayi..."

angad.."to use laya kyun nehi..."

armaan.."dude..main yaha par social service nehi kar raha..usne ny waz mujhe pucha nehi.....😉"

angad-'tu....arre wo aa gayi... hi ridhima.."

ridhima-"o..hi angad..sorry mujhe class nehi mil raha tha..."

kripa.."hi .. iam kripa.."

ridhima.."hello...maine aapke bare mewin padha hai..."

kripa makes a face..."nehi..tumne mere dad ke beti ke bare mein padha hai.."

armaan-"don't mind..iski memory bahut kharab hai...mere chane ka offer bhi inho ne reject kar diya..so itz a hopeless case..!!"...

ridhima starts glaring very dangerously @armaan...n armaan is scared stiff...and drops his chanas in fright...armaan-" dekho ..apni conjunctivitis ki bimari apne paas hi rakho..."

ridhima-"u army-man.."

kripa-"u mean armaan..rite..?"..ha ha

as kripa starts giggling ...angad to cover up for another fight between ar...interupts..."..okk..helo..rehersal start Karen..."

angad-"hamen kuch kuch hota hai ka 10 minutes act show karna hai....aur characters decide ho chuke hain... i m srk...kripa is rani..ridhima is kajol...and armaan is salman...par kahani mein twiast hai...hamenkkht ka ending change karne pesh karna hai..any suggestions..?...."

kripa-"ek hi chage ho sakta hai..kajol has to go back to salman..."

armaan"arre yaar angad phir to tu rahul se devdas ban jayega.."😆

ridhima...makin a face,as others laugh.."lets change a lil bit more...dat rani isn't dead sum hw...n she cumz back to rahul in the end..."

kripa.."cool...so lets start the rehersals..."

the rehersals go on..and so does the ar bickering...angad and kripa mean while are on the brink of a very deep friendship..which is gonna last a life time...they r extremely comfortable in each other's company...and are enjoying it too...

hehehe

awesum!!!!
updt asap!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
@reena...HELLO....meetin u after ages n ages i think.. iwasc just askin evry one where u r...!!
dats my fav part too..!!!muaah..thnks for likin....🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
🤣

Awesome update Aneesha 👍🏼

Kripa's pet parrot's name is Chipku?? 🤣

Armaan eats channa .......and Ramukaka the doodhwala .......awesome 🤣........The pictures were very nice too 😆
😆😆😆😆

Update Soon 😉

Edited by mysticwater24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mysticwater24

🤣

Awesome update Aneesha 👍🏼

Kripa's pet parrot's name is Chipku?? 🤣

Armaan eats channa .......and Ramukaka the doodhwala .......awesome 🤣........The pictures were very nice too 😆
😆😆😆😆

Update Soon 😉

u were sorely miisd @home 2day....😉...
i know kripa's parrot name's chipku..n angad's parrot is gum..nisha n me plannin to add a parrot's kaa luv shtory too..😆......thnks for liki..n commentin...muaahhhhh
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
OMG !!
It was so hilarious !!
🤣
I like
tht milk man
parrot = chipku
🤣🤣🤣

awesome
Very Nice !!
Gr8 going !!
👏👏👏

Thnx for d PM !!

Luv....Angel...Noorin⭐️
Edited by angeldmg16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
@ lupin....thnks for liking.....muaahhh.....🤗....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
its superbbbbbbbbbb yaar 👏
loved it
itz gr8
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Samrat_Gunjan

its superbbbbbbbbbb yaar 👏
loved it
itz gr8
thanks 4 d pm

thnksss yaaar..!!🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69

hii people..heres the next epi..itz a heavy duty episode..less of humour..😉..

Episode 4

Continued....

Ridhima tries to get an auto..bt in vein....😆

Mean while....armaan:"arre ye kamini bike start kyun ho rahi...lagta hai us Dracula ki nazar lag gayi..."

Ridhima-"arre bhaiya andheri chaloge..?"

Autowala "nehi madam"

Armaan comes..."ridhima..tum galat address bataogo to wo kaise manega..😕?"

"wat do u mean..?"

"arre bhaiya madam ko nark jana hai....wahi chod aao..!😆😆😆!"

Ridhima gets super angry...

armaan-"main dikhata hun auto kaise pakadte hain....i know u r hopeless..."

armaan.."auto....bhaiya lokhandwala chalo.."

auto.."nehi abhi main nehi ja sakta..."

ridhima.."bhaiya andheri..?"

auto.."haan bhaitho..😛"

ridhima grins...n asks armaan"main tumhari tarah batamiz nehi hun...isliye puch rehi hun..lift chahiye😉.?"

Armaan glares @ her...but gives up..as it is raining quite heavily....

Armaan '"whatever..!!"..he pushes ridhima n sits in the auto....ridhima sits after dat..n they go....😉

In the auto...

Armaan's cell rings...

"hello."

Pause..

Armaan-

"look..u r not my mom...baar baar phone karke wat do u wanna prove..?i care tuppence abt u..i don't care aap jiye ya mare..aur aapko bhi mere liye ye jhooti cate dikhana chod dena chahiye...leave me alone.😡😡😡..!!"..and he cuts the phone....

Ridhima mean while is staring @ armaan with disgust...

"aaj tak main yehi soch tit hi..dat u r just arrogant..shayad tum dil ke bure nehi ho...but of course i was wrong..!!jo insaan apne maa ki izaat nehi kar sakta..he deserves to rot in hell..😡!!"

Armaan who is shaking with anger...first simply looks @ridhima..then gains his composure...n tells quietly...😉

"look..ye mera personal matter hai..nywaz jiske bare mein tum kuch nehi janti uske bare mein mat bolo😡.."

"mr armaan malik...ek maa kabhi bhi mamta ka jhota dikhawa nehi kar sakti..aur nyways maine tumhare mom-dad ke bare mein paper mein sab padha hai.."

Armaan="ohh..please..meri maa ek extremely egoistic aur sadistic lady hai..aur jo bhi tumnr papers mein padha hai,wo sab public mein apni image bachane ka ek jhota dikhawa hai..."

Ridhima.."u r disgusting..apne maa ko apni nazron se dekho..apne dad ke nazro se nehi..!!"

Armaan dis time gets really angry..."stop it ridhima...for ur kind information..mere dad aaj bhi mom ko utna hi pyaar karte hain...my mom left my dad...!!"

Ridhima.."for reasons still unknown to u ..wo ek time pe galat ho sakti thi..par unka pyaar kabhi galat nehi tha!!"...

Armaan-"my mom is dead for me..dats it..meri mom ki waja se mere dad aaj akele hain..phir bhi mom ki puja karte hain..unse itna pyaar karte hain!!

Ridhima-"kabhi socha hain kyun.?...sochna kabhi...."

Autowala..."lokhandwala"

Armaan stares@ ridhima...then goes outin the rain.....

Scene2

Rajveer mansion

In armaan's room....armaan isn't able to sleep,n ridhima's words r haunting him😉

Armaan "aaj tak kabhi bhi maine mom ke bare mein nehi socha..phir aaj ridhima ki baatein kyun mujhe aise torcher kar hai..??...mujhe ye sab bekar ki batein bhul jana hai..n i need to sleep ..armaan focus.😉.!!"

Just then armaan hears shattering of glass ..and hears his dad shouting...he runs outside,to see his dad shouting @ a servant because he has broken some photo frame...

"dad..kya hua..??"

"oh ammy!!kuch nehi...wo is idiot nein mere bte ka photo tod diya...!!"

Armaan stares @ his dad pointedly,then sighs..."dad...aap mujhse bekar mein jhoot kyun bolte ho..aapke aur mom ki photo thi naa.."

Rajveer looks dejected...

" beta..main jaanta hun..tu apne maa se bahut nafrat karta hai...but trust me my son...pyaar ki koi hadh nehi hoti,there are no if n buts in love..my love for your mom is unconditional...meri har subah aaj bhi tere mom ke naam se shuru hoti hai..aur unhi ke sapno se khatam hoti hai..hum door hote hue bhi itne paas hai ki mein aaj bhi unki har dhadkan feel mehsoos sakta hun.😳.."

"but why dad why..??mom aapko chod ke chali gayi...unhone apne

sapno ke liye haemin chod diya..how can u still love her..??"😕

Rajveer looks @ his son..who is still vividly unaware ofwhat happened in his past...but is unable to tell the truth to his son, because then he would have to sacrifice many other's happiness.....including his own....

"armaan..bahut raat ho chuki hai..u should get some sleep..good nite.."

Scene 3

RAS

Angad and kripa are in the rehersal hall...practisiing...

Angad...

"tum mujhe itni achi kyun lagte ho..??kyun tumhari har baat mujhpe itna asar karti hai..kyun tumhari khusbu mere rom-rom mein basi hui hai..kyun tumhari yatein mujhe raton koi jagae rakhti hai...kyun tumhari aankhen mujhe unnmein doobne ko majboor kar deti hai...tumhare saath na hote hue bhi ye kaisa ehsaas hai,jo har pal mujhe tumse jode rakhta hai..kyun tumhara har aasu mujhe itna taklif pahuchata hai...kyun main har pal sirf tumhare liye jeena chahta..tumhaare saath jeena chahta hun..😳.why cant i forget u..??"

While saying this..angad hass grabbed kripa tightly..and kripa is staring intensely at angad...but the problem is its not angad and kripa..itz srk n rani...!!

"angad..dat was really gud..tumhari acting to kaphi achi hai..tumhe yaha employee nehi,student hona chahiye tha...!!"

"oh..thanks..par..!!"angad is embarrassed..and toungue tied..he cant seem to go ahead...

"u know angad...not being able to afforb studing here is not a big deal..is baat se tumhe apne talent ko andekha nehi karna chaye..apne sapno ko pura karne ka determination agar ho..then no one can stop u.!!"

"hmm..ye sab sirf kehne ki batein hoti hai..par mein kab tak apne sapnon ke khatir apne aaj ki kurbani deta rahun....!!..maine sapne dekhna band kar diya hai..min apni naukari se khush hun..atleast itzsomething i enjoy....but anyways mujhe laga that um bhi dusro ki tarah muje mere appearance se hi judge karogi..but itz a pleasant surprise to know dats u r different..thanks😛..."

"oh..come on angad..agar main tumhe sirf tumhari appearance se bhi judge karun..tab-bhi tum kaphi handsome ho.😳.!!!"

And they both burst out laughing...

Angad.."hum dost hain naa..!!"{angad brings his hand forward}

Kripa..." of course...!!"

Kripa.."waise tum aur armaan bhi kaphi ache dost ho..nehi..??"

Angad.."haan..par we r just good friends..."

Scene 4

Armaan and ridhima arrive....armaan glares @ ridhima..and ridhima scowls...😉

Angad.."arretum dono kya temporarily dost nei ban sakte...??armaan dude..bad mein sim card change kar dena..!!"

Armaan stares @ angad as though he has never seen i=him before...then turns to face ridhima...

"Ridhima...maineye pehle socha kyun nehi..ofcourse hum temporary dost ban sakte hai..par ek shart..actually do{ridz raises her brows}..nehi teen{ridz scowls}..oh ..i forgot chaar sharte hain..!!"

Ridhima makes a thoroughly disgusted face.. n asks..

"wat sharte..??"😕😕

"Shart no 1..tum dialogues bolte wakt mujhe dekhogi nehi..wo kya hai naa..tum hari aankhen dekh kar mujhe water melons ki bahut yaad aati hai..n i hate water melons..😆!!"..as ridhima angrily tries to interrupt..armaan continues...

"shart no 2..tum mujhe one hand distance rakhogi...!! 3 shart...tum apna muh band rakhogi..

N final shart..tum roz chane khaogi..tumhari memory..remember..😆..!!"

Ridhima makes a indigant face.."u know wat..u r unbelievable..!!"

Armaan-"thanks for the compliment bebes..!!"

Next scene..

Armaan,ridhima.angad and kripa are going home..

Armaan="ridhima..lift chahiye..?kal se behtar hogi..!!"

Ridhima-"get lost..!!"

Armaan and ridhima go separate ways..leaving angad and kripa alone...

Angad "to..main chalta hun.."

Kripa "kaise joege..?"

Angad//"umm..bus..!"

Kripa "main lift de deti hun...chalo.."

Angad.."no itz ok...."..but kripa's already in the car..waiting for angad...so angad gets in..and they go.....

iknow isme comedy bahut kam hai..but i promise next epi will be humourous..
precap:watch out how angad and kripa's friendship breaks...!!

Edited by aneeshadgr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aneesha itssssssss awesome specially kripa part loved itt

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