FF: IF I HAD YOU (pg.77; pg.78)*

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Sadaf

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Posted: 16 years ago

#501

Awsome update... luved the lil fite thing... it was sooooo cute!!!! neel is a darling!!!

OHMIGAWD! Mann y r u soo good at cliffhangers!!!??? u had to stop there didn't you... when i started readngit, I had a feeling that u was gonna stop sumwhere where u wanna carry on!!! aaaarrrrrrgggggghhhhh CLIFF HANGERS MAKE ME SWITCH!!!! hun... plz plz plz update soon... i am luvin ur FF!!!!!

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@Lamia17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#502

Thanks so much hun for the update=] I love u for this cuz I watched that horrible scene 10 mind ago..nywy thanks for this..I think we all needed to read something this..sonething the actually show shud of been like..

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Neetu2825

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Posted: 16 years ago

#503

Yuvi scene up....let me know what you guys think😊

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Presadhi

@Binky

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Posted: 16 years ago

#504

you know i was about to send you a pm asking about the rest but before i could you posted it 😃

ok starting with the first part gods it was soo nice if the shows Neel was like this i m,ust say our Yug would have a huge fight keep his popularity😉 ohh the way he put the jacket was sooo sweet i loved it but yaar i just cant imagine Neels girl i mean how she looks so a pic or something would be nice 😃

ok YuVi scene you did a fab job of explaining the hickey really good 👏 or should i say Yug did a fab job😉 and i loved Vrindas head on Yugs chest thing with her playing with his buttons that was really nice and after a long long time i was able to imagine YuVi together in a romantic way cos for the past few days all i've been imagining is Yug slapping Vrinda😆😆

thanks yaar for bringing back our old YuVi for us its been a long time 😊

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tamanna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#505

Fantastic yr and i loved this hickey, bickey or pickey superub.

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Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#506

The YuVi scene was awesome, I have been dying to read it for weeks, it was so good! The way Yug explained it to her and it was just so sweet and perfect! I am so glad to read it, it was great! Yug's love was amazing made me nearly cry he is so sweet and cute and adorable, he is just prefect!

Cont soon, so want to read on I am so interested in Neel's story as well you have me totally hooked onto that part of the story and Yug's proposal I am dying to read that as well.

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shabana

@shab_rules

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Posted: 16 years ago

#507

hahahaha,

omg

wow.

ok so i went back, and read from when neel first meets his girl. and that was brilliant. i must say tho, i was pretty shocked to read that neel had actually named his car. but love the name gina, totally sounds like the name of one of those girls that neel prefers to date. really nice subtle romativ moments in the car, like the hand touching and the jacket wearing, great job. also, the bit about her knowing karate, totally reminded me of kareena in jab we met.

next part, i loved neel and the girls discussion. interesting argument i have to say, but i believe they are both right. and when neel was telling her about veing an idealist living in a dream world, that totally reminded me of someone, lol.

and as for the yuvi part. well, it was definatly worth the wait. after all the crap we went thru/are going thru, it was a treat and a half to read about classic yuvi, i loved the way she is sat in his lap, and how he strokes the side of her face. omg, its so amazing i havnt words to describe it. and when he sed that she is his responsibility, wow, see thats wot all guys should be like.

i was really anxious about how you would have yug explain the hicky, but i must say you pulled it off. really well done for that. it was smoothly done. also i would like to thankyou for restoring the original image of yug in ur FF. if you remeber a while back i was scared that you had made yug sound like such a player, but today, with yugs explanation, everything is as it should be. yug is a true sweatheart.

also loved the ending, know wots coming up, and cant wait.

so thankyou thankyou so much, and plz do update soon. ❤️

Edited by shab83 - 16 years ago

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@Lamia17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#508

Omg Neetu..that was an amazing YuVi scene..just like Binky said thanks for returning our old YuVi!!=] I love the way u write..as I always said, I cud imagine every single thing u write=] I loved how Yug explained what a hickey is to Vrinda..now thats the type of boyfriend I want;)

Edited by Lamia17 - 16 years ago

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shabana

@shab_rules

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Posted: 16 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: Lamia17
Omg Neetu..that was an amazing YuVi scene..just like Binky said thanks for returning our old YuVi!!=] I love the way u write..as I always said, I cud imagine every single thing u write=] I loved how Yug explained what a hickey is to Vrinda..now thats the type of boyfriend I want;)

lol hun, dats the type of guy i want too, infact im not wrong in saying, yug is the dream guys for all us girls.

there should definatly be more made of him. large stocks should be made available. so then everygirl can have her own yug ! 😍😍😍

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Sadaf

@sadaf.12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#510

OMG yuvi scene is sooooooo sweet... and yug explaining the hickey... i couldn't stop laughing... he explained it really welll buh i dont know why, buh it made me laugh for sum reason!!!... really gud part hun... plz update soon! <3

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