FF: IF I HAD YOU (pg.77; pg.78)* - Page 52

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Posted: 16 years ago
@k_luv: Thanks for reading and commenting on this part. So, glad you are liking Neel's character. I really like him too...he is turning out quite well if I may say so myself😊

@skstar: So, you think Neel is sounding hot? 😆Might I also ask what made you associate Neel with Shahid, yaar?...lol...I think you are moving onto my man....u have Prem remember? PLZ don't go after my Shahid😛Thanks 4 reading!

@nikita_88: Thanks 4 liking this part, hun. Yes, you're right...that Karate line was inspired by JAB WE MET.😆I LOVE THAT MOVIE! Yet, the mud scene was entirely one of my own imagination. I hope you enjoy future updates too.

@sweetouch_98: THE PLAN is to make many of you into NEEL fans. Its cute that you r feeling jealous of this mystery girl😆...Neel is cute huh? Thanks 4 taking the time to comment. I really appreciate the fact that you leave me a comment after each update. *Big hug for that*

@ sadaf.12: Thanks 4 commenting hun. Glad u like the character of Neel.😊

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Lamia17: Thanks hun. btw, I want a bf like Yug too😉. I think all girls on this forum do😆

@Binky: I have to agree with you on your comment about Neel. I think Yug would have a tough competition if the show had spent a bit more time into developing Neel's character into something what I've thought up. Neel is such a sweet guy, huh? I'm really loving writing his dialogues because to a certain degree his relationship with this girl is very unpredictable. He can be sweet to her and then, start fighting with her at the drop of a hat....lol...So, it never gets boring with Neel.😉Lastly, I'm so glad you thought the yuvi scene was good. I really wanted him to do a good job at explaining the whole hickey part...I will confess that it was also nice 4 me to see yuvi in a "romantic" manner. It has truly been a long time since we've seen them like this in the actual show. I miss that. Thanks 4 reading!


@Shab: The idea of Neel naming his car was inspired by that interview with Kunal where he was talking about his car😆...and 2 be honest, I know someone who has named his car Gina...so yeah, it fit in quite well. You're right...Gina does sound like a name of one of those girls that Neel prefers to date.
Also, glad you liked the romantic moments between Neel&his girl. That discussion between Neel & this girl has a purpose. Actually, every dialogue has a purpose...spoken by each character in this story. I will refer back to some of what these characters say in the future...so keep a lookout. As for this discussion in particular, the last line was the most important. Will meeting this girl FINALLY give a reason for Neel to actually fight for something in his life? Is she worth it? What would he be fighting...or rather with whom?😛You guys consider that for a bit....
As for that idealist, I wonder who that reminded you of...lol😆 I have a guess!

As for the Yuvi part, I'm glad you liked that who "responsibility" part. I totally agree with you...guys should be like this! I think if you're in a relationship, you should be able to discuss anything and everything. That is what Yug wants...this openness between them. Honesty...complete honesty.

As for Yug's image...I had to think on that. I will have to thank you for pushing me towards that because I remembered your comment way back in the past. I know you didn't like the idea of Yug being a "player" of sorts though that wasn't what I was going for when I intially introduced the idea of him having given another girl a hickey b4. Yet, I did understand why you felt the need for Yug to not be like that. So, after careful consideration, I decided to grant your wish😊 Glad u enjoyed it, hun!
Edited by Neetu2825 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
okay so i had read the yuvi part in the morning but commenting now but i told u my comments already HAHAHAHA =))) but it was very much needed and i am glad the real yuvi r back
Edited by skstar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow wow wow wow wow yaar! just when I thought Neel's scene was lovely with girl (the way those two felt so much concern, the jacket) you added the yuvi part!

both scenes were simply mind blowing! I could really visualize them both so well! I know Neel is a little hesitant at first because he believes he is a guy who will not fall in love, yet he can't help but take care of that girl!

haha and Vrinda is cute! "what's in a name!" haha loved that! And I loved how well Yug explained it to her and told her everything! those two really made my day! thanks so much and update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Neetu like where your inspiration was from but I totally forgot to add this to my post and that is the I was so creeped out that Prerna Wanwari was in the show, hehe never expected that to happen, hehe as she was the girl I pictured with Neel but I totally see Swetha and Sushant working for what you are writing hehe.

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Posted: 16 years ago
salaam neetu,
seriously mere pass ab koi words nahi hai kuch b kehney ko.
tumara har update parhney k baad muje kitna acha lagta hai mai explain nahi kar sakti.
muje dono scenes bhut hi zaida pasand ayee.specially yuvi scene.
👏
plz tum yuvi romantic scenes har update main likha karo.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon. 😃😃😃
samia
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ SweRav: Thanks for liking the update, hun. Yes, you're absolutely right when you said that Neel is a bit hesitate about the whole idea of "love"....yet, he can't help but feel a pull towards her...to protect her. We'll have to see how their relationship progresses...stay tuned for that. As for the Yuvi scene, I'm glad you enjoyed that as well😊...that line..."What's in a name"....was inspired from Shakespeare. Thanks 4 commenting!

@nikita_88: Actually hun, I think I may be thinking of someone else to play the part of Neel&his girl. I'll be posting the pics in a bit. Swetha and Sushant seemed a bit old in comparison to Yuvi...so I think these two might be a better fit. Let me know what you think....

@hasaab: Thanks 4 commenting yaar. I was actually waiting to read your feedback since you are one of my regular readers😃. As for your request, I will try to post at least something on Yuvi in each update. Do continue leaving me comments for future updates.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Hey

So, I've been thinking what actors I would have liked to play the role of Neel & his girl if my FF was a show. I know a couple of you have been wondering what this girl looks like that Neel is falling for so I'm posting the pics below. I came across these two purely by accident. These two actors were seen in the show "Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi". They played the characters of KT & Lakshya.

Ironically, these two were never reunited at the end of the show. So, since my FF is a correction of Ekta's attempts, I thought I would also add these two into my story...finally giving them a happy ending like Yuvi.

So, this will be our Neel & well his girl...lol...I know, I know. You are all anxious to know her identity. That is coming up in a couple of updates. Till then, enjoy their love story....😊


Neel&His girl:











Lastly, this is a great video someone made on KT&Lakshya....my inspiration for choosing this couple as Neel&his girl. Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pK46D21S_xg&feature=channel_page


Edited by Neetu2825 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
I luv it😊😊...anotha beautiful jodi in the horizon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
haha neetu! great choicee for neel andd ....
still havee my lipss sealedd😆
lakshya and KT, wow great choicee.. when one of my friendss was telling mee about lakshya and KT i never really paid attentionn but wow noww i can see why shee adored there jodi, thankss forr reuniting themm well in FF's atleastt😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
good choice neetu i liked them in kyunki and from what i remember they are a lot like laksya and kt cos in the beginning you could see that they liked each other but they were always fighting😃 so a very good choice yaar

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