FF: IF I HAD YOU (pg.77; pg.78)*

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

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Posted: 16 years ago

#481

@Binky: Glad you enjoyed this update. Sorry it took so long to get back to the story but you can't really blame me. The current show track really sucked out the energy to write anymore. Also, I'm happy you liked Billu... Gina&Billu...kind of go together nah?😉😆

@sweetouch_98: Thanks for liking the update, yaar. Let me know what you think of the next one when I update.😊

@sadaf.12: Sorry no yuvi part in this update. But, don't worry...next update will have yuvi in it. So, stay tuned.😉

@nikita_88: Thanks for liking this part. I'm interested to know what movies this scene reminded you of...so do try to let me know when you get the chance.😊

@ Lamia17: Thank you for reading, yaar. Glad to see that you were anxiously awaiting my update. It means a lot...😃

@Manayuv: Takar wali jodi😆....yeah, I suppose they are. I wanted to make Neel a bit different from Yug. Whereas Yug was always running after Vrinda...trying to win her over. Neel will be a bit unsure...talking back to her perhaps? He'll warm up to her slowly...someone mentioned on here that they don't believe in love at first sight. So, I'm changing it into a more "falling in love without the realization its love"....we'll see how Neel works out.

Good catch on that line...I was totally thinking about Jab we met when I used that line...I loved that scene in the movie. It was my favorite😃
And yes, of course I'm waiting anxiously for the new release, especially since Shahid is in it. 😃
Neel is a sweet guy isn't he? I think a bit of Yug's "niceness" rubbed off on him. The car...yaar...this is my dream car! I would love to drive this one day...so I thought, why not give it to Neel in the meantime. 😉😊

Thanks 4 all your comments😊...I hope you find the next part just as magical.

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hasaab

@hasaab

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Posted: 16 years ago

#482

salam neetu,

buhat acha update tha.neel b kisi se kam nahi hai, aakhir cousin kis ka hai.😆

but yuvi scene nai the.

tumarey FF ki vrinda sirf yug ki hai.yug ki parwa karti hai n or yug ki feelings ko samjhti hai..

plz next update jaldi karna plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Priyanka

@Mana26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#483

hey all you silentt readerss pleasee dooo comment! you guyss knoww thatt Neetu's FF's aree awesomee, soo pleasee doo comment ( LOL, i bet you'vee been wantingg someoneee too urge everyonee for youu neetu!)

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: hasaab
salam neetu,
buhat acha update tha.neel b kisi se kam nahi hai, aakhir cousin kis ka hai.😆

but yuvi scene nai the.

tumarey FF ki vrinda sirf yug ki hai.yug ki parwa karti hai n or yug ki feelings ko samjhti hai..

plz next update jaldi karna plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Thanks yaar😊 I'm glad that you're still sticking with the story. Also, don't worry, I'll feature yuvi in the next part. I just wanted to wrap up Neel's story a bit.

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

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Posted: 16 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: Manayuv
hey all you silentt readerss pleasee dooo comment! you guyss knoww thatt Neetu's FF's aree awesomee, soo pleasee doo comment ( LOL, i bet you'vee been wantingg someoneee too urge everyonee for youu neetu!)

lol😆Thank you hun...that is very sweet of you.
I have to agree...it is a bit disappointing that only a hand full of people take the time to comment while so many read the story.

It just means that I won't be updating faster...😛
So, the more people comment...the faster I'll post the next part...that's the deal.😉

Yes, I'm forcing you silent readers to comment. Plz do take the time to do so for all the FF writers who take their time to write these stories for you. It really motivates us to continue😊

Edited by Neetu2825 - 16 years ago

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shabana

@shab_rules

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Posted: 16 years ago

#486

great update hunny. sorry yaar, i know thats a lame coment, but im too tired to give ou proper feedback right now.

i mean it tho, gtraet update ! and im gald too that you continued, ur a tryue star

Edited by shab83 - 16 years ago

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SweRav

@SweRav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#487

wow neetu! you know when i found out you have updated your fan fic i didn't read it right away- i wanted to dedicate a full time to your updated scene as i love reading it without disturbances so i can picture the story in my head with your lovely words.

and for the update, I LOVE IT! NEEL IS IN LOVE! wow, I loved how you went back n forth on the guy- he was feeling the electricity of love, yet he kept pushing those thoughts away because he was confused!
aww so sweet!

wow im eagerly waiting for the next update! i remember once you told us forthcoming highlights and one of them was yug will propose to vrinda!

im SO SO SO excited for that!

thanks SO much neetu! 👏

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

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Posted: 16 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: SweRav
wow neetu! you know when i found out you have updated your fan fic i didn't read it right away- i wanted to dedicate a full time to your updated scene as i love reading it without disturbances so i can picture the story in my head with your lovely words.

and for the update, I LOVE IT! NEEL IS IN LOVE! wow, I loved how you went back n forth on the guy- he was feeling the electricity of love, yet he kept pushing those thoughts away because he was confused!
aww so sweet!

wow im eagerly waiting for the next update! i remember once you told us forthcoming highlights and one of them was yug will propose to vrinda!

im SO SO SO excited for that!

thanks SO much neetu! 👏

Thanks 4 sticking with the story, yaar. And yes, those scenes are still coming up...I just need to get them just right. So, hopefully, I'll have the proposal up in the coming weeks.

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

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Posted: 16 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: shab83
great update hunny. sorry yaar, i know thats a lame coment, but im too tired to give ou proper feedback right now.

i mean it tho, gtraet update ! and im gald too that you continued, ur a tryue star

Thanks hun 4 commenting. Don't worry about giving a 'proper' feedback. The fact that you wrote me a quick response is very much appreciative. luv u for that😊