FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143

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sonali.19281

@sonali.19281

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Posted: 16 years ago

#941

🤣 at BINU............

I am 🥳 that its up finally...will comment once i read 🤣

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sonali.19281

@sonali.19281

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Posted: 16 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: sonali.19281
🤣 at BINU............

I am 🥳 that its up finally...will comment once i read 🤣

EDITED................................

okies...i am in a completely 🤣 mood today

so no offence but one line did it for me...

Gunjan- I dint wanna imagine samrat in his underwear 🤣 🤣

naz if u reading..i soooooooooo think she was stalking our convo 🤣

coco 🤗 for getiing your a** up to write it finally..but wait a min this one was a filler sorta...where is d real action dude 😡 😆

okies yer punishment now that u have taken forever and not really shown romance other than the nervous shifting around..I and (naz for sure) demand passionate scenes in the last part 😆

u defo not disappoint us... 😆 😆 😆
okies so this part was a mix of AW2R, the play scene from MJHT and something else i forget now..i knoew while i was reading 😆 😆 😆 (need to get back on that) 😆 😆 😆

i liked yer POVs yet again but I can see why u werent happy wid it..or edited it..u know what I always feel the first version is d best..but then again its me..so there r no DRAFTS in my case 🤣

anyhow...now we are a GANG..me, binu, reya, macaroni n others who wont let u sleep in peace till u update the last one...so betta watch before u procrastinate..
😆 😆 😆

leave that to me.......... 🤣 I love how i can yapp away widout making one sensible point 🤣
cant help its friday evening..u chose d whacko sona 🤣

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#943

I can finally sleep in peace🤣

Loved the update😃 And like always, you left a cliffhanger. You do that on purpose don't you? I bet it's Samrat's parents =)

Anyway, it was wonderfully written. Loved how you switched the POV's and showed what both Gunjan and Samrat were feeling. Can't wait to read the next update. Hopefully it'll be sometime soon? =)

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Niki

@Nikdis2468

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#944

jus got done reading all da updates...luved it...plzzzzz continue soon...!!!!!!

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425360

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Posted: 16 years ago

#945

Reserved =)

WHAT? NO! It finished.... Long My foot. It ended so quickly... OMG Nupur with the Photo Kichne wala Bhaya was too good. & Exactly what she would say. & Samrat regretting... HAH... Yay You have no idea how happy I am that Shee-nah is a good character. WAIT!?! She is a god character right? And Dia she didn't cry 😡 Probably worried about her mascara.... *rolls eyes* and Miss Tam is so cool... Aww Gunjan cried... And he's such a dhakkan... But at least he'll realize soon. =) And where's RV? Did he do something? Awesome part like always... Okay after the last part I'll write the long comment this is tooooo short......

&&& I swear the Threats wont stop till you are done.. Ya hear me?

Miz that was awesome...... 👏

Edited by xxsugasweetxx - 16 years ago

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#946

*shocked muh* You actually updated? You, updated?

*ducks the chappals* Oh, could I have mine back please, they're the pretty gold ones. They're new. *nods*

And I loved the emotions you've evoked, by showing the parallels between Khushi and Anmol and SaJan. Seriously, when are they going to let themselves forgive themselves and each other?

Waiting for the next part! It's not going to take another two months is it?

Love,
Radz