FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 97

Originally posted by: naz17555

mimiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii that was amazinng!!!!!!!!!! yeah it took forever! but ok it was worth the wait! but dnt u dare do athat fot the last part!!!!!! im dying of suspense here!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: sonali.19281

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okies...i am in a completely 🤣 mood today LOL I wonder why 🤣

so no offence but one line did it for me...

Gunjan- I dint wanna imagine samrat in his underwear 🤣 🤣

naz if u reading..i soooooooooo think she was stalking our convo 🤣

WAS NOT 🤣🤣🤣 OMG I knew you would go insane after reading that. I had second thoughts before posting it 🤣

coco 🤗 for getiing your a** up to write it finally..but wait a min this one was a filler sorta...where is d real action dude 😡 😆

LOL real action was in part 11 🤣 dont expect fighting scenes here 🤣🤣*jokes* Yeah, it was basically a filler. I admit that. It was the first half of the last part 😊

okies yer punishment now that u have taken forever and not really shown romance other than the nervous shifting around..I and (naz for sure) demand passionate scenes in the last part 😆

Define passionate. I'm only 14- keep that in mind 🤣🤣 but I do have a little "somethings" planned 🤣🤣 😃

u defo not disappoint us... 😆 😆 😆
YAY!!

okies so this part was a mix of AW2R, the play scene from MJHT and something else i forget now..i knoew while i was reading 😆 😆 😆 (need to get back on that) 😆 😆 😆

Really? 😲 Think hard Shona..I wanna know 😆 and yeah, the AW2R play was used here a bit. There'll be the one BIG thing from the book and movie in the last part too! Haha, i am so not creative 🤣

i liked yer POVs yet again but I can see why u werent happy wid it..or edited it..u know what I always feel the first version is d best..but then again its me..so there r no DRAFTS in my case 🤣

LOL I know, but my first drafts are like this:

SaJan meet. Fight. Love. The end 🤣 i doubt ANYONE would read that 😆 You'd be surprised at how much editing I have to do 🤣

anyhow...now we are a GANG..me, binu, reya, macaroni n others who wont let u sleep in peace till u update the last one...so betta watch before u procrastinate..

OYEEE 😡 I'll update like...Monday 🤣possibly 🤣🤣
😆 😆 😆

leave that to me.......... 🤣 I love how i can yapp away widout making one sensible point 🤣
cant help its friday evening..u chose d whacko sona 🤣OMG Shona, 🤣🤣 no probs! Thanks for reading/commenting and spamming this thread 🤣

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

I can finally sleep in peace🤣

LOL and me too 🤣U know, I got nightmares of being stalked 😳

Loved the update😃 And like always, you left a cliffhanger. You do that on purpose don't you? I bet it's Samrat's parents =)

Thank you! And yes, I like cliffhanger endings. 😃 It's the only thing that keeps the readers interested 🤣 and stop guessing. NO COMMENT.

Anyway, it was wonderfully written. Loved how you switched the POV's and showed what both Gunjan and Samrat were feeling. Can't wait to read the next update. Hopefully it'll be sometime soon? =)

Thank you Macaroni 😊 I was too lazy to reply earlier 🤣 btw, I haven't talked to you for TWO FREAKING DAYS 😭 that's a record 🤣 I miss you 🥺 but I havent been on msn, so that may be a reason 🤣 and yes, I sure hope it's sometime soon 🤣