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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

plz continue soon, its interesting....

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#112

Nice choice for the wicked man....!!!! Now pls update soon...!!!!

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

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@ ginny_2, vvdn, Dhara_s,prerna1,nisha1984,rituka7,sumaiya wahid, sania_58,sweet_shona,sea_nyx,pinka28,pinkorblack,springsign29

Thanks to all for your comments.Yes Naina can't speak,but luckily she can hear,so Raj will not have to struggle to communicate with her in huge amount.Raj will surely do something for Naina so that she would get a good and respectable life.

@ Mahak

Read both of your comments,so long,thanks..yes,all the lives are related with each other.Raj,Suniti,Dev,Naina,Roop,Randheer..life will be easy as well as difficult for them.And Raj k family ki jahan tak baat hai..yes..Naina ki pehchaan agar saamne aai then problem hogi,Raj me itni himmat toh hai k apne khandan se alag ho kar Naina k saath zindagi beeta sake.Log do chaar din baat karenge,fir bhul jayenge..abhi us baat ko der hai..let's see kyaa hota hai..

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

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PART 6

Naina aai..ussi jagah jahan woh pehli baar Raj se mili thi..Raj khada tha wahan. Naina ko dekh kar kadam badhaya Raj ne..

"Kal ki shaam..bahut kuchh pata chala mujhe..samajh nahi paa raha hoon..k kyaa kahoon.."..Raj ne kaha..Naina ne bahut hi dard bhare nazron se dekha Raj ko... "Tum bharosa rakho..mere dil me tumhare lia izzat kum nahi hui..par sach yeh hai k saamne aur bhi mushkil aayegi,aur duniya bhi humare raaste me phool nahi bichhayegi..par tumhe mujh par yakeen rakhna hoga..aur kisi bhi surat me tum himmat nahi haarogi..bharosa karo..mere jeetejee tumhara koi kuchh nahi bigaad
paayega...tumhari koi beizzati nahi hogi..theek hai..samajh gayi na?"..Raj ne kaha Naina ko samjhane k lia..

Naina rone lagi..Raj k pairon me geer gayi.."Arre..kyaa kar rahi ho,utho,arre.. main koi Bhagwan nahi..suno..Naina..kyaa hua..utho na..please.."..Raj ne uthaya Naina ko...aur kaha ,"Bas..rona bandh karo..main hoon tumhare saath..tumhe kuchh nahi hone doonga..ab chalo..kuchh der baithte hain...aao..".

"Waise tum likhti bahut achha ho..pahle din bhi tumhari likhi hui kuchh baat maine pasha tha..bahut hi achha..aur tum naachti bhi bahut achha ho.."..Raj ne kaha.. Naina muskurai.."Issi tarha muskurati rehna..aur dukhi mat hona...".

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Gaoharjaan intezar kar rahi thi...Naina ko lautne me der ho gayi thi..Naina ko andar aate dekh kar Gaoharjaan gussa ho gayi.."Kahan gayi thi?"..Gaoharjaan ne puchha..Naina ne ishare me bataya..k woh mandir gayi thi.."Itni der tak kyaa kar
rahi thi mandir me?"..Gaoharjaan ne fir puchha..Naina ne koi jawab nahi dia...aur apne kamre me chali gayi..

"Is par nazar rakhna..kahan jaati hai aur kisse milti hai..saari khabar laa kar dena mujhe.." Gaoharjaan ne apni naukrani ko yeh hukum dia."Aur haan..Kunwar Devraj k lia khaas sharbat bana kar rakhna..aaj shaam aa sakte hain woh.."

"Maalkin,Kunwarjee ab pahle jaise nahi rahe..aaj kal shaam hote hi woh apni Patni k paas chale jaate hain..sara din esatate ka kaam dekhte hain..aur raatein aajkal apne mahel me hi beeta rahe hain woh.."..Naukrani ne kaha..

"Toh fir humara yehan zyada din rookna mumkin nahi hoga.Kunwar k hi meherbani hai..jo hum yehan aisi shaan me din kaat rahe hain..ab jab Kunwar ko hi koi dilchasbi na rahi ..toh humen kabhi bhi yehan se jaane k lia keh sakte hain Raja Saab,kyunki Kunwar k hi zid ki wajah se hum yehan aaye the..Raja bhi nahi chaahta tha..k hum yehan aaye..khair..tu jaa..aur jaisa humne kaha waisa kar.." ..Gaoharjaan yeh keh kar chali gayi..

Devraj me aaya yeh badlav sabhi ko dikhai de raha hai..subah uth kar estate ka kaam dekhta hai..hisab kitab do ya teen din me khud jaanch karta hai..aur sooraj k doobte hi seedha Suniti k paas jaata hai..

Suniti kehti hai,"Agar ek dum se baahar jaana bandh kar denge,toh kuchh hi dino me aaphika dum ghootne lagega.."

"Toh kya chaahti ho..itni mushkil se tumhari taraf yeh kadam badhaya hai..waapas naachnewali ki kothe me jaoon?"..Devraj kehta hai..

"Humne yeh nahi kaha k aap wahan jaaiye,par aur bhi jagah hai jaane k..sirf aap estate k kaam dekhte hain,aur mere paas aate hain..shaam ko thodi der k lia baahar ghoom kar aya kijiye..aapko achha lagega.."..Suniti yeh salah deti hai.. "Aur ek baat..aapne baahar jaana chhoda hai..par sharab toh pahle ki tarha hi peete hain..yeh zara kum kijiye..zyada sharab sehat k lia achhi nahi hai.."

"I am trying ,but it's too hard for me to quit alcohol,I am trying,honestly.."..Devraj kehta hai..

"Issi lia kahte hain..shaam ko mahel me reh kar sharab peene se toh yehi behtar hoga,k aap taazi hawa me zara ghoom aaye.."..Suniti kehti hai..

Par Devraj ne baat nahi suni..lekin jab uski sharab peene ki wajah se roz Suniti naraz hone lagi,tab usne kaha ,"Maan lia k baahar ghoomne jaayenge toh sharab se door rahenge..par agar sharab peene ka sahi me mann ho..toh hum saath me hi
lekar jaa sakte hain,yaa fir kahin se bhi sharab kharid sakte hain,tab kyaa karenge?"

Suniti ne kaha ,"Agar aisi baat hai toh,ab se hum saath chalenge,baahar tahelne, hum aapko sharab peene toh denge nahi..aap aur hum ghoom bhi lenge,aur ghoomne firnese mann bhi achha rahega.."

"Abhi abhi toh aap bimari se uthi hain..roz shaam ko ghumna theek hoga?"..Devraj ne puchha..

"Hum bilkul theek hai..humen kuchh nahi hoga..ab se aap jab lautenge,hum taiyyar rahenge..aapke saath baahar jaane k lia.."..Suniti ne kaha..

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Arjun apne ghode par sawar hokar jaa raha tha..Daneshwar gaon gaya tha woh.. Daneshwar se woh apne estate laut raha tha,Kableshwar.Aas paas se guzarte hue log Kunwar Arjun Singh Kableshwar ko dekh kar pranam kar rahe the,Kunwarjee
ka bada ruab hai.Ghoda thak chuka tha..Arjun ne socha kuchh der rook kar ghode ko aram dega..fir doogni raftar se chal padega apne mahel k aur..Ghode ko charne k lia chhod dia,aur khud gaya paas ki baaudi me paani peene aur fir pedh ki
thandi chhaaon k neeche baith gaya..

Arjun ka ghoda gaya baaudi k paas,paani peene,Arjun ki aankh lag gayi ..subah se nikla tha,pata nahi kyaa sujhi thi usko,sooraj sar pe chadh aaya,pyaas se Arjun ki chhaati fat rahi thi,abhi zara usko chain aaya..aise me door se ek aur ghode k aane ki awaz..Arjun uth kar baitha..

Ek chaudha saal ki ladki thi us ghode pe..aksar is taraf aati hai woh,is baaudi k paas ..Arjun ne dekha doosri taraf jo purana bargat ka pedh hai..uske peechhe ek ladka chhipa hai..ladka yehi koi bees saal ka hoga,ladki dhoop me kaafi thak gayi thi, ghode se utar kar woh baaudi k paas aai..ek safed saaree pahen lia usne apne ghodsawari k kapde chhod kar..aur gayi baaudi k paani k andar..baaudi k beecho beech gayi tairte hue..fir kinare ki taraf aai..bheege hue kapdon baahar aai..bargat k pedh k neeche ek patthar ka tookda tha..jis par log aakar phool feka karte the, sindoor laga hua hai..dia bhi jalta hai kisi shaam ko..ladki aakar ussi patthar ko pranam karne lagi..pedh k peechhe khade hue ladke ne bhi dekha usko..aur Arjun ne bhi dekha us ladki ko..jiska rang gora ho..ussiko khubsurat samajhne ki jo aadat hai..woh aadat nahi rahi Arjun ki..dhoop ka rang safed hai, par jis aasmaan par dhoop khilta hai woh aasman neela hai,jin nazaron ko dekh kar aankhon ko thandak milti hai woh nazare hariyali hai..baarish ki boond jis zameen par geer kar fanaa hoti us zameen ka rang bhi safed nahi hota,par wahi zameen aur uski saundhi si khushboo insaan k jeevan ko ek naya arth dete hain...safed bheege kapdon me jisko dekha Arjun ne..woh jaise issi kudrat se abhi abhi nikal aai hai..

Arjun ne dekha woh ladki jaa rahi hai..achanak woh ladka uske peechhe gaya..aur pukara,"Roop.."..ladki ne mudh kar dekha..achanak aawaz aai.."Roop Baisaa..jaldi kijiye..Ranisa k saath aapko jaana hai na..?!!"

Roop chali gayi..

Arjun ka dhyaan toota..guzre hue kal k kuchh jhalak yuh hi aankhon k saamne aa gaye the..Arjun ne aas paas dekha..usse sirf apna ghoda dikha..bargat k pedh k peechhe khade hue bees saal ka woh ladka nahi dikha..naa hi bheegi saree me
Roop dikhi..baaudi ki paani me bhi koi hulchul nahi dikhi..

Arjun fir se chal pada Kableshwar ki taraf..bahut tezi se..Randheer bahut gehra dost hua karta tha,par Roop zindagi thi Arjun k lia..Roop ko chheen kar achha nahi kia Randheer ne..Roop k mahel tak Arjun pahooch gaya tha..tab bhi Randheer
Roop ki zindagi ka hissa nahi bana tha..Holi ka din tha..chehre par rang laga kar aur badi si pagdi pahen kar Arjun pahooch gaya tha Roop ko rang lagane k lia aur ussi shubh din par dekha Randheer k gharwale gaye the wahan,Roop aur Randheer k shaadi ki baat pakki hote hue dekha Arjun ne..

Arjun ne samjhaya Randheer ko k Roop ka khandan Randheer k khandan ki barabari nahi kar sakta..Roop se bhi khubsurat dulhan mil sakti hai Randheer ko. Randheer ko na is shaadi inkaar tha,nahi ikrar..khandan ki parampara nibhane k ilava aur kuchh nahi socha Randheer ne..par Randheer k dimag me yeh khayal kabhi aaya nahi k kyun Arjun is shaadi k itna khilaaf hai..?Kabhi socha hi nahi Randheer ne k Arjun Roop se pyaar kar sakta hai...Randheer yeh jaanta bhi nahi tha k peechhle kuchh maheeno se Arjun jiske khayalon me khoya tha woh usiki honewali Patni Roop hai.

Ek din issi baaudi k paas Arjun khada tha,Roop k intezar me..Roop aai bhi.."Arre Kunwarsa,aap?"..Randheer k ghar se jo shagun gaya tha Roop k ghar,Arjun bhi gaya tha usdin,Roop se jaan pehchaan hui thi..

"Gani Khamba ,Baisa.."..Arjun ne kaha..

"Jee Khamba Gani,aap is waqt yehan?"..Roop ne poochha..

"Aap ki raah dekh rahe the."..Arjun ne kaha..

"Hum yehan aayenge,aapko kaise pata chala?"..Roop ne hairan ho kar poochha..

"Peechhle kai maheeno se humne dekha hai aapko,issi baaudi k paas,issi bargat k neeche us patthar ko poojte hue..baaudi k paani me tairte hue..Kunwar Randheer se aapka rishta pakka hone k bahut pahle se dekh rahe hain aapko..Roop.."..Arjun
ne kaha..

"Aap..ko pata bhi hai k aap kyaa keh rahe hain?"..Roop ne apna ghoda peechhe hata lia..

"Abhi bhi der nahi hui hai Roop..humen parvah nahi k Randheer kyaa sochega,log kyaa kahenge..ek baar humara vivah ho gaya aapse,logon ki zuban bhi bandh ho jaayegi...Randheer aapke laayak nahi hain Roop..hum prem karte hain aapse.. " ..Arjun aage badha..

"Aap apne dost k honewali dulhan se aisi baat kar rahe hain,aap kya bahut shareef hain?Kunwar Randheer ka lihaz karte hue hum yehan se jaa rahe hain,varna aisi badtamizi ki sakht saza aapko de sakte the hum..." Roop chali gayi...

Arjun wahi khada reh gaya..Arjun jab apne mahel waapas aaya tab usko pata chala k usko jaana hoga ,kuchh dino k lia,London.Karobar k silsile me,Sirf zameendari par depend kar k nishchint rehna Arjun k Pita ko theek nahi laga, unhone apna karobar bhi shuru kia jo baad me desh videsh me faila,Arjun ko is baar woh le jaana chaahte the London,chaahte the Oxford me Arjun ko admit kara denge,Arjun padhta bhi rahega aur wahan ka karobar ki bhi dekhbhal kar sakega.. par Arjun ko sirf itna bataya gaya k usko hafte bhar k lia London jaana hoga.Arjun gaya bhi..par wahan jaa kar jab usko pata chala k Oxford me k uske admission ki baat chal rahi hai..tab Arjun ne aitraz kia...woh bas ek baar India aana chaah raha tha,Randheer se baat karne,shayad Randheer hi mana kar de Roop se shaadi karne k lia..Randheer dost hai Arjun ka..woh shayad samajh le...

Arjun waapas India aaya,kareeb ek maheene baad aaya..aakar usko yeh khabar mili k Randheer ki shaadi ho chuki hai..shaadi ka shubh muhurat usi waqt nikla..varna agle do saal tak Roop aur Randheer ki shaadi nahi ho paati..Arjun Randheer se mila bhi nahi..usko laga Randheer ne bahut bada dhokha kia hai..Arjun chala gaya fir se..

Arjun India waapas aaya tha ek ummeed k saath,par London waapas gaya nakamyab ho kar,pyaar me nakamyabi,dosti me dhokha,Arjun k paas uska toota hua dil tha,aur kuchh nakamyab adhoore rishtey the..dukh hua,fir dukh k saath gussa jama hua dil me..Roop ko bhula nahi paaya Arjun,gharwale shaadi ki baat kar rahe the,ek se badh kar ek rishtey aa rahe the,par Arjun kisi aur par hi apna nishana saadh raha tha.

Randheer se shaadi k baad Roop ka bhi dil toota,woh khud ek Rajwade khandan se thi,wahan k chaal chalan jaanti thi,par apne Pati ki aiyashion ko woh sweekar nahi kar paai..waqt beetta raha,Roop ka dil aur zakhmi hota raha..

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Suniti ki taraf se khushkhabri mili sab ko,Rana Khandan ka waaris aanewala hai..Devraj aur Suniti ki aulad..

Raj kai dino se soch raha tha k ek baar Rajasthan jaaye,leave application bhi dia tha,ab jaa kar chhutti manzoor hui hai,Raj apne pending reports complete kar hi raha tha ,tab Raj k paas ek khat aayi..Naina ne bheja tha..milne bulaya tha..Raj gaya usse milne..jaate jaate usne calander par taarikh dekh li..7th August,1941.. thode hi der pahle khabar aai hai radio me..Rabindranath Tagore ki maut ho chuki hai,Raj gaya Naina se milne...ussi jheel k kinare..

Naina khadi thi..Raj gaya.."Bolo..kyaa baat hai?"..Raj ne puchha..

Naina ne ek kagaz ka tookda dia Raj ko..jisme likha tha..k Naina Calcutta jaana chaahti hai,Vishwakavi k charno me phool chadhana chaahti hai,antim yatra me woh bhi shaamil hona chaahti hai..

"Itni jaldi main kaise intezam karoon?"..Raj ne kaha..

Naina sar jhoonka kar khadi rahi.."Achha..theek hai..kal subah ho sakta hai..tum ek kaam karo..aaj raat ko Suniti k paas rook jaao..chalo main tumko wahin chhod deta hoon..mahel me hogi tum..toh Gaoharjaan bhi koi aitraz nahi karengi..kal
subah tum taiyyar rehna..main aaoonga..tumko Calcutta pahoocha doonga..theek hai..?"

Naina muskurai.."Achha hai..tumko hanste hue dekh kar achha laga..",Raj ne kaha..

Devraj ne suna sab kuchh,Raj aur Naina k beech jo chal raha hai..sab kuchh uski aankhon k saamne aa gaya.."Toh ab aap kyaa karenge?"..Dev ne puchha..

"Meri official leave mili hai..main soch raha tha k yehan by road Calcutta jaoon..fir wahan se by air jaoon Rajasthan..aaj raat ko agar Naina yehan reh jaaye..toh kyaa koi pareshani hai aaplogon ko?"..Raj ne puchha..

"Yehan jinka raaj chalta hai..unse puchhiye.."..Dev ne Suniti ki taraf ishara kia..

"Nahi..koi pareshani nahi..main Naina ko kal subah k lia taiyyar kar doongi.." ..Suniti ne kaha..

Naina ko Suniti k hawale kar k Raj gaya Calcutta jaane ki taiyyari karne...

"Ab aayega maza.."..Dev ne kaha...

"Main samjhi nahi..",Suniti ne puchha ,"Kis baat ka maza?"

"Shekhawat khandan ka sab se shareef mard pada hai ek kothewali k chakkar me.. aur jitna Raj ko dekha hai..Raj aiyashi toh nahi kar raha hai...kyaa pata kal ko Shekhawat khandan bahut bada bawal mach jaaye...Raj k lakshan theek nahi lag
rahe hain.." Dev ne kaha..

"Agar aisa hai..toh burai toh kuchh bhi nahi isme..koi bhi ladki apni khushi se yeh zindagi nahi chunti..aur khandan aur uska rutba,isse ab mujhe koi fark nahi padta ..jhooti shaan ki aadh me kitni gandegi chhoopi hoti hai..main jaanti hoon..Roop Kanwar ki zindagi barbad ho gayi..."..Suniti ne kaha...

"Tum so jaao..aisi haalat me itni raat ko jaagna theek nahi.."..Dev ne kamre ki batti bujha di..

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Great part...!!!!

The story is progressing well...!!!

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kads_8302

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Wonder ful update.... 👏
Story is really going well
But is this Devraj is upto something?

n ud soon the next part

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sania_58

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

wonderful update

superb

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon.

by the way aap itni late kyun kar rahi ho di??????

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#118

hi Anu,I just read the whole fic and I want to say that it is really a unique one.it is different from ur other fics and also from everyone else's fics.fantabulous.👏👏ur really doing a great job.and the progress of the fic is also great.I am seeing RN in a totally new light in this fic.waiting to see what is going to happen in their lives now when slowly everyone is concentrating on them both.

do pls continue soon and if possible pls PM me on ur next update.afterall,I dont want to miss such a good fic.

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#119

that was wonderful
loved it completely
lets see what happen next in RN's life
BTW ye Dev itna sudhar kaise gaya
plz continue soon and do pm me

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#120

Hey anu

this ff is totally different from the others plzz add me to your pm list and do pm me when updated plzzzz its going on very well the story line is really intersting. tc ammu

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