Tose Naina Laage(RN)..Part 6 @ Page 17 24/02/10

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vvdn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

very nice update...but ye kya Naina bol nahi sakti😲
i really hope Raj Naina ko is daldal se bahar nikale
plzzz update soon

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Glad to know that you hv updated...!!! 😃

Nice part...!!! 👏
But Naina is dumb...??? 😲
I hope Naina goes to meet Rajveer ..!! 😳

Roop ne acha jawab diya Arjun ko...!!!👏👏👏

Waiting eagerly for the next part...and please try to send out PMs...!!!😃

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

that was great
but Naina cant speak that was like a bomb
i hope everything get cleared and sorted between RN
plz continue soon

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Nice part. Raj ko kaafi kuch pata chala hai....I hope Naina will meet him. And Dev doesnt understand why every1 thinks Raj as sum Bhagwan.....well.....Raj hai hi aisa. Anyways, w8ing for the next part. Pls continue soon.

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sania_58

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

wow

awsome update

too good

mindblowing

so sad, Naina bol nahin sakti

but interesting story

loved the update

very well written

great going

plz continue soon

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Nice part...!!!
Ek hi din mein Raj ko bahot kuchh pata chala Naina ke baare mein..!!!
Poor naina...bol bhi nahi sakti..!!! i hope she goes to meet Raj.. 😳
Hope Devraj n Suniti ke bich sab thik ho jaaye to devraj naina ka pichha chhod de..!!!
looking forward for Raj-Naina's meeting..!!!
waiting for the next update...

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Sorry Anu mujhe pata hi nahi chala kab is ka part 4 update hua, abhi jab new update dekha to pata chala ki ye part 5 hai aur part 4 pehle hi post ho chuka hai.

Coming to part 4, that was fantastic.

Naina samajh nahi paa rahi hai ki us ki kismat us ko kya kya khel dikha rahi hai aur vahi haal kaafi had tak Rajveer ka bhi hai. Vo ye soch raha hai ki kaise bina baat kiye vo ladki bus ek pal k liye saamne aayi aur ojhal bhi ho gayi us ki najron se. Saath vaali aurat ne baat hi nahi karne di Raj ko varna ho sakta tha kaafi baatein clear ho jaati.

Naina ko lag raha hai ki Raj kitna seedha aur saccha insaan hai jo abhi bhi Naina ko apnana chahta hai. Naina ka dar ab jaldi hi sach honewaala hai jab Devraaj ki mehfil me us ko nachna hoga. Roop ki baaton se mai kuch had tak agree hoon par poori tarah se nahi. Us ne jo kiya vo apne hisaab se sahi soch k kiya aur kaha bhi sahi ki Rajkhaandan ki rivayaton me aiyaashi karna nahi hai. Par jo bhi hua kuch had tak theek hua.

Raj ne accha kiya ki Suniti ko samjhaya ki us ko ab apne aur apne pati k beech doori kam karne ki koshish karni chahiye yu kabhi zindagi nahi katati hai. Par khabar galat pahuchi Roop k paas jab ki Raj to sab theek karne ki koshish kar raha hai na dil se. Suniti ab theek bhi ho chuki hai kaafi had tak to Devraaj samajhta hai ki is ka reason Raj hai jab ki is ka reason Raj ki advice hai.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Again nice update the recent one.

Raj jaanta nahi tha ki ek nahi itne saare sach achanak se us k saamne yu hi aa jaayenge. Pehle Naina ka Nazar Jaan k roop me us mehfil me naachte hue milna aur us k baad jab Devraaj se detail me baat hue us ki to us ne bataya ki Naina k pass sab kuch hai jis k log deewane hain par shayad ek sab se khaas cheej nahi hai vo hai us ki awaaz.

Mujhe lagta hai ab Raj ko samajh nahi aa raha hai ki vo Naina k liye us k dil me kis tarah ki feelings hain. Jahan tak mujhe dikhta hai is baat par to us ko bharosa hai ki Naina ko bus us ne hi touch kiya hai aaj tak but present situation me jis jagah Naina hai kya Raj ka us se shaadi karne ka kadam sahi hoga? I doubt ki so called Rajput family is ko kabhi bhi accept karegi.

Devraaj ne chup chaap se Suniti ka letter padh liya aur us k baad shayad kaafi had tak us ka illusion khatam ho gaya ki us ne Raj aur Suniti k rishte ko bevajah hi galat samjha. Raj milna chahta hai ek baar fir Naina se, dekhte hain is mulakaat se kya hasil hota hai us ko. Naina aayegi milne i know it n i believe it. Kya badhiya kaam kiya hai Roop ne, mera to man hi khush ho gaya.

Jawab bhi accha mila hai Arjun ko Roop se, mere khayal se us ne is ki umeed bhi nahi ki hogi.

continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

wow! fantastic update, I'm so happy that Devraj and Suniti have settled their misunderstandings 😉 (err....if what I think happened, happened...thoda clearly nahin likh sakti? lol!) same for raj's bro (forgot the name) and roop! update soon cause now I want raj and naina to be happy