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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

Thanks for updating Rabia!
Though sadly, I need to save it up for my weekend reading.
Will get back to you. :)

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Daebak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

Gosh !! I hope Samira doesnt have any incurable deadly disease !

I wanna read more on Samira and Rehaan ....Zeenat is sooo ridiculous !!

Continue soonerrr !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Namz94

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Posted: 16 years ago

#253

Updated my post on page 35 😳

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hazel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#254

Hey wowww u updated looks loong =]

1. Did I do a better job with Adi-Neelam this time?

Excellant! 👏 Loved the hand touch and the way you described it. Its nice that Neelam is getting to know and understand Aditya more

2. Did Rehaan's story surprise you?

Wooow this was unexpected. He did the right thing by dumping Zeenat. She was too possessive and didnt trust Rehaan. I felt sorry for him when she accussed him of sleeping with Emily. Argghh dont like Zeenat

3. What do you think Samira and Zaid's secret is?

I seriously have no idea, no lie. I think Samira is ill or something. But im afraid that this might creat problems between Adi and Zaid coz Zaid didnt tell Adi. will this affect the Rehaan and Samira's relationship too??

4. What did you think of the chapter?

Awesome! 👏 👏 👏

Very well written and described!

The karan-Deepali scene at the beginning was so cute, Deeepali and Karan's little fights are so adorable. looks like Rehaan is gonna play cupid for them.

I wonder what Todd is up too. Hina is gonna crack that code or maybe in trouble because of Todd. Im eager for more Karan and Deepali. excited about the secret between Zaid and Samira.

Eagerly waiting for your next update

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Fiona

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#255

omfg YESHHH U FINALLY UPD

going to read it now!

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Fiona

@ShaFiLICIOUS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#256

Questions:

1. Did I do a better job with Adi-Neelam this time? (I really hope so)

YES U DID i love how his hand touch her hand..so sweet and tht now bcuz of him she will believe in her self much more!...! more scene with them please!

2. Did Rehaan's story surprise you?

YES I WAS LEFT WITH A SHOCK EXPRESSION AND MY MOUTH WAS OPEN! wow zeenat wass thinking soo low..and i felt soo bad for him...he gave up his gal friends his free time and spend it with her..and all shw was thinking was getting jealous...i feel bad for him..relationships like that never work out if 1 is faithful and the other 1 is thinking very low! im glad he over with her! and now he need to get over thinking about her..!

3. What do you think Samira and Zaid's secret is?

hmmm i have lots in my mind but wont say anything as yet..! all i can say is tht i think samira probably tried to hurt her self or something or she might have had an accident or was stressing over something.! i hope it not tht serious!

4. What did you think of the chapter?

this chapter was full of suprises!..

Karan and Deepali finally agreed on something... then there was Zaid and adi - adi found something fishy - then there was rehaan tellin ghis story- well said - and then there was hina and todd in the same floor and hina was a bit afraid or scare and about tht - and then samira - she had mention what had happen years ago and tht she can take care of her self - which goes back to what adi had scene and questioned zaid about but zaid made something up - and then adi n neelam well though and said scene- love it very much!

Overall the chapter was well said and the things that happen was good!

awesome work rabia di

do update soon!

- Fiona

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-anamika-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#257

OMG! Rabia! This was genius! You're such an amazing author!

You're doing such a wonderful job of incorporating every couple equally throughout the story. There was a sufficient amount of friction between Karan and Deepali, and their story is coming along quite intriguingly.

Ah! I've been DYING to find out about Zeenat. I could just picture Rehaan working hard to convince his girlfriend's father that he is sincere, honest, and trustworthy. "Most caring and devotional boyfriend"? That's my Rehaan! :D I want to give him a big hug and say, "It's okay!"

Adi and Neelam were adorable. I know you satisfied MANY of the couple's fans. ;)

Rabia, you are THE MOST AMAZING FAN FICTION WRITER I HAVE EVER SEEN! Honestly, your characters are realistic, yet slightly bigger-than-life (If only I met a guy like Rehaan). The story is logical, interesting, entertaining, yet you never lose sight of your culmination. I can't even begin to express how much I adore this story!

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anshika.s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#258

Questions:

1. Did I do a better job with Adi-Neelam this time? (I really hope so)
U surely did a better job with them....i loved the way adi came to Neelam's house to help her out..and Neelam's parents too were cute..

2. Did Rehaan's story surprise you?

yup surely...it was shocking...bechara rehaan...he was irritated with zeenat..he even spoke to her father and in turn...its gud rehaan left her...but zeenat is still following him..poor champ...

3. What do you think Samira and Zaid's secret is?

i think samira surely has some disease..but i hope it's not something serious...or she tried to hurt herself when her cousin died...dont know...u know it better...

4. What did you think of the chapter?
The Chapter was good i loved Neelam and Aditya....i eagerly want to know what is wrong with amrita...overall the chapter was very good full of surprises....loved karan and deepali too.....
the way u express ur characters and write their story is really fantastic..continue soon

Love
Anshika

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anshika.s

@anshika.s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#259

Questions:

2. Did Rehaan's story surprise you?

yup surely...it was shocking...bechara rehaan...he was irritated with zeenat..he even spoke to her father and in turn...its gud rehaan left her...but zeenat is still following him..poor champ...

3. What do you think Samira and Zaid's secret is?

i think samira surely has some disease..but i hope it's not something serious...or she tried to hurt herself when her cousin died...dont know...u know it better...

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debby

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Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#260

Hey Rabia!
Hope you are having a more relaxed time now :)
Wonderful update may I say, if you trust me it isnt for cliche's sake.

Deepali Karan can never go wrong.. you never let them either. ;) Thoroughly enjoyed the scene!
Zeenat's insecurities were well portrayed and I can u'stand how Rehaan must have felt with her. I am troubled about Samira though... hope you'll more throw more light on that soon.

1. Did I do a better job with Adi-Neelam this time? (I really hope so)
Wait, does this mean you didnt do as good a job the previous time? SG may not be my favourite telly couple but the way you write any character is amazing. Let me quote Adi -"If you wrote it, I am sure its great." :D

2. Did Rehaan's story surprise you?
No.. not too much.. I had expected some kind of a past.. But Zeenat's character was well explored. I hadnt expected quite those shades.

3. What do you think Samira and Zaid's secret is?
I will reserve my comments on that until later.. LOL

4. What did you think of the chapter?
Like I say, you always write well. I am never disappointed with a chapter.

Keep it up Rabia! :)

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