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AOriginally posted by: Muski_Aly
AMAZING PART MANSI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT. 🤗 ATUL WANTED TO WRITE A POEM ON THE CAKE ITSELF 😆. THE SURPRISE THEY PLANNED WAS SO SWEET😳
AND OF COURSE RAHUL MUSKAAN PARTS WERE EXTREMELY CUTE😍.
WAITING EAGERLY FOR YOUR NEXT PART!!!!!😃
THANX FOR THE PM😃 AND DO PM ME AGAIN!!!😊
Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! How sweet! Thanks so much for the dedication Manu! You toh know how much I LOVE AA. Such cuties! Yaar I would've read this sooner but you probably saw my fb status. meri net messed up thi. I needed a new modem jo kal dopahar ko hi laga so i just got around to reading this after hours of studying.
I loved this part. It was so natural. Don't ask how or why. it just had a very natural tone to it. everything just fell into place. Very cute!love ya!komz
It was such a sweet part.. more of AA but not minding it coz i luved it.. AA were such cutely potrayed.. especially Atul...⭐️... update soon.....
Originally posted by: RM_forever
Awesome parts Mansi... 👏 .....Update soon...
great part, mansi..
'Aaj kal bada Muskaan-Muskaan kar raha hai?' i was thinking d same thing when rahul chirped abt d cake.. hehe
anjali and radhika lecturing muskaan abt closeness in her relationship with rahul, how embarrassing situation! 😆
their horror flick experience was hilarious.. 🤣 u described that very well.. like i could imagine it on TV laughing my head off.. 🤣🤣
cute surprize for anjali's birthday and cuter RM in bash.. "patni devi" haha
'Okay this was really stupid. Pata nahin kiska asar ho raha hai mujhpar aaj kal...' Rahul grinned. 🤣
P.S. congrats on completing 50 pages..!
Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita
wonderful part!!
Firstly Im so sorry for just completely disappearing..My computer was snatched away from me ..LOL. Coz I really had to concentrate on my studies. So I was okay with. Thankfully till now I have done well in my exams..and im on a winter break..so I thought ill just finish the FF...coz its very very close to my heart..I had so much planned but will just have to adjust it in the these last chapters.
I dunno wether any one remembers the last part..:P Im sure nobody does actually. :P
Re-cap- Anjali's b'day..
Armaan came to them. 'hey Rahul-Muskaan..ek picture!' There was a flash and startled they looked at Armaan. 'Wow kya picture hai..natural pose.'
It was a picture of RM facing each other smiling. Armaan showed the picture to everybody and they all teased Rahul Muskaan...meanwhile they tried to sort out their feelings for each other.
All of them sat down..past mid-night..it was almost 2 A.M. They were talking , laughing..together a group of 6. Atul-Anjali were cuddled up on the couch..Armaan and Radhika on the floor filled with pillows and Rahul Muskaan on the sofa. They had finished almost 2 bottles of coke. Armaan had cracked an 'A' joke..and everybody was laughing...except Muskaan who found it so disgusting..she threw a pillow on Armaan.
'Armaan yaar...aise jokes bachon ke samne nahin sunate..bura asar padta hai.' Rahul said laughing.
'Haan yaar Raooool agli baar se main dhyaan rakhunga.' He said laughing and then hi-fied.
'Tum dono na mujhse maar khaoge..main bachi nahin hun..samjhe!' Muskaan defended.
'Its okay Muskaan..agli baar se main dhyaan rakhunga..' Armaan said giggling.
Others all were enjoying the moment giggling. 'Aaj to tu rukja..' Muskaan pushed herself on Armaan..who hadnt stopped his laugh..and she was hitting him with pillow..and sometimes punching him.
Armaan caught both her hands in a tight grip. 'Chill chill bhab's.....main to mazak kar raha tha...oops..I mean..Muskaan.' He stressed on her name.
She glared at him.
'Waise..you have to agree..the joke was actually good hun..' He whispered to her.
She screamed. 'Armaan.'
He laughed and caught her hand. 'Sorry sorry. Ab relax karo.'
She smiled and sat next to him. He put an arm around her neck and they were talking. Others were also talking among themselves. Though Rahul was talking to Anjali..his mind was diverted towards Armaan and Muskaan.That idiot Armaan would flirt with each and every girl. He now whispered something in to her ear and they giggled. His arm was still around her.
'Armaan..mere pyaare dost..kya do min yahan aayega? Mujhe tujhse bahut ZAROORI baat karni hai.' With a sweet smile in a rough voice said Rahul.
'So sweet of you Rahul..sure sure. Ek min haan Muskaan.' She made a face. He went and sat next to her. 'Haan..to bol.'
'Abey oyye main Muskaan se kabhi itna nahin chipka jitna tu chipak raha hai. Thoda control kar.' He whispered seeing Muskaan talking to Radhika.
'Ohhhh...jealous haan. Waise Rahul yaar...tu na bada waste hai..tu abhi tak Muskaan ke kabhi kareeb nahin gaya? Very bad.'
'Hello...kam se kam rakh. '
'Dekh Rahul..main to sirf tere help karne ki koshish kar raha hun...cmon..be a man dude!! Abhi apne relation-ship ko theek nahin karoge to phir na..sab khatam.' He whispered seriously.
'Sach main??' Rahul said now involved.
'Obviously..main to kehta hun aaj raat usse sab bata de.'
'Aaaj??? No baba...main to sure bhi nahin ke woh bhi mujhse....' He sighed.
He slapped his head. 'Abey idiot koi baccha bhi bata sakta hai ke woh tujhe kitna pasand karti hai.' Muskaan looked at them then.
Armaan pulled Rahul..'Dekh mere paas na ek solid plan hai.'
'Please tere plans se mujhe dur rakh..mere baap!' he folded his hands.
'Chup ab jaisa main bolta hun..waise hi karna.' Rahul prayed to god...that Armaan would shut up coz Muskaan was glaring at them now. 'Rahul..mujhe ek pen aur paper de..'
Rahul gave him a pen and paper from the side table. Armaan scribled something and secretly passed it on to Anjali. When she read it..she passed it to Radhika. They both smiled at Armaan. He winked at them.
Anjali sat up from Atul's embrace. 'Guys..Im very sleepy ab hum so jaate hain..mujhe aur Radhika ko kal nikalna bhi hai.'
Muskaan also got up. 'Haan yaar..mujhe bhi nend aa rahi hai. Chalo.'
'Muskaan..bas do min..main aur Radhika change kar lete hai..phir tum aa jao.' Anjali said.
Muskaan was confused. 'Aur kitna change karoge..nightdress to pehenle hai.'
Radhika spoke up. 'Nahin woh..hum dono ne dress pe juice gira diya tha..bas do min na..' She pulled Anjali and they both went inside and locked the door.
'Ye log itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe hai?' Muskaan muttered.
'Chalo guys hum bhi so jaate hai..im very tired.' Armaan said. All the three guys also went inside the other room.
'Arre..sab mujhe akela chodkar kahan ja rahen hai? Chado.' Muskaan mumbled. She sat on the couch waiting for the girls to open the door. 'Ye..kitna time lagayenge? Main hi jake dekhti hun.' Muskaan went and knocked the door but there was no answer. She banged it a couple of times..still there was silence. Just the echo of the noise.
'Haiyyo Rabba..kahin ye so to nahin gaye? Main inko mar dalunge.' She walked around to hear something.
Inside-
'Angie thats so sad..hum khol dete hai door..bechare..thats so mean.' Radhika went to open the door.
Anjali pulled her down. 'No yaar Rads..we are doing this for her good. C'mon be strong..she'll be fine..aur waise bhi Rahul hai na?' She winked.
Outside Muskaan was irritated and frustarted..she smelt something fishy but she was so tired and sleepy..she didnt care for anything else but SLEEP. Good sleep. She hesitantly went to the couch sat there for a few minutes thinking..and then she just brushed them all off and slept off. Rahul and Armaan peeped from the door..
'Yeh to so gayi yaar. Ab?' Rahul mumbled.
'Idiot..abhi tak soye nahin hai..tu ja uske paas...aaj to tujhe bolna hi padega..cmon Rahul cmon!!!' Armaan said. He pushed in a blanket in his hands. 'Ye le aur ja.'
Rahul took slow steps praying for everything to be alright. She slept the same way she slept always..hand tucked her head..legs curled around each other..there was a small yawn, He smiled. He put the blanket over her. Feeling something warm, she quickly got up.
'Rahul tu?? Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?'
'Gaana ga raha hun. Idiot.' He muttered sacarstically. 'Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai?'
'Woh Angie aur Rads so gaye..aur room ka lock open hi nahin kiya..lagta bhul gaye...' She sighed. 'Ab hall main hi sona padega...tu chala ja..jake so ja..Im fine.' She lied down again.
'No its okay..main yahin rukta hun..tum so jao.' He moved a bit of her legs and sat down.
'Oyye..Ab mere upar se makhiyan udayega kya? Ja na..pareshan mat kar.'
'Good night.' He said closing his eyes.
'Babaji bachalo please.' Complaining she also slept off.
Muskaan got up in the middle of the night for some water. She was lucky that there was a glass on the table next to her. She drank a bit and then yawned. She saw that Rahul was so uncomfortable. He shifted every second in a new position. She sighed again saying his name.
Waking him up. 'Rahul please utho tum..andar jao..tumhe kal back-ache ho jayega..phir mujhe na kehna.'
'Muskaan kyun disturb kar rahi hai? So ne de. Ye jagah better hai, Atul ke kharaton se.' He turned side - ways and slept.
'Uffo..kya karun?' She looked at the couch. It was so big easily three of them could fit. He was definitley not going inside..So......?
She thought for a min and pulled his arm so he was in a sleeping position. He sighed for a second and then pulled the blanket over him.
'Aisa kamina hai na..so bhi gaya.' She mumbled. She also lied down..three inches away, sleeping straight , not touching him from any side. She pulled the other side of the bed-sheet over her and slept.
Couple of minutes later-
His finger tickled down her arm till her hands and then he caught her wrist and entwingled his fingers with hers.
Muskaan was shocked..already she was unable to sleep and now Rahul. She moved away his hand. 'Rahul tum kya kar rahe ho.' She sat up.
He pulled her down again..his hand around her waist in a tight grip. 'Rahul..just stop it.' She finally said.
He carefully took his hand away. He leaned over her. He looked at her for a few seconds. Pink coloured her cheeks..she was trying to avoid his gaze..feeling so awkward, that she would be unconcious in seconds.
'Muskaan mujhe tumse bahut zaroori baat karni hai..aur agar maine aaj nahin kaha..to phir kabhi nahin keh paunga.' Her eyes stared into hers. 'Muskaan mujhse aur intezaar nahin hota..main nahin wait kar sakta ke tum akar mujhse kuch kaho..main aur sorry bolkar is moment ko spoil nahin karna chahta..main sirf tumhe chahta..because I love you. Kabhi aur ke saath maine aisa nahin feel kiya jaisa tumhare saath karta hun. Jabhi tum paas aati ho..main..main chahta hun ke tum apne dil se mere paas aao naturally ..koi pillow train hatne wajah se nahin..Mujhe saari zindagi aise ladke nahin spend karni..i think hume ek nayee shuruvat karni chaiye.. aur waise bhi tumhe mere alawa aur koi bhi idiot nahin milne wala life main..'
She looked away with a smile curved upon her lips.
'Mujhe sirf haan ya na sunana hai..actually sirf haan sunana hai..bas...itna chotha sa word hai. Ab to please bol do.'
She looked away in thoughts..this expression made him lose all his confidence..he was about to move away...when she leaned forward to embrace him.
'Idiot. Stupid. Gadha. Ullu da patha. Yeh kehne main ITNI der lagade.' She laughed.
Happiness over-flowed inside him. He put his arms around her to embrace her back. When they broke away, he kissed her fore-head. 'Kya main sapna dekh raha hun?? he said dreamily.
'No Dr. Rahul..please yeh koi daily-soap ka dream mat bana dena.' she laughed again.
Both of them lied down..fighting for the blanket like kids..and then she hugged him tight. The 'natural' way like he said. He kissed her left cheek. They remained silent for sometime. He was staring at her.
'Aur kuch bolna baki reh gaya hai kya?' He chuckled and said no. He hugged her back and they remained in the same embrace. Suddenly Muskaan's phone , rang. It was her ring-tone but she couldnt find the phone.
She was going to search for it when Rahul tugged at her waist. 'Please baba ab chodo na..itne din baad to tumhara mood acha hai.'
'Rahul..please..chodo..dekhun itni raat ko kiska phone hai.' He sighed and left her.
She found her phone next to the TV. 'Mera phone yahin hai..aur main jaante hi nahin thi. Phone kar dete Angie ko. Sach main idiot hun main.' She said to herself. She saw the name, 'Sanjivani?'
Reluctantly she picked up. 'Hello?'
Rahul got tensed and came next to her. 'Muskaan kya hua?'
'Rahul............Arush.....................'
Rahul and Muskaan sat in the car.
'Muskaan Arush ko huya kya tha pehle?'
'Kuch nahin bas excessive temperature ki wajah se admit huya tha..and he was fine now. Usse discharge bhi milne waala tha..pata nahin ab kya ho gaya?' She said tensed.
'Phone par nurse ne kya kaha?'
'Yehi ke woh aur koi lad raha the..aur usse chot lag gayi..'
'To koi aur doctor treat kar leta? Tumhe bulane ki kya zaroorat thi?' Rahul said depressed and sighed.
'Kyun Dr. Rahul apka koi aur plan tha kya?' She asked in a sweet way.
'Woh..nahin..nahin to kuch nahin..nothing at all.'
She smiled. 'Aur koi doctor available nahin hai. Is liye bulaya mujhe.'
'No problem. Work comes first. Love later.' He mumbled.
'Kya kaha?'
'Kuch nahin..bas kaam karo..achi doctor bano. Good good.' He faked a smile.
She stared at him. 'Rahul mujhe na bahut kuch gadbad lag raha hai..'
'Muskaan..shak karna band please!'
'Hmm..okay okay.' She said guiltly.
They reached the hospital and saw that Arushs' mother was shouting at him. 'Maine kitni baar mana kiya hai..ladte nahin hai. Adhe ghante ke liye bahar kya gayi..tum to..'
'Preeti! Chod do..baccha hai..kyun Arush?' Muskaan interupted.
'Dr. Muskaan aap aa gayi..sorry apko itni raat ko disturb kiya. Yeh Arush bhi na..kya bolun.'
'Koi baat nahin.' Muskaan replied sweetly.
She saw that he had an head injury while he dashed a wall during his fight.. She sighed and sat down to bandage it.
'Main ek phone karke aate hun..bas do min.' Preeti got up. She dashed Rahul while going. 'Dr.Rahul aap bhi aaye..Im so sorry humne aapko itni raat ko disturb kiya..very sorry.' She apoligized.
'Oh no..its absolutely okay..No problem.' He smiled. After she left , Rahul went and sat next to Arush. Muskaan was standing and cleaning the bruise.
'To Arush...kya hua..zaara bataoge please?' He asked teasingly.
'Arre woh jo Vikram hai na..bakwas kar raha tha..ek thapad laga diya maine usse.' Arush explained with actions.
'Oh wow..Muskaan dekho bilkul tumpe gaya hai.' Rahul joked.
'Very funny!' She scoffed.
'Arush beta' Patting his head. 'Tumhe correctly yehi time mila tha ladne ke liye?' Rahul whispered in his ear.
'Kyun kya hua?' He said shocked.
'Kya bataun baat bante bante reh gaye.' Rahul sighed.
'Ye tum dono kya khusur-pusur kar rahe ho?' Muskaan glared at them.
'Kuch bhi to nahin didi..kaam karo na.' Arush spoke.
She fumed. 'Sab ladke ek jaise hote hai..kaminey......' She tied the gauge around his head while muttering curses to every boy in the world.
Rahul giggled.' Jo bhi huya koi baat nahin..secret bataun to ab sab theek hai.' He winked at Arush. 'Thank You!'
Rahul and Arush hi-fied. 'Main jaanta hun..Im the best!' Arush said with pride.
Rahul slapped his head. 'Best ke bacche!'
'Ouch!' he screamed.
'Oh sorry sorry..im very sorry.' Rahul said. Arush laughed.
'Arush!' Rahul shouted. They started their mock-wrestling.
Muskaan completed tying the bandage. 'Main ghar ja rahin hun..good night.' She shouted.
'Haan haan..gadi to tera baap chalayega.' Arush and Rahul laughed.
'Dekh Rahul mere baap pe mat ja.' She came close . a finger pointing to his nose.
'Okay..sorry. Ghar chalen?' He said a bit scared.
'Hmph!' and she turned towards the door.
'Bye Arush..dhyan rakhna..aur pleaseeee next time itni raat ko disturb mat karna.' Rahul teased. Arush showed a thumbs-up sign.
Rahul and Muskaan walked towards the car.
'Sab ladke na..chodungi nahin main..ladke bane hi kyun duniya main? babaji.' Muskaan said while walking.
'Tumhe itna gussa kyun ata hai pata nahin..Hum kal Sanjivani ke counsellor se jakar milenge. This needs to be cured. Over-excessive anger.'
'Tumhe main paagal lagte hun?' She stared at him. Then she turned away and yawned. Her eyes were drooping.
'Sleepy?' He asked concerned holding her hand.
'Nahin -nahin 4.30 A.M ko kaun sota hai?' She muttered sacrastically.
'Ab chup ek aur shabd kaha to dekh lo tum.' He said a bit irritated now.
She ignored him. 'Main peeche so rahi hun. Ghar aaye to mujhe utha dena.' She again yawned and lied down on the back-seat.
'Madam main koi driver nahin hun...mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai.' He yawned. 'I cant drive home..too tired.' He pushed her and lied down with her. He locked all the doors and windows with the remote.
'Rahul chipak mat..chipakli kahin ka,' She said angrily.
'Tu chipkali..idiot.' Rahul muttered.
But she was fast asleep. He sighed. 'Time to sleep...'. He pulled her a little closer and dozed off.
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