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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
AWESOME!!! loved the lavender👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awaiting...the WATER.....n the WIND....or either at least... *drums fingers impatiently*

-...yeh me, your fearful nightmare muhahahah!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Haki....haha i lke dt one too for u! :D ...thx mucho!!!

@NJ....yeh i rem d two Wz...will get to dt soonnnnnn....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

For now....updated a small one for Aravi..! her update....was stupendous....to me alteast! :)

cheers,
'mIssY'
Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
reserved...for my usual color feedback :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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told ya nij lov ya dozens will get back in some time !!!!!!
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okies it thot of telling ya how much just how much i loved those beautiful six lines from you n saw that u posted them *hugsss* so kinda came up with something too :)))) lov ya
The right moment is needed for the precise impact
Some unusual words spawning the desired tact
Talent unrepressed that one perfect blend
This special someone amazes me to no near extent
Portraying emotions with that affable ease
Makes my misty thoughts to cease
Green the color contradictory in itself
Nature to emotion, it stands for much? in itself
Wondering why was it chosen to enlighten her verse
Alas! for me it was the two P's Potent yet prominent. . . .
Edited by aravi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

When pale froggy fingers accept yur will to write in half a spirit...something of sorts get scribbled into light meaningful sentences...but the utmost need to write whats been requested for....its only that...which won't unfold itself to the eyes of the wishful...

I owe u one kiz...and nj...soon enuf!

luv,
...missy! 🤔
Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
nijal sweetheart...sometimes we really fall in love...i believe that not...and yet i have... :)

love you always!

naseem... :) (i don't know why...but i want to sign off with that today...as me only...)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gosh......I'm floored Nij. read all of em.....your sense of poetry + emotion you'd captured perfectly, makes me lost in lost in really, deep thoughts of life n how it all come to be.......
Flawless
Nats xo.
Edited by Ladoo645 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello...My, you are one talented writer. I liked most of your verses and fell in love with some. Awessomee!

Here is a piece which I wrote in another blog when Kiran had asked for a post-ep of sorts.

Reflecting your smile in my tea cup

I gently whisper your name in silver moonlight
It makes my heart beat to take a sudden flight
I dream of you till dawn breaks into a gentle light
I know my dreams are not just memories of the night

I think I have read this message at least a hundred times since I have received it. Up until now, I hadn't dared to give her a call or reply to this message. Instead of embarrassing her further by asking her to dissect every syllable of her little poem, I wrote one of my own and sent it to her. Sometimes, saying less is more beneficial.

I want to bottle your laughter and hang it around my neck
I want to see your brilliant smile reflecting in my tea cup
I want to paint a little picture with my pocket full of dreams
In every stroke of that picture there is a dream of you and me.

~Sookie

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