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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

NIJ !!!!! god came back frm the xam n read both of ur creative cum awesome verses with that tinge of emotion with that rocking passion along with a pinch of the bitter truth..... geez a total blend of everything !!!!!!!!good heavens u r one single piece in this world like totally n truly!!!!dun mind my rants at this hr actualy am braindead naah actually brain-board-dead!!!!

n the colours u chose sooo very apt n the karan wala verse .... u had me deyr outstanding srsly i hated him being called the underdog yar he's def the winning horse here oops THE BLACK STALLION !!!!!! n u put that in green somehow green signifies so much .....

the thing u called random i mean i can't help wondering it's just the outcum of mere thoughts???? it seems to deep inside yet so plain... so straight yet so queer n the way u started it off my god i am captivated it's after ages am commneting u so made me too!!!! n the way u can twist words i mean in one line two contradicting sentences yet one cant help thinking over n finally come to a conclusion u are a gem !!!! it's a MASTERPIECE !!!!!

Its not me, everyone but me, i am not crying
I am ready to pass on, to be burned into ashes, to bid adieu

the two lines u started with n the two u ended with somehow sum up everything!!!!!!!

I am being pulled out, into this new lost world,
Its me, nobody but this somebody me, I am crying..

loads of luv

curvzzzzzzz.....

p.s nij, nj n kiran loved all ur siggs awwwww they are adorable!!!!! @nj green ur fav by any chance???

Edited by aravi - 16 years ago

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

nij
that was beyond my commenting
dont wana leave a nij.... there but that was fabulous!

can't catch the clue,u know i'm the slow one always and forever

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

hey nij, awesome post!! loved the poems, they are beautiful!! loved every line, keep writing gal!! would love to read more!!

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

jus saw d green n organe update.. brilliant dear

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

nij can we have one more
since u so happy :) :) :)

315

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

@Harika....so nice of you to leave me a comment....glad u liked them.. 😊

@Lakky...yipppe...u d likes it! :D wer u been..nutter...hows yah?

@Hinz...mmuuahh tlkin 2 u on d phn..:D u koe wat it was...!!lol

muah,
....nij

Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

heyaa...

Allrity two short verses..in the misc..bth from KSG..to the world and SG..
i luv them both tons!!! =)

mmmhh,
...nijaL

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

reserved...

*edit*...no im not back with my LAVANDER edit yet, need to work on that one, dude thats a hell of a color ill have to sit and rack my head about, but i will i promise, mostly for two reaosns, its someone's abs fav and someone's abs fav star in the world just adorned it in the most garceful of his performances...(*read:i loved the body language nij, yeh yeh yeh!)

but had to come here one last quickie time before that edit to say i love the siggie

muah girl!

later, soon enough... :)

Edited by spln - 16 years ago

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

reserved yeh yeh lol

nij i want this !
temme when u done with it
i just love it
been saying it over and over again
God! me going crazy
I'm gona make pattu read it,I'm sure he'll relate to it😉
love it nij
muah!

and your siggy lol
only if u cud bring back that moment that i lost 😕

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

~~.L.A.V.E.N.D.E.R.~~

a rainbow color
not on first sight even if;
the lesser-
calmer-
left behind- shade...
when the rage of the violet is long faded and lost...

like the memories which float
and a smile,
which rests in peace
after the real is lost...
to the rage of the violence uncalled

the soft whisps of fragrance
fresh and alive
in sweet intoxication
lasting, lingering...
long after gone and dry...
still reminding its there
the flower is such...

and what less could it be...
the color of the costume hence...
for that one show,
one act,
one dance,
one move...
which can tear
the stallion himself...

a color so pastel
an essence so deep...
a favorite for the one
with one nuance just that
in the many shades of being...
LAVENDER...

muah nij...heres one more...continuing the tradition :)

315 of course, with *hugs* (remember the punjabi trait!!!)

-who could it be if not me... :D

Edited by spln - 16 years ago

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