MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55. - Page 46

Originally posted by: sanah tendulkar

hey pallavi...!!!!🤗

wat a wunderful update...!!!!👏👏 i read it as soon as u postd it yaar...tht i started 2 write my comment hoping 2 b d first one...bt thn...my net startd giving probs..nyway ....it was a wunderful update....👏

i always say hw beautifully u write abt mayur...bt 2day first i would like 2 praise ur parts on sajan....dey were so realistic..so realistic...i cud imagine it literally...it was xactly lyk sam wud do n xactly hw gunjan wud react to such a situation....very very well written scene.....👏...special praise for ths scene..!!👏👏👏

ok...nw having said tht..i'll start abt mayur...!!!😳😳wow...!! u really were unsure f kisko jitana hai huh..!!??😉😉...bt as u said u did keep a balance of both...!!!!aww😳😳...it was so sweet mayu passing note 2 nups...!!!😳😳 n..yay..!! mayu won d challenge..!!😆😆😆 bt mayu n kuch nai bola use karne ko.....!! haye kyun..!!!??(**nups wala..!!**😉😉😉)....n waise bhi nups sahi keh rahi hai woh itna accha mauka kaise jaane de sakta hai..!!!!😉😉

n dia(ps- m talking abt d character guys..nt navina..so..plz..dont sue me for bashing..!!😆) is so xtra sweet yar..(i mean her talkin n all...)!!!! omg..!!! koi aisa kaise hota hai yaar..!!! too much..!!! n it was funny hw sam took dat guess abt her cheerleading costume...!!!!😆after all sam is a gud frnd..(lyk u..!!)😉

wow..!! sam planning 2 surprise fr gunjan...!!!😃..hmmm...wud 2 interesting 2 c wat those are...!!!😉😉n mayur going 2 appu ghar...!!!!😆

pallavi.... meri jaan...mana ki yeh mayur hain...bt phir bhi unke liye appu ghar delhi se udkar mumbai me toh nai pahunch jayega na...!!!😆

kidding..!!!😉 luking fwd to deir AG scenes..!!!😉😉

n b/w....unfortunately..appu ghar is no longer in existance...!!!😭😭...twas a gud place...!!! but unfortunately no longer there...!!😭

nyway...!!! u do keep writing....!!!!😃😃

xxx

sanah...!!!

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okay...so..u thought i forgot didn't you...!!!??😉😉😉

i didn't yaar...!!!! didn't u notice ki maine aaj k comment me kahin bhi tere update late hone k bare m mention nai kiya...!!!😆..kidding yaar...!!😆😆

so....

n here's ur cake...!!! oh.. i dunno which one is ur fav..!! bt m guessing its strawberry...!!! ( once u hd an ice-cream rem..!!😉😉)

hv fun...!!!

Originally posted by: debby

First things first.. its my Pallojee's birthday! So here's a big birthday hug for the special girl who dances and writes her way to everyone's hearts. Happy birthday sweetie.. have a gala time now and always! 🤗

Ok coming to ur update - I finally get time to read it in peace after a long day at work, or rather trying to work.. 😆
I loved the challenge and the fact that Mayank kept his word. Devdhar Sir must have been surprised at his star student being quiet.. It was so sweet how he helped Nupur.. that's what I call the Mayank charm. Its the obsession that's making me more sleep deprived than I already used to be! You write Mayur so brilliantly!

Ok the Samrat Gunjan interaction was classic. She likes helping people selflessly.. and Samrat hits her dukhti rag.. a sensitive vein.. I want to see what happens further on that front..

Best part Pallo was Appu Ghar! I used to go there all the time with friends and family.. its so sad that it has now been relocated elsewhere.. I am sure we must have met in some ride or the other.. Aww.. if Mayur are going there too, I will go in No man's land if only to grin sheepishly at Mayu!

You have to continue soon.. will be waiting for it eagerly.. love you loads.. and happy birthday once again!! 🤗

Originally posted by: sherizzz

hayeeeeee.....pallo dear.........🤗MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY.....GOD BLESS U!!!!!!!!!!

And abt da updates..........it was shoooooooooo sweeeeeeeeetttttt yaaarrrr......especilaly mayur scenes.......how cuteeeee it was i totally enjoyed........waiting 4 ur next update!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

awww men ...kya yarrr what an update......it was worth waiting 👏 loves it as always.....ahhhh mayu is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee ☺️ cant believe he didnt make her do anything ........loves it as always...update soon yarr.....and yeah Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! may god bless u ...enjoy ur day

Originally posted by: soneha

awesome part pallavi and thanks for the PM and do continue soon

Originally posted by: blushpink13

awsomeeeee part pallavi.

cant wait till they go to appu ghar...and awww poor gunjan.....hope she and samrat have a hearty talk too...and she cheers up..

thanks for a wonderful update!and ur PM...

Iqra

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

wow nyc update...........

continue soon..................

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

🤗hey pallu behna......... 🤗

kaise ho tum? how was ur b'day jaanu?mera cake rakha na?😆

okk.....pehle he batadun...mein abhii class -test dekar aa rahii hoon...isliye tera FF padha......so no chappal ki barsaat yaar😳

miss u jaani.....mujhe FB par toh msg kar diya kar.....tum toh mujhe bhool hi gayii yaar.😭😭😭.......emotional atyacharr😉

cuming to ur update🤗

it was awesum mere jaan .....too gud loved it😊

i felt sorry for mayank yaar.....usske liye humesha he soft-corner hota hai.....kuch bhi ho jayi ''HUM TUM PE MARTE HAIN ''😳

the best part was when nups got to answer the question...lol i was imagining it all.her epressions, blabbering...sab kuch...heheheee😆

aaaaaahhhhhhh....phir mayu par aa rahi hoon😳....chit paas ki nups ko..mera mayu mahaan😃...hahaaa

loved the high-five nupur and dodo shared...by god!!!!!!proper bhai-behan types😉

lol.....maaza aa gaya..par mayank ne nupur se kuch karwaya kyn nahin?😕like menaka dance or so😆....*raising eyebrows*😳 yaar nupur ko itni jaldi maaf kar diya mayank ne.....mayu ka dill kiltna bada hai😃

it was awesum mere jaan...dill khush ho gaya tera FF padhkar...🤗🤗🤗

''jaanu mere jaan mein tujh pe kurbaan....mein tera tu mere jaane sara hindustan''----yeh tere liye from ur behna🤗

love u a lot🤗

miss u sooooo much

ruchi

Originally posted by: ayeshaD

Palluuuu (can i call you that? 😳)

I just started reading it to kill time but im glad i did!!! I wonder how i was missing out on such an A-M-A-ZINGGGGGG ff! It had me hooked throughout! All of your dialogues are just sooo true to the characters! And each update was better than the last one! I have to add that you are VERY creative! All of your scenes have a special charm to them!

As MayUr are my favourite jodi....I absolutely enjoyed each and every interaction between them! You ROCK girl.......there were scenes where i was laughing out soo loud ...my sisters who were in my room at that time thought i'd completely lost it! 😆 but there wasnt a moment that the smile on my face faded even for a bit! It was a real treat yaar! You're the best! Count me in as one of you're loyal readers! Im a fan now! Yayyy! and if you pm people....can you please add me to that list! Im dying for the next part!!!!

Thank you yaar! Love ya! 🤗

ohh and Happy Birthdayyyyy! May you have manyyy more! *muahh*

Originally posted by: cute2stay

Hey Ayesha!! Of course you can call me Pallu...everyone calls me that only! Pura naam legi to thak jaygi!! 😆😆 Awww thanks so much for liking yaar means a lot to me really!! hehe So glad I made you laugh!!! I laugh too at my own chutkula's like a fool toh sunke kushi hui ki aur log bhi hastein hain!! 😆😆 Aww really??? So glad I made you smile then yaar!! That is my ultimate goal always!! Toh soo glad to hear that I've succeeded!! Aww welcome aboard jii so glad to have you as a loyal reader!! Really really touched!! And of course I'll pm you yaar...it's the least I can do after such heartfelt comments of yours!!! And thanks for the bday wishes as well!! Love you too!! 🤗