MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55.

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#431

First things first.. its my Pallojee's birthday! So here's a big birthday hug for the special girl who dances and writes her way to everyone's hearts. Happy birthday sweetie.. have a gala time now and always! 🤗

Ok coming to ur update - I finally get time to read it in peace after a long day at work, or rather trying to work.. 😆
I loved the challenge and the fact that Mayank kept his word. Devdhar Sir must have been surprised at his star student being quiet.. It was so sweet how he helped Nupur.. that's what I call the Mayank charm. Its the obsession that's making me more sleep deprived than I already used to be! You write Mayur so brilliantly!

Ok the Samrat Gunjan interaction was classic. She likes helping people selflessly.. and Samrat hits her dukhti rag.. a sensitive vein.. I want to see what happens further on that front..

Best part Pallo was Appu Ghar! I used to go there all the time with friends and family.. its so sad that it has now been relocated elsewhere.. I am sure we must have met in some ride or the other.. Aww.. if Mayur are going there too, I will go in No man's land if only to grin sheepishly at Mayu!

You have to continue soon.. will be waiting for it eagerly.. love you loads.. and happy birthday once again!! 🤗

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sherizzz

@sherizzz

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#432

hayeeeeee.....pallo dear.........🤗MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY.....GOD BLESS U!!!!!!!!!!

And abt da updates..........it was shoooooooooo sweeeeeeeeetttttt yaaarrrr......especilaly mayur scenes.......how cuteeeee it was i totally enjoyed........waiting 4 ur next update!!!!!!!!

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vidisha

@sweetvidisha

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#433

awww men ...kya yarrr what an update......it was worth waiting 👏 loves it as always.....ahhhh mayu is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee ☺️ cant believe he didnt make her do anything ........loves it as always...update soon yarr.....and yeah Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! may god bless u ...enjoy ur day

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Neha

@.Neha.

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#434

awesome part pallavi and thanks for the PM and do continue soon

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#435

awsomeeeee part pallavi.

cant wait till they go to appu ghar...and awww poor gunjan.....hope she and samrat have a hearty talk too...and she cheers up..

thanks for a wonderful update!and ur PM...

Iqra

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#436

🤗hey pallu behna......... 🤗

kaise ho tum? how was ur b'day jaanu?mera cake rakha na?😆

okk.....pehle he batadun...mein abhii class -test dekar aa rahii hoon...isliye tera FF padha......so no chappal ki barsaat yaar😳

miss u jaani.....mujhe FB par toh msg kar diya kar.....tum toh mujhe bhool hi gayii yaar.😭😭😭.......emotional atyacharr😉

cuming to ur update🤗

it was awesum mere jaan .....too gud loved it😊

i felt sorry for mayank yaar.....usske liye humesha he soft-corner hota hai.....kuch bhi ho jayi ''HUM TUM PE MARTE HAIN ''😳

the best part was when nups got to answer the question...lol i was imagining it all.her epressions, blabbering...sab kuch...heheheee😆

aaaaaahhhhhhh....phir mayu par aa rahi hoon😳....chit paas ki nups ko..mera mayu mahaan😃...hahaaa

loved the high-five nupur and dodo shared...by god!!!!!!proper bhai-behan types😉

lol.....maaza aa gaya..par mayank ne nupur se kuch karwaya kyn nahin?😕like menaka dance or so😆....*raising eyebrows*😳 yaar nupur ko itni jaldi maaf kar diya mayank ne.....mayu ka dill kiltna bada hai😃

it was awesum mere jaan...dill khush ho gaya tera FF padhkar...🤗🤗🤗

''jaanu mere jaan mein tujh pe kurbaan....mein tera tu mere jaane sara hindustan''----yeh tere liye from ur behna🤗

love u a lot🤗

miss u sooooo much

ruchi

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Ayesha

@ayeshaD

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#437

Palluuuu (can i call you that? 😳)

I just started reading it to kill time but im glad i did!!! I wonder how i was missing out on such an A-M-A-ZINGGGGGG ff! It had me hooked throughout! All of your dialogues are just sooo true to the characters! And each update was better than the last one! I have to add that you are VERY creative! All of your scenes have a special charm to them!

As MayUr are my favourite jodi....I absolutely enjoyed each and every interaction between them! You ROCK girl.......there were scenes where i was laughing out soo loud ...my sisters who were in my room at that time thought i'd completely lost it! 😆 but there wasnt a moment that the smile on my face faded even for a bit! It was a real treat yaar! You're the best! Count me in as one of you're loyal readers! Im a fan now! Yayyy! and if you pm people....can you please add me to that list! Im dying for the next part!!!!

Thank you yaar! Love ya! 🤗

ohh and Happy Birthdayyyyy! May you have manyyy more! *muahh*

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Arpita Madan

@Arpita.Madan

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#438

hey pallu!!! (can i call u dat????) APPU GHAR!!!!!!!!!!!! lolz........loved the update...........really cute!! cant wait for more......

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: Kiran1018
hey

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!....i m the first to reply!

first of all, many many many many many many many many many many many happy returns of the day...Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!...its your birthday and you still updated.....how sweet yaar!.....how will you spend your special day?....any plans?...enjoy to the fullest and may God shower you with his blessings on your special day.....happy birthday once again.

ok well as usual, i dont have to say anything as the part is fantastic and fabulous......i loved it...you know i just finished watching all 5 episodes of mjht at like 3....and then came to india-forums and saw your PM....so i immediately thaught of reading the newly posted part....so its been such a great night...reading your fan fic was the cherry on top of my dessert of mjht episodes....lols.

loved mayur as usual....but i must say, this part i loved sajan more than mayur....their jodi was really amazing in today's part...i loved the way samrat is so caring towards gunjan yet puts up with dia.....it seems like gujan is his favorite subject 24/7....i really loved their scenes today...they were very very well written.

so cute the way mayank after every question tries to think of punishments that nupur will give him...that was so funny...dressing up like salman or singing a song while playing guitar....i can understand why he is so scared of these tasks as they are totally not suitable for his character......that was such a great scene.

awww...so sweet of mayu as he cares for nupur so he slides her the answer....he dosent want to see nupur disappointed and upset...that was so sweet of him....i can just imagine his broad smile when nupur was fumbling to find an answer and talking to herself.

it was also adorable the way nupur thaught he was going to make her do something for loosing the bet and she kept making up punishment for herself instead of letting mayank finish...i think just for that mayank should have made nupur stay quite the whole day....that would have been so funny as nupur is so talkitive and mayank's challange would have been so hard for nupur.....atleast he would have gotten some peace and quite for a day....lols.

hey i was wondering what appu ghar was...i never heard of that...i m glad you provided an explanation when you ended...or else i would have kept wondering what appu ghar was.......and yes it is a cute name for an amusement park.

so Your Creativeness.....it was such fun to read the new part....so sad that we will have to wait one whole week to read the next part....but as usual, i m sure it will definately be worth the wait....your doing an amazing job writing this fan fic...i really hope you keep it up and keep writing....we really enjoy reading it....and oh by the way, congratulations on making half a century for your post......you passed 50 pages....very soon you will make a century...lols.

anyways, happy birthday once again...enjoy and have a blast!

Kiran!!!!

Aww one of my fav. people!!! Aww thanks for the "many" bday wishes! 😆 Hehe I knew I wouldn't get time over the weekend so I wanted to update before. Aww ya my bday was fun...kept it simple just went to eat my fav. chinese food at my fav. place with friends and then they surprised me with cake and presents. My friend was like I have to take you to my place cuz you have to see my dress for formal...(we have a formal coming up next week) so I was like ok and it turns out she and her roomate who's also one of my best friends baked a cake for me!! and they decorated and had presents and everything it was really sweet!! 😳 And on Friday (the day b4 my bday) I got home at 12 in the night after my dance performances and my parents had a bday card for me on my pillow at exactly 12 am!!! 😳😳 It was sooo sweet yaar!! I was soo happy!! And then on saturday (the day of my bday) after I got home from dinner and my dance performance my parents surprised me with cake and my dad was so cute he was trying to fix his toota phoota camera to take pics of me!! But it wasn't working and he was like getting mad at the camera and he was like no no don't cut the cake yet camera is not ready!! 😆😆 And my brother who works at Mcdonalds bought me a McFlurry cuz he knows how much I love icecream!! 😳😳 Awww I love families na? Anyway didn't do anything too exciting but it was fun!! Awww thanks so much Kiran for the heartfelt wishes!!!

Ok sorry for my lambi rambling....just love telling my personal stories as you might've guessed hope you didn't mind...😳

Really you liked sajan more?? Well I'm really happy to hear that yaar since I had a hard time writing that!! Mayur parts just come naturally to me but the sajan parts are harder so I'm glad you liked it!!

Aww glad you liked that imagining scene!! hehe ya I wanted to show that Mayu is such a nice guy which he is...😳 hehe Mayank can't ask Nupur to stay quiet na? Otherwise he would get bored all day he would start missing Nups alot!! I was actually thinking of doing that before like asking Nupur to be quiet and then Mayank missing her chatter....but I was having a hard time writing that part as couldn't think of proper words/dialogues and I didn't want to screw it up so I thought why not write this part instead! And I thought you all would be more surprised by this!! 😉 Ya after I wrote the Appu Ghar I was like wait not everyone lives in New Delhi and not everyone knows what it is!! But I wrote this at like 4 in the morning so wasn't thinking of the consequences hence I added the explanation. Awww thanks Kiran....you're always soo sweet...gonna make me cry (kushi ke ansoon of course) And yay yay half a century!!!! *waves cricket bat in the air like Tendulkar* 🥳 Hehe should I make a speech? lol its all you guys ki badaulat I could reach this far *wipes tear* And because I like to bakwas alot!! 😆😆 But thank you thank you thank you so much Kiran your comment made my day as usual!! 🤗

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: hgrhr
HAPPY BIRTHDAY PALLAVI!!!

Y'know I'd actually read the update as soon as you'd posted it, even before you sent me the PM and as I was writing this I got the box flashing that you'd updated...haha

And I'm not saying one word on when you updated or not because you just did yaar and its your B'day so it would've been fine if you hadn't. But sine you already gave us the return gift, the only gift that we can give you is a huge comment on the update!

And before I start, I'd like to say that its actually nice that you post the next part on weekends because MJHT doesn't air on sat-sun and I need my daily dose...hehe...I dunno about others but I actually prefer this...😉

So on to the review...yaar...I don't think I need to day this but it was GREAT!! As always.

Nupur's reaction to Uday and CJ was hilarious and in complete Nupur style! Throughout I never felt that something was out of place of he/she would never say this kind of dialogue.

And I can just imaging hoe hard it must've been for Mayank to actually keep his mouth shut throughout the class...

So he won but why didn't he make Nupur do something...? Or I wouldn't have minded if Nupur had made him do all those things he had imagined....hehe.

But still, is he going to use this win sometime in the future..? Or in Appu Ghar? Btw, that I'm looking forward to...the Appu Ghar date!

You always add something in every part to keep us hooked on to the next.😉

Samrat and Gunjan scenes were awesome too! I can really see this conversation happening with them. Hmmm...though I don't think Samrat would mind if Gunjan only made notes for him!😆😆

So I'm really looking forward to the next update! Keep up the good work hun!

Nidhi

Thanks Nidhi!!!! hehe teri telepathy is superb I must say!! great timing yaar!! Awww thanks for not being angry about my lateness to update!! Iss baar main bach gayi cuz it was my bday!! Agli baar I won't have this excuse!! 😳 aww that's so weet Nidhi yaar ya weekends is when I have time so I can update araam se so glad you like that arrangement!! hehe ya you don't need to but im really glad you said it!!! 😆 SO glad you liked the Nupur/Uday scene!! hehe ya I thought I'd surprise all of you by Mayank's reaction!! I figured he's not like Samrat who would make people do things...he's more simple. Plus you guys put me in such a duvidha with some ppl wanting mayu to win and some wanting Nups to win and so I thought this was a way they'd both win!! SO glad you liked the appu ghar part!! I'm excited to write it! hehe ya Gunjan ke notes ka haq is only for Samrat he believes!! 😉 Aww thanks SO much Nidhi!!! 🤗

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