MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55. - Page 21

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

heheh yeah it was fun holi i had fun.....High five.........lets just hope we get someone like mayank ☺️ ahh i m in love

Originally posted by: trouble_maker

oops pallavi...so sry for late reply again
lolzz loved the mayur-judge part 😆
nupur bhi na by god
uday-cj was cute
loved da sajan dance...but y did dia had come in between dem
n im kinda confused bout dia's character..is she turning nice or wat
plz dont make her come between sajan again
otherwise amazing update
im waiting for da next update

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hey pallu behana...............mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhe chappal maroge for replying soo late.............kya karun yaar bahut lazy ho gayii thi.....i read ur update before par comment nahin kar payii........yaar dimaag he nahin chal raha tha,..........

ok......ab mein aapna boring explanation band karte hoon aur comment shuru karte hoon.............

by god pallu it was awesome....loved mayoo's reaction on listening to nups prayer.......soo shweet yaar.....loved it completely

yaar mayoo aur nups ka quues/ans scene was awesome.......it was gr8...i loved how nups blabbered her ans. out and awesome explaantion of judges and mayank's expressions on listening to her...maaza aa gay..it was as if i am watching live show.....muaahhhhh..........loved it completely......

loved the ay u explained sajan dance .it was gr8...........

on the whole.tera update padhkar mera dill garden garden ho gaya.it was on of my fav. updates........love u

god bless

ur behana

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

hahahha wah wah wah kya gana hai....woh actually nah i was in love bas patta nahi chala par abb patta chal gaya hai 😉

Originally posted by: Kiran1018

Hey pallavi

just finished reading part 6...i must say you really lived up to my expectaions......i love the way you write....everything goes so smoothly...the trasisition between scenes is fantastic and the flow of the story is awesome.

hmmmm....so mayank reflected over nupur's prayers and realized that he needed nupur in his life...probably wont be long before he realizes he is falling for her so badly.

loved the nupur-gunjan bond...she leaves a dress for gunjan...she knows her sis too well...such caring and loving sister....so sweet!

sajan scenes were too cute for words this time...i actually can see sammy wink and give his broad signature smile every time he said his lines.

uday is just too different....he is so funny and cute....he dressed up for CJ...that was sweet of him...that too in tapori style...lols...cute!

such a great choice of song to picturize for sajan...lovely choice i must say...it really suits them.

wow great dialogues for mayur on he academic competition...really detailed and very comical for nupur....loved the way she illustrated RNBDJ...that was fantastic.........its no surprise they won....lols...they are such a good team together.

so finally the competetion is over...wonder what's next....cant wait to find out....hopefully you will update over this weekend or something....cant wait to read the next update.

keep writing!

Part 7:

Recap: Mayank and Nupur win the academic meet and Samrat and Gunjan rock the valentine's ball with their dance. Dia overhears Gunjan making Samrat realize Dia's friendship which makes her melt towards Gunjan and she ponders over her past acts towards her Morena sisters.

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Scene is to the academic meet where Mayank and Nupur have just won their trophy. Everyone is congratulating them and Mayank and Nupur are shaking hands with everyone. When they are done with all these formalities and everyone leaves Mayank and Nupur go back to their hotel to grab their stuff and then walk to the bus station:

Nupur: Waah Waah Mayank mujhe to aisa lag raha hai jaisse main madhuri hoon (pretends to be all shy like a heroine and touches her hair) aur tum sharukh (looks up at Mayank dramatically) aur abhi abhi humein best jodi award mil gaya hai by god!! (laughs)

Nupur looks over at Mayank and sees him with a big grin across his face.

Nupur: Arreyy waah Mayank…tum hass rahe ho aur woh bhi meri kissi baat pe. Yeh to kamaal hi hogaya. Waisse tum na haste hue ache lagte ho. Agar tum chaho na to kabhi kabhi apna wo angry young man avtaar chod ke muskura bhi sakte ho. Kyunki haste hue tum kitne cute lagte ho by god!! (As she says this Nupur pinches Mayank lightly on his cheek)

As she does this Mayank jumps.

Mayank: Nupurrr…yeh kya kar rahi ho…(He touches his cheek and looks away)

Nupur: Arreyyy Mayank heroine to main hun na…to tum kyun madhuri ki tarah itna sharma rahe ho!! (giggles) Waise sharmate hue bhi tum bahaut pyare lagte ho Mayank by god!

As she says this she again raises her hand to pinch Mayank's cheek making Mayank jump again.

Mayank: Dekho Nupur…tumna baaz ajao aur please mere gaalon ko matt chuo. (He again touches his cheek)

Nupur: (laughs out loud) By god Mayank!! Tum bhi na!! (laughs)

Mayank: (looks at Nupur laughing) Has kyun rahi ho?

Nupur: (stops laughing and shakes her head) Kuch Nahi. Pata hai Mayank, maine tumhare jaissa aaj tak is duniya mein nahin dekha.

Mayank: (looks at her with a sarcastic smile) Acha? Kash main tumhare liye bhi yahi keh sakta.

Nupur: Kya matlab?

Mayank: Matlab yeh ki tumhare jaissa to iss duniya mein nahin sirf outer space mein hi mil sakta hai. Aliens ke saat.

Nupur: (makes a shocked face) Monkey Mayank tumhe to main…kher chodo main bandaron ke moon nahin lagti. (fixes her hair)

Mayank: Bahaut bahaut meherbaani apki. (folds his arms and looks away)

Nupur also looks away. After about a minute of silent walking, finally Nupur says,

Nupur: Kya Mayank! Tum bhi na sadu ke sadu he rahoge. Maine toh socha academic meet jeet kar tum kitne kush hoge par nahin…yahan to…

Mayank: (says quickly) Of course main kush hoon Nupur…maine kab kaha main kush nahin hoon.

Nupur pauses at his quick response then says:

Nupur: Haan? To phir theekhai. Waise ek baat bolun Mayank?

Mayank: (smiles) Pooch to aise rahi ho jaise agar main na kahun to tum nahin bologi.

Nupur: (scowls) Theekhai matt suno. Waise bhi tumhare baare mein hi baat thi.

Mayank: (raises his eyebrows) Uh...acha theekhai bolo. (seeing Nupur silent) Ab bolo bhi.

Nupur: (easily convinced, lights up) Theekhai!! Pata hai Mayank tumne jaisse questions ke jawab diye na…by god main to dekhti he reh gayi…judges ke mun pe khushi aur doosron ke mun pe jalan!! (slaps Mayank on the back and starts laughing)

Mayank: (smiles widely and blushes) Uh…thanks… (Nupur gives him a sideways glance and he quickly says) Waisse tumne bhi kaafi ache answers diye…woh judges kaafi hairan lag rahe the.

Nupur: By god!! Uss judge ki shakal dekhne wali thi haina Mayank? (laughs) Isse kehtein hain Jodi no.1!!

Mayank: Huh?

Nupur: Haan humari jodi haina kamaal ki?

Mayank: (smiles) Haan.

Nupur: (smiles back)

Mayank has been dying to say something since they won the meet and sees this as an excellent opportunity.

Mayank: Woh Nupur…actually main tumse…

Just then they're bus comes.

Nupur: Yehlo humari bus bhi aa gayi. Iss bar miss nahin hui!! (laughs) Ab to tum khush ho na Mayank?

Mayank: (under his breath) Yeh bus ko bhi abhi aana tha?

Nupur: Kya kaha? Ab tumhe bus se bhi problem hai kya?

Mayank: Nahin…kuch nahi.

Nupur: Toh chalo na.

Mayank: Haan…

With this Nupur starts walking to the bus while Mayank picks up their bags. He then looks at the sky and then again at Nupur. He sighs and walks to the bus.

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Back at the Valentine's Ball, Samrat, convinced by Gunjan finds Dia. Dia after hearing Gunjan and Samrat's conversation now has slight tears in her eyes.

Samrat: (approaches Dia whose back is towards him) Hi Candy.

Dia: (turns around to face him) O Hi Sammy.

Samrat: (sees the slight tears in her eyes) Yeh kya Candy aaj Valentine's party ke din tumhari ankhon mein aansoon?

Dia: (happy that he noticed) Woh maine socha ki tum mujhe to iss party mein bhool hi gaye ho Sammy.

Samrat: Samrat apni Candy ko kabhi bhool sakta hai kya?

Dia: (feels happy and smiles) Nahin. To chalein dance karne?

Samrat: Ek minute. (extends his hand to Dia) Miss Candy, kya aaj ap mere saat dance karengi?

Dia: (blushes, smiles sweetly and takes the hand) Aww…Of course Sammy.

And they both go off to the dance floor. But before they go Samrat looks back and sees Gunjan watching them so he winks at her and she smiles while she says to herself:

Gunjan: Samrat kitna acha dost hai. Thank you bhagwan jo apne mujhe Samrat jaissa dost diya jisko sabki feelings ki kitni kadar hai. Aur woh ek acha insaan bhi hai.

With this she smiles and goes out from there.

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Back to Mayank and Nupur who have just got out of the bus to their stop. They are both walking towards the auto rickshaw. As usual, Nupur starts the conversation:

Nupur: Mayank?

Mayank: (who is thinking how to say what he wants to say to Nupur, but upon hearing his name he snaps out of his thoughts) Haan.

Nupur: Main soch rahi thi…ke yeh trip bhi kya kamaal kit hi haina? By god, itna mazza to mujhe kabhi Morena ki raam leela main nahin aaya jitna tumhare saat…(she stops thinking she might have said too much)

Mayank: (who hasn't missed what she said, looks at her surprised) Kya kaha tumne?

Nupur: Woh…Mayank tumhe yaad haina iss safar pe nikalte waqt hum kitna jhagadte the?

Mayank: (smiles) Haan…to?

Nupur: Aur ab dekho na hum dono ne ek saat competition bhi jeet liya.

Mayank: (senses where the conversation is going) Nupur…tum kehna kya chahti ho?

Nupur: (gathers up her courage and says slowly) Mayank…kya tum…woh…project waali baat bhool nahi sakte?

Mayank: (relieved that she brought up what he was dreading to bring up) Uh…

Mayank didn't know what to say. Actually through this trip, Mayank had seen a new side to Nupur, he understood her better now and he knew that she could never intentionally hurt anyone. He had grown to like her a lot. But still he felt that the project incident was the one thing that always drifted them apart. Well, not anymore, Mayank decided then and there.

Nupur: Kya soch rahe ho Mayank?

Mayank: Woh…

Nupur: Dekho Mayank, main jaanti hoon maine bahaut badi galti ki thi. Lekin mere bauji kehtein hain ki agar sache dil se galti sudhari jaye to sau galtiyaan bhi maaf hotin hain. Dekho na Mayank, maine kitni baar tumse maafi maangi aur academic meet mein bhi tumhara saat diya haina? Ab agar tumne mujhe maaf nahin kiya na to by god main na…tum soch bhi nahin sakte main kya karungi.

Mayank: (smiles as he listened to her talk. This girl would never change, he thought. And thank god for that!) Kya karogi?

Nupur: (caught off guard) Ab…itni jaldi kya hai Mayank? Pehle main to sochlun…sochke sabse pehle tumhe hi bataungi ki main kya karungi theekhai?

Mayank: Pakka? (he smiles)

Nupur: Done! To samjho ki…

Mayank smiles as he waits for Nupur to realize what just happened.

Nupur: …Ek minute…kya kaha tumne iska matlab tumne mujhe…?

Mayank: (smiles) Kuch aisa hi samajhlo…

With this Mayank winks and taps Nupur's head lightly with his bus tickets he still had in his hand. While Nupur touches her head in surprise, Mayank smiles and waves by to her as heads home. Nupur smiles and waves back as she watches him leave. After he's gone she puts one hand on her waist and smiles as she shakes her head. Then she starts laughing and clasps her hands excitedly and jumps in the air. She then starts walking and then after looking around to make sure no one was looking, she starts dancing on the street until she reaches her auto.

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Back to the Valentine's Ball. Gunjan is walking to find an auto to go home when Samrat catches up to her on his bike.

Samrat: Yeh kya Chashmish tumhare kehne par main Dia ke pass gaya aur ab tum jaa rahi ho?

Gunjan: (surprised to see Samrat) Samrat?...Haan…woh main…Di ab ghar aane hi wali hogi to…

Samrat: O to yeh baat hai. Phir to tumhe jaldi hi ghar pahunchna hoga haina?

Gunjan: Haan…isiliye ab tum jao…

Samrat: Lekin Chashmish iss tarah tum ghar jaldi kaisse pahunchogi?

Gunjan: Kya…?

Samrat: Dekho Chashmish, pehlo to tumhe auto dhoondne mein hi itna time lagega. Aur phir jab mil bhi gayi to auto to tumhe adhe ek ghante se pehle ghar pahunchaygi nahin. Aur soch ki agar beech raste mein kahin yeh khatara auto kharab ho gayi aur tum time pe ghar na pahunchi to tumhari Di to so bhi jaygi. Aur phir tum usse mil bhi nahin paogi.

Gunjan: Samrattt…tum kya kehna chahte ho mujhe achi tarah pata hai?

Samrat: (smiles) Pata hai to itni der se mujhse kyun itni bakwas kara rahi ho chashmish? Seedha seedha keh diya hota ki tumhe meri baatein achi lagtin hain.

Gunjan: Hunh?

Samrat: Haan.

Gunjan: Samratt…main ghar jaa rahin hoon.

Samrat: Chashmish, mere itne explain karne ke baad bhi tum uss khatara auto mein jaana chahti ho.

Gunjan: (smiles) Hmm…to tum chahte ho ki main tumhari bike pe bhet ke jaun…jo bilkul khatara nahin hai?

Samrat: (smiles) Bingo. Waisse tum kaafi intelligent ho chashmish.

Gunjan: (sits down on the bike) Thank you. Ab chalein warna main ghar time pe nahin pahunch paungi.

Samrat: (smiles and puts down his helmet) Of course chashmish.

With this Samrat drops Gunjan home. When they reach Gunjan's house, Gunjan steps down from the bike and says:

Gunjan: Thanks Samrat aj party mein pehli baar mujhe bhi maza aya.

Samrat: Chashmish…mujhe tumhe kitni baar batana padega ki..

Gunjan: O haan…main bhool gayi thi humari friendship ka "no sorry no thank-you" rule right?

Samrat: Right

Gunjan: Aage se nahin bhoolungi.

Samrat: Good.

Gunjan: Haan…ab… to main chalti hoon…good night Samrat.

Samrat: (sighs) Good night Chashmish. Kal college mein milte hain.

Gunjan: Haan.

With this Samrat watches her leave, shakes his head and smiles, then puts his helmet on to drive on home. Gunjan on reaching her doorstep looks back at Samrat and smiles before going inside.

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Back at the Valentine's ball, Uday and CJ leave their separate ways to go home. After Uday leaves CJ reflects on her night.

CJ: Waise manna padega, party mein maza to zaroor aya. Aur yeh Uday bhi kya character hai. (laughs) Mere liye tapori banke aya wohbhi valentine's party mein (laughs again) Kya item hai beedu (laughs again, shakes her head and goes home)

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Gunjan comes back home, goes to her room and sees Nupur unpacking. She gets really excited on seeing her sister after so long and comes up behind her to hug her.

Gunjan: Diiiiii!!! Ap aa gayin!!

Nupur: Arrey Gunjan meri pyari behenaaaa (she takes her hands and they both start spinning together)

Gunjan: (while laughing) Bas bas dii mujhe chakkar aa rahen hain.

Nupur: (also laughing) Haan Gunjan mujhe bhi.

And then they both hold their heads and sit down on the bed. They both then look at each other and burst out laughing again.

Nupur: Arreyy waah meri behena…aaj to tuh bahaut kush lag rahi hai, akhir baat kya hai haan? (Nupur nudges Gunjan with her elbow)

Gunjan: Diii aap bhi na…kush to hongi hi…ab itne dinon baad meri Di ghar waapis ayin hain. (hugs Nupur)

Nupur: Hayee Gunjan maine tujhe kitna miss kiya by god!! (And then she notices something) Arrey ek minute, tu zara khadi to ho.

Gunjan: (stands up) Kya hua Di?

Nupur: Arrey main bhi to dekhon meri behen mere diye hui dress mein kaisi lagti hai. By god Gunjan tu aaj itni pyaari lag rahi hai ki kya bataun. Waah waah meri choice ka to jawaab nahin haina?

Gunjan (smiles): Haan Di. Samrat ne bhi…

Nupur: Samrat? Acha to ab main samjhi ki tu itni kush kyun hai!! Matlab tune usse maaf kardiya? (she says excitedly)

Gunjan : Diiiii…ap bhi na…aur haan maine usse maaf kardiya. Aap teekh kehtin thi Di, Samrat dil ka bahaut acha hai aur ab hum ache dost bhi hain.

Nupur : Kya? Arrey waah Gunjan kya khabar sunayi hai behena!! Dil kush kardiya by god!!

And then they both start laughing again.

Nupur: Waisse Gunjan tu bhi teekh hi keh rahi thi…

Gunjan: Kya Di?

Nupur: Woh…monkey Mayank…itna bhi bura nahin hai…pata hai humare safar mein na mera bag kho gaya tha aur us bichare ne raat ko najaane kahan kahan bhatak kar mere liye mera bag dhoond nikala (makes a dramatic and dukhiya face)

Gunjan: Sach Di?

Nupur: Aur nahin to kya Gunjan. Aur to aur yeh dekh (she shows Gunjan the trophy).

Gunjan: Wow Di iska matlab aap dono ne competition jeet liya (now it's her turn to be excited)

Nupur: Aur kya…is waqt tu pure Mumbai ki academic winner se hi baat kar rahi hai.

And then they both laugh.

And then Gunjan says seriously:

Gunjan: Sab kuch acha ho gaya na Di. Tumhe yaad hai humara Excel College mein pehla din (she shudders thinking about it)? Aur ab dekho? Iss jagah aur yahan ke logon se (she thinks about Samrat) humein kitna lagaav ho gaya hai.

Nupur: Haan Gunjan tu sach keh rahi hai. Ab lagta hai ki hum Mumbai ko bhi apna ghar keh saktein hain haina?

"Of Course"

Both Gunjan and Nupur look back to see Dia.

Dia: Welcome back Nupur and congrats doll (looks at the trophy). Jeetne ke liye.

Nupur: Arrey Dia, tum soyi nahin ab tak? Thanks.

Dia: Your welcome babes, aur Gunjan tumne party mein bahaut acha dance kiya isiliye congrats, tumhe bhi. (smiles sweetly)

Gunjan: Thanks Dia (smiles back).

"Arrey koi mujhe bhi to include karo na…main kitna left out feel kar rahan hoon"

They all look back to see Uday with a sad face standing behind them.

Dia: DODO??

Gunjan: Arrey Uday bhayiya aap? Ayiye na.

Uday: (grins) O thanks Gunjan. Sirf tumhi mera khayal rakhti ho. (makes a dukhiya face)

Nupur: Arrey Uday bhayiya by god maine apko kitna miss kiya. Ap udaas matt hoyiye. Yeh lijiye (she extends out her arms for a hug)

Uday: (grins) O wow! Mere liye? (gets really happy and goes in for the hug)

Dia rolls her eyes at this as Nupur brings in Gunjan too. And then seeing everyone hug, she feels a little left out.

Nupur: Arrey Dia tum wahan kyun khadi ho. Humara yeh milan tumhare bina adhura hai.

Uday: (snuggling in the hug and grinning widely) Haan Dids. Tum bhi ao na.

Dia gives Uday a stern look which makes him scared, shrugs and then goes in for the hug.

Nupur: Waah, yeh hua na asli bharat milaap!

With this everyone laughs before separating and going to bed.

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At the same time, Mayank also comes home smiling and his mom notices:

Mom: Arreyyy waah Mayu…aaj to mausam bada badla badla hai! Maine to socha tha ki Nupur ke saat itna time bitaane ke baad tu gusse se phula nahin sama raha hoga. Lekin yahan to kuch aur hi nazar aa raha hai. (Mayank's mom smiles and looks at Mayank with her chin on her hand)

Mayank: (even though he's caught he can't help smiling) Maaa. Zyada sochne ki zarurat nahin hai.

Mom: Acha to apni iss khoobsurat smile ka raaz toh bata mujhe?

Mayank: Woh to main…(thinks of what to say)

Mom: Haan haan, tujhe sochne ke liye jitna time chahiye utna le beta.

Mayank: (thinks of the reason) Haan! Woh humne academic meet jeet li haina isiliye. Ab khush?

Mom: Kya? Arrey waah mere sher!! Congrats beta(she extends her hand for a hand shake)

Mayank: (takes her hand and shakes it) Thanks Ma.

Mom: (with a sly smile) Matlab ab toh tu yeh maanta haina ki teri aur Nupur ki team kamaal ki hai?

Mayank: (smiles and blushes) Haan…(and then realizing it's his mom) Uhh…Maa main bahaut thak gaya hoon isiliye goodnight. Bahaut late ho gaya hai isiliye aap bhi sojayo.

Mom: (smiles and notices his blushing) Theekhai!! Kush rai.
And then she extends her hand and ruffles Mayank's hair.

Mayank: Maa gaalon ko matt…

Mom looks up surprised…

Mayank: Uhhh mera matlab hai baalon ko matt chuo.

Mom: (still really surprised) Mayuu?? Tu apna world famous dialogue kaisse bhool gaya? Lagta hai Nupur ka kuch zyada hi asar ho raha hai…

Mayank: Maaaaa….Goodnight.

Mom: (laughing) Good night beta. (and then to herself) Hayeee kitna kush lag raha hai mera beta aaj. Jeeti raho Nupur!! (laughs) Kisiko tum dono ki nazar na lage.
And then she does the 'tumhari balaayein lene wala' gesture before she goes off to her room.

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Pretty soon all our MJHT characters are in bed. But it's been a wonderful night for all of them and they are all too excited to fall asleep. As they slowly go off to sleep and into their dreams, they all have just one name in their thoughts:

Samrat: (smiles as he lays in bed) Chashmish…

Nupur: (cuddles her pillow and smiles) Monkey Mayank…

Gunjan: (looks out at the moon as she lays in bed and smiles) Samrattt…

Uday: (grins as he lays in bed) CJ…O CJ…

Dia: (puts a hand under her cheek and smiles) O Sammyy…

Mayank: (lays on his bead looking at the celing with his hand under his head, shakes his head and smiles) Nupurrr…

And last but not the least…

CJ: (laughing and shaking her head as she's lying in bed) Uday?...

With this our MJHT gang dozes off to sleep with sweet dreams of the one person now very dear to them…

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End.

Precap: A new day at Excel college with new friendships. With all the troubles of the past behind them, read on to see how the gang starts afresh with new relations and friends in their lives. What will this new day bring for them all? Happiness, more troubles? Or simple moments of joy that will be looked back on forever in the years to come…