*~*^IDEAL DESTINATION^*~* part 7 uptd in pg 22 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah🤗 really awesome one dear⭐️ superb😍 at last AR meet but what a way u have choosen OMG😉 so cute😍 and he is not going plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Tera pyaar hai itna pyaare,
Kam lagta hai jivan sara,
Tere milan ki lagan se,
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heyy diii thanx for ur lovely comments n i just love ur poems
thanx once again....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ammy_sreejoyee

1stly I am velley velley sholley..for late reply..
acha acha chalo maaf kar diya woh kya hai na badi badi desho main aisi choti choti baate hoti rehti hai....
Actually i was ill n under doc's observation so cundt cum on IF...
Sry..bt now i am fyn..
huh... its good to see that u r fine so welcome bak dear
Okies..now let me comment onm ur ff
Awesome update...
Yaar u can so nycly define ur emotions into words..dats d best thing i lyk in u..
I jus get into d character da way u wryt..
Awesome..superb job..
hey thanx thanx sooo much for ur comments i m just glad that u liked it thank u 1ce again
After a long while u updated na??y????
I was so egar to read it...
Bt now i am happy dat u r back...
ya actually it was exam time sooooooooooooo...........
And ya..Ur ff is goin so interseting..yaar
Really lukin fwd to read ur next part
y a mee too looking forward to write it dont knw wen...
Do PM me whn eva u update ur next part..
ya will surely pm u
Loads of luv
love u too😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruviarmaanfan

Hey Pooja 1st of all Sorrry....Actually mujhe bahut kantala aa raha tha isliye abhi tak mene apna part bhi nahi pura kiya aur tumhara part bhi nahi padh pai....

hey dii thats truly ok wid me but agli baar ye nahi chalega ok????? aur ye kantala kya hota hai???
N abt ur part...It was awesome as always...Ridz kitni chid chidi hai yaar....Usse bolo thod pyaar se behave karo....Aur pagal hai joh Armaan ko sorry bolne ko kehti hai usse jagah par mein hoti toh mein usse thank u sooooo much kehti uthane ke liye...Aisa mauka thodi na milta hai....Kyu????
thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo much diii 4 ur appreciation huh m feeling great........thank u loadsssssssssss
Plz post the part soon n do PM me....
n diii u dont say please "haq se maango i want the pm" (kahi suna suna i mean likha likha nahi lag raha?????????)😉
Luv Dhruvi..............
😉😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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RE: ar: maami mujhe bilkul bhi mood nahi hai... mujjhe bahut dukh hoga..
ma: dukh tho mujhe bhi ho raha hai lekin iski wajah se hum apne rishte tho nahi thod sakte hai na armaan??😭
ar: maami plzzz aap mujhe force mat keejiye ye mujhse nahi hoga....
ma: theek hai armaan... jaisa tumhaari marzi... n she leaves
PRESENT:
ni: armaan!!!! armaan wait..............
armaan turns around to see nikki in front of him
ni: armaan maine suna tum hamaare saath haridwaar nahi aa rahe ho???
ar:hmmm....
ni: arey aise kaise nahi aoge mujhe kuch nahi pata tum hamaare saath chal rahe hoo...chalo n she holds his hand n start walking towards the boat..
ar: (he stops n frees his hand from her hold): nikki plzz mujhe chod do main aana nahi chaahtha...... (n start to walk in the opposite direction)
ni: (comes runnning n starts walking beside him)armaan tum aisa kyu kar rahe ho?????........... armaan dekho agar tum aisa koroge tho main bhi tumhaare shaadi par nahi aaungi.
armaan doesnt say anything n continue walking
ni: jaao armaan main bhi tumhaare saath chal rahi hoo main ye shaadi nahi karungi........
armaan stops n looks at her n gives a fake smile n again start walking.....
ni: armaan main sach keh rahi hoo........
this time armaan again stops n looks down n niki also stop...... again he start walking for a while n nikki follows him....then again he stops n lokks at nikki n she turns her face to the other side (smiling😊)
ar: (atlast he gives up): acha theek hai chalo....
nikki jumps like a kid with joy n entagles her shoulder with his n start walking towards the boat😃😃
ar: nikki ek minute ruko main abhi aaya....
ni: ab firse kya hua armaan???😡
ar: wo rahul baahar mera wait kar raha hai main use batake aata hun
ni: ok........😊
n armaan leaves from there........
ridhima

ridhima enters in to her cottage n checks every thing..
ri: (on phone) haa maa cottage bilkul fine hai...ha ha sab kuch theek hai aur haa maa agar mujhe koi calls aaye tho bata dena..yaha par shayad signal na aye........ok maa bye n she hangs the phone..😊
armaan n rahul:

rahul notices armaan coming towards him n as soon as he reaches him....
ra: yaar kitni der (time) lagaya tune byee kehne k liye... ab chal chalte hai..
ar: rahul yaar main nahi aa raha hoo..😊
ra: (confused) 😕nahi aa raha hoo matlab?
ar: matlab main haridwaar jaa raha hoo nikki k shaadi k liye
ra: (shocked)😲 kya??????????? tumhaara dimaag tho theek hai na?? tu kaise jaa sakta hai?? i know armaan tum uski shaadi kisi aur se hote hue nahi dekh sakta aur tu tho keh raha tha ki tera koi naya project bhi tho shuru honewaala hai??😡
(note: rahul doesnt know that the project armaan is working on is SaNJEEVNI)
ar: rahul ye sach hai ki main uski shaadi nahi dekh sakta lekin main sach se door tho nahi bhaag sakta na?? (rahul gives him "tera kuch nahi ho sakta " 😡look) aur rahi baat project ki tho tu uski fikar mat kar main use sambhaal lunga waise bhi main apne saath apna laptop lejaa raha hoo.....
ra: huh... jaise teri marzi😡
ar: yaar ab tu chodna in baato ko aur bata ye apna champ kaha hai??? tu tho bol raha tah ki wo yaha aane waala hai??
ra: arey haa usne phone tho kiya ki wo aane wala hai lekin pata nahi itni der ku laga raha hai wo...
suddenly they hear a voice from behind..😲

ATUL:

A VERY SWEET N FUN LOVING GUY N THE FRIEND OF RAHUL N ARMAAN

atul: lo tumne humain yaad kiya aur hum haazir hoo...😃😃
ar: hey champ n hugs him
ra: abey tujhe aane main itni der kaise hui??😡
at: arey wo kya hai na aaj shaina ka birthday hai na isliye thodi der ho gayee...😃
ra n ar : (confused) shaina??????????😲
at: ha shaina..... meri beti..
ar n ra: (shocked) beti?????????????????😲
ar: atul tune shaadi karli aur hamain bataya bbhi nahi????
ra: (very dramaically) humain tumse ye umeed nahi thi atul....😭
ar: main tho soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki tu aisa karega..😭
ra: yaar jaa bahut dekhli teri dosti....😭
at: abey tum log ye kyaa baat kar rahe ho??? mujhe kuch samaj main nahi a raha...😕
ra: ab zyaada bhole banne ki koshish mat kar champ..😡
at: abey lekin maine kiya kya??😕
ar: abey aur karna kya tune hamain bina bataaye shaadi karli...😡
at: arey yaar main koi shaadi vaadi nahi kii.....
ra: (shocked) 😲chaaaaamp!!!!!!!!! tune bina shaadi kiye hi bachi paida kar diya????????????? chi chi chi.....😉😉
at: abey chup saale main wo bachi ki baat nahi apne ROSE PLANT waale bachi ki baat kar raha tha jise last year hum teeno ne khud nursery se uta laye the..........ab yaad aaya kuch??????????????????
ar n ra: ohhhhhhhhhhh.............😆😆
at: haaaaaaaaaaa............😆
after that they three laugh at their stupid misunderstanding n rahul , atul leave from dere giving armaan a send off...........😆😆😆
muskaan's house:
muskaan will be watching T.V wen the bell start ringigng....
she makes a move towards the door n opens it n...................
mus: ANJI
DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.....................................

ANJALI:

BESTEST N ALSO CHILDHOOD FRIEND OF RIDZI N MUSKAAN HOWEVER SHE IS ONE YEAR ELDER TO MUSKY
SHE IS VERY SOFT HEARTED GIRL N A BUBBLY GIRL N DOESNT WANT TO SHOW OFF MUCH....SHE STUDIED IN LONDON FOR 5 YEARS N NOW RETUNED TO INDIA N HER MOTHER IS THE BEST FRIEND OF PADMA

anj: (makes a face) hey come on yaar musky main itni budi (old) bhhi nahi hoo jo tu mujhe dii bula rahi hai......
mus: ok ok sorry anjy wowwwww what a pleasant surprise n hugs her...
anj: yaa i know it wud b pleasant afterall ye MAIN HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
muss: huh anji tu na kabhi nahi badlegi wahi puraani attitude....
anj: heheh aur badalna bhi kaun chahega???.........acha ab ye chod aur bata ki meri MISS JHALLI (ridzi)kaha hai??????????????
mus: huh teri jhalli ghar par nahi hai wo haridwaar gaye hai aur 10 days baad lautegi...
anj: kyaa??? lekin ku, kab, kaise????????
mus: wo bahut lambi kahaani hai agar tu sunegi tho hans hans kar paagal ho jaayegi....chal baad main bataaungi pehle mom se tho mil le...
anj: haa yaar chal....
padma will be in kitchen preparing lunch....... anji comes behind her n shouts.......
anj: PADDYYYY.......................
pad: padma looks around to find anjali..
pad: arey anjali aagaye tu??? n hugs her... n parts from the hug n stars speaking... huh tum london se kab lauti??
anji: aaj subah hi ofcourse aur aate hi yaha apna presence bana diya...........
pad: ha ha mujhe pata hai tere pair (legs) kabhi zameen par tikti hi nahi hai... ab aa gayee teesri SHAITAAN (muski, ridzi n anji) n starts laughing....
anj: (makes a face) huh haa ab dekho kya kya hota hai................(anjali knows that at this time shashank wont be at home) waise wo mr.hitler (shashank) nahi hai kya ghar par????????
pad: ssshhhhhhhh agar unhone sun liya tho??????
anj: padddy i know ki hitler is waqt office main honge aur unke paas secret ear phones tho nahi hai jo wo mere baatain sunenege.........
suddenly some one starts speaking behind anji
SHASHANK: anjali tum yaha???????
anjali gets shocked n closes her eyes in fear n mumbles to herself: oh god!!!! aaj lagta hai shaayad hitler office nahi gaya... n she turns around still closing her eyes n looks down...
anji :(in a scared voice) un...uncle wo...wo..main..main keh rahi ki............ (before she could complete her sentence she hears some noise)
its muskaan... she starts laughing at anji's state n wen anji opens her eyes she finds that its actually muskaan who was imitating shashank's voice..........
anji (in anger) muski bachi tu rukh main nahi chodungi tujhe aaj n she starts runnin g behind her n they start fighting running throughout the house.....
pad: (to herself): huh ho gayee shaitaano ki jung shuru...........
ridhima n armaan.....
THE IDEAL DESTINATION boat starts sailing n its the second day in the boat.......
outside the cottage dere will be tables for the passsengers to get relaxed..........
on one table armaan n ridhima will be sitting on the oppsite sides of the table reading their respective novels...
n one packet of chips will be placed in the middle of the table....
ridhima will be looking into the book n tries to pick snack from the chips packet but she doesnt find it... wen she looks up she finds that armaan is also having chips from the same pack.. she gets anger n drags the pack on the tabl to her side n start eating n then looks into the book...armaan looks at her n smiles n again drags the pack towrds his side n strart eating......
ridhima sees him with anger while he will be busy in reading the novel
ri: (to herself in anger) huh chips k liye itna kajoosi ku dikha raha hai??? dekhne main tho porsh lag raha hai.. ek 10.rs nahi laga sakta kyaa chips ke liye??.......... daantu??????? huh nahi.. n she picks the packet n leaves to her cottage/room....
armaan looks at her n smiles........
ri: (bumps onto the bed) huh stupid, idiot..pata nahi kya samajta hai apne aapko kanjoos kahika.. n then she finds another packet of chips on her bed........
ri: ohh shit!! mera packet tho yahi par hai ... iska matlab wo packet usi ka tha??? nahi..........
armaan will b purchasing another packet of chips just then nikki comes.......
ni: hey armaan tumne abhi abhi tho chips khareeda tha??
ar: ha ek ladki thi wo mere saare chips khaa gayee.... main ek liya tho wo do lene lagi agr main do liye tho wo chaar aur aise hi saara packet khatam kar diya tha....
ni: BIKHAARI (beggar) thi kyaa???
ar: huh?? nahi nahi
ni: huh tho phir use daanta ku nahi??
ar: wo maine socha bichaari bhooki hogi isliye maine chod diya
ni: (irritaingly) arman tum kabhi nahi sudroge...
just then some one calls them from behind..n they turn to look around..
ri: hey heloo...wo maine socha ki wo mera packt tha aur tum wantedly mere saath aisa kar rahe the isliye mujhe bahut gussa aa gaya tha....little communication gap..(nikki starts laughing) ridhima looks at nikki n then at armaan n starts speaking..."lekin tum tho mujhe bata sakte the na??"
ar: huh.. nahi main ladkiyo ke saath chance nahi leta.... chup baithe tho hi behtar hai isse (points towards nikki) bahut experience hai...(ridhima looks at nikki) ohh by the way this is nikki meri causin..
ni: hi...
ri: hii i m ridhima gupta n shakes her hand n wen she farwards her hand towards armaan to shake, he again salutes (shahrukh waala) her n saays "hi i m armaan. armaan malikk" (nikki starts giggling turning other side)
ri: (thinks)huh kya attitude dikhaata hai...
ri: ok then byee..n she leaves from dere
ni: huh she is looking cool na??
ar: huh?? (he gives her "ho sakti hai mujhe kya padi" look)
ridzi's room
ri: (lokking into the mirror) hi i m ridhima gupta (imitates armaan) hii i m armaan. armaan malikk... huh bond james bond.. apne aapko shahrukh khan samajta hai.........
n she starts writing her DIARY......... on the front page it will be written "IDEAL DESTINATION"

" hmm IDEAL DESTINATION ek bauht hi acha experience hai....zindgi main har ek ko ise experience karna chahiye... ismain ek alag insaan jab maine use apna haath deke apna naam kaha tho usne shahrukh ki tarah salute karke kehne laga i m armaan, armaan malikk (smiles n blushes)😳😳jab maine uske chips liye tab bhhi wo hasta hua baith gaya..... pata nahi mujhe ku aisa laga, jaise papa se puchti thi sorry kehne k liye ise bhi puch liya.... surprising........."

ok guysss thats it for today n sorry for a long long delay...
hope u all like n plzzzz do comment or critisize....
have a cheerful day byee.............
precap: RM scenes AA scenes n also AR scenes.....
Edited by SuKaSh - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update!!!!!
eagerly waiting 4 Rahul-Muskaan scenes!!!!!
plz continue soon!!!!!
thanks 4 PM!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy awesome part pleazz pm me next time when u update thanxx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

awesome update!!!!!
eagerly waiting 4 Rahul-Muskaan scenes!!!!!
plz continue soon!!!!!
thanks 4 PM!!!!!!!!

hey thanx for ur lovely comments gauri....
n yaa will surely try to add more of RM
u r always wecum
luv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

awesome update!!!!!
eagerly waiting 4 Rahul-Muskaan scenes!!!!!
plz continue soon!!!!!
thanks 4 PM!!!!!!!!

hey thanx for ur lovely comments
nyaa ill sure try to add more of RM
n u r always welcome dear
luv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thanx radika glad that u liked it

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