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Posted: 16 years ago

hiiiiiiiii friends this is pooja, i have read many wonderaful ffs over here

n thought of writing one of my own n the concept of my ff is taken from a telugu movie "GODAVARI"

i know i m not that good writer but i jst wanna try out one so plzz plzzz bare with me n do read n comment or critisize

i m posting the charecter sketch here below n do tell me shud i continue it or not??????????

so here it goes............................

ARMAAN MALIKK:

HE IS A VERY AMBITIOUS PERSON. WANTS TO BECOME A DOCTOR N START A HOSPITAL TO SERVE THE PEOPLE................... WANTS TO TREAT THE PATIENTS FREE OF COST N LIVES WITH HIS DADI (GRAND MOM) N LOVES HIS UNCLE'S DAUGHTER NIKITA ( DOES IT LEAD TO THEIR MARRIAGE?????????????? WELL, LETS SEE)

RIDHIMA GUPTA:

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SHE BELONGS TO A MIDDLE CLASS FAMILY......... STUDIED DOCTOR COURSE BUT WANTS TO BECOME A VERY FAMOUS DESIGNER N WANTS TO ESTABLISH A DESIGNER SHOW ROOM BY HERSELF N IS VERY PROUD OF HER BEAUTY N AT THE SAME TIME VERY KIND HEARTED'S C

NIKITA:

ARMAAN'S COUSIN .... LIKES ARMAAN VERY MUCH (OFCOURSE AS A GOOD FRIEND)

THEY ARE THE BEST BUDDIES FROM CHILDHOOD N SHE IS PROUD OF HER PROPERTY N MAINTAINS HER STATUS IN THE SOCIETY

RAHUL:

FRIEND OF ARMAAN , VERY FRIENDLY N LOVABLE , HE UNDERSTANDS ARMAAN MORE THAN ANYONE

MUSKAAN:

RIDHIMA'S SISTER , SHE IS ONE YEAR YOUNGER TO RIDZI N VERY BUBLY GIRL THEY BOTH ARE LIKE BEST FRIENDS THAN SISTERS, SHARE EVERYTHING WITH EACH OTHER

SHASHANK GUPTA:.

RIDHIMA'S FATHER . HE IS A BANK MANAGER N WANTS HIS DAUGHTER TO BECOME A DOCOR, GET MARRIED N SETTLE IN LIFE

PADMA GUPTA:

RIDHIMA'S MOM. VERY CARING N SUPPORTIVE . SHE ALWAYS PAMPERS HER DAUGHTER N MAK HER FEEL COMFORTABLE

OTHER CHARECTERS WILL B INTRODUCED SIMULTANEOUSLY IN THE MIDDDLE

THE BEGINING STARTS LIKE THIS

a bride is sitting on her bed, her head bent down n is covered with quilt

its her first night. the room is beautiully decorated with different kinds of flowers

she is waiting for the groom to arrive

the groom enters the room n proceeds towards her, he sits in front of her n lifts the quilt

he holds her shoulders n moves towards her

bride: (very tensed n removes his hands) ek........ek minute

groom: kya hua ridhima????

ri: wo.... woh main aapse kuch baat karna chahti hoo

gr:ha kaho

ri: wo mere mumma r papa hum dono se( ridzi n muskaan) bahut pyaar karte hai

gr: ha haa mujhe pata hai (very very irritatingly)

ri: hum dono ko kabhi kisi ladke se kum nahi samjha............. humari har khwaish puri ki hai

gr: haa ttho?????

ri: (gulps) tho tho main soch rahi thi ki wo sab hamare saath isi ghar main hamare saath rahenge tho................

gr: (now very angrily) haan hum iske baare main kabhi aur baat karenge

ri: nahi ............

gr: jab se dekh raha hoo bakwass kiye jaa rahi ho chalo n he holds her hands n starts forcing her puching her on to the bed

ri: she denies n shouts 'nahi chodo mujhe chodo'

ri: nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

next day she wakes up from her bed,rubs her eyes, holds her head n sees everything is normal around her n soon she realises that she was dreaming

she comes out of her room n sees muskaan is doin her aerobics watching TV with a high volume

ri: god muskaan ki bachi tune phir se apna ye nautanki shuru kardi subsh subsh....... acha khasa neend kharab kar diya

mus: haan haan mujhe pata hai kitni achi neend thi tumhari wahi purani kahani , suhaag raat , apna anjaana pati n zabardasti.......... hain na??????? ( she starts laughing)

ri: (angrily) SHUT UP!!!!!

padma (from the kitchen) ridhimaaaaaaaa uth gaye tum???????

ri: (to herself) oh noo!!! aaj sunday hai, mom firse thnadi paani se head bath karne ko kahengi, fir salwar suit pehenne ko kahengi aur fir itni subah subah mandirr jane ko kahengi.......... NO WAY aaj main in sab ke mood main nahi hoo n she thinks for a while n shouts again

ri: nahi maaaaa main abhi bhi so rahi hoooo n she turn to rush into her room ( muskaan giggles)

when padma comes n holds her ear

pad: kaha jaa rahi hoo chalo jaldi chalo aur nahalo

ri: nahi mom aaj papa aapko chodenge plzz mom

pad: nahi ridhima roz wahi tho chodthe hai mujhe, aaj sunday hai aaj tho unhe aaram karne do

ri: acha theek hai mom lekin main pehle hi kkeh deti hoo yeh thnde paani se nahaana aur salwaar suit pehnna mujhse nahi hoga

pad: (in a teasing way) ridhimaaaa soch lo aaj 1st hai tumhaari bhi koi zaroorate hongi jaise ki " pocket money".......................

ri: (to her self) ohhh god phas gaye..............

ok thats it guys hope u all like it

plzzzzzzzzzzzz leave the comeents n say if i shud continue or not...........

THANK U

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PART 1: PG 1

PART 2: PG 3

PART 3: PG 7

PART 4: PG 11

PART 5: PG 16

PART 6: PG 20

Edited by SuKaSh - 16 years ago

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susha

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey........
gr8 concept
would love to read it😃
pls pm me if possible

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Alu-

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey great concept continue soon

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sweetaddiction

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Posted: 16 years ago

Interesting concept !--
cant wait to read more ! =)

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey the concept is very nice.
And ridzi dream was so funny.
Continue soon and if possible, so PM me

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susha

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyyyyyy gr8 part
it was very funny
it was a dream i didn't expect that
gr8 going
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey loved the first part
Wonder what ridz dream is about
Hope the groom in her dream is not armaan(Well actually hope he is and not)
Because armaan being so harsh isnt nice