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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: missypatel

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*edit* firstly!! Hearty Congratulations for the 2nd thread..!! =)

now to d part..i dnt rem ne of the earlier parts which uve dne such justice 2...!! i luved it..every bit of it...wud be too less to say! glad u showed sum shine over atul....:D!! his convo wit anji...it was almost monotonous...it was more like actin delivery to me than actual real situation...u koe wat i mean? bt nehow...d situations..dealings.. were right on..anji was askin for question and atul was in no place to answer tem..gud boy! haha!!

rahul-muskaan...were fab!! i missed tem dearly in d last few updates...happy ur bck wit tem....tey still entertain me tons...and rahul was awesome here...he needed to tke a stand..gud he did :D at times u mke me think boys are a smarter head in yur ficz...bt i guess its all apt wit d demands of d happeningz..!luv tem!

armaan-ridz were an equal fun couple to read abt..tey ver very realistic...last evenin did leave a mark for tem bth even with those low momnts....niceee!! and wuhoooo yayyy armaan for wordin out his feelins so well...he didnt as he said ask her abt it again..bt yet maybe gve her solutions to her problems...in a way..how kewl is dt! haahha!!yes defin a smarter head! lol

finally....rahul-muskaan....u koe i think i liked dis d best bit of d upd....cuz it was d base...RR were pack frds..and in d run...like atul in last fic...teyd lost ter charm...or ter need of frdship...his irritation and obvious anger was so nicely dne....haha him snappin at armaan...ouchh!! :D

grt update sam....cheers again for d 2nd thread!! =)

aloha,
nij

ps...dtz so very sweet of yur guy to show up...i rem ma turn 1nce..he planned on surprisin me...and i checked his itinerary by mistake...bt i went along till he showed up.....bt duh me...didnt learn actin frm nj so gt caught of bein aware of his arrival!! nehow....fun times...gud memories!! :) tc sam!!

Young Nijal, thanks you so much for the congratulations!

Hmm, Atul's monologue, hopefully you shall find the reason for that shortly, though it may not be what everyone expects! But to me it was necessary to get across a message to Anjali. Unfortunately, human beings have selective understanding, we chose to hear and absorb only that which we want to!

I guess Rahul had enough of playing the waiting game! Hmm..men being smarter..I dunno..I don't usually subscribe to that train of thought but yup it would appear to be so in this case!

Armaan is sharper than Ridhima gives him credit for…be it in the obviously blundering excuse that he gave her or in his clarification, he has clearly spelled out the fact that there is no one else who is special in his life…its for Ridhima to understand and absorb that……

Yup, my guy does these crazy things from time to time, which endear him so much to me! Other than the fact that I think he's the most adorable man I know! Lol! Oh your poor guy, all that trouble to give you a surprise and you stumble don to his itinerary! But hey, it's the thought that counts I guess!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: juvz

congratulationz on ure second thread...

the ff is amazing...
continue soon...

Thanks you so much! Am glad you are enjoying the fic. Shall update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

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Once again i wanted to congratulate u but u seemed bit busy so decided to do it again, hmmmmmm the things are turning out better but still there r lot of confusions, oh my gad all was smooth and wat has this love struck puppy Rahul done by his abrupt question and as our Ridz seemed to be good distractioner, the Armaan grt will think her intial reluctance was due to Rahul god help them,i am just as nervous i can't tell u waiting for next part

Hi Yamini, apologies for the delay in responding but as everyone knows by now, I was extremely preoccupied, wink! Rahul's let the cat amongst the pigeons so to speak and let's see how Muskaan reacts! Hopefully there should be no misunderstandings, there is a big one creating trouble as it is! Shall update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetestcoolest

hiya sam di....

the part was amazing...
im glad riddhimas dad is fine and it was sooooooo dam sweet of armaan...both,at the hospital and for waiting for her...
and rahul accidently let slip....waiting for muskaans reaction.....
sry for the short omment but ive to go out right now...
fab part...loved it
annahet

Hi Annahet! I am SO Glad that you liked the part! Yup Ridhima' dad is fine and if nothing else at least the "Meet the parents" seems to have gone well for Armaan, lol!

Don't worry about the short comment, am glad that you did! HAve fun!

Shall update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi sam!
First off..Congratulations on the 2nd thread!! Coming to this update..it was penned very nicely! Can't wait to see armaan's reaction to Rahul's statement. I was wondering may be with this riddhima will clear things between them like armaan tried to do!!!
I will try and comment on every part..but with 2 month old twins..it is really hard to find time. Your FF is truly a stress buster on my maternity leave!! Thanks for that!!! and for the PM of course!
Cheers!
Priya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: spln

reserved sam....have a great weekend!...will update the comments soon!

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alright...extremely delayed sam...just had to much to cope with somehow, more than i would care for, its strange when somethings dont affect u the way they cud be aexpected to, n yet the efect they have is the least of the ones u can ignore n pass by...oh wel....all in its time thats one thing i wish n dont wish with equal fervour to be able to change!

the part...atul-angie...um delighted u got down to both of them in such a real way....ajie had been surfacing every now n then in little but significant bits, atul had been a rigid backbone to alot going on in the fic...but this part dealt so much more with their chars...it was much needed n perfectly timed nkudos for that....but....can i say...something abt parts of their conversation, to me felt like...um i duno it felt like...if i was narrating of turmoils as great in a curent situation, like not writing abt it, but speaking in a kind of frendship the two of them share, i feel like...in extremely crude words, i feel like my talking words cud have been alot more losely said....like....lets say much worse in terms of articulation...i mean we can, despite being the smartest with the way we talk, in watever language we do, at the grimmest of moments(is thats even a word but it shud tell u wat i mean) i feel like, the way arman had lost his track of using his best speaking skill with anjie...anjie shud have been close when she talked to atul, she was not far, but atul in reciprocation for the whole mindset he was in that moment sounded almost a rehersed talked , not thru n thru...but in tiny bits...u know its the worst thing to do, as a reader from me, that i tell u something u cud change in such a lengthy way when it ought to be the briefest, can u excuse me for that? um just bad at making points very often when i shud make them n move on, specially becoz against the whole update this one tiny bit was extremely inconsequential....n that i cant deny...a bunch of my buddies know..the nutters, that my brother proposed i shud be sold at the pharmacy as a depressant, he says it every time he asks me for editions to his papers!

oki...now th the superbly handled part...rahul muskaa,...was a stunner....the saxophone, to the fiddling of actions n thots, the finality in making his call...muskaans response, of half jesting, half thrilled anticipation which she doesnt know what to do with...it was all so completely real n so...ummm...its felt like i cud be sitting in there, being one of them. either one or even both n perform the scene in momnoact,.,,it was brillaint sam i can't think of a better way to have tackled the whole...its like...his sudden panic n consequent resigned calm at having said his confession...its such a real; thing when u do something uv been dying to, n not had the guts to, n it happens n u panic like u shud n then knowing that its all well done n dealt with now...u just start thinking of the other side...of wat it will take u too...n bcz u had wanted it to happen so long u cant even actually regret it completely!!..it was extremely real, n fantastically dealt with sam, kudos for that!

ridhima, armaan...brief, but point made well...he now, despite his doubts, believes he can take some authority n she lets him exert the rights, very settling, enjoyed the tranquility is created in the space they share....n the last...hahahah.. armaan wonders who cud be hurt by her having sid yes to him n now rahul in his absolutrely anothoer world anguish says just something which may make armaan re think??? um wondering if u will take the tarck on to something like tha, i trust u to never drag issues...but um wondering if u will go into a misunderstanding like that, its all so likely to happen n it seemed evident that u set the stage for it!

alright that a hell of a long comment, one of these daz um certain u will, in ur end of the update remarks admonish me for these lectures n tell me not make appearnce on the thread again!...il try to fix my blabbing soon, it hasnt worked in 23 years though i shud forewarn!

lov

nj

Nj, love your long, long comments, so dont you dare stop! I would hate to see you dissappear from the thread...in fact of you do, shall hunt you out, so do so at your own risk! 😆 And I think you are adorable, so dont try and fix what your parents manage to create so delightfully!
I guess Armaan, through his obviously bumbling excuse and very firm clarification has told her as clearly as he can, that there is no one else in his life that she needs to worry about if thats what is bothering her.... and by agreeing to sit in his car without a fight she has give a tacit acceptance of his presence in her life...its for them to find teh right words and time to openely acknowldege that now....
Rahul's irritation to me is natural esp when he has been stweing in his own juice since last nightw hile his confidant has been incommunicado! But they are too close as friends to allow anything to come between them, and ,I have faith is Rahul's though not Armaan's 😆 abilities to think logically where Ridhima is concerned!
Am so glad that you liked Rahul Muskaan convo...given the way I have potrayed RAhul (the way he keeps pushing Ridhima about Armaan) it would have not been in lie with his character for him to hold out for so long..and I am gla dyou got what I intended to potray ...a desire so strong that he could not keep it in...a fear that he may have indeed jumped the gun yet a releife that he had finally articulated it....
Atul...hmmm.. there was a reason for it being a long monolouge, though I must honestly admit that i did not intend it to be one, it just ended up being one.....remember telling Anjali the truth or pointing her in the right direction has been on his mind for a long time so it was perhaps reheared, but maybe it came out a bit too pat! Shall keep that in mind!
I had a lovely weekend thanks...the man had taken a day off, so I played hookey and we both had a blast! Now that he is gone, I am ussually like a bear with a sore head the first day, till I drift back to normal! Its a standing joke in office that like cars made on Monday morning in the US, I am grumpy as hell the weekend after ....😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Robin_M

awww sam that was sooo sweet of him to give you such a delightful surprise! well you enjoy your time with him!

ok, thread 2 has officially been inogorated! big congrats to you!!!!

wow i cant believe how insightful atul is! he is such a calm and reasonable person, just his presence brings you peace! im glad angie went to see him, hopefully his words of wisdom have helped her a little!

i completely understand muskaans dilema! how do you know he is the right person? how do you know its love? its such a tricky thing, and then through in the insecurities and you end up with one great big complecated mess! hope she at least gives the poor guy a chance hehe hes starting to lose his cool!

i just loooove armaan, it was soooo sweet of him to help ridz and her family out in a time of need. taking over at the hospital was very generous! and then he picked her up, yippie!!!!! wow what a lame excuse he fed her though haha but we know she loved it! both of them are falling for each other, and i hope they relaize it soon! i guess armaan understood her reason for cancelling the date. so im assuming hes not going to ask her for an explanation, since he kind of already figured it out, and even tried to clear riddhimas concerns...
hmmm im very curious to know what exactly riddhima will tell rahul! as im sure armaan is too!

really good part sam, continue soon!

Robin, yes, it was really sweet of him! You can't imagine the shock I got when I saw him in my office. I almost dropped on the floor cos it was so unexpected esp because the previous evening we had been talking about his having to travel and how I was not planning on doing anything at all this weekend! But surprises like this keep the romance alive!

Thanks you so much for the congratulations! Like I said before it's thanks to all of you guys for continuing to read and comment! Yup Atul is a sensible guy and hopefully some of that rubs off on Anjali but human beings are notorious for not seeing what we do not want to see!

Muskaan is about find out that Rahul does not give up easily!

Poor Armaan, even through the blundering excuse, I suspect he intended Ridhima to know that he had wanted to pick her up, and then firmly clarifying that there was no one else in his life! I guess it's through these little actions and words that he is subconsciously letting her know how he feels!

Thanks so much, shall update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Sam,
As usual, the part was excellent, superb.
I loved it, every bit of this part was excellent.
Especially in the end when rahul said irritatedly "the last I saw was the two of you at college late last night, and now you are together again, what did you do, spend the whole time together?"
It was awesome.
And yeah forget to congratulate u, congratulation for the second thread, I wish u all the best.
Continue soon.

Kashish

Hi Kashish! Am SO glad that you thought the part was good! Yup, Rahul doing what we all do when we get irritated at a friend, take it out on them and if we perceive someone else to be the cause of that, on them as well, as poor Armaan is discovering!

Thank you for the congratulations, its thanks to you guys! Shall update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: raman_simer

👏 👏 👏 Congrats 4 d 2nd thread and i bet very soon i wll be congratulating u for 3rd one bcoz ur ff is awsome.It will progress by leaps 7 bounds.
Thanx for d pm

You are welcome for the Pm! Thank you for the congratulations, the lovely wishes for the 3rd and the lovely words of praise! Am so glad that you are enjoying the ff!

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