Maslow's hierarchy of needs #2 part 35 pg 147 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Sam,

"Wahi hoga jo manjure khuda hoga" hmm…I think it's either Mughal-e-azam or Taj Mahal but I'm more inclined to think it's the former or am I completely off the mark? Damn! I think I better go and watch it again. Curse you Sam! You made me waste four hours 😡 😆, ah well at least I'll get to see that famous candlelight scene again.
As for the previous part, I loved the description of Riddhima looking at him, hopefully describing the glories of Basillico before settling for polishing off those two packets of chips. Then of course there was that paani puri scene which was equally adorable. In fact, there were a lot of wonderful scenes…Riddhima going to gr8 pains to explain why exactly she called it a "date", Armaan being so supportive at the hospital, especially the understanding "aggressive male" comment (I loved him at that moment! Well I would have if I wasn't already in love with him). Poor Atul, the only guy who has no personal stake in this love-rectangle and sometimes I feel he's the one who sweats the most about it. But I love his sensitivity; guess all those years being "on the outside looking it" has its own rewards even though it must have been horribly lonely not to mention painful. But this update was highly rewarding for me as well cause I got acquainted with King Tantalus (can't wait to try it on someone else btw). Again the reason for Armaan's name was truly unique and again loved finding out about the "French connection". Knew that Richelieu's first name was Armand of course but never knew about the family Armaan. And the way you linked the French to the Persian was really interesting. A part that really stood out for me was the following:
"Hmmm….Arzoo and Armaan….two sides of the same coin…desire and aspiration…what a wonderful combination…your parents must have really wanted the two of you….the names are a wonderful embodiment of the dreams of two people in love…." Ridhima wondered aloud.
Plot-wise it might not be that important but I loved the thought and indeed I agree with Riddhima, a truly wonderful combination. Course, how can I forget the way they flirted with each other over dinner?
I know it's wicked of me but I thoroughly enjoyed both our heros falling from their lofty perches…first Armaan and his flustered, stammered excuse and then Rahul's tensed out state. The scenes b/w Atul and Anjali were really poignant. But what I zoned into was the following:
"The first?" Atul laughed a little sardonically, "well, the first was really a figment of my imagination, actually more like my aspiration…she came from a very different crowd…in fact much more like Ankit, Armaan and you…and completely unlike me she was unattainable, from a different world, yet we were friends…such good friends that when time came, she chose to confide in me about the man she was in love with….it broke my heart…but it also made me realise that I much rather have her as a friend than loose her altogether…it was a tough lesson to learn…and painful but then I thought this too will pass and it did…and now when I look back, I am just grateful that she and I are still friends"
Perhaps I'm letting my experience with the actually DMG colour my perspective but the first thing that rushed to my mind was Atul and Angie? Could it be? Anyway it was just a thought, no need to let out any spoilers. Speaking of the serial, WHAT on earth do the creatives think they're doing? Have they even heard of a thing called Character-sketches? These guys feel less like characters and more like cardboard cut-outs and their thought-processes not to mention frequent about-faces are totally beyond me.
Sorry sam,I meant to send you this comment immediately on reading the latest update, I honestly did. But then I checked my mail and found that I had a long and might I add wonderful letter from my Galahad (and thanks for the help in sorting out my feelings, I'm not sure, but I think I might have indeed finally found my personal knight, and boy was it unexpected and bewildering and frightening…it still is the last two. I never thought…anyway!) But the past few weeks have been an emotional roller-coaster, so much so that I found myself empathising with your characters much more than usual especially Muskaan. In fact, in this last update I felt as though she was echoing my own tumultuous thoughts in that scene after the RM phone call.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
great part! soo AR going out together soon! dude i want riddhima to tell teh truth to armaan..like NOW! lol and for the anjali issue to be cleared soon! i hope things get better soon! plz cont soon1
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
wow, sam! congo on the new tread! i'm soo happy for you!
fantastic update, i loved AR, AA, and RM scenes. i wonder how ridhima is going to answer Rahul.
thanks for the pm. please continue soon and do pm me.
mohini :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
I am the sort of person who leaves the best things for last....like the best thing to eat...would be the last thing on my plate...and then I would eat it slowly, and savour the taste.
Whenever some of my favourite stories are posted, I always categorise them in such a way, that the one I really want to read and love the most, would be the last one I would read.
Yoour story is ALWAYS the last one I read.
Hope that tell you how much I love your story.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Hiiii Sam!!
finally commenting....omg i loveeeeed the previous part and specially this part...it was soo cute...
I loved their dinner date...and now i really suspect ur confession "i'm not so good with romantic parts"!!😳....u were awesome👍🏼...the best thing is that it was not mushy mushy stuff at all....it was sooo adorable
and in this part i loved how armaan was struggling 2 find an excuse for his arrival in the early morning!!
u wont believe it but this time the part i liked the most was Atul ang Anji's convo......that guy is seriously sweetheart...he is the most sensible among all....i wouldn't be surprise if ur readers might start liking him over Armaan!😊
and raahoooool!!!! he's got a big mouth just like me!!🤔..... in the end he blurted out!! but partially it was true!
cant wait for Muskaan's response....but i liked raahul's character. as in every1...well almost every1 is struggling with thier feelings...but our Charlie Parker is something else u know😎...very much clear abt his feelings for muskaan
btw i finished reading Not Without my Daughter...it was with happy ending but still it was heart wrenching.....made me feel so sorry about women who are opresssed...oh i just wanted 2 ask u as u r currently in syria...and its also mostly Islaamic country (if i'm not mistaking!) ....are women also being opresses their? Is it same like Iran? i mean have u came across any woman like that?
oh and i also started reading The Prisoner of Zenda....gosh biased as i may sound but its more intresting then The Scarlet Pimpernel...i'm not saying that Scarlet Pimpernel was not a good book, it was awesome...but this book is just something else😍...even though i'm half way through its getting so interesting!
thank u so so soooooo much for reffering all these book...do reffer more in future....bcos when i go 2 the library i always get confused abt which book to read and always end up n getting some silly milly boonie type novel or something like that...but the books u referred were awesome...thnx once again..
hope u r enjoying ur weekend with ur better half! (do i even need 2 say that?😛) its really nice 2 get such surprizes!!
hope 2 c u after weekend😉


Edited by sharvi123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
heyy
congrats on ur second post for Maslow !--
gr8 part-- my fav part was the conversation between rahul and muskaan- and also the reference to maslow that atul made--
it looks like thing are slowly moving in the direction that i want them to-- ie rahu and muskaan cumin together and also armaan and ridz also i tink anji and atul mite hav a chance-- watsay ?!

oh and looks like u hav ur own romantic ammy-- i take it he came down for valentine's day-- well hope u hav a gr8 1 !!-- and if u get sum time (which i doubt given a certain sum1's presence)- do update ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

wel to start wit......i m a new reader.........

umnn.......wel i dnt find ma self worthy enuf to comment on ur stry.........
its jus so different frm d rest.......but nevertheless i will coment as i knw hw much appreciation means to a person..........
firstly a very huge round of applause for u......👏
d way u bring light to each n every character of d stry......,wats goin on in der mind...., wat dey thnk.......
i must say u r an awsm writer.......
d way u use ur words n frame dem in sentences.........d way u signyfy each n every character's prospective........
its simply fabulous...........
wat mre can i say......u knw i have read many ffs n novels till date..........n ya have gt to say dat u r 1 of dose few whose nxt part i wait eagerly for.........(no offence to other writers........)
wel nothng more to saay though..........please continue soon.........n keep up d good work..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
hey sam!
well...i'm new to ur ff..just read da whole thing in one go..
took me 3hours..!
where do i start from....
u r just toooooo gud...
every part brought a smile on my face...
da one liners...where do u get those frm??
wish i had a sense of humour like dat..really..lol!
can't wait for armaan n riddhima to get together..
lukin forward to ur next update...
plzzz update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
Ridhhima getting liberal with her apologies and admitting that Armaan is a "fine chap", albeit with her own "reservations"... Armaan sure is making headway with her 😆... taking her where he wants her to be. You draw out the characters reeaally well, Sam. In addition to Atul's pearls of wisdom, I look forward the repartees of these two, though more often than not Armaan is left with mud on his face, much of it I guess is due to a lack of effort or not trying hard enough. Guess he's going through the Rahul syndrome... in defeat lies victory 😆 Loved RM late night conversation too, and how Rahul rounds on Riddhima... and Armaan by association... at the end of his long wait for her and Muskaan. BTW, what's with the men in your ff... they make the rounds of their lady loves in the middle of the night 😆 inspired by real life anecdotes 😉

Have a good weekend, Sam!

Oh, and before I sign off, here's hoping that we get to see you on the 3rd thread of this story 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
SAM goodness congrats for the second thread!!!!!! you deserve every bit of appreciation!!!!! srsly this the one of the most memorable story that i ahv read heer on IF!!!!!!
finally angie speaks out her thoughts atleast to some extent AA were great in here esp atul aww but he's always so balanced wat's new?RM were cute although it's muskaan who needs some sense drilled inside her!!!! n AR were the best gosh armaan is losing it!!!!!!!but the flow nthe chracters everything just amazes me to no extent!!!! kudos sam !!!!keep up the good work looking forward to ur next!!!!! aahaa seems like rahul needs to keep his mouth shut!!!!
love ya
Rv

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