&time stood still:MayUr FF(Last Pt Upted ,pg.31) - Page 27

Originally posted by: nidz n

yaar really nice story ,nice ending....i alwayz luved ur ff...n now itz ending....will really miss ur ff....do cum soon wid ur new ff...take care n all da best 4 ur exam...

Originally posted by: ArpitaLuvsMayur

oh god i still cant stop laughing at the "younger members" 🤣

conversation b/w 2 of u 😆😆😆 my 13 not so Innocent lov.... sunita she got u there🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

I don't know about sunita, 😆😆 but Arpita I was laughing reading the

conversation b/w 2 of u 😆😆😆 my 13 not so Innocent lov.... sunita she got u there🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: cute2stay

Hi Sunita!! 🤗

So sorry for my late reply yaar I wanted to read your FF araam se. Omg this is your last part? 😭 I am gonna miss your FF SO much!! It was truely a treat reading it. But mann what an awesome ending Sunita. It was too perfect for words. As I've said this many times before you are such a blessed writer!! You capture all the perfect emotions with your words so effortlessly it's really enjoyable for the reader. Ok my favourite part from this part had to be the part when Nupur asks why do you want to marry me and then Mayank's answer! Omg *faints* That was such a perfectly described answer yaar. At first when I read Nupur's question I though O no this is gonna be a cliched response but no yaar! I was completely touched and let out a big happy sigh after reading that part!! That is exactly how I think of marriage/love- to be able to share good things and bad things in your life with the special someone. Like Nupur in today's epi said that when you want to tell each little thing about your life to someone that's when you know you love them. It was her pyaar ka funda can't remember which number. Lol, but ya back to your update I was truely mesmerized at that part so well written yaar! And aww you captured all of Nupur's worried/nervous emotions so well! I could totally imagine it in my head. And that's a big compliment for a writer na? When the readers can picture/ imagine your words that means you have succeeded!! So a big thumbs up to you for that!! And LOL at your PG13 version of their wedding night! 😆😆 That part was really sweet too yaar loved the last line especially, leaves you with a happy feeling. *takes a big long happy sigh* O mann Sunita your update left me feeling soo happy!! Thanks so much for writing such an awesome FF for us!! I truely loved reading it and am gonna miss it alot!! All the best for your exams and I hope to read more of your work in the future.

Take care,

Love,

Pallavi