&time stood still:MayUr FF(Last Pt Upted ,pg.31)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello guys, I m sunita. New to India Forums. I thought , i would try my hands at writing a fan fiction too. I hope u guys like it . Please let me kno , how it is as this is my first time. I really hope u guys would want to read on . Its about Mayank and Nupur :)



INDEX

Part-1>> Pg.1

Part-2 >> Pg.2

Part-3 >> Pg.4

Part-4 >> Pg.5

Part-5 >> Pg.7

Part-6 >>Pg.8

Part-7 >> Pg.10

Part-8 >> Pg.12

Part-9 >> Pg.15

Part-10 >> Pg.17

Part-11 >> Pg.19

Part - 12 >> Pg.21

Part-13 >> Pg.23

Part-14 >> Pg. 26 [SaJan Spl]

Part-15 >>> Pg.28

Part 16 >>>> Last Part >>> Page.31
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1118769&TPN=31
--------------&& Time Stood Still---------------
It was her first day in her new college. Nupur, was uncharecteriscally Scared and panicking. She was in a unfamiliar city, living with her cousins Dia and Uday , but knew nothing about them except for their names. Ofcoz , she had her sister Gunjan , but Nupur was sure her little sister was far more scared then she was. After a sleepless night, Nupur woke up early and got ready for a new start. When she went down to the kitchen for breakfast , Dia , Uday and Gunjan were already ready. Her nerves relaxed abit , knowing she wouldn't have to go there on her own. Half an hour later, they got to the campus and after a quick goodbye Nupur headed

towards her classroom.

She entered the classroom, there were about 30 people. All sitting comfortably, chatting to each other. Her eyes were searching for an empty seat when she spotted a guy sitting on the corner seat, reading a book. Unlike everyone else, he was on his own . She assumed he was a new student like herself and headed towards the empty seat beside him.

But before she could reach there , Uday Bhaiiyaa called out her name 'NUPURRR, here u are, I was looking for you everywhere'' . 'Great timing' she thought.A second later ,surprised at her own reaction .She sat down next to uday bhaiyya in the opposite corner. She could still see the guy .He was wearing an orange shirt with a white collared shirt from underneath. The orange colour radiating perfectly against his flawless skin , his hair was dark done in neat spikes . She couldn't help but stare. She could hear Uday Bhaiiya speaking but she wasn't listening at all.She could see nothing bt the guy with the orange shirt.

It wasn't only the fact that he was exceptionally good looking , also he was different. He looked different compared to the rest of the boys in the room. She would have expected a boy to be checking girls out and whisteling at them , and a lot of them were. Bt there he was , sitting in the corner , on his own , with a book in his hand. She didn't realize she was starting at him , until his dark eyes met hers. . Even for far , Nupur could see his shiney eyes. He looked away, but she couldn't.

Uday bhaiyya must have noticed she kept starting at the guy, so he nudged me. Without saying anything else. Uday grabbed her by her arms and started walking towards the guy. She could feel her Cheeks going Red. 😳😳 But , she couldn't speak. When they got the place wehre the guy was sitting , she saw he was even more beautiful from close-up. Without any more delay Uday Bhaiyya introduced her as ''Nupur, my cousin , she's new in town'' , the guy extended his hand for a hand-shake , and introduced himself.

'hi, I'm Mayank Sharma. Welcome to excel college''.His voice almost sounded like music.It was confident bt humble. His hands were warm and immediately sent tingles up her spine.😊She immediately noticed how his eyes smiled along wit his lips. His smile was honest, natural , angelic and almost magical.Mayank Sharma , she repeated to herself under her breath. Mayank Sharma. At that time , she dint realize that one name , that one person would change her life forever.

Less , then a minute later, the smile on Mayank's face came back again. This time, at a sight of someone walking towards the three of them. Nupur looked , to find this beautiful graceful girl walking towards Mayank .Her hair was perfect , with highlights. She was almost as beautiful as the boy himself. She did some hand gesture and immediately , Mayank said he had to leave. He said bye to the two of them , and ran excitedly towards the beautiful girl , in red dress.Her dress hugged her body tight, showing off her curves and perfect tanned legs. As Nupur watched him go . She looked at her own clothes. She ws wearing Salwaar Kameez , like she always did. One thing , brought a smile to her face. She just realized she was wearing Orange too. She looked towards the ceiling above and whispered "By God, Rab ne bana di Jodi" . Her attention , came back to the girl and she asked .

" Bhaiiyaa, who's that girl ?'

' Her name is Neha. She is beautiful isn't she ? She comes to college once in a while, to visit Mayank'

before she could say anything else. Uday , added ' we think its Mayank's Girlfren, he doesn't say much. He is a shy type of person'

Those simple words , immediately broke the smile on Nupur's face. She could hear her heart breaking. She's only met this guy, and he has a girlfren???. Its not possible, this is not what happens in movies. She felt a rush of emotions she had never felt before. It was a mixture of anger , jealousy and don't know wat else. She immediately blamed god , why couldn't I have met him before. She knew she was in love. In love with this guy ,she's seen for the first time today. In love with this guy, who had a girlfren. In love with Mayank Sharma.
Today , was the best day of her life and the worst as well.
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To be continued.....
I hope u guys liked it . Even thought its abit lonnng and boring lol

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Firstly Sunita if that's ur name welcome to IF as well as the MJHT forums
I'm Tanya u can call me Tina
about your fanfic it was absolutely fabulous dear👏
By god Love at first sight that too from Nupur is a different
topic itself. 😃 Waiting to know who that girl is and whether
it really is his girlfriend. Hope not
Do continue Writing
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Posted: 16 years ago
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VERY WELL WRITED!!!
I LIKE IT!!!
SWEET NUPUR
ITNI JALDI IN LOVE
HE HE HE!!!
CONT SOON
TAKE UR TIME!!!
SEE YAA
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OH SORRY I FORGOT
IM MONICA U CAN CALL ME MONU / MONA 4 FRIENDS!!!
AND WELCOME IN I-F AND MJHT FORUM!!!
U WILL ENJOY IT!!
AND HERE THERE ARE NICE AND SWEET PERSONS
AND ....
NICE TO MEET U!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi sunita welcum 2 IF.....im ananya
awesome ff yaar......luv at first sight nd dat too nupur??
amazing abt mayank having a girlfriend nd all......
nyway just outta curiosity.......did u get inspired by reading twilight coz Edward is kinda described d same way u described mayank.....

write soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks alot guys. its realli encouraging.

and ananyaa , about Twilight .I did read it . It wasn't realli directly inpsired bt i read alot of Stephanie Meyer , it must be the influence :)
bt ARen't all gorgeous guys described the same ?? DArk hair , nice smile . good skin ? hehe lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesum,...!!! luved it....do continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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welcome 2 IF n MJHT section sunitha
ur ff is damn interesting
do cont.. it soon
kavya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow !! amazing f-f !!
really like it !!!
finally a totally mayank - nupur f-f and also a very good f-f !!
thanks !
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hey.....welcome to IF 😊
would love to read what happens next.....do continue😃
-ayesha

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