&time stood still:MayUr FF(Last Pt Upted ,pg.31) - Page 25

heyyy cool endingggg hope u make sajan ff next time

awww..........i m so happy and sad at the same time.....this was absolutely the PERFECT ending to a beautiful fan fic....i cant believe it over though.....your an amazing writer...i cant even say how good you wrote out the emotions of the characters.....too good for words....i hope you do come up with a sequel......wow i still cant believe its over.....you did a fatastic job!

hi the last part was great dear but plz dont end it i want to read it after marriage also

There are some things that words can describe.. But there are some things that silence can describe better.. If I were to tell you how much I adore the way you write or how big a fan I am of yours, it would reduce things to a more mortal, material level - a level I don't want to come down to at this moment. For after reading this, I feel like I am floating over the hills and valleys, into some eternal land where love never ends..

The gradual way in which Mayank and Nupur's love story developed has finally reached its crescendo with their marriage. As you rightly said, marriage is perhaps the biggest moment in a girl's life. You expressed Nupur's memories with home, her love for her parents, her sister and of course, for Mayank, in a manner that is perfect. I wouldnt like to change a single moment, a single line. Mayank's Mom has always been the perfect Mom and I could feel the thoughts she went through when thinking abt her son's marriage.. mothers never come to terms with the fact that their little kids have grown up so much! Likewise for sisters..

The marriage itself and their intimate moments later were written about really delicately.. and were full of love.. You lent to the air a sense of eternity and happily-ever-after - something we all dream about..

This story has been a reassuring journey of love and pain, separation and togetherness, dreams and reality. I am really sorry for blaberring so much and you must be fed up of me by now. Guess its either the rainy ambience here or the sensitive state of mind I have been in lately, but few things touch me as much as your story has. Keep writing for ever and ever.. Good luck with your exams and come back with more stories. 😊

wohooooooooooooooooooooowwwwww
so great dear

just amazing.
plz yaar sammy aur gunjan ka bhi part likho na
thanks in advance

bye
sumi

Black Daughter
Thnx you. I will definitely do more writing in the summer - i will have plenty of time :)

iluvromance95
Thanks a million Arpita . I m soo glad it touched ur heart. I'm glad you liked Magic . I wanted to write Longer , but seeing that there are some really young members in this forum , i thoguht i'd better not go into details 😆😆

Cutemayur
yhh finally marriedd... cnt wait for them to get married in MJHT for real.. it wuld be soo funny. lolz i m glad it made you smile .and i will defo PM you if i do write a sequel. Thnk you :)

Amy Loves Rids
Thnx for the wish. i really need it. I gotta study so much lol

ruchimayur
🤗 THAnksss alottttttttttt ... thnks for reading each and every part i've written and encourageddd.. You are my first friend on IF :):) and btw im not going away anywhereee . ill still be around reading ur FFs ... so ill see you around .. love uuu

Senny
Thnx for the long comment😆 and ''READING YOUR FF WAS like listening to an enchanting sufi song who makes one go in a trance.''' <<<<< this is the biggest compliment anione can ever get ... thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a millionn . seriouslyyy u made my day 😊

Soneha :
Firstly beautiful name. Neha is my fav name ever 😛 and secondly thnx and i will surely try to make a sequel.

SanaSarwar
Thnx you is all i can dear .. so thnx you.. i feel so loved hehe

Shafoo
I was also thinking of SaJan one but because my fav are MayUr i can relate to them more so write better about them. If i write SaJan - i dnt think i could do justice to it .. bt i will seee may be il do a mixed one when i hv time .

Kiran1018
Thank you for your compliments 😛

all the best for ur exams dear, always loved ur parts

wow sunita wat an ending dat ws....it was simply MAGICAL....i hav no oder word....u made it look sooooo beautiful.....im kinda sad coz dis is d last part.....nyway best of luk fr ur exams