RM FF: Tu Zindagi Hai..updated pg47(30/05/11) - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
Reopened at the request of the author.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you very much! Appreciate it!!😊
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okk..Surprise Guyzz! I'm back with an update...! Dont know if anyone still reads this FF...and waits for an update...but I'm trying to gonna post and find out.

Chapter-11B

A year had passed by since Mansi left. After facing him and Muskaan in his life..she had lost all hope of making everything fine and leading a happy life with Rahul. The love she had seen in his eyes for Muskaan was true..was pure and more importantly it made him happy..gave him the support he needed when she left him.
She consoled herself that her love was happy with someone far more better than her..someone she could look up as an ideal partner for him. Thinking all this,she had left him once again...with those questions still remaining unanswered. Determined not to face him again and never allow him to know her secret...she went away...far away from him...promising herself never to come in between the two.
A year had passed by since Mansi had left his life. She had left..left him again...although this time he wasnt shattered...wasnt confused...and above all Muskaan was with him. But yet he didnt get that unfelt pain healed. Muskaan had never forced him to do anything...never asked anymore questions...and he was grateful for that. She was after all...his soul mate.
A year had passed by since Mansi had left their life. An unknown storm came and changed their lives without giving the sign of coming. She never expected that Mansi would come like this and stir all those hidden and unsearched feelings..emotions and love Rahul had in him. She did everything she could to make Rahul the same after Mansi had left. And her love had won again...

At The Gupta's Residence Around 8am

*Ting-Tong*

Raj opened the door to find a smiling Muskaan at the doorstep.

R(smiles)- Arre Muskaan! Tum yaha!? Itni subah subah..!?? Aao na..andar aao... Muskaan smiled and entered the house while Raj closed the door behind.
Mus(while walking inside the house)- Mujhe pata tha aap bhool jaayenge. Kya Bhaiya!
R(confused and walking behind her)- Main kya bhoola hoon!?
Muskaan rolled her eyes and placed her purse on the table and turned towards Raj. Confused as he was..he just stood there looking at a much excited Muskaan.
Mus(smiles)- Bhaiya!! Aaj Di ke orphanage mein naye classes ki inaugration hai. (Raj smiles hearing this)...Kya Bhaiya! Aap ye kaise bhool sakte hai...(Raj looks up and smiles)...
R(smiles)- Arre baba..main bhoola nahi hoon. But wo toh 12 baje shuro hone waala hai na...abhi toh sirf 8 hi baje hai.
Mus- Tchh..haan main jaanti hoon lekin maine socha ki hum Di ki thodi help kar de taiyaari mein. Toh main yaha aa gayi...aapko lene ke liye... Muskaan grins seeing a smiling Raj.
R(came closer and pinches her cheeks)- Par meri sweet si Muskaan...aapke Rahul ji abhi tak soye hue hai...unko pehle jaa kar uthaao...! Muskaan blushes hearing this...
Raj smiles seeing her blush and just hits her head softly. Leaving for a shower...he asked Muskaan to wake Rahul so that they could get to the orphanage. While going towards the washroom in the other room...his eyes fell on a piece of cloth beside the counter of the kitchen.
With curiosity..he went and picked it up. Scanning through it..he remembered that it was the same cloth with which they had decided to decorate their book. Oh My God...the book...Shitt...How could he forget abt it!! Suddenly,all that they had decided in Sydney of writing a book on Rahul-Muskaan...flashed in front of him.
He had almost forgotton abt it. With soo much happening in his and Moushmi's life...Mansi coming back in Rahul's life...the turmoil with which all the 4 had to go through...his job..her commitments...with everything flowing perfectly in the past 1 year...they hadnt even written the first chapter.
R(to himself)- Mujhe aaj Moushmi se baat karni padegi...
Muskaan entered the room with hesistation and nervousness. Her eyes scrolling along the room. She had never entered their room which was supposed to be her future room. Walking in further...she saw a sign board on the wall saying 'Welcome to R&R's Land'...below which was a collage of Rahul and Raj's photos all over. She smiled seeing it. Turning around..she saw a whole line of clothes and magazines next to Rahul's side of the bed. Shaking her head in disappointment she went close to the bed. And there he was.
Sleeping like a small baby...on his stomach with the comforter covering him completely. She stopped in her tracks and just stood there admiring his face. He was looking so cute..she thought and smiled. Coming out of her thoughts,she blushed and quickly bent down to pick up the mess on the floor. She arranged them perfectly and then turned towards Rahul...he was still sleeping.
Smilingly,she stepped in closer to his face. She smiled looking at him and touched his hair slightly. Whisperingly, she said his name...
Mus(softly)- Rahul...
Rahul moved abit and Muskaan withdrew her hand slowly. He slowly opened his eyes to see Muskaan soo close to him. Muskaan moved away and got up from the position. Rahul realised that it wasnt just a dream and Muskaan was ACTUALLY in his room. He quickly got up and shockingly said:
Rah-Muskaan..tum..yaha..!? His words trailed out when both realised that Rahul was sitting up without a shirt on. Muskaan's eyes widened and she quickly turned away while Rahul hastily buttoned his shirt on. Nervous and scared as she was..a blush crept upon her cheeks. Her heart rate raced every second..closing her eyes slightly she started to fiddle with her dupatta. Rahul on the other hand got up from his bed and was admiring Muskaan fiddle with her dupatta. Smilingly to himself,he moved in closer and stood right behind her.
Mus(shyly)- Wo...main...umm..wo..Raj Bhaiya ne kaha tha ki..aap..aapko utha loon...wo..hum..humhe Di ke orphanage ki inaugration mein jaana hai...toh isliye..unki help karne ke...She gasped slowly when she felt Rahul trailing her arm with his. Making her difficult to speak or react,he caught her waist steathily making no room between the two. Her back hit his chest and she let out a small sigh. Rahul slowly made his way up and whispered in her ears:
Rah- Tumhe pata hai tum jab aise sharmaati ho toh bahut cute lagti hoon...Muskaan blushed hard. This close proximity with Rahul was never exhibited by her..and she couldnt breathe. Rahul felt him loosing himself in her. Her fragrance was intoxicating to him. He pushed her hair to one side and came in closer. Muskaan felt him doing so and she closed her eyes. She wanted to stop him...but her heart was denying it.
Mus(whispers)- Rahull..please...He smiled feeling her breathe heavy. Closing the distance..he kissed the side of her neck softly...which made Muskaan catch her breath. Rahul made her turn towards him and smiled. Seeing her with closed eyes and a nervous look on her face...he kissed her forehead.
Opening her eyes,she looked up to find Rahul smiling at her. Tears formed in her eyes clearly depicting the trust she had in him while his stating the love and respect he had for her. Both eyes locked with each other. Love and trust all the way between the two. She blushed and without thinking just hid her face in his chest. Hugging him tightly,she felt relieved to find his love in Rahul. He smiled seeing her cuddle in his arms. Responding to the hug...he held her close while she closed her eyes feeling heaven in the arms of the person she loves the most...
Okk...so heres the update. This FF had been closed down due to not updating at the proper time...I requested the FF section Dev Team..to open them. I'm on a break from university...so I would been updating a few chapters.
If anyone is there reading...comments are always welcomed.
-surbhi😊
Edited by arvanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read the last few parts and they were awesome!!😃
nice to see that u updated this ff.😛
thanks for the pm!!😊
do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
i just read all the parts.. beautiful! pm me when u continue... love rm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweeetie...
i am missed u so much...
i am verrry glad u updated it...
these days no one updates and i get bored...
i love you
it was as usual awesome...
THANKS ton for the update...
do it again sooon


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lovebapu18

just read the last few parts and they were awesome!!😃

nice to see that u updated this ff.😛
thanks for the pm!!😊
do continue soon...

Thanks Radhika. I'm glad myself that I updated finally.😆
Glad you liked it. Appreciate it
Your most welcome for the PM!
-surbhiSmile
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

i just read all the parts.. beautiful! pm me when u continue... love rm!

Thank you very much. Welcome to this FF. Glad you liked it. Appreciate it!
Will definitely PM you once I update!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR

sweeetie...

i am missed u so much...
i am verrry glad u updated it...
these days no one updates and i get bored...
i love you
it was as usual awesome...
THANKS ton for the update...
do it again sooon


Awww..Apoorva..I missed you too!!! I missed updating this FF too. Actually the thing is..many readers of this FF...dont reply..or rather havent replied for like many updates who used to previously. So its kinda discouraging. But I'll definitely be updating it at a much better rate than expected.
Thanks that you still wait for my updates. I really appreciate it. Its because of readers like you that I want to update this FF even more.
Glad you liked the update. The next update is soon.
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great!!
Thanks for the PM

Thanks Radhika. Glad you liked it. Appreciate it!
-surbhi😊

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