RM FF: Tu Zindagi Hai..updated pg47(30/05/11) - Page 30

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Posted: 15 years ago

great part!!

thanks for the pm!!
continue soon....can't wait...
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Posted: 15 years ago
1.itna pyaara gift (awwwww the kiss was too cute)☺️☺️☺️
2. di aur bhaiya ek hogaye ( wohooo me soo happy for RaMu)
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3. tumney mujhey hug kiya ( RM 😍
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lovely update surbhi.i love the simplicity in RM relation 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Friends,
I'm extremely sorry for the delay...I promise I would have the part put within a week's time....Its just that I'm hell busy with studies and college.....that I hardly get time to come online....once in 2 weeks maybe.....and now from friday I would be shifting to the hostel....so,have to pack and all......but still I would make it up for all ur waitings and would post a part real soon.....!!
Till then...thank u all from the bottom of my heart for waiting......seriously....!!!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arvanu

Hey Friends,

I'm extremely sorry for the delay...I promise I would have the part put within a week's time....Its just that I'm hell busy with studies and college.....that I hardly get time to come online....once in 2 weeks maybe.....and now from friday I would be shifting to the hostel....so,have to pack and all......but still I would make it up for all ur waitings and would post a part real soon.....!!
Till then...thank u all from the bottom of my heart for waiting......seriously....!!!!
-surbhi😊



Awww its okay i understand😳 will wait for a dhamakedaar update😉

Luv u
nadz😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 9A

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Present:

Sector V,DLF-Gurgaon:
Waking up from the noise of the door bell ringing the third time,Mansi was really frustated.It was 3'o clock in the afternoon and a sunday-clearly her sleeping time.Finally,giving it all up she went to the door and opened it:

M(surprised)-Anjie!!?? tum..??

Anjali was standing there with a serious and worried expression which made Mansi tensed.

M-Anjie!! kya hua?? pareshaan lag rahi ho....!!

A(looked at her)-Mansi..wo...

Mansi noticed she hadnt even invited Anjali inside.

M-arre...tum bahar kyun khadi ho...andar aao na....!!

Anjali smiled slowly and stepped in.Mansi closed the door and made Anjali sit on the sofa comfortabaly.Sitting next to her on the chair,Mansi sensed something was seriously wrong...Anjali wasnt looking herself...she was definitely upset.

M-Anjie..!! bata na..kya hua..??

A(with slight tears)-Mansi....wo yaha hai....

M(shocked)-arre...tu ro kyun rahi hai....aur kaun hai yaha..??

A(gulped)-Ra...Rah..Rahull...!!

Mansi looked dissapointed and sad...She didnt want to remember any bit of him....she always believed that whatever happened in the past has to go....she had learnt to live with it..But now,on a sudden mention of the name she cared for the most...had made her upset and angry for over 7 days now..She couldnt sleep properly after that day when Anjali accidentally mentioned Rahul to be here..in the same city where she was living.She didnt intend to meet him nor have any contact...because she knew the consequences...but still her heart desired him....desired all those days to come back.....

A-Mansi!!

Mansi came out of her thoughts upon hearing her name.

A-tu theek toh hai na??

M(smiles slightly)-haan..Anjie...main theek hoon...

A(choked)-tu...ek..baar Rahul se mil kyun nahi leti.......

Mansi immeditaley looked at her with a shocked,angry and frustated expression.Getting up from her chair,she poured all her frustation on Anjali..

M(loudly)-Anjie!!!!!! teri tabiyat toh theek hai.....tujhe pata hai na ki itne saalon mein kya-kya ho chuka hai mere aur uske beech mein........aur jo maine uske saath kiya uske baad toh he wouldnt even want to see my face......main uski zindagi barbaad nahi karna chahti.......

A-lekin Mansi....jo kuch bhi hua usmein galti meri thi....tu toh usse sab kuch.........

Anjali was cut-in between...

M(angry)-Anjie!!!!!!! bas kar.....maine tujhe hazaar baar samjhaya hai ki apne aap ko blame karna band kar...teri koi galti nahi.......Rahul ka kissa khatam ho chuka hai.....I dont mean anything to him now.......and....

A(firm)-and what abt u?? kya tu usse bhula chuki hai...??

Mansi looked surprised and just shifted her gaze the other side.Anjali knew whatever was going in Mansi's heart.Mansi cried softly..tears clearly reflecting in her eyes.Anjali jerked her forcefully and held her shoulders tightly.Shaking her slightly,she asked helplessly..

A(sad)-tell me u dont love him......??

Mansi burst into louder sobs and Anjali looked shocked.Hugging her instantly,Anjali patted her back and shushed her quietly.

M(between her sobs)-main...uss...usse..pyaar..karti hoon Anjie......le..le...lekin....ma..main..uski..zindagi...phir se...barbaad nahi...kar sakti....he deserves all...the...happiness......he doesnt deserve me.......he doesnt deserve me.......Saying so,she broke into more and much more louder cries....Anjali couldnt see her friend's condition like this....and decided to atleast take a chance...

A(thinking)-nahi Mansi..I'll try atleast once....chahe tum dono saath na ho lekin tum dono ke beech mein jo galt-faimi meri wajah se aayi hai..usse atleast door karni ki main ek koshish toh kar hi sakti hoon...........

Ghosh's Residence:
Mus-Diii....darwaza kholna please!!! main kitchen mein hoon
......Muskaan screamed from the kitchen to Moushmi who was cleaning up their room.

M-uffff.....ye Muskaan bhi na...cupboard ki kya haalat kar di hai.......(screaming back)..haan..kholti hoon......She kept the duster on the dressing table and went to open the door.

M-pata nahi iss waqt kaun hoga..!!??

Mus(teasingly)-dekhna kahi Raj bhaiya toh nahi.....Moushmi stopped in her tracks...and glared at Muskaan who burst out laughing. After that incident,Muskaan had confronted Moushmi abt it....and same goes for Raj-Rahul....and RM came to know everything abt the couple.And now,Muskaan wouldnt leave a moment to tease Moushmi...the same way Moushmi did when she came to know abt a special person in Muskaan's life.

M(shaking her head helplessly)-Muskaan!!!! tu na sachi.......With that she opened the door to find a salesman standing at the door.

M(smiles)-ji kahiye...!!

''Maam..kya ye Moushmi Ghosh ka ghar hai..??''

M(smiles)- ye Moushmi aur Dr.Muskaan Ghosh ka ghar hai...ji kahiye..!!??

''Maam wo main Country Car Company se aaya hoon.....ye blue colour ki Honda Accord aapki hai..??''

M(confused)-ji..meri behen ki hai...ummm..kyun..??

''Wo..hum iss gaadi ko inspect karna chahenge...''

M(confused further)-dekhiye bhaisaab....hum bahut shareef log hai...ye inspection kissi aur ke ghar pe jaake kijiye ga...

''Maam..ye bas ek routine test hai...just for ur security''

M(frustated)-acha.!!.abhi tak toh maine aise kissi test ke baare mein nahi suna hai.....

Hearing Moushmi screaming,Muskaan came and stood beside her..

Mus(confused)-kya baat hai Di..?? aur ye kaun hai..??

Moushmi narrated the entire incident...

Mus-dekhiye....aapko galat-faimi hui hai.......hum....

"Maam aapne shayad gas pe kuch rakha hai...jalne ki smell aa rahi hai..''

Muskaan gets a shock..and quickly ran to the kitchen..

Mus-mera cake.......!!

Moushmi smiled at her little sister..growing up soo fast...

"Maam please its just for few mins.''

M(highly frustated)-acha theek hai..chaliye.....(screaming to Muskaan)..Muskaan main inhe gaadi dikha ke aati hoon.....

Mus(screaming back)-theek hai Di....

Picking up her dupatta,Moushmi led the salesman to their car....On the way,Moushmi noticed the salesman staring at her and smiling.She got nervous and uncomfortable...

"Maam..aapki aankhein bahut sundar hai''

M(shocked)-jiii...!!??

She turned to the salesman and rolled her eyes.

M-dekhiye apne kaam se matlab rakhiye.....

''Aap se hi toh matlab hai''

Moushmi sensed him coming closer and she got tensed and nervous...

M(scared)-dekhiye....wahi rukh jaaiye...nahi toh main...chillaungi......

The salesman grinned and took a step forward.Moushmi closed her eyes and prayed to God.

M(in whispers)-Raj..!! tum kaha ho..??

The salesman smiled...

''Aapke saamne..''

The salesman was none other than Raj..he took off his beard and spectacles.Moushmi opened her eyes to find Raj standing just a few inches from her smiling to her.

Moushmi got shocked and surprised.

M(open mouthed)-Raj!!!!! Tummmm....!! She got angry and slapped him hard on his arm...

R(shocked)-Oucchhh!!!!! Arre ye kya!!!

M-tumhe sharam nahi aati.....mujhe itna darra diya.....

R(smiles)-aur darr ke bhi tumne mera hi naam liya na.....

She smiled and a blush crept upon her face because of the nearness she was exhibiting with him.

M(looking down)-tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.??

R(smiles)-tumse milne aaya hoon..aur kya..!!

Moushmi looked up and smiled.Raj took a step close to her and her smile faded..replaced by nervousness.

M-Rajj!!

Raj smiled and slowly touched her cheeks.Moushmi gasped.

R-tum bahut achi lag rahi ho.....

Moushmi smiled.Raj brought her lips close to her cheeks...

M(nervous)-Raj!! pleasee...koi dekh lega.....!! Raj smiled on seeing her closed eyes and red cheeks.He slowly moved towards her forehead and kissed it gently.

Moushmi opened her eyes and blushed.Without saying anything,she left.

R-Moushmi!!!

Smiling in her heart,she stopped mid-way but didnt dared to turn.Raj went close to her and hugged her from back.Moushmi's heart beat went fast.

M(blushing)-Raj!!!Muskaan dekh legi...please chodo...!!

R(whispered in her ears)-chinta mat karo..I'm sure Rahul uska khayal rakh raha hoga..jaise main tumhara.......

Moushmi turned to face him slightly in a surprised manner.Raj smiled and Moushmi understood everything.With smiling faces and love depicting from their eyes,they stood still there....arms in arms...!!

Back in the house,Muskaan was busy cleaning the kitchen.

Mus-Moushmi Di theek kehti hai...main jab bhi cake banati hoon toh poora kitchen uthal-puthal ho jaata hai...tchhh...!!

She washed the last bit of vessels kept in the sink and turned:

Mus-ahhhhhhhhhhh.........

Rah-arre chilla kyun rahi ho.......!!

Mus(shocked)-Rahul!!!!! Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai!!!??

Rah(smiles)-wohi jo Raj bhaiya kar rahe hai.....

Mus(confused)-Raj bhaiya!!?? kaha hai..??

Rah-bahar Moushmi Di ke saath.......

Mus-bahar!!?? She thought and figured out that the salesman was none other than Raj...A smile crept upon her face....while Rahul made himself comfortable on the counter and grabbed an apple.

Mus-wo toh theek hai lekin aap yaha kya kar rahe hai..!!?? Muskaan asked him with her hands on her waist and Rahul took a bite of the apple.

Rah(smiles)-unhe company dene chala aaya...Muskaan smiled and rolled her eyes.She kept certain things in the fridge when she heard a song playing.She turned to see Rahul playing the song on his phone.She looked at him with a questioning expression.Smilingly,he went close to her while the song played:

Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

Pehli Pehli Baar Hai

Muskaan blushed and looked down.As Rahul stepped closed to her,she went a step back.
Jaan Ke Bhi Anjaana(She turned away and smiled)

Kaisa Mera Yaar Hai(He came close to her and touched her hand from the back)

Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

Pehli Pehli Baar Hai(She got nervous and ran away from there)

She hid behind the bookshelf and looked at him in between the books...while Rahul smiled.
Uski Nazar Palkon Ki Chilman Se Mujhe Dekhti...Uski Nazar...
Muskaan blushed and averted her gaze.Rahul came from the other side and caught her hands.Blushing badly,Muskaan tried to free herself but couldnt.He pinned her to the bookshelf and smiled.
Uski Haya Apni Hi Chahat Ka Raaz Khulti
(He made her look up in his eyes)..Uski Haya...
She got lost in his eyes and Rahul smiled.Coming closer,she kissed his forehead and was about to run when Rahul held her hand.
Chupke Kare Jo Wafa Aisa Mera Yaar Hai...
He pulled her such that her back was towards his chest and she landed in his arms.He hugged her tightly from back.Muskaan smiled shyly and leaned on his shoulder and closed her eyes.Rahul smiled and held her close promising her that he would never leave her.
Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

Pehli Pehli Baar Hai.................................................................

Hope You All Liked It!!
Please post ur comments/suggestions/criticizm or simply click the 'like' button...!!
-surbhi😊
Edited by arvanu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
GREAT part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part...loved the song sequenceeeeeeeeeeeeee! thank u soo much for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG wats with mansi and anji ...this going really interesting .....hahah raj is soo naughty ....aww the song sequence was so cute ...lovely update. thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Surbhi.........dear u r back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the update madly.....
Main roj sochti thi when will u update & i loved everything abt it....So cuute Raj becum salesman & came....& RM ka song..pehla pehla pyaar OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MAnsi & Rahul??? & Anje ??? O god......there is a big really big twist....i am waiting........
Thanks 4 pm & Thanks atoh 4 updating.....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Radhika....Thanks dear....glad u liked it...really appreciate it and ur most welcome for the PM!!! Will continue soon...!!
@Deepali....Thank u soo much...really appreciate it and glad u liked the part and the song sequence....will continue soon and ur most welcome for the PM!!
-surbhi😊
Edited by arvanu - 15 years ago

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