RM FF: Tu Zindagi Hai..updated pg47(30/05/11) - Page 27

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Present:

Two Hours Later At The Basu's And The Ghosh's Residence:

*Ting Tong*

The doorbell rang the third time.Moushmi who was busy in the kitchen preparing Muskaan's favourite cake,got irritated.For the past 15mins,she had been searching for the notebook in which she had written the recipe down but couldnt find it.Frustated completely over the issue and messy as her hands and a part of her hair were filled with flour and chocolate.Giving up finally,she sighed and went to open the door.

M(to herself)-aaj Sunday ke din bhi koi chain se nahi rehne deta......(the doorbell rang the 5th time)..ufff..yaar aa rahi hoon...kaun hai batameez...She opened the door to find Raj standing there with a confused smile,looking at her condition from top to bottom.Looking at him with an embarrassed expression,she called him in.Closing the door behind,she walked and asked him to take a seat.Raj made himself comfortable on the sofa while Moushmi excused herself to change her not-so-great condition.She went into her room and quickly changed into something more suitable and less messy while Raj smiled remembering her shocked and nervous expression when she opened the door.

After cleaning up the mess,Moushmi came out wearing a yellow churidaar looking elegant and sweet.She sat opposite Raj and smiled at him.Stunned,as he always is looking at her,he smiled back deeply.

R-kuch bana rahi thi kya??

Moushmi looked up and smiled at him.

M-haan wo aaj Sunday hai na..toh har Sunday ko main Muskaan ki favourite chocolate cake banati hoon....

R(smiles)-toh issliye wo darwaaze pe tum....

Moushmi gave an embarrassed smile.

M-haan....acha ye sab chodo...tum kuch piyoge..??

R-nahi abhi kuch nahi...baad mein dekhenge.....Clasping his hands together,Raj was nervous.Never in his life-time,he had been in this situation.He could feel the nervousness in his heart...he didnt know why but it was there.....he trusted Moushmi completely....but still,he was scared.Moushmi noticed his worried expression and smiled.

M-Raj!!aagar tumhe nahi batana...toh main tumhe force nahi kar rahi....jab bhi tumhaara dil chahe tum mujhe bata dena....hmmmm.......main tumhare liye paani laati hoon...Smiling,she walked pass him to the kitchen when suddenly he took hold of her hand.Shocked and nervous as she was,Raj got up and said:

R-nahi Moushmi...main tumhe aaj hi sab kuch bataunga....abhi......Looking in his eyes,she could clearly see determination and confidence and a smile upon his face.Slowly,she removed her hand from his grip and smiled sweetly.They both made way back to their seates and Moushmi waited for him to start the story.

R(sighs)-kabhi kabhi Moushmi kuch aise haadse ho jaate hai zindagi mein jiske hone se hume lagta hai Bhagwaan itna patthar dil kaise ho sakta hai......kaise ek chote se masoom bacche ko tanha iss duniya mein chod sakta hai......He turned to look at Moushmi with a blank expression.Getting up,he started walking towards the window and continued:

R-humaara khandaan delhi ke ameero mein se ek hai...mere papa iss desh ke top businessmen mein se ek hai...unka kaam aur paisa hi unke liye sab kuch tha...uss raat bahut tez baarish ho rahi thi...main apne ma-papa ke saath ghar pe khel raha tha.....ki tabhi achanak kissi ne darwaaza khatkhataya......main tab 5 saal ka tha.....maa ne darwaza khola toh ek chota sa 2 daal ka baccha khada tha.......rote hue wo meri maa ke gale lag gaya......

Moushmi was listening carefully and silently.

R-maa pehle toh hairaan hui ki kaun aise kissi chote se bacche ko sadak par chodkar chala gaya.....phir unhone uss chote se bacche ko apni goad mein liya aur darwaza band kar diya....(now facing to Moushmi)..wo baccha Rahul tha,Moushmi...........

Moushmi was stunned and didnt know what to say.Looking at her confused and shocked face,he continued:

R-Rahul ek anaat hai,Moushmi....wo ek orphanage mein rehta tha jahan ke founder ne uska naam Rahul Khanna rakha tha kyunki wo usse apna beta maante the......par ek din unki biwi ne uss bacche ko sadak par chod diya...kyunki wo usse nafrat karti thi....bina maa-baap ka baacha...sadak pe bhooka-pyaasa....na jaane kab mere paas aa gaya.......maa aur maine tai kiya ki hum isse humaare ghar mein hi rehne dege.....kuch saal aise hi beet gaye.....aur main aur Rahul kareeb aate gaye....wo harr cheez ke liye mujhep depend karta aur main uske bina ek pal nahi jee pata......He stopped and felt a lump in his throat.Moushmi felt it too and her eyes became moist.

R-sab kuch theek chal raha tha....hum sab khush the.....par papa nahi......papa wanted to get rid of Rahul......he hated him...because he was a orphan...Moushmi looked up clearly shocked.She had never met Raj's parents and yet never thought that his father could think like this.Clearly Moushmi understood why he doesnt like to speak abt his father.

R-wo unke liye ek daag tha unki izzat par......the famous Gupta's ki society mein ek reputation thi....(sarcasm clearly in his tone)..huhh......jisse Mr.Gupta kabhi koi compromise nahi karte.......lekin meri liye Rahul mera bhai tha....mera sabse pyaara bhai aur dost.......main usse bahut pyaar karta tha aur hoon......isliye maine 17 saal ki umar se apna ghar chod diya...........Moushmi was shocked out of her wits.She could feel the anger and pain in Raj's voice and she could see them now in his eyes.He wasnt looking at her...but down at the floor..still she could feel the tears in his eyes.

R-main nahi chahta tha ki main apne bhai ko kho doon isliye maine uski zimedaari leke...apna ghar chod diya.....maa mere saath thi but she couldnt leave papa.....so she made arrangements for me living with one of her relatives in Delhi.....but I didnt agree to it....mujhe khud apne pairon par khada hona tha.....ek bhai ko sahi education aur principles deni thi.....isliye I started writing in newspapers.......and gradually I became a writer......writing was my passion from school days.....and then I turned it into my living......main nahi chahta tha ki Rahul ko kabhi bhi pata chale ki wo mera asli bhai nahi hai......main......(his voice was cracking)...main...usse bahut pyaar karta hoon....Moushmi.......bahut pyaar karta hoon usse........He looked up in her eyes first time in the entire conversation.Tears were flowing through their eyes......both of pain and anguish.......Raj could no longer control and he broke down into huge cries.Without understanding or knowing what she was doing,Moushmi ran towards him and just engulfed him in her arms tightly.Raj hugged her back tightly and suppressing all his fears in her arms while Moushmi was silently crying and waiting for his sobs to subside.

Outside Sanjeevani:

"Dr.Muskaan..Dr.Muskaan''

Muskaan turned back.She was abt to get into her car and go home when she heard her name being called.

Mus-ji..Dr.Mansi!!kya baat hai??

Ma-ji wo Maam...aap apna mobile andar bhool gayi thi......ye lijiye...

She handed Muskaan her cell and smiled.

Mus-ohh..thank you soo much Dr.Mansi..

Ma-koi baat nahi Maam...waise ispe 10 missed calls aa chuke hai....

Mus-ji???

Ma(giggles slightly)-ji wo jab main aapke cabin mein aayi na...toh aapka mobile bajj raha tha......and I thought you had left...but I saw ur car from the window...so I checked and saw 10 missed calls from.....

Mus(curious)-from??

Ma(evil smile)-koi ladka Rahul.........

Muskaan looked embarrassed.

Mus-ahemm...wo...ummm.....

Ma(teasingly)-aapke bhai hai!!

Mus(in utter shock.immediately shouted)-NAHI!!!!!

Mansi laughed out aloud looking at Muskaan's shocked expression.

Ma-main toh mazaak kar rahi thi Maam.....waise kaun hai ye Rahul??

Mus(blushing slightly)-wo..actually...umm..mere fiance hai....

Ma-ohhhhhhhh........i seee.....toh unse baat kar lijiye.....main jaa rahi hoon....Giggling,Mansi left the spot and Muskaan smiled.

Muskaan got into her car and called up Rahul.

Rah-hello?

Mus-hello...Rahul..

Rah-haaye...unke moo se humaara naam kitna acha lagta hai.......Muskaan smiled and blushed.

Mus-Rahul..please aap ye natak band karege.....aur kya baat hai...phone kis liye kiya tha.....

Rah-arre main apni honi waali patni ko aise hi phone nahi kar sakta........koi wajah honi zarori hai.....

Muskaan blushed harder.

Rah-acha acha..ab itna mat sharmaao....mujhe das minute mein Nirulas mein milo......

Mus(shocked)-kya????

Rah-chilla kyun rahi hoon...sirf milne ko hi toh keh raha hoon....

Mus-nahi nahi.....main ghar jaa rahi hoon...kal milege.....

Rah-Muskaan please yaar......subah se tumse mila nahi hoon......main ghar kaise jaa sakta hoon...neend bhi nahi aayegi theek se.......Muskaan smiled hearing all this.

Mus-Rahul!!!!

Rah(pleadingly)-Please na Muskaan......pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!

Mus(smiles)-ufff...Rahul..aap na.....acha theek hai.....main aati hoon.......

Rah(excited)-excellent!!!! main tumhara intezaar karunga.......Muskaan smiled and cut the call.

Next update most probably will be given by me..so,stay tuned for it!!!!!!

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Loved how Muski said "Nahi!" when Mansi was like "app ka bahi hain?" lol...Cute part..continue soon...