Sajan+Mayur FF *part9-page11* - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nupur786

nice update!!! But pliz can u make ur parts longer .thanx.bye

soz .. tht was just a quick part tht came in ma mind
buh i'll cum up wiv long parts ....
thnx
Ox
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
GREAT PART
LOVELY SAJAN MAYUR
CANT WAIT 4 SEE (READ) SAMMY JEALOUS
AND MAYUR CUTEY SCENES
WILL WAIT 4 NEXT UPDT
CONT SOON WHEN AS POSSIBLE
SEE YAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

eagerly waiting for the next part continue soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hello
am sooo sorry for the late reply
here's ma 8th part --> a rather long one
so quickly grab a cup of coffee to enjoy this one 😃
IN THE PARTY
U - arre yaar benji ... aaj mera bad luck hi kharab hain
B - dude ? what yu talkin bout ?
U - arre yaar .... mera matlab hain ... aaj koi bhi ladki mere saath dance karne to maanii nahin rahi hai !!
B - haha ... isme nai baat kaunsi hain
U - tu jaane de yaar ! main jaake samrat se madad leta hoon ...
B - Achcha hain ! kamse kam tujhse chutkara to milega
SCENE SHIFTS TO SAJAN
S - your highness ! aap kuch legin ?
G - nahin samrat .. main thik hoon
S - achcha to yeh batao ki meri party kaisi lagi ?
G - bohat acchiii !!
S - main to sirf party deta hoon gunjan .... achi to tum use banati ho !
the sajan music is played in the background !!
SCENE SHIFTS TO MAYUR
M - hey !!
N - oh hi mayank
M - tum thik ho ?
N - haan !
mayank -> to himself - * yo dude ... hello , hi se kaam nahin chalega ! warna pyaar kya ... wo teri dost bhi nahin banegi*
M - erm nupur
just then dia comes in
D - hey nupur !!
mayank -> is kabab mein haddi ko bhi abhi aana tha !!!
D - haan ! kuch kaha tumne mayank ?
M - nahin ! nahin to ! !
JUST THEN SAMRAT HOLDS OF A MIKE
S - goodevenin everyone
and welcome to samrat's party ... aaap sab yahan aaye .. thankyou very much
alll the girls are going fidda over him
gunjan doesnt seem to like it
S - to kya kehte ... kuch masti ho jaaye ????
everyone goess haaaaannn !!!! --> shoutin out loud
to phir chalo lets play a game
ham sabko ek ek number is bowl se chose karna hai ... --> he shows everyone the bowl
ladke blue coloured wale
ladkiya red coloured wale
aur jiska bhi number jiske saath bhi aaya will be the dancing jodi for the rest of the evening !!!
everyone shouts --> yayay !!!!!
S - awrit then ! lets starrt
they all start to pick numbers
M - nupur tum nahin chose karogi ?
N - main ! main kaise ... main nahin !
M - oh ! cmon nupur... bohat maza aaega ... plz
gunjan comes in and also forces nupur to participate in this
and finally nupur does agree
they all have finished and now have to loook for their number partner
dia has the number 67 and is waving it right up !
just then a boy comes to her ... he is none another than UDAY
U - hey dia partner .... to chale ?
Dia smiles and then accompanies him
nupur sees her number ... mayank sees his number
they both look at eachoder and say 13
mayank is happy buh nupur is a bit nervous
mayank walks up to nupur and gives his hand towards nupur ... and looks her in her eeyes !
she looks at him and then holds his hand with a bih of excitement, weirdness and a bih of tension !
just then the light dims and focuses right on mayank and nupur
the music is played : -
mayank -
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai
nupur -
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua
they come forward and hold eachoder's hand and start to dance
Mayank -
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai
Nupur -
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua
Mayank lifts Nupur Up
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda
Mayank -
Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga
Nupur -
Hooo
Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua
Both TOgether
Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda
she unintentionally comes close to mayank !
the song ends up with mayank sitiing on the dance floor on one knee and nupur on it
just like it ended in the talent parade episode
half of the people are schocked to see such a rocking chemistry of mayank and nupur
they cant get theiR eyes off from them especially nupur
nupur sees everone prasing her and therefore gives a very polite smile !!!!!
she looks at mayank with a THANKYOU Look on her face !
samrat and gunjan come up on the stage !!!
S - hey dude !! what an amazing dance
M - thanks samrat
G - nupur ! mujhe nahin pata tha ki tum itna romantic dance bhi kar lo gi
gunjan looks at mayank with a " kya baat hai " look on her face ... as she knows why mayank is doing all this -- > * for the bet *
mayank and nupur start to walk when evryone starts to crowd them !!!!!
SCENE SHIFTS TO UDAY
U - ok ! to humne abhi abhi rab ne bana di jodi 2 ka trailer dekha !
everyone starts to laugh
U - aab baari hain paper dancing ki
to ab sabhi boys apne aakhon par patti bande ge aur apni ladkiya band ankhon se chune ge
samrat is also in it ... so he ties a patti with other few boys
they start to walk infront where the girls are standing !
and to his chance he grabs onto gunjan's hand !
G - samrat ... tumhe kaise pata chala ki main yahan khari hhoon ?
S - tum jahan bhi khari rahi ho ! mujhse kabhi nahin bach paogi
they laugh and then go on to the dance floor
samrat puts the paper and the music is played : -
Thirkit Thana Thirkit Thana Thiri Thiri Thana Lets Dance
Thirkit Thana Thirkit Thana Thiri Thiri Thana Lets Dance

S - gunjan ... plz ... paper ke bahar mat jaana
G - samrat !!
S - haha ... sorry ...
lekin tum kha kha ke itni moti hogayi ho ... ki main kya karu
G - samrat !!!!!!!!!!!!😲 .... choru gi nahin main tumhe !!!!
S - pehle pakro to sahi
MUSIC STOPS !
no one gets out
the paper is folded
Hai Muscular, Hai Popular, Hai Muscular, Hai Popular, Spectacular He'S A Bachelor
Paapu Ki Gaadi Tez Hai, Pappu Kudiyon Mein Craze Hai
Pappu Ke Aankhen Light Blue, Pappu Dikhtha Angrez Hai
Rado Ki Ghadi Haathon Mein Perfume Gucci Waala
MUSIC STOPS
Samrat and Gunjan are sTil on the paper
two of the couple get out
two more get out
now there are just three couples left
But Pappu Cant Dance Saala….Pappu Cant Dance Saala
Pappu Nach Nahin Saktha
When I Am Gonna See You With The Dance In The Hall
When I Am Gonna See You With The Dance Sir!!

MUSIC STOPS
no one gets out
the paper now is vey small
gunjan is standing on samrat's feet and is finding very hard to move
they are extremely close with samrat's hand on gunjan's waist and gunjan's hand on his shoulders
S - tum thik ho na gunjan ?
G - abhi kuch mat bolo ! warna hum owt ho jaenge
MUSIC STOPS
the other couple was is not out but just as the music is bout to be played the boy goes owt of the paper and they get owt
NOW ITS JUST SAMRAT AND GUNJAN ON THE DANCE FLOOOR WITH LIGHT SHINING ON THEIR FACE IN ITS FULLEST GLORY !
the paper is folded into one small piece
they dont have any other option left soo samrat picks gunjan up and is on the paper moving about ... they both cant get their eyes from eachoder !!!!!
MUSIC STOPS
and they are declared the winnerrs of paper dancing !!!!!!!
sajan music is played at the background
THE PARTY GETs OVER and ih was indeed a night to remember by everyone
SAMRAT, GUNJAN , MAYANK AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST NUPUR !!!!!!!
thts is for today
i hope yu guys liked ih
feel free to critisize !!!
buh do leave ur thoughts !
Ox
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
wow nyc updt.......
please continue soon...................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Nice update ....👍🏼 Keep it up!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
loved it!do cont. soon and plzzz PM me!!!
ynaiita
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^ i shall pm yu wen i update ih

thnx to everyone hu liked ih
:-)
Ox
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
WELCOME BACK!!!
NICE UPDT!!!
SO EXITED TO READ MORE!!!
CONT SOON WHEN U HAVE TIME!!
SEE YOU VERY SOON!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
awesome yaaar.........but this time continue soon

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