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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#71

awww cuteee!!!!! waiting to see their first date:P and plzzz pm me when u update next time

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#72

heyy yea i did pm u for part 5 and 6 but now i just updated and didnt feel like pming everyone lol:P but u did read the whole thing rite part 5, 6, and 7???

thanks for the comment jinil and dipi!

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

heyy namrata di!!

oopsies!! i think i forgot to comment on the part 6!! srry!!! i thought i had commented!!!......i will just read part 7 and come bak and comment!!

okk......just read it!! awesome parts!!! omg muskaan kitna bolti hain!!😆......but now in this part they're going on a date!!! yayyyy!!!!!! wonderful parts!! i really liked them!! can't wait till the next part!! plzz cont soon!!!

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Mahima

Edited by dmgluver01 - 16 years ago

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Simone

@-simi-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#74

aww nice part nammu!! 😃

oo date hey?? cant wait till the next part 😃

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#75

nice update nammu!!!but why is muski so reluctant to be frinds with rahul?

anyways....we'll find out in the long run.....

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Nikki meri jaan!!!! That was simply amazing! I'm going to hug you... virtually since actual mein nahi kar sakti. 🤗 Damn good yaar! I read the last 3 parts just now. Wah wah wah! Kya game tha! Very interesting. Jab main party throw karoongi toh definitely yehi game rakhoongi. lol. I really hope she meets him for coffee. Can't wait to read ahead!

Komz

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-Mishti_Divz-

@-Mishti_Divz-

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Nami u didn't pm me😭

That was very very very lovley part hun 😃

update soon :)

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
Nikki meri jaan!!!! That was simply amazing! I'm going to hug you... virtually since actual mein nahi kar sakti. 🤗 Damn good yaar! I read the last 3 parts just now. Wah wah wah! Kya game tha! Very interesting. Jab main party throw karoongi toh definitely yehi game rakhoongi. lol. I really hope she meets him for coffee. Can't wait to read ahead!

Komz

Heyy komz! thankkkkk uuuu!! haha even ill hug u like that 🤗 im glad u liked it!! suree when u throw a party like that and put that game do invite me :P loll 😆

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: divyashaz
Nami u didn't pm me😭
That was very very very lovley part hun 😃

update soon :)

sorry divyaa i dint pm anyone but its gud that u still came to the FF section and read it.

sure will update soon.

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#80

Part 8:

Before even Muskaan came out of class, Rahul was waiting for her. He just couldn't wait to go together with her. She came outside, hoping that Rahul forgot about what he said. But she knew that was impossible.

Rahul: Chale?

Muskaan: Rahul... please... mujhe ghar jaana hai. Who.... uhmm..... haan mere sar mein bahut dard ho raha hai.

Rahul: Toh hum ghar pe bhi baat kar sakte hai, aur wahan pe bhi coffee pi sakte hai.

Muskaan: Mere ghar par? Uhh no... ghar par nahin.... fine.... lets go.

Rahul: Yes!

They went outside by Rahul's bike.

Muskaan: Hum iss bike pe jayenge?

Rahul: Haan, kyun? Sorry woh mere pass gaari nahin hai.

Muskaan: uhh nahin its okay' fine' then' hum bike pe jayenge.

Rahul: You sure right tujhe koi problem toh nahin hai na? Agar tujhe chahiye toh hum taxi le sakte hai.

Muskaan: Nahin' its okay. Chale?

Rahul: Okay chal.

He sat and she sat behind him. Once he started his bike and accelerated, Muskaan was about to fall off since she wasn't holding him.

Rahul: Arrey Muskaan! Sambhal ke, mujhe coffee shop jaana hai, hospital nahin, please mujhe kaske pakar.

Muskaan was highly uncomfortable now, but she held him anyways.

Rahul: Waise ek baat bata'

Muskaan couldn't hear anything because of the wind so she leaned forward, but now they were so close; her face was by his shoulder almost touching his face. He looked at her and couldn't take his eyes off her, even Muskaan was lost in his eyes. None of them realized what was going on, and soon Rahul was about to crash into a car but luckily he came back into his senses in time and braked so hard that it caused Muskaan to kind of fall over and she held Rahul so tight.

Rahul: Sorry! Muskaan tu theek toh hai na?

Muskaan: Haan main theek hun' tu sirf aage dekh kar bike chala please.

Rahul: Yea sorry.

They reached the coffee shop and went inside. The got their table for two and sat down.

Rahul: Soo.. lets start with the simplest'. Mujhse dosti karoge?

As he said so he held out his hand. Muskaan didn't even think twice, she shook his hands.

Rahul: Gr8! Ab hum dost ban gaye hain, so you can ask me anything you want!

Muskaan: Yeah' she didn't know what to ask though'.

Muskaan: So... uhmm tumhare family mein kaun kaun hai?

Rahul: Mere mummy aur papa.

Muskaan: Nice, mere bhi family mein sirf mummy aur papa hi hain.

Suddenly they see this waiter fall down with a chocolate cake in this hands, and the cake lands up in his face. Muskaan saw this and couldn't stop laughing, she didn't even realize Rahul was looking at her.

Rahul (thinking): Haii tu kitni khoobsurat hai Muskaan!

He was lost in looking at her beauty and how pretty she looks when she is happy and laughing. Suddenly Muskaan feels eyes staring at her and turns around.

Muskaan: Rahul?

No reply.

Muskaan: Rahul! She snapped her fingers in front of his face.

Rahul: Yes Muskaan?

Muskaan: Tu kya soch raha tha? Tune uss waiter ko dekha? Uska chehra toh dekh cholatate ke waja se pura kala ho gaya hai. (Laughing even more)

Rahul: Haan beautiful na.

Muskaan: Kya? Beautiful? Rahul'. Tu kiss ki baat kar raha hai?

Rahul: Teri, Muskaan kisi ne tujhe bataya hai ki tu kitni khoobsurat hai?

Muskaan: Uhh'.. Rahul' uhmm' i think tera dimaag kuch theek nahin hai. Chal hum ghar chale.

Rahul just couldn't take his eyes off her, and he didn't even realize that he was saying all this.

Rahul: Kyun Muskaan?

Muskaan: Rahul' main jha rahi hoon'

She got up and that's when Rahul came back into his senses.

Rahul: Muskaan! Waitt! Im sorry! Pata nahin mein kahan ko gaya tha. Im really sorry Muskaan, dekh tu please ghar mat ja, tune apna coffee ap tak khatam bhi nahin kiya.

Muskaan: Its okay Rahul, waise bhi mujhe woh coffee acha nahin laga.

Rahul: ohh toh theek hai, chal hum pani puri khane chalte hain.

Muskaan could never say no to pani puri, once she hears the name, she feels that she has been starving for pani puri since ages!

Muskaan: Haan chal!

Once they reached outside heavy rain drops started to fall on them.

Rahul: Ughh! Baresh ko bhi abhi hi parna tha. Sorry Muskaan, lagta hai ki no pani puri today.. chal hum wapas andhar chalte hai aur jaise baresh band hogi tab hum ja sakte hai.

Muskaan: What? Are u kidding? Pani puri ka toh asli maaza tab aata hai jab hum baresh mein bheegte khate hai. Please Rahul don't be such a bore, waise bhi paani puri ka stand yahan se door nahin hain, chal na.

Rahul: Uhh okay.. chal.

They went walking in the rain, Muskaan was enjoying the rain and Rahul was enjoying just looking at her.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago