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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Sorry jinil, i didnt pm anyone. Still im happy that u came here and read it. Will make sure that i pm everyone next time i update.

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luv_dmg_armaan

@luv_dmg_armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

Awesome!! Except you forgot to PM me lol lol luckily I checked..wow the whole rain thing is just awesome! Hehe I was cracking up about the cake falling on the waiter lol lol thats really funny!

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ankita

@muskaan_ankita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

wow!! This part was so romantic and cute!! 😳 Thanks for the pm... update soon...

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drashti.dfan

@drashti.dfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

just amazing......
luved Muskaan character sooooo much.
Plz add me 2 ur PM list...

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

You did NOT PM me??

* sob sob *

Wonderful part anywayz...loved it !!

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#96

Part 9:

It was still raining hard, and Rahul and Muskaan had reached the pani puri stand.

Muskaan: Bhaiya 2 mast mirchi wale pani puri dena na please.

He gave them two. Muskaan ate it so fast, enjoying it, even though she practically had tears in her eyes because it was so spicy. Rahul ate it also, and thought that eating pani puri with Muskaan feels completely different than eating it usually.

They kept on having and having pani puris, one after the other, not wanting to stop, but now for Rahul it felt like his stomach would explode if he had one more. But for Muskaan, it still felt that she was starving!

Rahul: Chal Muskaan, ab bas ho gaya, sach mein mera pet phat jayega.

Muskaan: Rahul please ek or.

She got another one and ate it.

Rahul: Ab chale?

Muskaan: Haan ( She said this even though she wanted to have more)

Rahul gave the money and they walked back to Rahul's bike. The rain still didn't stop, and it didn't look like it would anytime soon. Rahul and Muskaan went on Rahul's bike to Muskaan's house.

Muskaan: Rahul, chal andhar aa na.

Rahul: Nahin main chalta hoon.

Muskaan: Nahin rahul please, andhar aa, main hum dono ke liye hot chocolate bana dete hoon, waise bhi tere saare kapre gille ho chooke hai. Agar tu ab nahin aayega toh tu paka bhimar ho jayega.

Rahul couldn't go against Muskaan's words, so he went inside with her.

Muskaan: Tu yahan pe beht, main hot chocolate bana ke aati hoon.

Rahul: Nahin, tu jaake change kar ke a, main jaake bana ta hoon.

Muskaan: Rahul'

Rahul: Shhh mujhe bhi hot cholate bana aata hai Muskaan :P

He said it as a joke; Muskaan smiled and went inside to change. Rahul went to the kitchen and made two nice warm cups of hot chocolate.

Muskaan: HACHOOO!!!

Rahul: Muskaan!?

He left the cups in the kitchen and went to see what happened.

Muskaan: HACHOO!

Rahul: Muskaan tu theek to hai? Tujhe toh zukaam ho gaya hai.

Muskaan: Nahin'. Mein.. wohh' HACHOO!

Rahul touched her forehead and realized that she had high fever.

Rahul: Tujhe toh bhukar bhi hai. Dekh tu yahan pe beht, main dawaai lekar aata hun.

Rahul went in the kitchen and somehow found the right box with all the medicines in it. He took one and took the cups of hot chocolate also.

Rahul: yeh le, phir tu yeh gharam gharm hot chocolate pi.

She did exactly what he told her to do.

Muskaan: Wow, tu toh bara acha hot chocolate bana ta hai.

Rahul: Thankss.

Rahul: Uhhmm Muskaan, i think i should go.

Muskaan: Kyun? Thodi dher ke liye rukh na, waise bhi bhar ab tak baresh par rahi hai. Jab baresh rukh jaye phir tu chala jaana.

Rahul: Fine.

Rahul: So Muskaan, tujhe aaj maza aaya?

Muskaan: Bahaut! Maine pani puri baresh mein bahut dino ke baad khaya hai. It was soo much fun! Thanks Rahul.

Rahul: Good! Phir hum kal bhi pani puri khane chal sakte hai!

Muskaan: Kya?

Rahul: Im kidding Muskaan!

Rahul: Im sorry Muskaan, mere waja se tu bhimar par gayi.

Muskaan: Arrey nahin re, main toh hamesha bhimar ho jaati ho. No big deal.

Rahul: Phir bhi.. agar mein tujhe baresh mein pani puri nahin khilata ta phir tu bhimar nahin hoti. Im really sorry Muskaan.

Muskaan: Rahul, mujhe aaj bahut maaza aya, sach mein. Agar mein tumhare saath nahin chalti phir mujhe itna maza nahin aata na. Aur yeh kya baat hui, tune hi to kaha tha ki hum ab dost hai, phir yeh sorry aur thanks beech mein kahan se agaya? Ab se hum ek dusre se sorry aur thank you nahin bolenge.

Rahul: Sorry!

Muskaan: RAHUL!!!!

Both looked at each other and cracked up laughing.

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Later in the night both Rahul and Muskaan couldn't go to sleep. They were thinking about today.

Rahul (thinking): Man today was the best day of my life! Mein aur Muskaan dost ban gaye, hum ek so called "date" ke liye gaye, even though Muskaan doesnt think that way, woh mere saath itni khush thi, usse itna maaza aya, I mean what more do I want???

Muskaan (thinking): Wow Rahul is so sweet! Mujhe pani puri acha lagta hai isiliye woh mujhe pani puri khane le chala. Aur mujhe zukaam ho gayi isiliye usne mere liye hot chocolate banaya, I never thought that I would have so much fun today! Main bhi na kitni pagal hoon, mujhe uske saath coffee pine nahin jaana tha, agar mein nahin jaati toh mujhe itna acha dost kahan se milta? I can't wait to see him in college tomorrow. WAIT whaat???? What did I just say? I can't wait to see him in college? Uhh Muskaan, tu shahid kuch zyaada hi bhimar hai, tera dimaag kuch theek nahin hai. I think I need to go to sleep. Good night!

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago