~RM FF~ ~ Mujhse Dosti Karoge?~Upd-Page 73! 05/10 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

hey i m aquarius tooooooo :P

and next monday ismy birthday
thnks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Hey Namrata ~!
great part ~!
What A Unique Game Yr !~~!!~
Greatttttttt ~!~!~!

Loved Both The Parts But 6 Mo0re ~!~!~!

Jaldi Co0ntinue KArna ~!
And Thnx For The PM ~!~!~!


😊

-Walo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Heyy! Thankss for all the comments! im glad everyone liked the game even though i found i thought it came out a little lame! lol
Btw Sabha yea first i thought i would make him drop her but then i cant have their love story form so fast rite?? lol
i will update soon!
Thanks again.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESOME!!....loved both the parts!....the game was really different....n very nice
liked how u described how Rahul was feeling about Muskaan...i hope she gives him a chance...
n her birthday is on Valentine's Day!......whoa!.....maybe something will happen then!....
cant wait to read more....ur doing a great job!!
n thank u very much for the pm!
-Simran
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankss for the comment simran! Yeaa even my birthday is on Valentines day, so i just thought of putting it there. And yea ill try to make that day soo gud! Hmm anyways update is cuming in 2 mins, so please read it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 7:

Next day in college:

Ridhima, Anjali, and Muskaan were in the canteen drinking coffee.

Muskaan: Kya Ridhima tere waja se mein taxi mein akeli gayi. Tu Armaan ke saath itna kya baat kar rahi thi.

Ridhima: Sorry muskaan, mein kya karti woh armaan itni baate karta hai, lekin mujhe kabhi pata nahin tha ki woh aisa hoga.

Muskaan: Aisa matlab?

Ridhima: Woh ek acha insan hai, you know humare pasand aur na pasand ek dum same hai. Waise tumne aur Rahul ne kitne baate kiye? Tum dost bane? Mein aur Armaan toh bahut ache dost bangaye.

Anjali: Awww mere behn ko pyaar ho gaya!

Ridhima: Shut up di, aisa kuch nahin hai. Haan to Muskaan bata na, tumhare aur Rahul ke beech mein kya hua?

Muskaan: Kuch nahin'.

Ridhima: Kya kuch nahin? Bata na hua kya!

Muskaan: Arrey pata nahin mujhe kya ho gaya tha. Maine itna sara bol diya aur phir wahan se chali gayi. Main bhi na kitne bare bewakoof hoon, mujhe Rahul ko jaake sorry bolna chahiye. Pata nahin woh mere bare mein kya soch raha hoga.

Anjali: What are you saying?? Tu wahan se chali gayi? Rahul se baat bhi nahin ki?

Muskaan: Nahin.. baat toh kiya.. lekin maine hi baat kiya, maine usse itna kuch bata diya, woh toh bechara mujhe aise ghoor raha tha jaise ki main pagal hoon. Lekin main pagal hoon, maine hi baat kiya, usne kuch bola bhi nahin aur maine wait bhi nahin kiya aur phir main wahan se chali gayi.

Ridhima: ohh' toh , toh tujhe jaana chahiye Rahul se sorry bolne ke liye.

Muskaan: Haan na? Toh phir main ja rahin hoon. I'll see you guys later!

She goes out of the canteen to look for Rahul, he was outside luckily alone without Armaan or Atul with him. Muskaan was very nervous' how could she face him? She just left the party like that, she acted like a fool, so what will Rahul think of her? She went towards him, but he didn't see her since his back was facing her. She went behind him.

Muskaan: Uhmm' Rahul' Hi

Rahul turned around and was shocked to see Muskaan standing there.

Rahul: Muskaan'.? Hii.. kaisi ho tum?

Muskaan: Theek hoon. Tum kaise ho?

Rahul: Yea good.

Both were looking here and there and didn't now what to say, Muskaan didn't know how she should start apologizing.

Muskaan: Rahul im sorry. ( She said that really fast, Rahul didn't even hear what she said)

Muskaan (Thinking): Shit! Ughh let me start again.

Rahul: Kya?

Muskaan: Rahul woh.. im sorry.

Rahul: Sorry? Kis baat ke liye?

Muskaan: Woh kal raat ko main party aise chor ke chali gayi.. Maine itna kuch bol diya, tumhe bolne ka mauka bhi nahin diya, aur phir meri waja se tune woh game har diya.

Rahul: Nahin Muskaan, its okay.. Joh kuch bhi tune bola mujhe bahut acha laga. Aur.. uhmm' hum jeet gaye.

Muskaan: Jeet gaye? Are you serious? Tune uss paper mein kya likha?

Rahul: Joh kuch tune bola.

Muskaan: Joh bhi maine bola, tujhe actually samaj me aaya? Main toh hamesha se itne bakwaas karti rehti hoon, kabhi kissi ko kuch nahin samaj mein aata ki mein kya bolti hoon. Aur uss raat toh maine itna bola itna fast bola, tujhe bolne ka mauka bhi nahin diya, phir bhi tujhe who sab samaj mein aaya?

Rahul: Haan, mujhe haar baat joh tune bola samaj mein aaya aur mujhe ab tak yaad hai. Tera favorite color pink hai, tera favorite movie Kuch Kuch hota hai, hai and you love chocolates and pani puri, you hate these parties, you love quietness, tera birthday February 14th ko hai, you are 22 years old, aur phir tu wahan se chali gayi.

Muskaan was stunned! Even she didn't remember the exact words she said to him, then how come he remembers it.

Muskaan: Rahul'''.. tu' yeh sab'. What?

Rahul: kya hua?

Muskaan just shook her head.

Muskaan: uhhh'. Nothing' uhmm' I think I should leave. Uhmm Bye'

She just turned around when Rahul grabbed her arm.

Rahul: Tu kahan ja rahi hai Muskaan?

Muskaan: Rahul mera haat choro please.

Rahul: Nahin..

As he said this he spun her around, so now she is facing him.

Muskaan: Kya hai? Mujhe jaane do.. please.

Rahul: Nahin, humari baatein abhi tak khatam nahin hui.

Muskaan: kyun aur kya baat karni hai?

Rahul: Dekh, hum uss party mein partners the right?

Muskaan: Haan'?

Rahul: Aur hum partners kyun the?

Muskaan: Kyunki Armaan ne bola.

Rahul: uhhh no. Hum partners isiliye the taki hum ek dusre ko jaan sage, aur dost ban sage.

Muskaan: And'. Tumhara point kya hai?

Rahul: Mera point yeh hai ki, hum jeet toh gaye lekin hum dost nahin ban paye. Main toh tumhare baare mein bahut kuch jaanta hoon, lekin tune mere se kuch nahin poocha ki mujhe kya pasand hai?

Muskaan: Uhmm' yea' you have a point' im sorry about that' toh batau ki tumhe kya pasand hai.. kya nahin pasand hai?

Rahul: Yahan? College mein?

Muskaan: Uhh haan' kyun?

Rahul: How boring' mujhe nahin pata tha ki tu itni boring hai. Hum kahin bhaar jayenge. Coffee after college?

Muskaan: uhh no.. bad idea' hum yahin pe baat karenge.

But before she knew it the bell rang.

Muskaan: Mujhe jaana hoga.

Rahul: Haan lekin hum coffe ke liye jayenge.

Muskaan: Nahin.

Rahul: Kyun? Hum dost nahin ban sakte?

Muskaan: Nahin aise baat nahin hai... lekin... uhmmm... i have to go . Bye!

Rahul: Phir se bye??? Ok bye.. lekin coffee!

And before she could say no again he walked away from there and so did she. Now she felt just like Ridhima, Rahul is not that bad after all.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome!.....they have a date!.... cant wait to see how that goes....
hopefully they become friends
great job!.....n continue soon if u can...(even though u already do that....lol)
-Simran
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome!.....they have a date!.....cant wait to see how that goes!....
hopefully they become friends!
pls continue soon!.....(even though u already do that...lol)
great job
-Simran
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thankss for reading and commenting! hmm yea i will continue either now or for sure tomz. dunno but still keep reading.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow ! awsome thanx for d pm!
Edited by jinil - 16 years ago

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