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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: VS+RM
G8 PART.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUVED IT 😛!!!!!!!!! DO CONTINUE AND PLZZ DO PM ME..

Thanksss!!!!!!

Yayy i have a new readerr lolz

thanks for commenting and keep commenting plzzz.

uhmm i stopped pming people.. butt if u want to know when i update i can pm u otherwise u can always just come in the FF section and see if i have pmd...

thankss again!

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#332

Nikki I'm loving this possessive Muskaan! I thought only Rahul could be possessive and aggressive. WOW! Ainnu kehnde ne kudi. She knows how to claim her man. lol. Awesome part! I love R-M's magical moments! Riddhima bhi moo phatt hai yaar. Anyway, whatever. R-M!!!!

Komz

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
Nikki I'm loving this possessive Muskaan! I thought only Rahul could be possessive and aggressive. WOW! Ainnu kehnde ne kudi. She knows how to claim her man. lol. Awesome part! I love R-M's magical moments! Riddhima bhi moo phatt hai yaar. Anyway, whatever. R-M!!!!

Komz

Kommiii what took u so long to comment???

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lolzzz trust me muskaan can be sooo possesive at times, even more than Rahul. 😆😆

Uss hi ka toh wait kar rahe the na, jab ridhima apna moo khole aur sab ko pata chale. Lo usne khol liya aur sab ko pata chal gaya!.

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thanks for commenting!

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#334

Heyy Namu!!

First of all....i'm am soooooo sorry for such a late comment!!!!

but...the part was awesome!!!!!!!!!!
one of the best ones!!!!...
loved how u showed how they enjoyed their time alone together!! =D
their scene at the beach was soooo cute and sweet!!!
:O! omg! ridzz told every1!! tsk tsk ridz!! lolz...jk! ;).....
but it was soo cute how she got all excited while telling ridz and anjie about their story!!! heheheh...
and loved the last line when muski said that rahul is only mine!! awwww!! lol...

can't wait till the boat trip!!
cont sooon!!!

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Mahima

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-abhi-

@-abhi-

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#335

cool ff cont soon😊 lolz

Abhi😛

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: cutie_mahima
Heyy Namu!!

First of all....i'm am soooooo sorry for such a late comment!!!!

but...the part was awesome!!!!!!!!!!
one of the best ones!!!!...
loved how u showed how they enjoyed their time alone together!! =D
their scene at the beach was soooo cute and sweet!!!
:O! omg! ridzz told every1!! tsk tsk ridz!! lolz...jk! ;).....
but it was soo cute how she got all excited while telling ridz and anjie about their story!!! heheheh...
and loved the last line when muski said that rahul is only mine!! awwww!! lol...

can't wait till the boat trip!!
cont sooon!!!

<3333
Mahima

MahiiiI!!!

itss alritee atleast u commented:):)

love ur long comments hhahah

thank uuuuuuuuu!!! keep reading and dont make me wait for ur comments next timee okayy???

lollss just kidding im happy that u commented :):)

do keep reading! 😃

😃😃

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: -abhi-
cool ff cont soon😊 lolz

Abhi😛

Thankk uu

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Do keep reading and commenting

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#338

hey nam..when's the next part coming up? sorrry actuallly i m too eager to read more and more on RM...can't get enough of them!!!😛

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#339

Heyy dipi!! just now im almost done with it!

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#340

Part 25:

The next morning the girls were getting ready in their room and the guys in theirs. They all were very excited to go on the boat. When they were ready they went down to the lobby, the guys were already there in their shorts, t-shirts, and slippers. When the girls went walking down the stairs the guys were staring. All three of the girls were in shorts, tank tops, and a swim suit under.

Anjali: Tum log aise kya dekh rahe ho?

Atul: Anjali tum bahut achi lag rahi ho.

Anjali: Thanks, tum bhi shorts mein kafi cute lag rahe ho.

Rahul: Oyee Muskaan, idhar aa.

He dragged muskaan to one side.

Muskaan: Kya hai?

Rahul: Yeh kya pena hai tune?

Muskaan: Kya pena hai matlab?

Rahul: Sirf hum boat pe jah rahe hai, koi aur ladka nahin hoga wahan pe jisse tu impress kar sake.

Muskaan: tu aise kyun keh raha hai, hum mauritus mein hai, ek boat mein ja rahe hain, humare charon taraf sirf pani hi pani hoga toh kya main salwaar suit penu gi? Nahin na. Pani mein swim suit pena parta hai.

Rahul: Ok ok samaj gaya, god man maine ek baat hi toh boli aur tu mujhe pura lecture suna rahi hai.

Muskaan: Phir tu aise baatein bolta hi kyun hai jisse tujhe lecture suna pare? Ab challee?

Rahul: haan haan toh main kab kahan nahin chalne ko.

Muskaan: uffff

They drove till the place where the boat was, and then they saw the boat, it was so big and beautiful. Muskaan just loved the deck of the boat, the minute they went in she ran up the stairs to the deck. Rahul went up as well.

Muskaan: Ahhhh this is soo beautiful!!

Rahul: Yeaa it is, aise khubsoorat boat par koi dance kaise nahin kar sakta hai?

Muskaan: Dance? Rahul toh pagal ho gaya hai.

Muskaan started to walk.

Rahul: Muskaan im serious.

Muskaan: Rahul you are serious....??

Rahul nodded.

Muskaan: Par bina music se kaise dance kar sakte hain?

Rahul: Tue k bar dance toh kar, music apne ne aap sunayi dega.

Muskaan: Rahuuul....

Rahul walked to her and pulled her close to him. He slid his hand around her waist and she put his hand on his shoulder. They were dancing slowely, when suddenly....

Armaan: Guysss... tum log yahan bhi shuru ho gaye???

Rahul and Muskaan quickly let go of each other.

Atul: Rahul, yeh ek boat hai, koi dance floor nahin hai, thoda control kar yaar.

Anjali: Kya Muskaan, humme toh laga tha ki tu boat pe hamare saath hogi, lekin tu toh deck par akele ake, Rahul ke saath dance karne lagi yaar, this is not fair.

Ridhima: Yea Muskaan this is not fair, Rahul do u mind agar hum Muskaan ko thodi der ke liye lekar jaye?

Muskaan: Hum kahan ja rahe hain?

Ridhima: Shhh bas tu chal hamare saath.

Muskaan: Lekin mujhe yahan pe rehna hai..

Anjali: Rahul, Muskaan, tum dono toh ek shaadhi shuda couple ke tara behave kar rahe ho yaar, bas thodi der ke liye Muskaan tu hamare saath nahin a sakti?

Muskaan: Ookayy...

Anjali: Good, come ridz lets go.

The three of them went back down.

Rahul: Yaar yeh dono Muskaan ko akele nahin chod sakte kya? Hum dono kitni achi tara se dance kar rahe the.

Armaan: Relax Rahul. Thodi der ke liye hi toh gaye hain.

Rahul: Haan lekin Muskaan ko nahin jaana tha, koi zabardasti hai kya?

Atul: Rahul, Anjali sahi keh rahi thi, tum toh sach mein ek shaadhi shuda ladke ke saath behave kar raha hai, joh apne biwi ke bina ek pal nahin reh sakta.

Rahul: Oyee chup, Anjali ka chamcha. Main ja raha hoon neeche.

Armaan: Eyy Rahul, Rahul, Rahul, enough yaar. Wog log ladkiyaan hai, you know they need some time alone with their girly girly talks.

Rahul: Yea i know, their girly girly talks are about us only the boys.

Armaan: Toh problem kya hai?? Hum bhi ladke hai, we can have our boy boy talks.

Atul: Haan yaar, we are the BOYS! Anjali looks so hot with the shorts na??

Armaan: Hayyee Ridhima, so beautiful.

Rahul: Muskaan looks the best.

Silence..... all three of them were thinking about their girl.

Armaan: Eyyy guys snap out of it!

Rahul: Sorrry.. kya karen ek bar unke bare mein socho toh main karta hai bas sochte hi reh jao.

Atul: Ey by the way, ab plan kya hai?

Armaan: We will be going to a beach, spending the day there with OUR GIRLSS! Aur phir raat ko hum bas boat se wapas hotel jayenge.

Rahul: How boring yaar, boat se beach, beach se boat, phir boat se hotel. Lets do something exciting.

Atul: Exciting hi toh kar rahe hai, puda din humari ladkiyoon ke saath, aur kya chahiye?

Rahul: Woh toh hum hamesha hi karte hai.... Ideeaa!

Rahul whispered his idea into Armaan and Atuls ears and that brought a smile onto their face.

Armaan: Get ready Rahul.

Rahul: Im ready Armaan, you get into action!

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Anjali: Muskaan, ab tu hamare saath behte gi okay.

Muskaan: Okay Anji, ab main yahan hun na, bas ab hum....

Armaan: MUSKAAAAN!!! Jalddiiii, wohh Rahul... Muskaan just come fast!

Muskaan got scared, she went by Armaan.

Muskaan: Kya huaaa??? Rahul ko kya hua?

Armaan: Tu bas mere saath upar chal, tujhe sab pata chal jayega.

Muskaan ran up to the deck,with Anjali and Ridhima following her.

Muskaan: Kahan hai Rahul??? ARmaaan! Rahul kahan hai?

Armaan: Yaar Atul ne ghalti se rahul ko pani mein push kar liye.

Muskaan: WHAT!

Muskaan went by the side and saw someone in the water.

Rahul: Bachaaooo!!

Muskaan: Rahulll!!

Muskaan was getting tears in her eyes.

Muskaan: Armaan, kuch karoo please.

Rahul: Muskaan, bachaoooo.

Armaan: Yaar yeh toh pani mein dub raha hai.

Anjali: Do somethingg!! Muskaan its okay, rahul ko kuch nahin hoga.

Muskaan: ARMAAAN!!! Tum kya kar rahe ho? Mera rahul dub raha hai, aur tu yahan pe bas usse dekh raha hai? Tu kuch nahin karega toh main pani pe jump karungi.

She stepped forward. Now Armaan realized how serious Muskaan was and that she also was crying.

Armaan: Eyy eeyy Muskaan, rukh, hum toh sirf mazak kar rahe the, oyee Rahul bas abhi uppar a ja.

Ridhima: Mazak?? Armaan?

Armaan: Muskaan im really sorry humme nahin pata tha ki tum yeh itni seriously loh gi.

Muskaan ignored them and went from there, Rahul saw her running down, before she could go into the bathroom Rahul grabbed her arm and pulled her in a corner.

Muskaan: yeh kya tha Rahul? How dare you do that to me? Tumhe ek bar bhi nahin socha? Rahul i hate you, just move.

She tried pushing him but he had grabbed her arm too tight.

Muskaan: Rahul you are hurting me, hatto yahan se.

Muskaan still had big tears coming out from her eyes.

Rahul: Muskaa,......I.....I... I am...

Muskaan: Mujhe kuch nahin suna! Move!

She pushed him hard and ran from there. Rahul tried running after her but Armaan held his hand.

Armaan: Rahul, leave her alone for a while.

Rahul: Armaan, main... woh roh rahi hai yaar, aise kaise chor dun. Chor mera haath.

So Armaan let go and he went to go look for Muskaan. Muskaan was sitting alone on a table, looking out at the open see, and still had tears in her eyes. Rahul went and sat next to her, and held her hand.

Rahul: Muskaan, I am really sorry, pleaseee mujhe maaf kar de.

Muskaan didn't reply.

Rahul: Dekh tu janti hai ki main bewakoof hoon, toh tu joh bhi saza de woh main karunga lekin please mujhe maaf kar de. I promise main aisa mazak kabhi nahin karunga.

Muskaan got up from there and left. Rahul decided not to follow her this time.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago