~RM FF~ ~ Mujhse Dosti Karoge?~Upd-Page 73! 05/10 - Page 36

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: one_ashi

fantastic part!! 😊 luved the whole acting like a married couple bit!! 😛 Ab rahul ko kuch cute sa karna chahiye muskaan ko manane ke liye!! I'd be royally annoyed if I was muskaan too! do continue soon!

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U silent readers need to keep commenting!! lolzz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hii Nami

sorry forlate comment i red ur Parts Noww That ws extremly Nice and awsum 😳 i feel so sorry for rahool i wonder how he will Manau her😳 she is still angry ryt😆 do continue soon Thxx 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: divyashaz

Hii Nami

sorry forlate comment i red ur Parts Noww That ws extremly Nice and awsum 😳 i feel so sorry for rahool i wonder how he will Manau her😳 she is still angry ryt😆 do continue soon Thxx 😊

Divyaa!!! Long time no c!
Thankss for commentingg.
Yess she is still angryy lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nam....when r u updating...yaaar update soon..badly waiting to read more😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy dip hopefully soon almost done with my part maybe in a day or two..
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Posted: 16 years ago
lol ok...i m waiting for it😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
Namii whn ur updating im waiting :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy dipi and divya lol both with a D!
aghh havent gotten time to finsh my part but now i have spring break so this week and next week i have off ... for sure ill finish it and update!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 26:

The boat stopped at the beach everyone was supposed to spend their day at. Muskaan's whole mood got spoiled, and she wasn't interested in talking to anyone or sitting by them. Everyone went in the water and enjoyed the deep blue sea, and meanwhile Muskaan was walking alone on the shoreline. Rahul noticed this but he didn't want to make matters worse, so he decided to join everyone else in the water. Muskaan found herself a good place to sit in, away from everyone. She sat down in the sand and played around with a few rocks, lost in her thoughts. Eventually everyone figured that she wasn't here, so Anjali and Ridhima went looking for her. And the guys were still in the water.

Armaan: oyee Rahul, ab tu kya karega?

Rahul: Pata nahin yaar, maine usse baat karne ki koshish ki magar woh meri baat suna hi nahin chahti, isiliye mujhe usse aur dukh nahin dena hai, kal tak shahid uska ghussa kam ho jaye phir main usse baat kar sakun.

Armaan: Hmmm woh bhi theek hai.... ab Ridhima aur Anji gaye hai uske pas, woh theek ho jayegi.

Rahul: Hope so.

Ridhima and Anjali found Muskaan sitting there. They both sat next to her.

Anjali: Muskaan, kya hua? Please itni udaas mat ho.

Ridhima: Joh bhi hua, woh sirf ek mazaak tha.

Anjali: Wahan par Rahul ka bhi mood theek nahin hai, please yaar chal na, maza ayega.

Muskaan: Tum log jao.

Anjali: No, tumhe hamare saath chalna hoga.

Muskaan: Maine kaha na mujhe nahin aana.

Ridhima: Muski ppleasee a na. Joh kuch bhi hua usse bhul ja, Rahul ko maaf kar de.

Muskaan: Tum log nahin samjhoge, mazak ki bhi had hoti hai, agar sach mein kuch ho jata toh? Rahul ne ek baar bhi nahin socha, mere par ye mazak khelne se pehle? I just hate him, he can go and do all these jokes with some other girl if he wants, i cant deal with it.

Ridhima: Toh tu usse kabhi maaf nahin karegi?

Muskaan: No

Anjali: Ek mazak ke liye tu usse kabhi maaf nahin karegi?

Muskaan: maine kaha na, tum log nahin samjhoge.

Ridhima: Acha okay fine dont forgive him, lekin please apna mood toh mat kharab kar, chal na waha pe hamare saath pani me.

Muskaan: noo.... main..

Ridhima and Anjali made her get up and dragged her all the way where the guys were. Rahul got happy to see Muskaan, but Muskaan wasn't. She got into her swim suit and joined everyone in the water. Her mood was slowely getting alright with Ridhima and Anjali being near her. Actually she was really enjoying herself. But she still ignored Rahul. Whenever she saw his face she felt her anger rise up again.

So hours past by, everyone having fun, and it was time to go back. They went on the boat again and Muskaan went up to the deck and then she remembered what Rahul did again. She didn't know what to do, if she should forgive him or no, because it wasn't a small joke it was a joke of Rahul dying, and she didn't find it funny for sure. She wanted her diary so badly, her diary helps her out, she writes down all her feelings and somehow she does write what the solution is. But ofcourse she didn't bring it with her to the boat, and she couldn't write it front of everyone. Rahul doesn't even know that she has a diary and that she writes about him.

Everyone had come on the deck now and Muskaan snapped out of her thoughts.

Anjali: Wow guys look at the sunset, its beautiful.

Atul: Yaar hotel jaane ka man hi nahin kar raha.

Armaan: Champ, kya tu sari raat is boat mein guzarega?

Atul: Nahin.. kya tujhe jaana hai?

Armaan: Nahin bilkul nahin. He looked towards ridhima and smiled.

Atul: Aaj bahut maza aaya, haina Rahul?

Rahul: Uhh.....mmm..... main bas abhi aaya.

Atul: Oyee kahan ja raha hai?

Rahul: Wohh.. drink lene ja raha hoon.

Armaan: Tu kahin nahin ja raha, main lekar aata hoon tere liye drink.

Rahul: Tu mera drink kyun lekar ayega?

Armaan: Bas aise hi, atul chal mere saath.

Anjali: Muskaan, main aur ridz bhi bas abhi aaye.

Muskaan: Kyun tum log kahan ja rahe ho?

Anjali: Hum bhi bas drink lene hi ja rahe hain.

Muskaan: toh main bhi chalti hoon.

Ridhima: Kyun hum tere liye bhi drink la rahe hain, tu rukh yahan pe hum bas abhi aate hain.

Muskaan: Par..

But they already went down. So it was only Rahul and Muskaan on the deck. Muskaan looked away not facing Rahul. Rahul had to do something now. He walked towards Muskaan and slid his hands by her waist and rested his chin on her shoulder.

Rahul: Im sorry muskii.

Muskaan turned around and let go.

Muskaan: Rahul, sorry ki baat nahin hai.

Rahul: Jaanu, please maaf kar de na,

He tried to hold her again by her waist but she backed up.

Rahul: dekh main jaanta hoon ki joh main kiya theek nahin tha, aur maine tujhe bahut hurt kiya, main aisa kabhi bhi nahin karunga, lekin please please please maaf kar de.

Muskaan: Rahul... tujhe pata bhi hai ki tune kya kiya? Tujhe shahid lage ki main over react kar rahi hoon, aur tune yeh mazak bahut ladkiyoon ke saath kiya hoga, aur unho ne shahid mera tara act nahin kiya hoga, lekin rahul main un ladkiyon ke tara nahin hoon. Tujhe chahiye toh tu jaake yeh sab kissi aur ladki ki saath jaake kar, im sorry ki main tumhare liye layek nahin hoon, aur main tumhare dusri ladkiyoon ke tara nahin hoon.

Now rahul walked close to her and muskaan started to back up. He walked till she bumped into the railing of the boat so if she tried to go more back she would fall into the water. Rahul leaned forward and held her tight. They were really close now. Muskaan was scared; she thought she was going to fall back.

Rahul whispered in her ear: Muskaan...... tu meri zindagi ki pehli aur akhri ladki ho, abhi tune aisa bola hai ki tu mere liye layek nahin hai lekin phirse kabhi mat bolna, mujhe toh aisa lagta hai ki main tere liye layek nahin hoon, you are just too good for me I don't deserve you. Maine tujhe kaise dukh paunchaya Muskaan? How could I? I am really....

Muskaan pushed him away.

Muskaan: Yeh sab natak karni ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.. ek aur bar sorry kehne ki bhi zaroorat nahin hai. Itna paas aakar koi farak nahin parne wala. Just get lost Rahul.

Now Rahul and pulled Muskaan close to him and held her she was in his arms now unable to move. They were really close once again.

Rahul: Yeh sab tujhe natak lag raha hai?

Muskaan: Let me go.

Rahul: Kya kaha tumne...just get lost??

Muskaan: Rahul leave me alone.

Rahul: Kya kehna chahti ti tum paas akar koi farak nahin parne wala?

Muskaan: Akhri baar keh rahi hoon Rahul Leave Me Alone! You are hurting me.

Rahul: Ek mazak ke waja se?

Muskaan: JUST GO TO HELL!

She pushed him so hard, that he let go and she ran down the stairs tears in her eyes.
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy guys hope u liked the part, i know its sad but dont worry more happy scenes are coming up 😃
Keep readingg! 😃😃
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~Namrata~

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