~RM FF~ ~ Mujhse Dosti Karoge?~Upd-Page 73! 05/10 - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago
AMAZING...AWESOME FABULOUS!!!! ARE YAAR U MADE MY VALENTINE'S DAY SPECIAL AFTER UODATING THIS SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 LOVE IT....TOO GOOODDDD😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Nami very awesom update hun👍🏼 Loved this part😳😳

Rahul was comfortable; he just went and sat on the floor.

Muskaan: Rahul, main kahan behtu? Mera dress kharab ho jayega.

Rahul just pulled her and made him sit in his lap.

Rahul: Ab toh kharab nahin ho ga na?😍😍😍

do continue soon hun 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
beautiful part cont soon

happy valantines to all of u
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOME PART!....it was seriously too sweet!!...very well written... im sure Rahul must have looked dashing!...n Muskaan must have looked very beautiful....
i wonder when they will tell everyone....
this last scene with the terrace was very cute...
GOOD JOB!!...a very nice part!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipi_dipu

AMAZING...AWESOME FABULOUS!!!! ARE YAAR U MADE MY VALENTINE'S DAY SPECIAL AFTER UODATING THIS SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 LOVE IT....TOO GOOODDDD😉

Thankkk u soooo muchh dipii!!!!!! Im happy u liked my part!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: divyashaz

Hey Nami very awesom update hun👍🏼 Loved this part😳😳

Rahul was comfortable; he just went and sat on the floor.

Muskaan: Rahul, main kahan behtu? Mera dress kharab ho jayega.

Rahul just pulled her and made him sit in his lap.

Rahul: Ab toh kharab nahin ho ga na?😍😍😍

do continue soon hun 😊

THank uuu!!!!!!! Hahah that part was even one of my fav!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

beautiful part cont soon

happy valantines to all of u

thankk u! Happy Valentines Day to u too!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

completely awesome, mind blowing.......

Thanks for the comment😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy Namu!! Happy Belated B-day!!! i hope u had fun!!! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 18:

Rahul and Muskaan had gone back down to the main area where the party was held. For a while all of them were just sitting down eating, and talking.

The DJ went and announced something in the mike.

DJ: Heyy! Hope you all are enjoying here at Club Aquarius! Since its valentines day, we would love all the couples that are here to come on the dance floor, we will have a slow number, for you to dance on. Please come on the dance floor now.

Atul and Anjali were the first ones to go, then Armaan and Ridhima, and again Rahul and Muskaan were left behind.

Rahul: Chale Muskaan?

Muskaan: Mujhe dance nahin karna.

Rahul: Kyun???

Muskaan: Bas... man nahin kar raha.

Rahul: Muskaan chal na, ek bar dance karege phir apne aap man karega. Chal please

Muskaan: Rahul lekin...

Rahul: Lekin wekin kuch nahin, tu bas mere saath chal rahi hai. He forcefully pulled her arm and led her to the dance floor.

The slow song had already started, and Rahul put his arms on muskaans waist. Muskaan was hesitating a little but then put her arms on his shoulders.

The song tumse hi was playing.
Aankhon mein ankhne teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhe mein kuch raha hua kya
Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

Shoor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi

Both Rahul and Muskaan had just been swaying with the music, but for them the music didn't mean anything, they were just lost into each others eyes, when the music stopped they didn't even come to know. Ridhima, Armaan, Atul, and Anjali already stopped dancing and went off the dance floor, but Rahul and Muskaan were still there, dancing, and staring at each other in their eyes.

Anjali: Haii, yeh dono kitni cute lagte hain na.

Ridhima: Haan di, pata nahin Muskaan ko Rahul kyun nahin pasand hai.

Armaan: Pasand hai... mujhe lagta hai ki woh usse pyaar karti hai magar kabhi kuch kehti nahin.

Atul: Kya yaar, Rahul usse batata kyun nahin.

Armaan: Usse aaj raat Muskaan ko bata dena chahiye. Chal Atul, Rahul se baat karte hain.

They went to the dance floor, and atul snapped his fingers in between Rahul and Muskaan. Both of them jerked awake and moved away.

Muskaan realized what happned, and without facing Armaan and Atul, she walked away from the dance floor. She went outside to get some breeze. Rahul was still there.

Armaan: Oyee, tu Muskaan ko bata kyun nahin dehta? Aaj bata de.

Rahul: Kya? Kya bataun usse?

Atul: Abhey Rahul, bata ki tu usse pyaar karta hai.

Rahul: Maine tu usse already bata diya hai.

Rahul thinking: Ohhh shit!!! Yeh Maine kya bol diya?

Atul and Armaan: KYA? Kab??

Rahul: Uhhh.... mera matlab hai ki..... Main usse.... uhh....haan.... bahut jald bata dunga.. lekin abhi nahin..... mujhe nahin lagta ki abhi sayi waqt hai.

Armaan: Kyun nahin? Aaj raat 12 baje ko bata de, its valentines day, isse acha mauka tujhe nahin milne wala.

Rahul: Tu fikaar mat kar, main usse bata dunga.. don't worry.

He patted his shoulder and went to look for Muskaan. He couldn't find her anywhere, so he went to look outside and she was there.

Rahul: Muskaan? Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai?

Muskaan: Rahul.... armaan aur atul ko pata chal gaya kya?

Rahul: Nahin.. woh toh keh rahe the ki main tujhe jaldi bata dun.

Muskaan: kya? Unhe pata hai ki tu mujhse pyaar karta hai?

Rahul: haan.... woh maine unhe bataya tha.... lekin tumhe batane se pehle, toh unhe nahin pata hai ki maine tumhe already bataya hai. Unhe ab tak lag raha hai ki hum dono sirf dost hain. Aur armaan keh raha tha ki main tumhe aaj raat bata dun.

Muskaan: Kya?? Rahul.... hum unhe batayenge lekin abhi nahin.... please..

Rahul: lekin unhe batana toh parega na, after all woh hamare dost hain.

Muskaan: haan lekin abhi nahin... im not ready for it.

Rahul: Theek hai, jab tumhe batana hoga tab hum batayenge, alright? Ab mood mat spoil kar, chal wapas andhar chalte hain.

Muskaan: Haan, chal.

They both went inside and joined the group. Rahul's phone started to ring.

Rahul: Uhh excuse me...

He got up and went away from the table.

Rahul: Hello?

Man: Ji sir, jaisa apne bola tha waisa humne kar diya, apke ghar ke chabiyan(keys) humare paas hain.

Rahul: Ohh great, toh sab ready hain na? Ohh chabiyan... ek kam kar, darwaza khula rakh de, aur chabiyan ghar ke andhar hi rakh dena.

Man: Theek hai, haan sab ready hain, ab apko sirf madam ko lekar aana hain.

Rahul: Thanks, aapko apke paise kal mil jayenge.

Right then Muskaan came.

Muskaan: Rahul?

Rahul: Uhh... toh main aapse baad mein baat karunga, bye.

He kept the phone back in his pocket.

Rahul: Haan Muskaan? Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Muskaan: Tumhe kisko paise dene hai rahul? She said this ignoring his question completely.

Rahul: Wohh..... Uhh... nahin.... kissi ko nahin.. bas ek dost hai.

Muskaan: Rahul, tum mujhse jhoot to nahin bol rahe?

Rahul: Nahin.... Main kyun jhoot bolunga?? Ab yeh kya hai muskaan, chal na, party enjoy kar te hain.

Without waiting for her reply he dragged muskaan back to the table everyone was sitting.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago

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