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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Nikki!!!!!!! 🤗❤️ I love you!!!!! Kya parts likhein hain yaar!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Meri samajh mein nahi aa raha ki main tujhe kya boloon! Mindblowing yaar! Too damn good! I read all of the parts from 15 on... The last part i read was 14, uske baad ab padha maine! I can't believe they're together!!! So lovely!!!! I love you for this!!!!

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Komziiiiiii!!!!! U read itt!! YAYY!!! thankkk uuuuu soo muchh!!! now keep on reading it okayyyy and keep on commenting like this! told u, ur comments are always the best!! thankkss again!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

Awesome........
great........
cute.......
nice..........
loved it ;-)

Thankkk uuu😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesoem parts
i missded do many parts
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

awesoem parts

i missded do many parts
thanks for the pm
update soon

Thankss for the comment! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
GREAT PART!!....the slow dance was very sweet!..but i wonder who he was talking to....
its getting more interesting!...cant wait
do continue soon!
-Simran
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Posted: 16 years ago
that's beautiful Namrata
but these lines i found very cute & innocent
"woh maine unhe bataya tha.... lekin tumhe batane se pehle, toh unhe nahin pata hai ki maine tumhe already bataya hai. Unhe ab tak lag raha hai ki hum dono sirf dost hain. Aur armaan keh raha tha ki main tumhe aaj raat bata dun.

Muskaan: Kya?? Rahul.... hum unhe batayenge lekin abhi nahin.... please..

Rahul: lekin unhe batana toh parega na, after all woh hamare dost hain. "

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: snow white

that's beautiful Namrata

but these lines i found very cute & innocent
"woh maine unhe bataya tha.... lekin tumhe batane se pehle, toh unhe nahin pata hai ki maine tumhe already bataya hai. Unhe ab tak lag raha hai ki hum dono sirf dost hain. Aur armaan keh raha tha ki main tumhe aaj raat bata dun.

Muskaan: Kya?? Rahul.... hum unhe batayenge lekin abhi nahin.... please..

Rahul: lekin unhe batana toh parega na, after all woh hamare dost hain. "

Thankss for the comment!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 19:

It was 11:45, and Rahul had to go home before 12 so he can surprise Muskaan with what he planned.

They were still sitting by the tabe, joking around. Rahul was sitting next to Muskaan.

Rahul whispered in her ears: Muskaan, ghar chale?

Muskaan: Kya? Abhi?

Rahul: Haan

Muskaan: Nahin, abhi nahin, abhi toh 12 bhi nahin baje.

Rahul: Haan abhi, mujhe ghar jaana hai.

Muskaan: Rahul.... tu thodi der nahin rukh sakta?

Rahul: Nahin muskaan, humhe abhi nikalna hoga.

Muskaan: Rahulllll, please yaar, tu itna natak kyun kar raha hai?

Rahul: Main natak kar raha hoon? Main sirf keh raha hoon ki chal ghar chale, lekin tu hai ki maan hi nahin rahi.

Muskaan: Rahul, tere se toh baat karna hi bekar hai. Guys, hum abhi ghar ja rahe hain.

Anjali: What??? Abhi?? Kyun!?

Armaan: Abhi? Rahul yaar, kya hai? 12 bajne tak toh rukh.

Rahul: Nahin' humhe jaana hoga.

Muskaan: Oye, humhe nahin, sirf Rahul ko jaana hai.

Armaan: Toh Rahul tu chala ja, aur Muskaan tu rukh ja hum tumhe ghar drop kar denge.

Rahul: No, muskaan mere saath chalegi.

Muskaan: Rahul tu...

Rahul: Muskaan, tu chup rahegi please? Ab chale?

Muskaan was really angry at Rahul right now, they left from the place and were in the car now.

Muskaan: Oye, tere problem kya hai huh? Pura mood kharab kar diya.

Rahul: Im sorry.

Muskaan: Kya sorry, tu itni jaldi mein kyun hai??

Rahul: Kuch nahin.

Muskaan: Kuch toh hai, mujhe nahin batana hai toh mat bata. Hmph!!

She was soo mad she looked away, outside the window. Rahul was driving towards his house instead of dropping Muskaan home since the surprise was there. He knew that Muskaan was really angry right now but once she sees the surprise, her heart will melt, and she will be really happy.

Muskaan: Oye, hum tere ghar kyun ja rahe hain? Pehle mujhe ghar drop kar.

Rahul: Nahin.

Muskaan: Kya nahin, mujhe tere ghar nahin ana hai.

Rahul: Tujhe ana parega.

Muskaan: Zabardasti hai?

Rahul: Joh samajhna hai samaj le.

They finally reached Rahul's house, and it was 11:59, and they were outside the door.

Muskaan: Oye ab hum bhar kyun khare hain, andhar chale?

Rahul: Rukh.

Muskaan: Kya?

Rahul: Shhh. He looked at his watch. 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1...

He opened the door

Rahul: Surprise!!!!!!

Muskaan went inside and all she could see was a HUGE heart painted on the floor, with RM written in it. Surrounding it were red and white balloons, there were soo many balloons, there was no space to walk.

Rahul: Happy Valentines Day Muskaan.

Muskaan: Rahul.... Main.... Yeh.. uhh... woh...

Rahul: Kya hua?

Muskaan: Toh tujhe jaldi isiliye ana tha?

Rahul: Haan.

Muskaan: Rahul.... Mujhe pata nahin ki main kya kahoon.....This is beautiful!

She walked over by the heart and kneeled down.

Muskaan: Rahul, im sorry.. main tumse ghussa thi car mein, mujhe nahin pata tha ki tu mere liye itna kuch karega. Im really very sorry.

Rahul: Shhhh, acha tha ki tum ghussa thi, kyunki agar nahin hoti toh mujhe lagta ki tumhe is surprise ke bare mein pata chal gaya.

Muskaan: Mujhe kaise pata chalega, tu itna acha actor jo hai.

Rahul: Muskaan... main abhi aaya..

Muskaan: Okay..

Rahul went and came back in less than a minute.

Rahul: Okay muskaan, ab tum apne aankhein band karo please.

Muskaan: Kyun?

Rahul: Bas karo.

Muskaan did what he told him to do.

He went behind her and put her hair on one side. He put a necklace around her neck and buckled it up from the back.

Rahul: Ab aankhein kholo.

Muskaan opened her eyes and saw the chain that was on her neck. It was a silver chain with an R on it.

Rahul: Maine tumhare liye ek R liya aur mere liye ek M, taaki tum mere bare mein hamesha socho aur mein tumhare bare mein.

Muskaan: Wow, yeh kitna khubsoorat hai! Yeh main hamesha apne pas hi rakhungi. Thank u so much Rahul.

Rahul: Lekin yeh tujhse khubsoorat ho hi nahin sakta. Tum yeh apne pas rakho ya na rakho, main toh yeh hamesha apne pas hi rakhunga.

He held his M that was around his neck.

Muskaan: Rahul, waise mere pas bhi ek gift hai, lekin ab mujhe lagta hai mein tumhe woh na dun. Tumne jo mere liye kiya, uske samne toh mera gift kuch bhi nahin hai.

Rahul put his arms around muskaan.

Rahul: Tum joh bhi mujhe do, woh gift hamesha special aur hamesha mera favorite gift hoga. Aur mujhe yakeen hai ki tumhara gift mere surprise se kahin zyaada acha hoga.

Muskaan: Main abhi lekar aati hoon.

She went towards the table where she kept her purse, and she took out a gift from there, and walked back towards Rahul.

Muskaan: Yeh le.

He took the gift from her hands and opened it. It was small photo frame with a picture of Rahul and Muskaan at Armaans party. The picture was just a random picture of when Rahul and Muskaan were out in the garden playing the game. They weren't even looking in the camera.

Muskaan: Yaad hai, yeh humari pehli photo hai, hum pehli bar Armaan ke party mein mille the.

Rahul: Woh din main kaise bhoolunga? Waise tujhe yeh photo mille kahan se?

Muskaan: Armaan ke paas photos the, aur unme se sirf yeh hi humara photo tha. Pata hai humara ek bhi acha sa photo nahin hai?

Rahul: Toh ab le le the hain.

Muskaan: Huh?

Rahul went in the room and got his camera.

Rahul: Smilleee!

Rahul put the camera on timer on the table and ran to Muskaan. He kissed Muskaan on the cheek and that's how the picture came out.

Rahul: Perfect! Main kal hi jhakar yeh photo print kar rakar enlarge karke, apne room mein lagaunga. Yeh dekh, yeh photo kitna cute hai na?

Muskaan: Rahul, no, chalo acha sa photo nikalte hain.

Rahul: Nahin, yeh photo sabse acha tha, Main issi ko print karwaunga.

Muskaan: Parr...

Rahul grabbed muskaans hand and took her outside to the garden. The garden was pretty small, but there was a hammock tied to two trees.

The hammock was as beautiful just like this:

Muskaan: Rahul!! I love hammocks! Pata hai mujhe Patiala mein aisa hi hota tha, lekin ab mere ghar mein kuch bhi nahin hain.

She ran towards it and layed down in it.

Muskaan: Rahul, this is beautiful, main hamesha raat ko isme hi behti thi, aur kabhi kabhi yahin pe soja thi thi, aur phir mummy aati thi aur subha ko utha thi thi. Man kar ta tha ki main kabhi wahan se uthu hi nahin. Jabhi bhi mera mood kharab hota tha, main bhaar garden mein jaakar mere hammock mein behti thi aur main wahan se ghanto tak nahin uthi thi, kabhi kabhi main wahan pe hi khana khati thi aur wahin pe mein apna homework karti thi, aur pata hai...

Then she realized that Rahul was staring at her. And she knew that she spoke a little too much.

Rahul: Chup kyun ho gayi? Bol na, tum kafi cute lagti ho jab tum itna bolti ho.

Muskaan smiled: Oyee chup, aa na beht.

Rahul: Uhh.... no.. tum behto mein chair lekar aata hoon.

Muskaan: Kyun?? Yeh hammock tutega nahin. Dont worry.

Rahul layed down beside her. For a while both of them were just there laying next to each other looking at the beautiful moon that was shining on them. Muskaan rested her head on Rahul's shoulders.

Muskaan: Rahul, ek baat puchun?

Rahul: Hmm puch.

Muskaan: Tumne yeh sab surprises kitne ladkiyoon ko di hain? Im sure ki mere tara aur sab ladkiyaan bhi surprised hongi haina?

Rahul turned around and was now facing Muskaan. There was so space between them, there were so close that both of them could hear each others heartbeats. Rahul put one arm around muskaan.

Rahul: Muskaan, tum mere pehli aur akhri ladki hogi. Tumhare siva koi aur hota, main yeh soch bhi nahin sakta. I love you alot Muskaan.

He slowely put his lips against hers, and her eyes closed. This kiss made their Valentines Day complete. Slowly they broke apart. Muskaan blushed and put her arm around Rahul and cuddled in more. She soon fell asleep like that, into his arms. After Rahul noticed that she fell asleep, he picked her up and went inside to put her in his room. He put a blanket on her and saw her holding the blanket close to her body and smile in her sleep. He also smiled and went in the hall to sleep on the sofa. This Valentines Day was unforgettable for both of them.
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
*edited*

Heyy Namu!!!

Awesome part!!!!!!! soo romantic and sweet and cute!!! awww....loved the surprise!!!
R and M necklace!! awww......and he set the place up for her so nicely!!...
and hehe...when she was all mad at him...that was really cute!!
the last part was really beautiful!! u wrote it really well!!! awww...they kissed...they did have a unforgettable valentines day!!! =]
great job namu!!
plz cont soon!!

<3333333
Mahima


Edited by dmgluver01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hai so Romantic Dil chheen liya!
Technically I'm First!
Edited by jinil - 16 years ago

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