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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgluver01



heyy...isn't this namrata's FF??😕

heyy omg im soo sorry! thats my sisters id and i didnt notice that she was logged in, so i just commented from there and im noticing now!!
reallyy sorry!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita

First of all thanks for the pm sweetie... 😊 !!

really nice part... very cute namrata!! cant wait for the next one... update soon...

thankss anki!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Manhen

awww i just caught up with many parts and i can just say: A M A Z I N G ! :D I loved it :)

thankk u soo much!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Namrata_12

heyy omg im soo sorry! thats my sisters id and i didnt notice that she was logged in, so i just commented from there and im noticing now!!
reallyy sorry!



ohh...its okay...sorry..i just got confused! haha....does ur sis watch DMG too?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 17:

Today is the day of the party, its almost 6, and Rahul would be reaching muskaans house any minute. Muskaan had straightened her hair and was wearing a red dress since its valentines day.

Rahul on the other hand couldn't wait to go to muskaans house. He was wearing a hot red shirt, with jeans. (Looking super hot as usual!)

It was 5:55 and Rahul had left his house to go to muskaans.

He reached muskaans house and saw the door open, so he went in the house.

Rahul: Muskaan??

Muskaan was still in the room getting ready.

Muskaan: Haan Rahul, mein bas abhi aayi, tum behto mein aa rahi hoon.

Rahul: Okay....

He went and sat on the sofa.

Rahul: Waise Muskaan, tum kya pehn rahi ho?

Muskaan: Tum khud hi dekh lena

Rahul: Toh jaldi kar na, main aur wait nahin kar sakta.

Muskaan: Haan baba main aa rahi hoon.

5 more minutes past but muskaan still didnt come out.

Rahul: MUSKAAAN!!!!!! Tu itni der kyun laga....

Muskaan had come out of the room and rahul was stunned. He hadn't seen anyone so beautiful ever in his life!

Muskaan: Rahul....? Kya hua?? Main achi nahin lag rahi hoon?

Rahul still didnt say anything, he just couldnt take his eyes off her.

Muskaan snapped her fingers in front of his eyes.

Muskaan: Hello... main tumse baat kar rahi hoon, bata na, main achi nahin lag rahi??

Rahul snapped out.

Rahul: Achi?? Muskaan tum kuch zyaada hi achi lag rahi ho, agar party mein kissi ne tujhe pasand kar liya toh?

Muskaan: Rahull!!!! Bata na, seriously, main change kar ke aayun kya?

Rahul: Muskaan, tu toh hamehsa hi achi lagti hai, maine toh hamesha sochta tha ki tu isse zyada khubsoorat ho hi nahin sakti, lekin aaj toh' DAMNN!!!! How can anyone be soo beautiful!?

Muskaan smiled.

Muskaan walked towards Rahul.

Muskaan: Rahul, tu kabhi apne buttons kyun nahin theek se pehnta?

She was fixing his buttons. Then Rahul held her waist and pulled her close to him.

Rahul whispered in her ears: Kyunki main hamesha chahta hoon ki tum mere itne kareeb aake theek kardo.

Muskaan blushed and looked away. Her cheeks had become bright red from blushing.

Rahul: Aur jab tum sharmati ho na, tab tu aur bhi khoobsurat lag ti hai. Man karta hai ki main bas tujhe dekhta hi rehjaun.

Muskaan: Rahul, tumhare yeh filmi dialogues mujhe bahut pasand hai, lekin please kuch original bhi bolega?

She smiled and pushed him away.

Rahul: Oyee!? Tujhe yeh filmi lag raha hai? Yeh koi film vilm ke nahin hai, yeh sab original hai, yeh hai Rahul Garewal ke dialogues, for his lovely Muskaan Garewal.

Muskaan: Main kabse Muskaan Garewal ban gayi???

Rahul: Ban jayogi, muskaan garewal ki aadat dal do. Waise tumhe yahan par sirf romance karna hai ki drive ke liye bhi chalna hai?

Muskaan: Romance main nahin, tu kar raha hai, main toh kabhse wait kar rahi thi.

Rahul: Ohhhh sorryyyy, maine tumhe wait kar waya. Lets go my valentine!

He put his arm around her waist and led her to the car.

They went for a long drive, talking, laughing, romancing, having fun. It was time for the party, infact they were little late since their long drive had been a little too long. They entered the club and saw everyone waiting for them.

Armaan: Rahul! Tu ab a raha hai, kahan chala gaya tha tu huh?

Ridhima: Muskaan? Pata hai hum tumhara kabse wait kar rahe hai, waise you are looking very pretty.

Rahul: Armaan sorry, woh' uhh'.. haan, woh raaste mein kuch kaam a gaya tha.

Muskaan: Ridhima, im sorry, woh Rahul na, idiot, itna late aaya mujhe pick up karne

.

Both of them didn't want to tell what the real reason was, but ofcourse they can never lie without being caught.

Ridhima: Muskaan, jhoot mat bol, humme sab kuch pata chal gaya hai.

Muskaan: K..kk...kya???

Muskaan was scared that everyone came to know about them.

Armaan: Haan Ridhima bilkul sahi keh rahi hai.

Rahul: Armaan... dekh joh tu soch raha hai waisa kuch bhi nahin hai.

Atul started to laugh sooo badly!

Armaan: Atul yaar, pura maza kharab kar diya. Rahul tera chehra toh dekh, dar ke mare lal ho gaya hai. Armaan also started to laugh badly and so did Ridhima.

Ridhima: Aur Muskaan tum? Tum bhi kitni dari hui lag rahi hai. Dont worry hum sirf mazak kar rahe hain, humme pata hai ki tum dono ki beech kuch nahin hai. Haina Muskaan?

Muskaan: Uhh... haann.... Kuch nahin hai...

She turned to see Rahul and saw that even hes looking at her.

Anjali: Guys, you are very boring, chalo na, chalke dance karte hain.

Atul: Haan chalo Anjali, hum chalke dance karte hain

They both go to dance.

Armaan: Ridhima tumhe bhook lagi hai?

Ridhima: Haan, chalo na chalke khate hain.

Armaan: Rahul hum thodi dher mein aate hain theek hai?

Rahul: Yeaa take your time.

They both leave and now its only Rahul and Muskaan.

Muskaan: Pheeww! Bach gaye yaar, mujhe unhe nahin batana hai Rahul.

Rahul: Pata hain, tere shakal se hi pata chal gaya tha.

Rahul went behing Muskaan, and put both his arms around her waist.

Rahul: Ab sirf main aur tum hain, bolo jaanu, tumhe kya karna hai?

Muskaan smiled and turned around so now shes in his arms facing him.

Muskaan: Jo tum bolo.... Jaanu

Rahul: Suna hai ki yahan pe ik bahut bara sa terrace hai, uppar jaana hai?

Muskaan: Hmm chalo.

They both went up, and luckily there was no one there. The terrace was beautiful, it was very big, and there were lights all over. But there was one problem, there were no chairs for them to sit.

Rahul was comfortable; he just went and sat on the floor.

Muskaan: Rahul, main kahan behtu? Mera dress kharab ho jayega.

Rahul just pulled her and made him sit in his lap.

Rahul: Ab toh kharab nahin ho ga na?

Muskaan smiled. : Nahin. She leaned back and rested her head on his chest.

Muskaan: Rahul, this valentine has been the best ever. Thank you for making it so special.

Rahul: Its been the best for me too, Muskaan I love you.

He put both his arms around her, and gave her a little kiss on her forehead.

Muskaan: I love you too Rahul

Both were sitting there for a while now, enjoying the moment. Muskaan was still in rahuls lap with both his arms around her, she wanted to stay like that forever, not wanting to let him go.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy Namu!!

OMG!! awesome part!!!! soo sweet and cute!!!
but i have a question, didn't armaan and atul know about RM? cuz rahul told them right?
cont soon! :)

<333
Mahima
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgluver01

Heyy Namu!!

OMG!! awesome part!!!! soo sweet and cute!!!
but i have a question, didn't armaan and atul know about RM? cuz rahul told them right?
cont soon! :)

<333
Mahima

Heyy mahimaa!! thanks for the comment. noo they only know that rahul likes her, but he didnt tell anyone that he told muskaan that he loves her. And same with muskaan, ridhima just kept on saying that Rahul loves her but she never told ridhima that they are together. Sorry for the confusion! \
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Namrata_12

Heyy mahimaa!! thanks for the comment. noo they only know that rahul likes her, but he didnt tell anyone that he told muskaan that he loves her. And same with muskaan, ridhima just kept on saying that Rahul loves her but she never told ridhima that they are together. Sorry for the confusion! \



Ohhh...okay! i get it now!! lolz...no problem!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Heyy i forgot to add this to my part but muskaan was wearing a dress somewhat like this:

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Posted: 16 years ago
ohh..okay...that looks really pretty!! :)

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