~Dil Dosti Etc..AR...UPD! Part 32 and 33 Pg70 5/4 - Page 42

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*duh!*

i just realized i never got back to this... not just the comments but the parts themselves... somehow, now that i recall you posted just before i was crashing n i reserved at the chance of being first :)

part 23: the satisfaction in that little text exchange was so cute... i'm almost in awe of how you juggle between those acts, the seductively passionate ones and the cute li'l know-nothin' friends ones... that when decidedly they aren't even close to admitting the reality of their feelings forget being in love and committed!
armaan and nikki was a necessary must that DMG skipped, thanks for that bit!

part24: i keep loving AR more and more... n here you add to the ways they can be... despite no love and the non admitance of attraction they each in their own spot have a thing!.. which is a delight to read... her delibrately reaching for his reactions and him giving nothing her way... :D i love that song from JTYJN btw :)

part25: nikki is a dubious wall for ridhima, but then, a fine one she is getting agitated when officially there is NOTHING between armaan and her :D i like the spark of that 'green eyed monster' as shakespeare himself had said :D which refuses to be subdued... ironically, it is true, of us humans... the positive and much in need to be expressed emotions can be easily concealed despite what all romantic flicks show... the lesser of the rightful emotions surface involuntarily!!!
the delivery and its success i bet will be one of those moments they cherish as the 'together-ness' memories!

ps: 23/7... although im late in replying, i'll happily take it as my share for a bday present!

cheers sweety, and sorry for the delay...

nj

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woaaahhh!! so many parts!!

hi.....it was awesome....parts were gr8.......continue soon

wow 3 parts back to back! awesome! really great parts girl, i especially loved the delivery scene...very touching! so glad armaan was there for her and this seems to have brought them closer!
looking forward to more :)

hey aliya wohoo wht a cme back 3parts totally rocking aww sad to knw d reason behind her leaving hmmmmm but their true friendship nazar na lage nd ridz felt jealous hmmmmm she wntd to knw is der goi anythingb/w thm hmmmmmm grt to knw nd ar also feeling same thing luvlyyaar i jst lv it so much all 3parts wre jst simply mindblowing yaar 1st 1 all abt nikki why she lft him chalo lvd arridz hm bth confusd abt their feelings grt wowwwww specially i lv last prt it ws jst outstanding ridz ws soo much scard but armaan mde her understood nd yeyyyy operation successfull i jst lv tht part yaar nd wow their closeness hayeeeeeeee cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooooooooon means sooooooon
luv yachna

hey i just read ur ff....