FF:Yeh Zindagi..Part 12 Page 19 16/02/10 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Ananya ...........

As usual I'm late ...........

I read 2 parts together ...........

Your writing is just awesome ...........

I wish to God the creative sof MRD happen to read this .......

They can def learn how a sensible period story should be ..........

I love your R & K characters .........

Their convo is so sensible and mature .........

They have diff ideologies ... but they are so mature in handling that diff.

Hats off to you Ananya ....

Keep it up ........

Waiting eagerly for he next part ..........

Once again awsme work yaar...

OMG
wasn't sure if you could surpass your own FF "Sitam"
( its my favorite and when you don't update... I reread it)
but you have done it....awesome
the story.... the conversations.... the situations.... everything amazing.....there were so many things in one part itself that impressed me.....
hey ananya have you ever thought of being writer (i mean full time n getting your work in black n white)...... I so much liked the idea that the name of the book was Yeh Zindagi....👏👏👏

now thats how writers start.... writing their own experiences... wonder one day we ll see the bestseller book n while reading it... ll discover that its your story authored by you....

also in this part.... story moved ahead nicely.. n so has raj n kranti s relationship....its building n one can visualize it....she made no bones about being writer of book in front of him...now I can see that she actually shares with him her true feelings... she was upset n emotional about press n she told him without any negativity....she defended him in front of prem babu but cud nt hold her feeling with him....thats wat we do with friends all the time....never let others say a. thing about em...but burst out in private...

n most impressive were the views of Raj....here I m not only complimenting the protagonist.. Of course your characters are sensible…but the way you presented the whole thought process👍🏼..…. It's so true… some Indians do felt like that at that point of time...n were able to foresee… I can endorse the whole thing because I heard the same thing from my father...ananya you are awesome…whether you read it sumwhere or you analysed it yourself…..in both cases I m awed....hats off to you

Originally posted by: Greenday

amazin!!!! you r gettin better wid each update!!!

Originally posted by: bhawna_dhunna

Hey ANANYA its awesome. ==Thanks..
you know what i feel that krantii also loves raj. ==Ohh..let's see..
she always seems to be comfortable wid him. ==That she is..
i loved it. ==I also loved it..
and most attractive thing is RAJ'S PERSONALITY. ==Hmmm..😳
but it is somewhere very complicated . ==Yes..it is..
this makes me feel too read it. ==Keep reading..

so now krantii has accepted that she is the writer of the novel - ==She had to..Raj charged her so aggressively..
so may be she will be arrested. ==No..she will not ..
waise aisa na ho to hi accha hai. ==Nahi hoga..

but raj -krantii conversation in last part was really nice. ==😳
raj's POV is great and sensible. ==Yes..Rajveer is intelligent..
he seems to be a rational personalty. ==That he is..

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Ananya ...........

As usual I'm late ........... ==No problem..

I read 2 parts together ........... ==Thanks..

Your writing is just awesome ........... ==Thanks😳

I wish to God the creative sof MRD happen to read this ....... ==I wished too..

They can def learn how a sensible period story should be .......... ==Hmm..😳

I love your R & K characters ......... == Characters came right from my heart,you know..😉

Their convo is so sensible and mature ......... ==Yes..thanks you..

They have diff ideologies ... but they are so mature in handling that diff. ==Haan..dono samajhdar hain...faltoo ka locha nahi karte MRD k RK ki tarha..

Hats off to you Ananya .... ==Thanks..

Keep it up ........ ==I will..

Waiting eagerly for he next part ..........==I will update soon..

Originally posted by: pennu

Once again awsme work yaar... ==Thanks..

you are writing each story with perfect sense... ==Thanks again..

I liked the way you said that kid's class details... ==That's my style..😃

Even my Grand mother used to tell like that, at her school days.. 9 std was not said as nineth and for 10th std she used say sixth...

And just loved how you mentioned Subhasji and Gandhiji..

You are great yaar... Did you ever published any of your work... ==No..I only write in forums..

Originally posted by: netu19

OMG
wasn't sure if you could surpass your own FF "Sitam"
( its my favorite and when you don't update... I reread it)
but you have done it....awesome ==Thanks..
the story.... the conversations.... the situations.... everything amazing.....there were so many things in one part itself that impressed me..... ==Ohh..I am so glad to know that..
hey ananya have you ever thought of being writer (i mean full time n getting your work in black n white)...... I so much liked the idea that the name of the book was Yeh Zindagi....👏👏👏==Well..for now I am happy with forum..jab main badi ho jaaoongi..matlab 40 ki ho jaaoongi..tab sochoongi..novel likhne k baare me..abhi mujhe aur bhi important kaam karne hain..

now thats how writers start.... writing their own experiences... wonder one day we ll see the bestseller book n while reading it... ll discover that its your story authored by you.... ==Oohh baap re..you went too far..😆

also in this part.... story moved ahead nicely.. n so has raj n kranti s relationship....its building n one can visualize it....she made no bones about being writer of book in front of him...now I can see that she actually shares with him her true feelings... she was upset n emotional about press n she told him without any negativity....she defended him in front of prem babu but cud nt hold her feeling with him....thats wat we do with friends all the time....never let others say a. thing about em...but burst out in private... ==Yes..Kranti feels free when she meets Raj..actually they are almost same..both are well educated..have own point of view..a proper approach to life..so they could connect so easily..

n most impressive were the views of Raj....here I m not only complimenting the protagonist.. Of course your characters are sensible.but the way you presented the whole thought process👍🏼... It's so true.some Indians do felt like that at that point of time...n were able to foresee. I can endorse the whole thing because I heard the same thing from my father...ananya you are awesome?whether you read it sumwhere or you analysed it yourself?..in both cases I m awed....hats off to you ..

Well..what I had written in the part about the Pre-Independence time..about the Leaders..these are my own realisations..my own analysis..I don't accept Nehru or Gandhi as the Heroes..no..never..in my opinion now a days what India is facing..these Nehru Gandhi duo made the base almost 62-63 years ego....I can accept Sardar Vallabh Bhai Patel as the maker of new India...but Nehru and Gandhi..I can't stand them..