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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi priya ki bachchi....kaisi ho? le...abhi tak meri shaadi bhi nahi hui...aur tu meri bachhi ko dhundh raha hai...pahle us k baap ko toh dhundh lun...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Dont worry tumhe koi anda danda ya tamatar nahi marega kyuki usse badia option hai na humare paas...joote chappal....bahut sare toote foote joote chappal honge mere ghar k storeroom me...sabka sadupyog karti hu....ud k liye nahi, vo to bahut achcha tha, us lambbbeee se NOTE k liye! thik hai jaldi se bhejo...abhi BIG BAZAAR me sale lagi hai 'purane chiz do naye lo'...main kuch achhi chiz kharid lungi...he he he...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Vese na agar itne achche ud ka credit tum mujhe dogi to mai bura nhi manungi u know....aur Mana ne uska jawab dene me koi kasar to chodi nhi hai so I think ab mai tumhe galiya deke kyu apna time waste karu ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†mana toh doc hai na...toh us ka obviously dimag kharab ho chuka hai...haan tum apna tym waste kmat karo...vaise main kya sudharnewali hun....kisi k daant se...jo abb sudhrungi...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
New Year special was really special kyuki ab Raj aur Naina dono ne ek dusre ko accept kar liya hai....romantic scenes ache the yaar why r u worried... galat....sirf naina ne accept kiya hai raj ka session abhi baki hai...๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Lagta hai ud likhte time tum kafi emotional thi jo shuru se leke end tak romance hi romance tha...aur beech beech me suspense jo kam hone k bajaye badhta hi ja raha hai!... haan...emotional toh thi yaar...mera cell fone us din pani me gir gaya tha๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ...aur kharab ho gaya...naya fone lene tak main emotional thi...par jab naya le liya hai toh abb bhangda karne ka mann kar raha hai...๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
To ab Raj Naina k baal banane ka kaam bhi karne laga hai....haaiii...soo sweeet...it was very cute...abhi bhi uske baalo me vo paudha atka hua hai...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† how come is baar Raj ko hasi nahi ayi? Looks like pehle jo laat padi thi na uska asar hai...๐Ÿคฃhaan...kafi zor ka asar pada hai...sidha dil n dimag tak asar hua hai...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
to Naina says k uske father zinda hai....hmmmm...tumhari fic hai kuch bhi ho sakta hai, to koi andaza lagana to bekar hi hoga, haina? tum guess mat kiya karo yaar...dekha nahi kitni dimagless batain hoti rahti hain yaahan par...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Aur Naina ko dekho to zara....Mallika ko khilane ki bajaye Raj ko gudd khila rahi hai...๐Ÿคฃ usse aur kya expect kia ja sakta hai....๐Ÿคฃarre pati ka har baat maan na patni ka farz hota hai...aur raj ne thode hi na kaha tha ki mallika ko khilao...isiliye naina ne pane dil se kaam liya...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
The horse ride was also very nice...u know I love horses...par kabhi kabhi unpar daya ati hai...kitna vazan uthana padta hai becharo ko.... yupe...parr mujhe horses dur se achhe lagte hain...kyoun ki ek baar main OOTY me baithi thi...aur voh mujhe le ke bhaag gaya tha...hala ki thodi dur ja kar ruk gaya tha...parr jo meri uss din halat hui thi na...us k baad main Horses ko dekh kar dur se hi pranam kar leti hun... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
but anyways, song selection was great....mujhe bahut acha lagta hai ye gana... mere liye koi kyu nahi gata???? main jarur gaa leti...par kya hai na...yeh sahi nahi hai...!!! tum agar boy hoti ya phir main agar boy hoti toh pakka tumhare liye gaati me...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Raj Naina ko cliff pe leke gaya...aur vaha usne wish bhi mangi...woooww... wish toh naina ne maangi...aur vohi farm house me hi...baad me voh dono hill par gaye...๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
end wala scene to ekdam mast tha....when they kissed and all...par achanak ye kya ho gaya? Raj ko pyaar mohabbat k beech konsi horror film ka scene yaad a gaya? Ab iska jawab bhi Maharani Priya kab dengi kuch pata nahi๐Ÿ˜†jaldi denewali thi...parr baht prob ho gaya...๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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very gud ud...story bahut achi chal rahi hai...and tumhare likhne ka tareeka is also tooooo gud. Thanqqqqqqqqq so much Sur๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...jhaad pe chadhna sach me achha lagta hai...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Lrl joke was also tooo funny....Huda se kya expect kiya ja sakta hai...sir me dimag ki jagah ghas phus jo bhara hai...ami janina sahab...lmao ...huda k dimag toh world class brand ka hai...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
im really sorry fr commenting soooo late par tumhe meri dukh bhari dastan to pata hi hai na... haan...pata hai...tabhi toh maine kuch nahi kaha...varna tumhari halat kharab karti main...๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Happy New year 2 u nd ur family to u too dear...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ud asap
love
sur

Thanqqqqqqqqqq so much Sur...!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx


Sorry yaar, last couple of months was too busy. IF ke liye bilkul bhi time nahin thi ๐Ÿ˜ญ, isliye paanch updates ki comments ek saath de rahi hoon. hey Aarti...itz okkk dear...actually marriage k baad lyf thodi si bz ho jati hai na...ryt...???๐Ÿ˜ƒ

first of all, Love the sweet scenes b/w raj and naina. thanqqqqqq sweety...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Lekin naina ki dream se pareshaan hoon. I hope no tragedy happens. arre mujh par bharosha rakho...main kis liye hun...๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜†

Loved arjun-vishal commentary: Thanqqqqqqqqq๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†


Arjun bich me hi bol pada:- "Yeh kya kah rahe hain aap sir...??? Sham ka anchal kaise lehra sakta hai...??? Sham saree pahnta hai kya...???"

Vishal:-" Kyoun jab aaj kal ki Radha jeans pahan sakti hain toh kya Sham saree nahin pahan sakta...!!!" ๐Ÿคฃ



Aur woh QSQT scene? Mindblowing! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Thanqqqqq...๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ actually mera dimag kuch jyada hi chal gaya ryt...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

isiliye dono bhaag gaye...gana gaya...pahadi k upar ghar banaya...!!! yahan tak ki jis rashmi ko khana banana nahi aata tha us ne khana banana bhi sikh liya...lekin itni mehnat kar k baad bhi kya hua...dhai ghante k baad un dono k baapon ne un dono ko goli maar di...!!! sab se bura toh yeh tha ki Raj ne Rashmi k hathon ka banaya hua khana bhi nahi kha paya...bechara...!!!"


mein toh Arjun ki fan bangayi hoon really....!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

Naina jee itni kam umr ki hain...toh voh kaise apne uncle k uncle k umr k aadmi se shaadi karegi...??? daal me kuch toh hai hi na sir...!!!" too good!!!


Fantastic!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† thanqqqqqqqq๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›



Voh nandini ki flashback thoda confusing tha ๐Ÿ˜•, ankur aur arjun mein bhi kaafi confusion hai , batasakti hai ki kisko kaun actor play kar rahe hai? yupe...nandini toh aparna hai apni SHALINI...n ankur...ANKUR NAIR...n Arjun toh apna sadda munda ARJUN BIJLANI hai... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



happy (belated) New Year!!! ๐Ÿค—happy new year dear...๐Ÿค—


arati


Thanxxxxxxx a lottt Aarti...!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so sorrry frnz...maine kaha tha ki jaldi ud karungi...aur main 7th jan ko ud karnewali thi aur dushra part 14th ko....par mere ghar me terrorists ghus aaye...matlab mere 3 kzn bro n sis aa gaye...aur 4 saal k baad aaye the...isiliye aap sab samajh sakte honge ki halat kya rahi hogi ghar ki...voh teeno sach me kisi terrorists se kamm nahi the...!!! khair voh teeno gaye toh mere PC ko bhai ne format kar diya...maine do parts likh rakhe the...voh dono parts gaye hawa me...!!! mujhe phir se likhne pada...!!!๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
u know...aaj Tere Naina ko one year complite ho gaya...14th january 2009 ko maine yeh fic start kiya tha...aur yeh sab aap sab k pyar aur sath k wajah se hua hai...!!! Thanqqqqqqqqq so much guys...love u all...๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
main try karungi ki aaj hi ud post karun...!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
n Happy Makar Sankranthi.๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Lotttttttts of Loooooooove
Priya๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Arjun singh ne sarr utha kar dekha...samne vohi havaldaar Ghaseeta Prasad khada tha...jiss ne voh fake certificate banaya tha...us k hath me chai ki cup thi...voh mushkurate hue khada tha...arjun singh ka dil karr raha tha 'saale ki jamm kar dhulai kar de'...par use flashback yaad aa gaya...flashback me ek baar is havaldaar ne us ki jaan bachai thi...!!!
Arjun:- "ek baat batyo...Ghaseete Prasad...tumhara yeh naam kis ne rakha hai...???"
Ghaseeta:- "jee sir jee...mere dadi ne...!!! puchiye kyoun...???"
Arjun:- "kyoun...???
Ghaseeta:-"sir jee...main na bachpan me bada sararat karta rahta tha. har kisi ki baat parr puchta rahta tha'kyoun...kaise...kya...aisa kyoun hua...kya hua..."...aise hi baht sare sawal ghaseet ta rahta tha. toh isiliye meri dadi mujh se pareshaan ho kar mera naam rakh diya...'ghaseeta prasad'... voh kya hai na...main har baat ko aise hi ghaseet ta rahta tha...!!!aur toh aur...."
Arjun:- "abe chup oye...yahan par bhi tu vohi karr raha hai. tu kya us S.p ka kumbh mele ka bichda hua bhai hai...??? saala...voh bhi us certificate ki baat ko baht bada issue bana kar mere piche pada hai. mujhe toh lagta hai ki voh din dur nahi jis din mere gale me jalta hua tyre daal kar crime brach wale meri dhulai kar rahe honge....!!! aur voh hai ki is baat ko ghaseet hi raha hai...!!!
Ghaseeta prasad:- "kyoun ghaseet rahe hain sir jee...???"
ek thappad pada us k gaal par ...voh vohin khade do round ghum kar usi jagah par phir se khada ho gaya...apne balance sambhalte hue...phir Arjun ne kaha:- "ab puch kyoun...???"
Ghaseete ne apna gaal sahlate hue kaha:- "kyoun...???"
Arjun ne us ki coller pakdi aur khinch kar apne kareeb la kar kaha:- "abe charkhi ke...kis k paas se bana kar laya tha voh certificate...???"
Ghaseeta:- "sir jee...Sunder Laal se bana kar le kar aaya tha...!!! voh toh ek damm professional hai...tabhi toh us se bana kar le kar aaya tha...!!!itne achhe se nakli sign karta hai ki asli aadmi bhi ghash kha kar gir jayega...!!!"
Arjun:- "girnewala toh main hun...aur koi magistrate nahi mila tujhe jo tu us magistarate ka sign le kar aagaya jo khud hi us ki saali ko le kar 2 saal pahle se bhaag gaya hai...!!!"
Ghaseeta Prasad:- "sir jee maaf kar dijye...yeh magistrate baht kamm keemat me mil raha tha...toh maine ise le liya...!!"
Arjun:- "tere is bachat ki chakkar me hum dono fashenge...samjha...? chal...ab Hanumaan jee k mandir me chalte hain...vahan diye jalayenge aur us k baad us Sunder k paas jana padega...use is saher se kuch din k liye bahar bhejna padega...!!!"
Ghaseeta Prasad:- "lekin sir jee...ek baat puchun...!!! aap har kaam karne se pahle Hanumaan ji ki puja kyoun karte hain...??? aur maine dekha hai sir jee ki kafi sare policewale Hanumaan jee ki puja karte hain...kyoun...???"
Arjun:- "kyoun ki Hanumaan jee hamare desh k sab se pahle police commissioner the...!!!"
Ghaseeta prasad:-"sach sir jee...??? tabhi Raam jee ne unhe Seeta mata ki kidnapping ka case hal karne k liye diya tha...!!! lekin sir jee voh kis department me the...???"
Arjun:- "crime branch me...!!! agar dushra sawal kiya na...toh tujhe yahin goli maar dunga...samjah...!!!"
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Aditi hairan thi...jab se Naina aur Rajveer farm house se laute hain ...dono chup hain...!!
Raj ne bina kisi se kuch kahe chup chap apne room me wapas chala gaya. us k chehre par ek uljhan saaf jhalak rahi thi...!!! aate hi voh apne room me wapas chala gaya...aur tab se bahar bhi nahi aaya...!!!
Naina k chehre parr bhi ek uljhan thi...sath hi ek khushi bhi us k chehre par dikhai de rahi thi...
Adi sab se pahle Raj k room me gayi...
voh window k paas khada...bahar aashmaan me jhaank raha tha...honthon par ek cigarette thi us k...Raj ne turn kar k adi ki tarf dekha bhi nahi...
Adi Rajveer k kareeb aayi...aur kuch der tak use aise hi dekhti rahi...Rajveer ne kuch nahi kaha...us ki taraf dekha bhi nahi...chup chap smoke karta raha...
phir thodi der baad...adi ki taraf bina dekhe Rajveer ne kaha
Rajveer:- "aise kya dekh rahi hai...??? tu aaj kya pahli baar mujhe smoke karte hue dekh rahi hai...??? pahle bhi toh karta tha main...!!!"
Adi:- "haan...tu pahle bhi smoke karta tha...lekin tabhi jab tu kisi uljhan me hota tha...!!! lekin aaj tujhe kaisi uljhan hai bhai...???"
Rajveer ne ek halki si smile di...hala ki adi ko us mushkurahat me ek dard ka ehsaas hua...!!!
Rajveer:- "mujhe kabhi koi pareshani ho sakti hai kya...??? meri sab se badi pareshaani toh tu hai...aur...
Adi:- "baat ko ghuma mat bhai...!!! main janti hun tujhe aur tere har ek taklif ko bhi...!!! tune aaj tak mujh se kuch bhi nahi chupaya...hala ki teri zindagi aisi kyoun hui...us ki badi wajah main hun...!!!"
Rajveer ne turn kiya Aditi ki taraf phir us k saar parr hath rakh kar kha:-"nahi re...tu mere liye sabb se jyada imp hai...meri zindagi...mera aham...mera sab kuch...!!! tune kuch nahi kiya tha...jo bhi hua tha...sayad waqt voh sab karwa raha tha...!!! aur tune bhi toh baht suffer kiya hai na mere bachhe...!!! par pata nahi kyoun...kyoun...
Raj aage aur kuch nahi bol paya...
Adi:-" teri yah line main puri kar deti hun...parr...tu chahne laga hai NAINA ko...!!! yahi baat hai na...jo tujhe pareshaan kar raha hai...!!!"
Raj hairan nahi hua...kyoun ki Aditi hai hi aise...!!! Rajveer ko use kabhi kuch kahne ki jarurat nahi padti...voh sabb samajh jati hai...Raj k dil ki har ek baat...!!!
Adi:- "kabhi apne dil ki sun liya kar bhai...tera dil galat nahi hai...!!! kuch 'kyoun' k jawab hote hain...unhe bass samajha ur ek baar bina kisi uljhan k mehsus karne ki koshish kar...!!!"
Adi chali gayi...Raj vohin khada use dekhta raha...
door k paas Aditi ruki ...Rajveer ki taraf turn kiya aur kaha:-"mujhe mera bhai wapas chahiye...aur meri is zidd ko pura karne k liye tujhe apne is ehsaas ko kabul karna hoga...!!! aur main janti hun ki mera bhai meri zidd puri jarur karega...!!!"
Adi chali gayi...Rajveer ne phir se khidki k bahar jhanka... Rajveer uljhaan me tha...kaise samjhaye voh Adi ko...kya kahe voh Naina se....Raj ne dekha...
aashmaan me chaand tha...par achanak hi ek kaale badal ne use apne aagosh me sama liya...!!!
"pyar koi bol nahi...pyar awaz nahi...
ek khamoshi hai...sunti hai,kaha karti hai...
na yeh bujhti hai na...rukti hai na...thahari hai kahin...
noor ki boond hai sadiyon se baha karti hai
sirf ehsaas hai yeh...rooh se mehsus karo...
pyar ko pyar hi rahne do...koi naam na do...
hum ne dekhi hai un ankhon ki mehkati khushbu...
hath se choo k ise rishton ka ilzaam na do..
sirf ehsaas hai yeh rooh se mehsus karo
pyar ko pyar hi rahne do koi naam na do...
hum ne dekhi hai...."
cut to Naina...
Naina bhi apne room me khidki k paas hi khadi thi...us k honthon par ek masum si mushkurahat khil rahi thi.voh apne ehsaas ko pahchan chuki hai...mehsus kar chuki hai us khaash ehsaas ko jo us k dil me Rajveer ki wajah se hai...aur aaj us ne apne dil ki baat Rajveer se kah bhi diya...!!! voh janti hai...aur yeh mehsus bhi karti hai ki jo ehsaas us k dil me Rajveer k liye hain vohi ehsaas Rajveer k dil me us k liye bhi hai...!!! par Naina pareshaan is baat se thi ki...us k confession k baad Raj ne kyoun kuch jawab nahi diya......??? par ek yakeen bhi hai Naina ko ki bhale hi Raj ne kuch na kaha ho...par Naina janti hai ki Raj bhi us se pyar karta hai......
Naina ne bahar jhaanka...chaand par se kaale badal hatt gaye the...phir se chaand mushkura raha tha...!!!
"mushkurahat si kheeli rahti hai
ankhon me kahin...
aur palkon pe ujaale se jhuke rahte hain
honth kuch kahte nahi
kaanpte honthon pe magar
kitne khamosh se afsaane ruke rahte hain
sirf ehsaas hai yeh ruh se mehsus karo
pyar ko pyar hi rahne do koi naam na do...
hum ne dekhi hai un ankhon ki mahakti khushbu
hath se choo k ise rishton ka ilzaam na do
sirf ehsaas hai yeh ruh se mehsus karo
pyar ko pyar hi rahne do koi naam na do...
hum ne dekhi hai..."
Naina ko laga koi us k baht kareeb khada hai...us ne turn kar k dekha...voh Aditi thi...jo naina ko mushkurate hue dekh kar mushkura rahi thi...!!!
Naina ne bhi aditi k mushkurahat ka jawab ek sweet si smile k sath hi diya.
Adi:- "tum hassti hui baht achhi lagti ho...!!!"
Naina:- "is mushkurahat ko wapas is chehre par bhi toh tum sab se hi aaya hai na...!!!varna main toh mushkurana hi bhul gayi thi...!!!"
Adi Naina k thoda aur kareeb aur us ka hath pakda aur kaha:-"ek vaada karogi...???"
Naina:-"haan kaho na...!!!"
Aditi:- "bhai ka hamesha sath dena...use kabhi akela mat chodna...!!! use tumhari baht jarurat hai...!!!"
Naina ne thoda aur tightly thama Adi ka hath aur kaha:- "main vaada karti hun...!!!"
dinner table par Raj nahi aaya...kuch kaam ka bahana bana kar voh dinner karne nahi aaya...!!!
Aditi:- "Vishu...bhai kahan hai...???"
Vishal:- "apne room me...kafi der se kisi se fone par baat kar rahe hain kisi se...!!!"
achanak Rajveer bahar aaya...aur Vishal se kaha:-"tum ne dinner kar liya...!!!"
Vishal:- "haan...
Rajveer:- "thik hai...mere sath chalo...!!!"
Aditi:- "bhai dinner toh karta jaa...!!!"
Rajveer:- "nahi mujhe bhuk nahi hai...!!! tum log kha lo...main thoda kaam se bahr ja raha hun...jaldi laut aayunga...!!!"
kafi raat ho chuki thi Rajveer nahi aaya tha...!!! Naina aur Aditi baith kar un ka intezaar kar rahe the...!!! achanak bahar jeep rukne ki awaz aayi...Aditi ne ja kar door khola...toh samne Raj aur Vishal khade the...!!!
Raj k chehre se aisa lag raha tha...jaise voh khud ko kahin chod aaya hai...!!! Rajveer ne Naina ko straight dekhte hue kaha:- " Naina...kal subah taiyar rahna...tum aur Vishal Delhi ja rahe ho...!!! aur vahaan se Vishal tumhe Shimla le jayega...!!! voh jagah tumhare liye safe hai...!!! tumhare father ko dhudhne k baad main unhe bhi vohin bhej dunga...!!! voh jagah Vikram ki pahunch se dur hai...tum sab safe rahoge...!!! vahan ek baht bade politician mere dost hain...voh tumhari vahaan par har tarah ki help karenge...!!!"
itna kah kar Rajveer apne room me wapas chala gaya...!!! Naina vahan statue bann kar khadi rahi kuch pal tak...!!! phir dhire dhire Rajveer k room ki taraf gayi...!!!
Adi janti thi apne bhai ko...voh janti hai ki Rajveer aisa kyoun kar raha hai...kyoun voh apne aap ko dard aur taklif de raha hai...!!!
Raj k door par knock hua...!!! Raj ne turn kar k dekha...Naina khadi thi...!!! Naina ander aayi...us k chehre par koi xpression nahi tha...voh kuch pal tak khamosh rahi...
Rajveer ek bebasi si nazar se use dekhta raha......
Naina:-" yeh nahi puchungi ki tum ne...(pause)...aap ne...yeh faishla kyoun liya. bcz...bcz i trust u...aur faishla chahe kuch bhi liya ho aap ne...main aap ka sath dungi...kyoun ki maine vaada kiya hai adi se ki hamesha aap ka sath dungi. main kal subah taiyar rahungi..."
Naina chali gayi...Raj vohin khada raha kuch der tak. kuch na kahte hue...baht kuch kah gayi thi Naina...!!! Rajveer ko 'aap' kah kar ek pal me ajnabi bana diya aur ' trust u' kah kar ek pal me us ko kareeb le aayi...!!!
Rajveer ki uljhaan aur badh chuki thi...!!! voh kya kare...??? Naina ko jane de ya phir nahi...!!! agar jane nahi diya toh...
next day......
Naina apna bag le kar niche aayi toh dekha...Gayatri devi khadi thi...
Naina ne un k pair chuye...toh unhone Naina ko gale se laga liya aur bass itna hi kaha:- "mera dil kahta hai ki tum is ghar me baht jald wapas aanewali ho...!!!"
voh aage kuch aur kah nahi payi...ander chali gayi...
Adi aayi Naina k paas aur kaha:- "baht si chizain hain jin par tumhara haq hai...unhe plzzzz zahir karo...!!!"
Maina mushkurayi aur kaha:- "kuch chizon par haq jataya nahi jata...kyoun ki voh sabb kuch aap k ehsaas aur dil se jude hue hote hain...!!!
Raj ne Naina ka luggege uthaya toh naina ne rok liya...us ne apna samaan khud uthya...!!! Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekha...!!! Naina ne ek baar Rajveer ki taraf dekha...dono ki nazrain mili toh Naina ne halke se mushkura diya...hala ki Rajveer ko us mushkurat me dikh rahe dard ka bakhubi ehsaas hua...!!!
car k ander Rajveer ne Naina ko dekhne ki koshish ki...voh apna ankhen band kar k baithi hui thi...!!! par ankhon k kone me do boond anshun chamak rahe the...jinhe Naina bade mushkil se dabaye hue thi...!!!
Raj k dil ne kaha:- "main tumhe kho nahi sakta Naina...!!! kyoun ki Adi ki tarah ab tum bhi meri zindagi bann gayi ho...!!! aur main tumhare sath voh sab hone nahi de sakta...jo Adi k sath hua tha. isiliye tumhe mujh se dur rahna hi hoga Naina...'i m sorry'...!!!"
station par.........
Rajveer train se dur khada tha...Vishal train k ander apna aur Naina ka saman rakh raha tha...!!!
Naina vohin Vishal k paas hi khadi thi...!!! un k sath aur 4 log ja rahe the...!!! Rajveer ne Naina k security ka pura intezaam kiya hua tha...!!!
Vishal ne Naina se kah:- "bass 5 min me train janewali hai... ander chaliye...!!!"
Naina ne akhir vaar Rajveer ki taraf dekha...voh use bebas khada dikhayi diya...!!!
Naina train par jane k liye turn kiya...us ki nazar samne ki taraf padi...phir voh achanak mudi...aur Rajveer ki taraf bhagti hui aayi..aur Rajveer k samne aate hi....kahi se ek halki si awaz aayi...voh thoda ruki...us ka body thoda move hua...voh Rajveer ki ankhon me dekhte hue...apne dagmagate hue kadmon k sath Rajveer k baht kareeb aayi...us k honthon par ek mushkurahat aayi...voh Rajveer k seene ki taraf jhuki...aur us k seene par apna sar rakha...
Rajveer ka dil bhi yahi chata tha ki ek baar jane se pahle voh ek baar Naina ko apne baht kareeb se mehsus kare...ek baar use apni bahon me le...kyoun ki pata nahi kal kya hoga...??? kal voh ek dushre se mil payenge ya nahi...!!!"
Rajveer ne Naina ko aur bhi jyada tightly apne seene se lagaya...ankhon me anshun us k bhi the...
achanak Vishal chillaya...'BHAI'....aur bhagta hua us k kareeb aaya...Rajveer ne hairani se use dekha...par Vishal ki nazar Naina k pith par thi...
Vishal:- "bhai...aap ka hath...
Rajveer ne apna hath dekha...khun se bheege hue the...Naina k pith par bullet lagi thi...silencer gun se chalaya gaya tha...isiliye awaz nahi aayi thi...
Naina ne rajveer k bahon me hi apna ankhen band kar chuki thi...
Rajveer k hath kaamp rahe the...khun se bheege hue us k hath kaanp rahe the...us ne Naina ko dekha...us ki ankhen band thi...par chehre par ek jeet ki mushkurahat thi...
end of d episode.........
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plzzzzz do comments or press d LIKE bottom...!!!
Thanqqqq๐Ÿ˜Š
P.S:- thanxxxx a lottt Yogitha...tumhare 20 litre Kerosene mil gaye hain...!!!๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi priya..............really nice part dear
congratulations 4 completing one year
keep up the good work
really like the conversation between raj and adi
they share a beautiful relationship
raj ko naina ko door nhi bhejna chahiye tha but the last part really surprised me.....
plz naina ko kuch nhi hona chahiye
plz update soon
luv preet
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow !" tere Naina " ko ek saal pura hua...pata hi nahi chala yaar...congrat's ๐Ÿ˜ƒ & this is for u dear ๐Ÿ‘


Happy Makar Sankranti.....keep writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya
How r u???
Update was brilliantly written...
Arjun Singh us Ghaseeta Prasad ki baatein sunkar kitna dukhi ho gaya hai..Uska naam hi kuch ajeeb hai..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Usko lag raha hai kahin unka plan sab ke samne khul na jaaye..Hanumanji hi ab uski raksha kar sakte hain..
Why is Raj so confused after the confession??? Even Naina is confused but atleast she is happy dat she proposed him..
No distance can keep us apart,
long as youre here in my heart.

Love is the shortest distance between hearts.

I would give up anything just to be with you."

If he is the first thing you think of when you wake up,
the only thing you think of when you're awake,
and the last thing you think of before you go to bed,
then he is really somebody special.

Anything is possible,
when it comes to love.

Everytime I think of you,
I'm sad.
Everytime I hear you're name,
I'm mad.
But everytime I think of how you made me feel,
I'm glad.

Your love as far as I can see
is all I'm ever gonna need.

Some say it is a sin to love,
I never did ask why,
But, if I sin in loving you, I'll sin until I die!
Aditi can easily make out wats going in Raj's mind..She knows dat Raj loves Naina n she too loves hom back but den wat is stopping him from confessing???
That song is 1 of my favourites..It is so meaningful n touching..
Raj has decided that Naina wud b going to Shimla with Vishaal.Why is he doing this???Wat happened to Aditi in the past that Raj is forced to tke such step..
Naina didn't question him..She accept his decision coz she promised Aditi dat she will always support Raj but she is really hurt with this..
I think last part is the dream sequence..Pls dont make it real n den u stopped at such crucial point..I think u love giving jhatkas to your readers๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Continue soon
Bye
I missed the joke dat u always write in d end๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Congrats on completion of 1 year..
Hope dere r many more to come๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
muaahhhh!!!
Luv u !!!!
Bye๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 15 years ago
priya yeh kya tha... main tho soch rahii thi kii is part mein humko raj aur naina ke beech ek achchi mast confession milegi.. lekin yahaan tho aisa nahii hua.. ulta yeh hogaya kii jaise maine guess kiya raj ne naina se apni dil kii baat nahii kahii... i was right raj ne jaan boochkar naina ko kudh se alag kar dena hii sahii samjha... pyaar tho raj, naina dono ke dil mein hai farq bas itna hai kii naina apne pyaar ka izhaar karr chuki hai.. aur raj ne abhi yeh nahii kaha hai.. lekin achcha hai kii bhale hii raj ne honto se kuch nahii kaha ho par naina uske dil kii baat samaj gayi... yeh hui na baat... adi kitni sweet hai.. raj ke bina kuch kahe hii woh sab samaj gayi.. she is really a darling sister.. aditi pretty well knows how to get things done from her brother..... lekin is barr raj is very ziddi... hmm.. apni dil kii baat chupane, woh bhi us shaqs se who loves you is wrong, lekin jin haalat mein raj hai, may be what he is doing is right... i liked aditi's interaction with naina... naina ne aditi se waada kiya kii she will always support raj, aur usne wahii kiya.. when raj told her that naina should go from here as she will be safe else where.. yeh raj bhi na... naina can clearly see what he is trying to do... i liked naina & raj's convo.. especially the aap bit.. this shows that raj ne naina ke dil ko dhukhaya hai.. but naina covered it off very well saying that she trusts raj.. this shows kii though she is hurt she will always stand by raj and support hum every single time... i think gayatri ne joh kaha sahii hai.. naina bohat jald laut aayegi us ghar mein.. and my gut feel says raj kudh le aayega usko aur i also feel kii this time when raj gets naina this time it will be forever.... the scene between raj & naina in the station was so heart warming... lekin yeh kya naina ko goli lagi.. and raj's worsts fear has come true... and naina na raj ko bachane ke liye she took the bullet... & she has kept her promise and usne raj kii jaan bachayi... the smile on naina's face even after getting shot shows kii she does not regret taking the bullet.. because usne apne pyaar ko bachaya.... very well written.. everything was beautifully portrayed.... keep up the good work going.....๐Ÿ‘ priya please continue soon.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW..one year...!!! thats wonderful.... ๐Ÿ‘ ..Congratulations Priya...๐Ÿค—
Awesome part... u have described both Raj and NAina's feelings so well.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ..the poems u used to described their feelings r so lovely...
Raj also loves Naina..but he doesnt wanna put her in danger..n so he is denying to accept the truth... n Naina..she believes that Raj loves her...
adi is so sweet..she knows Raj n Naina's condition.. n is trying to make them understand..
so raj is sending Naina to dehradoon.. Naina doesnt wanna go but she is doing it as Raj told her to do so...
Raj also doesnt want to let her go..but he is doing it for her safety... poor souls... ๐Ÿ˜’
last scene ws gr88.. cudnt understand why Naina ws smiling... but she ws smiling because she knows that now she is not going anywhere... she is there in Raj's arms.. someone shot her... ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ...
ohh god... i hope Naina thik ho jaaye jaldi...!!!
awesome part ...
pls continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by sweet_shona - 15 years ago

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