*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
fantastic update!! cant wait to read the next update 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Loved ur ff its so romantic plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
nice part guys !
can anyone continue ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
Hi guyss...wht's up?
yeaah im BACK with my continuation of the mayur married ff...
sorry i got so many assignments i totally lost track of the ff...
but i will try to update regularly from now on...let's see how my brain works today...do provide feedbacks - they're always appreciated😊
Nupz was so shocked she couldn't even yell. In the dark closet the person holding her pressed her back against the wall, and even though she couldnt seehis face, she could feel him approaching closer to her.
"Kaun ho tum? Kya kar rahe ho? DEKHO mai keh rahi hoo HATO mere raaste se nahi to mai CHILAAAUNGI!" she told him pointing her finger warningly...
as scared as nupz was..she wasn't abt to show it to this stranger, he didn't know who she was - she was Nupur..Nupur Bhushan Sharma!
"Acha..chilaaugi? chillaao...mai bhi dekhu kya bigaar sakte hain tumhe 'bachane' waale.." replied a familiar voice with a tone of sarcasm that Nupz suspected was accompanied by a raised eyebrow.
"Mayankkk!!!" she starting punching every bit of him she cud see or hit in the dark.." tum nahi baaaz aaoge! YEH KYA TAREEEKA HAI? Tumko pata hai main kitna DAR gayi thi!" she yelled angrily while still trying to punch him as much as she can...
"ouchh..Nupur..Kya kar rahi hoo.." she grabbed her struggling arms and continued, "dekho mai nahi chahta ke humara honeymoon tum jail mei manao aur mai hospital mei!" he said with an amused tone, then added "KYA! ek min ek min..REWIND ! ya kaha tumne? tum DAR gayi thi?????"
Now Nupur was sure there was that same crooked smile playing on his face that was always there when he'd finally managed to get a win over her!
"abb...mera matlab woh nahi tha..." she started to stammer, while rolling her eyes to emphasize her point only to realise it was dark and he couldn't even see her. She then continue, "dekho wo toh maien tumhara dilrakhne ke liye keh diya tha...maine kaha chalo tumhara khel mei mai bhi apna khel kheli hoo..khel khel mei tumne mujhe darane ki koshish ki aur maine darne ki acting ki;)" she finished confiedently...
"koshish woh hoti hai jo kamyaab nahi hoti..maine koshish nahi ki thi..maine tumhe DARAYA tha..aur tumne darne ki acting nahi ki thi - ab mai jaanta hoo mai tumhe heroine kehta hoo kabhi kabhi but by god ab aisi acting karti tum to abhi tak yah kya bethi hoti - movies mei nahi aajati!" he added with a smirk, and it didn't even matter whether it was dark or light becuz his tone was enough to tell Nupur that he was smirking proudly.
"daraya meri joooti!!! dekho mai maanti hoo tum boht daraooni hoo..door gau mei jab bacha nahi sota ot maa kehti hai betha soja nahi to MAYANK uncle aake ghussa kareinge or hoework kareinge!..but mai nah yeh darti warti..samjhe na? bare aaaye darane miyaan!"
with this, leaving mayank gaping at her blatant lie, Nupur headed out of the hallway, smiling at her victory.
Mayank shaking his head followed her outside, where both of them gave each other a look, both of them challenging each other with their gazes.
Just then the recepptionist called out to Mayank,
"Mr. Sharma, there's a call from u, from your mum.."
This brought a smile to Mayank's face, but as he reached to grab the phone, Nupur ran to the desk and grabbed it just before he could grab it.
"Payri Paona Mummy ji, KAISE HAIN AAAP? "
Mayank stared at his with his his eyebrow raised, then just looked away with a loving smile playign across his face.
Nupz continued the convo with her M-I-L for abt 10 mins, talkign abt the "dood waala" taking too much money, the sabzi waala giving wrong sabzis, and much more which he didnt hear as he was too busy staring her her lovely expresions.
"acha mummyji..chalo ab aap araaam kijiye...lein apne bete se baat kar lein", and with a wink Nupz passed the phone over to Mayank, who just smiled.
As Mayank talked over the phone, Nupz went inside the lunch room where a cariety of breakfats dishes were served. Nupz was walking aroudn lookign excitedly on all the dishes, when a young boy arrived towards her with a bouqet of purple roses this time, and leaened them forwards towards her...now a bit frustrated at these rose sender, Nupz reached out and took the card which this time said, "kya item lag rahi hoo..morena ki queeen"
She read the msg twice, not sureof wht she'd read, then put the card back on the flowers and told the boy sweetly, "these aren't for me"
"yes they are" said a voice from some guy behind her...
She turned suddenly and faced the person, and almost shouted in surprise - "TUM???!!!!!"...
and the next second she jumped forwards and hugged him tightly, yelling with happines "hayeee bhagwaaan....tummmm!!!"
as she broke up from him, we see Mayur standing at the entrance, right in the middle of Nupz and the new guy, who had broad shoulders, was 5 feet 11 inches, light blue eyes, light wavy brown hair - in general words - he was just TOO HOT!
As nupz cauht mayank's surprised/stunned look, she said ..." Mayank...." and looked back at this new stranger, and the scene divides up into nupu rint he middle and mayank and the new guy on either side...
Tadaa...alrite guys i honsetly wudve written mor eits just i can hardly keep my eyes open..
so hopefull yi will continue this tomorrow..
till then i need ur fweeback on the ff...
AND MAJOR: I need a new name for the GUY who just entered...sum name that protrays a stylish young man, an athlete (basketball prolly)..well built, hot, but also with a very "desi" style of talking , as in almost the Nupz style - movie crazy guy... so gimme a list of names, and I'll choose one and continue the next part of the story with the name...so gimme ur top 3 names for a supporting actor in Mayur's life😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
finally...i have been waiting all day ever since i read your PM for you to update.........i stayed up this long online just because u said u were going to update tonight.........and looks like i finally am the first one to reply.....mayur are sooooooooooo cute...i just loved it.
it was so cute the way nupur ran up to the receptionist and grabbed the phone before mayank could....that is so like nupur to do something like that...she has to win everything.
i just cant wait to see mayank jealous...especially after the tight hug she gave the new guy.
wow by the description, this guy seems sooooooooooooo hot...but not as hot as mayank.
cant wait till tomorrow...i really hope you post a really lllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggg update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ twiklystar_hp: u r a fabulous writer 👏................m usually a silent reader bt u got me so hooked dat i had to comment...............pls keep up n do ryt oder mayur fanfics........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, I just caught up with you're FF, WOW!!! you're such an amazing writer, and you're soo funny too!! I love it!! If you have a Pm list please do add me. And please do update soon, I can't wait! Keep up the great work!

My top 3 names:
1. Ranbir
2. Rohit
3. Amit

-Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
LOVE IT
VERY NICE..
CONT SOON
TAKE UR TIME
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow you continued finally lol i think i should not say that because i made the f-f and i am not participating that much !!
but i will do soon as i get free !
btw plz dont make this guy twist for long keep it short ! as i made the f-f keeping in mind a nice and romantic funny cute f-f ! of mayur !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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okay so i am gonna continue ...

nupur left the guy from the tight hug and said
n: ArmaanNNNnnn what are you doing here ..?? tum to morena say london parnay chlay gay tha aur ab paris main ...?
mayank who was standing there with a jelouse face came and stand next to nupur and said
M: yeh kon hai nupur ?
armaan smiled and shaked hands with mayank telling
A: main armaan hoon . nice to meet you mr?
m: Mayank sharma ! nupur Ka husband ( he emphasized on the word husband more )
n: mayank yeh mera best friend armaan hai. morena main yeh mujay chor kar mumbai pernay chla gaya tha and for higher studies he then went to london .
A: nupur ! tum nay abhi tak mujay mumbai aur london jannay kay liyeh maaf nahi kiya !
n: uffhoo ! pagal ho kardiya maggar par tumay bohat yaad kiya ! tumay maaf to karna parah kyun kay tum parahi karnay jaa rahay thay london aur mumbai main SRK ki flim ki shooting nahi dekhnay jaa rahay thay agar voh dekhnay jaatay aur mujay nahi laay kay jaatay to main tab maaff nahi karti !
mayank was just standing there listening to them a littel jelouse from the recent scene ... when nupur hugged armaan.
A: nupur tum abhi tak SRK ki dewaani hoo ! ab to mayank say shaadi kar li hai .. shaadi say yaad aya tum nay mujay invite kyun nahi kiya ?
now someone elz continue plz.....
i hope you guys like it !
Edited by sabzz - 16 years ago

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