*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7 - Page 7

nice scene sabzz......do continue someone!!!

Mayank was all of a sudden feeling thirsty, so he got up and grabbed a bottle of water from the mini fridge. While putting the bottle back after a few gulps, he noticed the clothes nupur had taken out for herself, but apparantly forgot them on the small round coffee table besides the washroom dooor.

Originally posted by: twinklystar_hp

Mayank was all of a sudden feeling thirsty, so he got up and grabbed a bottle of water from the mini fridge. While putting the bottle back after a few gulps, he noticed the clothes nupur had taken out for herself, but apparantly forgot them on the small round coffee table besides the washroom dooor.

Interesting..ab aayega maza....he thought, and Smiling evilly, he grabbed the clothes.

Then he heard Nupz exclaiming to herself, "had ho gayi hai! kapre nikale aur bahar hi bhool aayi...nupur tu bhi na kahan chali gayi hai teri akal?"

Nupz put her hand outside the door and reached for the top of the small table, all the time grabbing empty air. she peeked on it, and then said to mayank,

"Mayank pata nahi maine kapre kahan rakh diye dekho zara is table ke neeche to nahi gir ga..." she stopped short, catching the sight of mayank holding her clothes in his hands.

Surprised, but also relieved, she said, "array acha hua tumhe mil gaye...do ge plz?"

Smiling all the way to the door,, mayank replied, "kyun nahi..my pleasure".

watching him beaming like that and hearing his reply, nupz immediately grew suspicious, but reached out with her hand for the clothes he was handing out.

Just as she was about to ggrab them, he pulled her by her hand outside!

Wearing a knee length baby pink bath gown, and with a deep blush creeping up her cheaks and irritation flickering in her eyes, she was looking so cute that mayank just kept staring at her for 3 minutes, until Nupz broke the eyelock, and told him angrily, "tum na..sudroge nahi by god!"

"Sudrunga? mai kyu sudroon..? mai kya koi bacho ki tara koi uchhal kood masti shor hungama kar raha hoo jo sudar jaun?"

He said while pulling her in and hugging her from the back, trapping her so that any chance she had of escaping was gone.

"Hann per mujeh bachon ki tara tang to karte rehte ho na?" she said with a smile, but trying to sound angry..

"Bachon ki tarah nahi mrs. mayank sharma..husbandon ki tarah!" he replied teasingly...

"by god mayank bas tum aur TUMHARI BAATEIN.."

Mayank replied in a smug manner, "haan, issi liey to kehta hooo mujhse argue mat kiya karo mujhse koi nahi jeeet sakta"...

Nupz said shocked, "HUH! plzz my dear huusband...bharam hai aaapka..."

Mayank turned her around at that and stared intensely in her eyes, and asked, "kya kaha? phir se bolo? sachii?"

Nupz was so lost in his gaze she forgot wht he meant, wht she had said, or even wht the convo was abt!

"uuuh...haan...nahi...kya"? she asked confusedly..

mayank chuckled, then moved in and repeated softly, "sachi"?

Nupz heart was beating so fast, she only had enough breath to say..."uuh...haann?"

Mayank closed the gap betweeen them more and more, and again said, "sachi?"

Nupz gulped...and just kept staring in his eyes...mayank moved closed the gap between them, moving in for a kiss, when the door bell rung loudly!

Nupz jumped, mayank looked angrily at the door, shook his head, and said, "waah..best timing of the year ka award jaana chahiye..nupur jitni achi timing tumhare phatak (rapid) se jawab dene ki hai..usse bhi achi timing toh is door bell waale ki hai!"

Nupz shook her head to get rid of the brain freeze from his intense gaze, then getting wht he said rolled her eyes. she stared at herself in the mirror, in that bathgown, and looked towards the door, then back at herself (yikes!)..

"Mayank jaoo kholo naa..." she said as she hurried back in the washroom grabbing the clothes from his hands..

Mayank chuckled at seeing her wide eyed expression, then headed towards the door.

As he opened to see a waiter, the phone rang, so he told the waiter to hold on for a second. As he reached the phone, Nupz came back wearing a bright blue churi daar, with her wet air hung loosely just the way mayank loved them. Mayank gave her a wink and a smile, then gestured towards the door.

As Nupz opened the door again, the waiter handed out a bouqet of red roses to her, and said this was for her, left at the receptiion, to be deleivered to her inher room.

On the roses was a note with the words "for sumone special"...

Thinking how sweet of mayank, she got them smilingly, and said thanks to the waiter and closed the door.

Mayank all this while has said hello about 4 times, and then hung up.

He said irritatingly, "Kamal hai..baat bhi nahi karni hoti aur phone kar dete hain jaise hum boht free bethe hon"..

"by god tum bhi na ANGRY YOUNG MAN hi bane rehte ho! ghalti se kar diya hoga kisi ne..koi baat nahi!" nupz replied sarcasticly..

Mayank then glanced at the roses in her hand and the note in them, and said, "Wow nupur tum toh romance mei mujhse bhi aage nikli...mere liye phool order kiye aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chalne diya.."

He said in a surprised tone...

Nupz looked at him shocked, then her smile at the thought of him giving her flowers turned into a frown. "Kya matlab, yeh tumhari taraf se nahi hain? mai samjhi tumne diye?"

Mayank replied with a small smile, "mai to poora time tumhare saath tha mai kab lunga yeh flowers madam?.." he continued, his tone lightening up and his eyebrows raised, "lagta hai mera koi competition aagaya hai koi tumko impress karne ke chakkar mei....par yaar yehkaun naya phool dene waala paida ho gaya? tumko phool dene ki himmat kis mei aagayi? ms morena se darr nahi laga usko? pata nahi hoga tumhara na...bichara jab pata chalega to duniya se out ho chuka hoga by god!" he finished in a teasing tone, with a croooked smile.

Nupz narrowed her eyes at this comment, and retorted with one of her own - "haan haan..main bhi na by godd! maine kaise soch liya yeh tumhari taraf se honge? tumne toh aaj tak mujhe patta bhi gift mei nahi diya phoolon ka itna bara bouqet to DOOOR ki baat hai!"

Mayank's replied this retort of his with the same crooked smile, "mai phoool deta to tum usko baalon mei clip ki tara laga ke 1950s ki heroine bane ghooomti rehti! aur mai abhi itna buddha bhi nahi hua ke 1950s ki heroine chahoon"

The smile that Nupz has gotten on her face after giving the previous perfect retort to him turned into a frown as he again came up with a tic for tac reply.

"ACHA? 19050s ki heroine nahi chahiye! mai to hongi na woh chahiye 1950 ki hoo ke 2020 ki! tumne kaha tha tum mujhse pyaar karte hooo nupur! phir chahe mai kaisi bhi lagu!"

Mayank thougth abt that for a second, then replied sarcastically, grabbing her hand in one hand of his, "ab kaha to tha..tum mil gayi to socha tumhe hi keh du i love u...aur kisi ko dhudne mei time lagta parhna bhi to tha na..par ab iska yeh matlab to nahi ke agar tum batakh (duck) bhi banke aajao kisi din toh mai kahu i love u nupur aisi hi rehna!"

Nupz gasped in at this, and said angrily, "ACHA ! AISI BAAT HAI!! bachuu theek hai to tum naa jaaoo aur dhudn lo apni woh 'koi aur'..ab to parhayi nahi karni na! by god mujhe to neend aarahi hai mai jaa rahi hoo sone!!!"

As she tried to move away, mayank pulledher back, and in that struggle of them they both ended up falling onthe bed, with nupz falling on top of mayank..she again tried to ,move away, so again he held her still, and said guiltily, "ab mujhe aur koi kaise milegi..mera totum pe dil aagaya na? acha naa ... im soo sorry mujhe maaaf kardo na..plzzzz" he said in a begging tone, with his eyes twinkling, but his face arranged in a sad manner.

When she didnt reply, he again said, "sorrry naaa...maaf kardo...by god tum toh boht jaldi ghussa khud hoti ho aur angry young man mujhe kehti ho!"

To this nupz replied in a suspiciously taunting and teasing tone, "haan..aur by god..tum sorry boht jaldi keh dete ho.." now there was absolute grin on her face, due to the triump she had achieved over him by getting his sorry..

Mayank looked at her surprised...then just smiled and said "i luv u, humesha"

She smilled, blushed, and just hugged him, saying "i luv u too...acha aur suno..woh phoool kal reception ko de aana...kisi ne itne pyar se bhejeinge honge kisi ke liye...jiske liye bhi bhejein ho usko mil jayein woh..."

Mayank replied with a smile, "ok morena ji....tumhara hukam sar aankhon per...kar deinge waapis woh phoool....bygod ab agar tumhari ijazat ho toh zara hum un 'kisi aur' logon ko chhor ke apni baat karein?"

nupz again smiled and hugged him....❤️😳

.....and the scene closes onto all of us as ab husband wife ke private romantic moments chal rahe hain..chalo sab chhutty karo aur mayur ki videos dekho..let the couple romance..😆

Btw...i tried to add the twist here...tell me how u guys like it? im hoping we could carry on with it in a light tone for one or two more scenes, then put a more serious light on the twist...always glad for ur feedbacks, so keep them coming...😃

very nice idea......i really loved it nd ya keep goin ill wait for ur update!!!

Originally posted by: sabzz

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okay guys you can put the guy twist but very small as i dont want them to FighT plz make it a happy story !

like just mayank getting jelouse of the guy .... ! and then make every thing alright

because this never happens in the show that why ! i want to make this a happy f-f !

thanks and good work guyz !😳

Originally posted by: ananya_s

very nice idea......i really loved it nd ya keep goin ill wait for ur update!!!

ya i loved d way u introduced it........nd also ur upadte was damn gud so no worries dat it wasnt as gud as d draft......keep rocking!!!

nice update plzz cont soonnnnn

Superb update! I love Mayur romancing each other.. its so sweet.. A twist wil be interesting but plz dnt create too many problems for them.. 😳

Continue soon!

heyy really nice! amazinggg !

nice update!!! the twist is a great idea!!!