*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7 - Page 23

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hi Akanksha...
Such a sweet update...
Soo cute....
Mayank is just too gud....
Luv the dialogues..
Especially the rango wala...
Really gud...
The end was fab...
I mean the diya scene....really cute...
Keep it up...
Forgot....how r examz going?....
Continue soon...
Keep it up..
Luv Ayesha..

hey ayesha...
her exams r goin on gud....😆😆
me tellin thanx on her side as she went offlyn just minutes back😳
thanx 4 commentin
poori
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Posted: 16 years ago
U guys r really gud wid the upodates...
Hope u r even better wid examz...
Poori dear...my Boards r starting 2nd April....
Well...thnx accepted...lol...
TC...
Who's gonna update next?
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow akshu
great
do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
very Very emotional ...... U r a great writer ... the sweetest dialogue was :
mayank says, tumhe aisi halat mai me nahi dekh sakta hoo, tum meri zindagi hoo, , yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hai, nupur,
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Posted: 16 years ago
i just love ur ff its simply great
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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks for the pm
Really Akanksha very well written...mujhse bhi dono ki haalat
dekhi nahi jaanti....Thank God dono ne apneaap ko sambhaal liya....
Ab dekhte hai ki inke aage vaale zindagi main kitni khushi hogi.....And
I hope jitna dukh tha usse kai zyada khushi
ONce again WONDERFUL update....update soon....and do pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago

😆😆😆Doosre din nupur hospital se discharge ho jaati hai?

Phir ghar pahunchtey hi MM aarti nikhaalti he?.

MN right leg ghar ke andar pehle daalkar enter hotey he?..

M: nupur rukho toh ?. Mujhe bhi aana hai tere saath?

N: mayakk?. Tum bachon ki tarah kyon ladtey ho????
M: kya karun??? Bachein nahin he naa isiliye?.
N nw has tears in her eyes

MM: Mayank? tum bhi naa? rulaa diya bichaari ko?.
N: nahin nahin mummyji?. Main teek hun?. Mayank am sooo sry?
main tumhe bache ki ek khushi bhi nahi de paayi?.
M: nahin nupur? mera toh already ek bachcha he? so no probs?
N: kya??? Mayank tumne doosri shaadi bhi karli???
M: nahin meri pyaari biwi? mera bachche ka naam he???.
N: bolo Mayank?. Who bhi meri zindagi kaa sawaal he?..
M: nupur sharma he uski naam?.
N: mmmmmaaaaaaaaaayyyyyaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkkk

MN chase go on lyk TOM & JERRY chase?.

MM: array tum donon rukhogey bhi???.. Mayank? nupur abhi
hospital se aayi he beta? use aaraam karne do?
M: haan maa?
maine kab manaa kia??? Yehi mujhe pakadney ki khoshish me lagi hui he?
N: mummyji? main ab ise pakadkey hi doosre kaam me jaaungi? main toh darr hi gayi thi ki yeh monkey Mayank mujhe chodke kisi aur ?..
M: shak karthi ho mujhpey??? Nahiinnnnnnnnnn??
N: ek chutki sindoor ki keemat tum kya jaanogey Mayank sharma??

Eeshwar ka aashirwaad hota he ek chutki sindoor?.

Suhaagan ki sar ki taaj hoti he ek chutki sindoooorrrrrrrrr,??..

M: arey nupur ????.
N: Mayank mujhe nahin lagta he kit um mujhse pyaar kartey ho?
meri pyaar toh enof he naa tumhe???
M: nupur ji?. Isssey zyaada pyaar ki naa mujhe aadat he naa hi zaroorat?.
N throws a pillow at him now? their world famous pillow fight starts?.

MM : shukra he bhagwan ki? yeh donon phir se norm ho gaye?. Is ghar ki khushiyon ko waapas de deney ke liye main bahut khush hun eeshwar?

M: maa? yeh eeshwar kaun he??? Tera BF he kya???

MM: chal hat naadaan? kuch bhi bolta he?
N: mummy ji aap iske baton me mat padiye?. Waise bhi he lost it on d holi day?.
M: nupur ab phir se shuru mat ho jaa?.
N: nahin baba? me toh teri screw ki baat kar rahi hun?. Hahahaha
M: tumhe tho me ab dekh lungaa?..

MM: ab mujhe strict hona hi padega?. MAYANK NUPUR ab bas karo tum log?. Jaao soo jaao?. Kal sab baatein kar lengey?

MN: haan mummy jii?.

IN D ROOM:

N: Mayank am really sry? maine yeh bhi soch rakha tha ki mere beta ko mayor naam rakhungi aur meri beti ko??.😆

M: mayuri😆? mujhe pata he nupur?. Phir bhi himmat rakho? ek bacha nahin hua toh kya??? Iska matlab yeh nahin he ki hume saara zindagi bhin bachche ki guzaarnaa padegaa?.
N: haan Mayank?.

ARRMY-RHEA SEQUENCE

A: rhea? so maani yaa nahin??
R: tumhe dekh kar mujhe vinamra 😆😆😆ho rahi he arrmy?
A: kyon???
R: agar tere jagah koi aur ladka hota toh ? mujhe chodkar kisi aur
ladki ke paas jaata?
A: haan pagli? mein isiliye nahin gaya kyonki me tumse bahut pyaar karta hun?..
R: am feelin damn low 2day arrmy?
A: yyyyyyyyy????????//
R: coz of my nupz di's child?.
A: worry not when arrmy is here?..
R: phir bhi ?.
A: rhea??.. jo hogaya so ho gaya? ab tum ladkiyaan ek baat ko itni lambi keechti kyon he yaar?????/
R: achaa/??? Toh tum ladke hum ladkiyon ke saath panga lena
chaahtey ho?.
A: koi shak???
R: hmmmmmmmmm?????? me abhi nupur di ko bulaa laati
hun?.
A: yeh rhea bhi naa.. jab bhi romantic hone ki try karta hun? tab nupur ko baaech me laati he?.

NUP-EA CONVO:

R: di?
N: kya hua rhea???sab kuch teek toh he naa?.
R: HAAN DI? SAB TEEK HE? YEH ARRMY HUM LADKIYON
KE BAARE ME MAZAAK UDA RAHAA THA?.
N: kyaa??? Me abhi wahaan aathi hun
N: mayank? Mayank utho?.
M: kyaa hua nupur? sab teek tho he naa??
N: haan baba sab teek he? bas AR ke beech me ladka-ladki waala argument ho gaya tha?.
M: nupur toh kal subah dekh lengey naa? soney do na mujhe? bahut
neend aa rahi he?
N: nahi Mayank? mujhe abhi wahaan jaana he?
M: maa kya sochegi nupur??? Waise mujhe kal office bhi toh jaana
he?
N: nahi Mayank? mujhe jaana he jaana he jaaaaaaaannnnaaaaaaaa
heeeeeeee??..
M: teek he? rukho? abhi aata hun?..
N: acha teek he?.

AR house?..

Knock knock?..
R: haan aa rahi hun di?..
N: jaldi aana rhea? mujhe tand lag rahi he?
M: kyaa??? Yeh lo nupur.. mere jacket daaal lo?
N: nahin monkey Mayank? mujhe tum ghamandi ladkon ke help
nahin chaahiye?
M: nupurr?.. maine hi tumhe yahaan laaya aur tum muje hi???

well??.. tum log kya paagal khaane se bhaag kar aaye ho kya???

N: nahin mayank
R: teek he jeeju? agar aap ko apne upar itnaa vishwaas he toh ho
jaaye ek khel???
A(wid fake confidence): haan? kyon nahin? Mayank he naa humaare saaath?..kyon Mayank?????
M: teek he? ho jaaye?.😆

NOTE: guyz pl.. am sooo sry 4 dis short update.... i wznt in d mood 2day..... sry.... wil try 2 live up 2 ur expectations.... thanx....

Edited by poori1993 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
🤣😆 how can one write a funny scene out of such tragedy ... great Poori loved it 🤗
my fav part :
N: kya??? Mayank tumne doosri shaadi bhi karli???
M: nahin meri pyaari biwi… mera bachche ka naam he……….
N: bolo Mayank…. Who bhi meri zindagi kaa sawaal he…..
M: nupur sharma he uski naam….
N: mmmmmaaaaaaaaaayyyyyaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkkk
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kya Update tha....Waah Waah
ek chutki sindoor ki keemat tum kya jaanogey Mayank sharma??

Eeshwar ka aashirwaad hota he ek chutki sindoor….

Suhaagan ki sar ki taaj hoti he ek chutki sindoooorrrrrrrrr,……..

Highlights of the update....Ek dum perfect fit kiya use.....It was good u lightened the mood.....Now we have Nupur and Mayank back in action..waiting for the ladka ladki action.....Overall Rocking update

Continue soon



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Posted: 16 years ago
wow yaar gr8888888888 update.
well i like that nupz lines
ek chutki sindoor ki keemat tum kya jaanogey Mayank sharma??

Eeshwar ka aashirwaad hota he ek chutki sindoor….

Suhaagan ki sar ki taaj hoti he ek chutki sindoooorrrrrrrrr

wow what a lines

really loved the update update soon

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