*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7 - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago

THIS IS 4 POORI:

HI POORI!!! THAT'S WAS LOVELY PART!! 😊😊
GREAT CHOICE OF SONGS!
SPECIALLY "RANG BARSE BIGE CHUNAR WALI RANG BARSE"😆😆😆
THIS SONG IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE OLD SONGS! (SERIOUSLY...IM NOT KIDDING)😃😃😃
AND "DO ME A FAVOR LET'S PLAY HOLI" ...
SONG KE SABB LINES ATE HE! 😉😉
YEEEEHHHHH BAUJI AGREES......YEEEEHHHH!! 😊😊
I WISH IF MJHT CREATIVES DO A HOLI EPISODE SO I WANT THEM DOING LIKE THIS PART! 😳😳😳
CAN IMAGINE MAYUR AND SAJAN DANCING AND SINGING IN HOLI TIME! 😆😆
EXITED 4 NEXT PART!! CONT SOON!!! TAKE UR TIME!!!
SEE YAA! LOVE U!

THIS IS 4 AKANKSHA:

HI AKANKSHA!!!
YAAR U IM FEELING CRY RIGHT NOW!!!
MUJHE RULA DYA!!!!(SERIOUSLY ... IM NOT KIDDING) 😭😭
UR UPDT WAS SO TOUCHED!!!! 😭😭
POOR MAYUR!!! PLS MAKE THEM HAPPY IN NEXT PART!!!
WISH IT WILL GONNA EVERYTHING FINE!!!
ABB MEIN ASOO POCHLU VARNA MERI MOM KYA SOCHEGI!! 😆
OK ....MEINE ASOO POCH LYE!!! 😆😛
IM FINE LIKE BEFORE!!! 😊😊
CONT SOON!! TAKE UR TIME!! EXITED 4 NEXT PART!!!
SEE YAA!!! LOVE U!!
U BOTH ARE DOING GREAT JOB!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi akansha you made me cry it was so touching please update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww akanksha.....that was a gr8 part...it really touched me.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww...so touching and sad...great update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Akanksha...
Yaar what a touchy epi...
am glad that u showed sum reality in this FF...
Sumtimes things can go wrong but we shud be determined and face those problems...
I hope MayUr become happy again...
Really sad epi....but it was gud...
I just had problem in undertanding the beginning....
Sooo this incident happened becoz of Gunjan?..
Aww....i hope everythings alright...
Keep it up...
Make the next epi a happy one....
U both r doing a fab job...
Keep it up...
Luv Ayesha...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: styleislife13

Hi Akanksha...

Yaar what a touchy epi...
am glad that u showed sum reality in this FF...
Sumtimes things can go wrong but we shud be determined and face those problems...
I hope MayUr become happy again...
Really sad epi....but it was gud...
I just had problem in undertanding the beginning....
Sooo this incident happened becoz of Gunjan?..
Aww....i hope everythings alright...
Keep it up...
Make the next epi a happy one....
U both r doing a fab job...
Keep it up...
Luv Ayesha...

i wz waitin 4 ur comment ayeshaa.....😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Poori....
Choo sweet....
I was out of town in the morning so cud not read FF...
Wen i came back ....4FF were updated....had to read them all....sorry for the late reply sweetie...update soon...luv ayesha....muah...xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago

hi Poori ........... finally read all the three parts ... I had fun with all those songs 😆😉👏and then the last part about Mayur's such a touching loss .... u both touched something in my heart 💔

great work from both of u and great team 👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago
mayank nupur ko leke hospital se aata hai,
raamu kaka
says
are nupur bitiya rraam, raam
mayank, replies 4 her,
raam raam ramu kaka,
maa kaha hai,
memsab upar hai,
maa cums, and sees nupur in apitiable condition
,mayank says maa nupur ko aap sambhaliye,
main hospital formalities poori (this one 4 ya)kar ke aata hoo,
nupur uska haath pakad leti hai
mat jao.
mayank gets emotional, nupur nahi main nahi jaa raha hoo, main bas thodi der mai aata hao,,
and sees maa with a look, pls sambhalo maa
maa bolti hai, are nupur beta,
ajj maine tumhare ghar ke aane ki khushi me, maine gajar ka halwa banaya hai,
nupur maa ko gale laga leti hai,
aur khoob roti hai, maa phir usko samjhati hai, dekho nupur beta, jo hua vo bura hua, par hume mushkilo se ladna ssekhna chahiye,
tabhi to khushiyan aayengi,
nupur phir bhi chup nahi hoti,
phir mayank aata hai,
maa looks at him
and then says to nupur, tum jaao, araam karo, main tumhara khana udhar hi laga deti hoo,
, she then talks to mayank,
mayank beta, nupur ki halatmujhse dekhi nahi jaa rahhi,
use tu khush rakh, aur apne aaap ko bhi sambhal, nahi to vo toot jayegi,
tu hi uska ek hi sahara hai,
jaa beta jaa
room scene
nupur baiti reti hai, bistar par,
a flash bak,
mayank tri8es to catch nupur 4 her shaitani, nupur ko vo paka nahi pata, phir nupur kehti hai, kya mayank, tum mujhe pakad nahi paa rahe hoo, bacho ko kya khaak pakadogem
mayank,. gets angry, and says achaa,
abhi batata hoo,
phir dono ki hasi uske kaano me goongti hai,
mayank see snupur laughing inthe flash bak, and saying,m pakad ke dikhao mujhe,
maynk usko sambhalne lagta hai, nupur, nupur, nupur and then shouts,
nupur
nupur chup ho jati hai,
mayank says, tumhe aisi halat mai me nahi dekh sakta hoo, tum meri zindagi hoo, , yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hai, nupur,
jo hua, vo ek boora sapna samjhkar bhool jao,
nupur, mayank ko gale laga leti,
aur kehti hai,
pata hai, mayank, jab mai, tumhari biwi bani, tab, maine socha tha, main tumhe har khushi doongi, tumhare chehre, se kabhi muskaan ko gayab hi nahi hone doongi, par main to,
mayank says, mai to kya, ha???/
main to kya,?
tum hasti ho, to mera jahan hasta hai,
tum mujhe sambhalti hoo to, ais alagta hai, meri khushiyan, humari khushiyan kahi nahi jayengi, aur agar tum aisi himmat har jaogi, to main mar jaonga,
nupur uske lips pe haath deti hai, aur kehti hai, nahi,
aur nahi, main is hassen khwab ko tootne nahi doongi, ek aisa kwhaab jo mera aaj hai, jo, mera,astitiv hai, jo tum ho,
aur is kwhaab ko hum sajaynge, milke sajaynge,
khushiyon ke raang itne hhonge,
ki by god, bhagwaan ke paas bhi raango ki supply khatam ho jayegi, aur phir dono has padti hai,
nupur, unke room me mandir ki aor, dekhti hai, aur waha hka diya jalati hai,
aur kehti hai, pata hai, mayank, diya sab ki rosjhan karta hai, aur dekhna is humare sapno ke ghar ko bhi roshan karega, aur phir dono, us diye ke taraf dekhte hai,
aur mayank kehta,hai, ki, aur yeh diya se bhi roshan main tumhara har, savera banaonga, aur diye ke niche jitni andhera hai, use tumhare paas bhi na ane doonga, aur phir uske maathe ko choom leta hai,
ok bye,
see u, after sum time, me ya poori will update
Edited by Akanksha Biswas - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Akanksha...
Such a sweet update...
Soo cute....
Mayank is just too gud....
Luv the dialogues..
Especially the rango wala...
Really gud...
The end was fab...
I mean the diya scene....really cute...
Keep it up...
Forgot....how r examz going?....
Continue soon...
Keep it up..
Luv Ayesha..
Edited by styleislife13 - 16 years ago

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