*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7 - Page 25

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Akanksha Biswas thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
dear ayesha,
pl dont feel bad yaar😭..... actually mujhe pasand nahi ki koi mujhe aku bulaye,
... bura naa maan ,.... me tujhe yeh bol rahi hun kyonki tu meri dost he naa???? maaf kardey yaar....
luvs
akanksha"
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Posted: 16 years ago

Kar diya maaf...

No prob...
So can i call u Akaksha?...
In frndship ...........no sorry ....no thnx.....filmy dialogues marna main nahin choornay wali....!...
Koi baat nahin....
Update soon.....
Plz pm...
TC...
Luv Ayesha....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ajj, nupur ka birthday hai, aur mayank ata hai, room me,

Jata hai, nupur ankh kholti hai, to charo taraf buquets rehte hai,nupur leaps in happiness and says mayank, yeh sab,

Mayank kehta hai, haapy birthday to u, happy birthday, nupur laughs wid love,

Mayank says haapy b'day, my wife,

Nupur says are way aaj, auraj kaha se nikla hai, mayank says, jaha se nupur hasti hai,

Nupur then comes dressed up,

Mayank sees, her wearing a old suit,

Mayank, says are yeh kya, ajj tum aise phike kapde pehen rahi hoo,

Nupur says,

Mere pyare huhsband, ghar ka kaam kaun karega, aap?????????

Ji app to araam pharmate hai, kaam kya karenge,

Mayank phir bolta hai, nahi, tum aisi nahi pehnogi, jao,

Aaj hum aram karenge, main tum maa,

Sab log pehle mandir jayenge

At mandir,

Nupur chapel utarti hai, sab loog manta mangt hai, jab nupur wapas aate hai, to uski chapel nahi milti,

Aur waha likha rehta hai, CHAPAL CHORO SE SAVDHAN, To myank ko kehti hia,

Yeh kya, mere chapel, kal hi kharide the, ab main ghar kaise jaongi, mayank bolta hai, mayank ke hote hue,, nupur haisa keh rahi hai, immediately, usko baho me uta letha hai, nupur is shocked, and says, mayank kya kar rahe ho, sab dekh rah hai, chodoo,

Log dekte hai,

To mayank unko kehta hai, hehe, yeh behosh ho gayi hi mandir, main to inme abhi bohot kamzori hai, to aisi halat me muhe yehi karma chahiye,na

To phir unhe dekhkar, ek patni apne pati ko kehti hai,

Dekha ji, kitna pyar hai, aur aap t mera ek bag bhi nahi uta pate,

To vo admi kehta hai, apne wajan ke saath apne bag ka wajan bhi chek kar lena, ok

Tab phir,

Mayank nupur ko kamre tak leke jata hai, aur both share a eyelok,

Ramu kaka kums and says,

Beta nupur, panditji aye hai,

Nupur says aap jayiye main aati hoo,

Mayank gusse me ubalta hai, isko main aaj naukri se nikalke rahoonga, aur panditji ka koondali bhi badal ke rahoonga

Aur nupur ek mischvious smile deke chali jati hai

Me going, gotta see movie wid frinds, exams over

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Akanksha.....
Hows u?
Nice update....
All of a sudden B-Day kahan se?....
Such a sweet idea wid the flowers......
Again very nice dialogues.....😆
Chapal ke baad wala scene was awesum......
Mayu holding Nupz in his arm.....can totally imagine it....
The Pati Patni scenhe was too gud....
We will never get tired of the ever famous eyelock....
Ramu Kaka ne kyun disturb kya?
Anyways nice update......hav fun at the movies.....btw..........which one r u watching?....
TC...
Bye....
Edited by styleislife13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hiiiiiiiiii
i m komal.nice parts.i have been reading this ff since long.this is the first time i am commenting.
pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Akanksha lovely update
Loved the part jahan Mayank Nupur ko
utha deta hai and the lady comments to her husband....
Bechara Ramu Kaka usko mayank ka gussa jhel na padega
Gr8 Update do continue soon
Love
Tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Akanksha lovely update!!!
how r u???love the paart when mayu keep her up
so cutey......and when the couple comments
cutey updt.... continue soon...take ur time...see yaaa!!!
Akanksha Biswas thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

okieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, now sum romantic update 4 u all,

, mayank brings her up in the room, , lays her on the bed, the time stands still, onli their heart speaks, nupur's lips are trembling , maynks just drowns himself into the eyes of his dream. His reality, which he enjoys to live, nupur is just still, her eyes, are enough to tell him how much she loves mayank.mayank slowly, moves the tendrils on her reddened cheeks and she is just more blushing, maynk,is overwhelmed by the beauty of the face, her lips , her eyes speak onli love for mayank, mayank slowli, slowli nears nupur's cheeks, till he touches nupurs cheek with a silent kiss,and mayanks breath is such as if it is dissolved in nupur's, breath as if nupur is breathing mayank's essense, they were too close , just too close, mayank having a lot to say was just not able to say, he wanted to capture it in his mind and heart and and relive the life he had been waiting for,, nupur suddenli felt very, like,a urge to never let gothat moment and she literallli, hugged mayank as if she wanted to be in his embrace forever and ever, she held him closeto her breath, so that they become one, she didn't want to let go that moment, it was a lifetime for her, she was feeling heaven in her heart, estactic in her feelings, aand complete inmayank's arms, she was feeling that as if she had been created for this moment this pal, .mayank and nupur truly in each other's embrace in each other's essense became, the mayur,

at that time nupur felt a sweet pain in her heart, but burning in her feet, and said in a very ffaintli, ahh,.maynka said, nupur, dard ho raha hia,nupur nodded her head in innocence, mayank then cleaned her foot with, a towel, and kissed her feet, nupur felt, estactic . mayank was caressing ther feet, and he brought out a payal from his pocket,and made it adorn the feet of nupur, nupur was feeling so nice, and then mayank again kissed her feet and nupur said, mm kay kar rahe ho, gudgudi hoti hai, mayank again kissed, and kissed her feet, so that she laughed and laughed, until she cried due to laughter,and then mayank suddenli, held a tear in his hand, and dropped it, he then held nupur's both the chheks wid his hand, and moved again close closer, and closer to nupur's face, and instead of lips, he kissed the forhead and said in a romantic voice, I LOVE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,YOU, and nupur rested her head on his manli shoulder with a smile of love,

sorry for a short update

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Akanksha....
Yaar what did u do....?
Such a fab update...
The sweetest one yet....
Soo romantic n cute....
U cud really imagine him saying I luv U.....
Soo cute.....sooo nice.....it was short but sensational....
Just really touching after the sad epis.......i just read the 1st line n thought.....wen did they go tothe room.....
Really awesum...i want more.....
Sum more cute parts filled wid MayUr...
So now since they r 1....they hav becum MayUr....so cute lines....
Aaj toh description ne hadd kar di...itni fab........hmm.......
Dil Maanga More Updates.....
TC...
Edited by styleislife13 - 16 years ago
TINAMALHONTRA thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Akanksha it was a breathtaking update.........
The emotions were so pure....and its so true
that when they come together they make Mayur......
It's the sweetest of them all.........Do continue soon....
Loved the update
Love Tina

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