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Posted: 16 years ago
IT WAS GR8 DEAR....LUVED THE SONG SELECTION
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Posted: 16 years ago
UFFFFFFFF yeh updt poori...
luved the song selection....
keep it up..
and read all ur previous updts.....wowwwwwwwwwwwww
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Posted: 16 years ago

Loved the update poori....Choice of songs FAB
Aur yeh Kya Bauji maan gaye....GR8.....
Loved ur update as usual....Gunjan dancing and
singin aur Mayur.....u can imagine them doing this
Aur Samrat apne sasurji ko full on impress kar raha hai
Update soon dekhna hai bakiyo ka bauji ke haan ka kya reaction nikalta hai
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome 👏👏👏 update soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww....such a great update as always....i loved all the songs and the way you described everyone dancing and singing to it. every time you describe mayank's smile and his gazing towards nupur, i can so imagine it....awesome update...cant wait to see some romantic scenes b/w mayur....update soon.
keep writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awsome take!! do write more pls!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey poori awesome update yaar!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
every body, naha lete hai, after tat funfilled holi,
, sab log niche baite rehte
par nupur upar thandai lane jati hai,
ammy, rhea ke saath,
talks in alow tone mazaa ya
r:mm
,ammy lifts her chin,
ajj to holi hai,
ab to maaf kar de,
mayank cums and says
oye hoye, kya baat hai.
aaj bada pyar jhalak raha hi,
phir dono gale lag jate hai,
mayank chidate hue kehta hai,
aamy, nupur tumhe bakdoor doond rahi hai,
rhea, gussse me aa jati hai,
mayank laughs off smirking ly,
ammy like,
kya mayank????????????????/
tabhi gunjan di ko dundne jati hai,
nupur kehti hai, too ja pani leke , mai aati hoo,
tabhi gunjan se sidsi ke udhar paani gir jata hai,
aur bolti hai, abhi kapda lati ho,
par tabhi nupur a jati hai tray lekr,
par vo paani ko nahi dekhti aur us par chal padti hai,
mayank niche uska wait kar raha hota hai,
nupur ka pair pehle sidi se phisalta hai, aur mayankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk chilati hai,
mayank bhi is in ashock, aur nupurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
kehkar chilaata hai, sab log chauk jate hai,
, nupur girti hui, mayank ke arms me girti hai,
mayank kehta hai,. nupur, nupur, aur rone lagta hai,
saamy kehta mai, ambulance bulata hoo, mayank says,
nupur, tumhe kuch nahi hoga, mayank hai, tumhare saath,
haik,
scene at the hospital,
mayank nupur ka haath thame , icu tak le jata hai,
doctor says, bohot khoon beh chuka hai,
nurse, stiches lao,
that moment mayank and nupur ka haath choot jata hai,
, mayank is xtremely, shocked,
and remembers th laughing moments,
a flash bak
nupur: uto, ,
mayank,mm nahi abhi nahi,
, nupur kehti hai, kya kar rae ho, haath chodo,
mayank says, yeh haath chodne ke liye nahi thama hai,
yeh haath chodne ke liye nahi thama hai,(echoes)
nupur ki hassi bhi uske kaano m gunjti hai,
, . phir nupur ki cheek bhi uske kaano me gunjti hai,
, tabhi sammy usko sambhalne ki koshish karta hai,
mayank says, yeh kya ho gaya,
and cries bitterly
doctor cums out,
mayank asks,
doctor mmeri wife theek to hai, na,
doctor says,
stiches laga diye hai,
24 gante thak hosh nahi ayega to kuch keh nahi sakte,
par,
mayank says, par kya,, par kya doctor,
boliye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
we cud not save the child
we cud not save the child
we cud not save the child
we cud not save the child
mayank is like completely shattered,
and sees nupur, thru the jars
and cries,
gunjan says, jiju, sambhaliye apne aap ko, varna di ko kaun sambhalega,
myank kuhch nahi keh pata.
mayank nupur ki baate yaad karta hai,
ach mayank, judwa honge, ,
mayank :nahi ek ladki hogi aur tumhari tarah bilkool nahi hogi,
nupur:
acha, par laongi to main, is liye meri tarah hogi,
mayank enters, the room,
nupur unconcious,
myank, says,
ghabrao mat nupur, main hoo tumhare saath, raat ke baad, savera aata hi hai,
usi tarah, humari khushiyan bhi laut ayengi,
nupur opens her eyes partially, and says,
mayank,
mayank aanso poch leta hai,
nupur says,
in afaint voice, by god,
mayank tum kyon roh rahe ho,
maynk lulls her, and says, kshh kuch mat kaho, aur use ba me le leta hai,
, ayank says
agar sapn atoota to kya hua, use phir se dekha ja sakta hai,
nupur did not under stand,
and says, kya keh rahe ho,
mayank understand,s and says, shh so jao, kal baat karenge,
nupur par smajh jati hai, vo kya kr=ehna chahte hai,
myank, , judwe theek to hai, na, , mayank is stunned to know, her sentance, and usse gale lag padat hai,
aur roke nahi kehta hai,
nupur is still, just still,
mayank says, nupur, nupur,
nupur says, ahh, and laufs off mayank kaho na tum jhoot bol rahe ho,
kitana mazaak karte ho
maynk kehata a, nahi nupur, samjho, mai tumhe jhoote sukh mai nahi rakna chahta, aur kehta hai, ab so jao, tum aaram karo,
nupur uska haath pakad leti hai,
mat jao, ,
mayank strenthens himself,a nd syas,
mm, main yehi hoo,
tumahare paas,
humesha,
nupur ke aankho me, anso rehte hai,
yeh kyo hua,
myank says:, kyonki,, shayad yehi abhi humare kismat me tha,
nupur ;tum kabse kismat me vishwas karne lage
mayank:, jabse kismat ne mujhe tumse milaya hai, tab se,
both rote hue bhi has padte hai,
ajla update shayad poori ya mai doongi,
ok bye,
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was soo gud yaar
i am touched .............gr8
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Posted: 16 years ago

Touched yaar....
😔Poor Nupur and Mayank...jaldi update karo
hopefully everything turns out well
And the update was gr8

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