*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

hey ayesha n sana... yaar try 2 understand yaar.... i evn hv my exms on my head.... i will really update a gud 1 to satisfy u all.........

luvs

poori

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#182

i understand...but in the previous pg u said u were typing it....thats why i was asking wen u wud post it....

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payas bansal

@_Payuu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

oh great job both of u

just luved it

do continue soon

veryyyyyy excited to read the left part

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SamLuvsSaRun

@SamLuvsSaRun

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

Oh good work guys..Keep it up!! And do M me the next time u UD..I don wanna miss it:)

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

guys this is my update... pl. sry 4 da late update..... hope this is upto ur expectations....

sry ayesha, all my typings got erased coz of a sudden power-cut.....so had 2 type it agn...

THEME: HOLI PREPS

This episode is dedicated 2 my svt lil sis payas [sajan_monaya] a msg 4 her: " hey payas dear am really proud of u- this 1s 4 ya coz this has sajan included"

All our characters get up on d holi day wid much enthusiasm?.

M: waah!! Aaj holi hai!! Aaj mein nupur ko itna sataunga ki wah tang aa jaayegi?..

N: holi!!! holi!!! holi!!! By god aaj humaari shaadi ke baad pehli holi he? kitna mazaa aaayega?.

Gunjan[G]: aaj holi ki thyohaar he?. Jaldi tayyaar hoke di ki pasanditha gaajar ki halwa banaaungi?

Sammy[S]: chashmish mein aa raha hun?. Tumhe rangon se barn eke liye?.

A: aaj toh mein nupz ke saath itna waqt bitaaunga ki rhea ko jalan se pareshaan kar doonga *wink*

R: (same thoughts)

SHARMA HOUSE:

MM: mayu beta, aaj toh jaldi uto? aaj holi hain?.

N: mummy ji, aap hi boliye naa? main toh subah subah utkar tyaar huyi, rasoi ki kaam mein aap ki haath baanti, rangoli banaai, aur yeh kumbkaran ab tak soo rahaan he?

MM: haan beta tum toh meri pyaari beti ho?.(wid this MM leaves)

M: tum dono apne saas-bahu pyaar ko katam karo? mein ut gaya hun?

N: jaldi tayyaar ho jao.. hume bauji & gunjan ko bhi toh milne jaana he?.

M: tayyaar hone me meri madat nahi karoge???

N: mayu, tum ab bas bi karo naa?.

M: teek he tumhaare marzi?..

BHUSHAN HOUSE:

G: happy holi bauji?.. aaj humaare nupur di aanewaali he? yay !!! main bahut bahut khush hun?.

B: haan beta!!! Uske jaane ke baad ghar kitna gumsum ho gaya he naa???

G: mein hun naa bauji?.

B: haan beta par evn then tumhaare bhi toyh shaadi karwaani he?

G[shying]: bauji, aap bhi naa?. (thinking abt sammy)

All ppl. Meet up in bhushan house?

N: gunjan? kaisi ho?? Bauji kaise hain???

B: array beta hum teek hain?. Damaad babu se toh milaao?

N: haan bauji?. Suno Mayank, bauji tumhe bula rahe hain?

M: haan nupur aa raha hun?.

gunjan and nupur go aside 2 hv a private chat?..

G: di aap kaisi he??? Mujhe aap ki bahut chinta ho rahi thi? Mayank jiju toh aapko teek rakte he naa???

N[wid a sad face]: gunjan sach kahun toh, Mayank muje har din maar maar ke tang karta he?😆😆. Uske maa toh ghar ki saare kaam mujhse hi karwaati he?😆😆 *lolz*

G: kyaaaaaa?????????//😲

N: nahi pagli, hum toh bahut khush he? teek he ab humaare chod? sammy kaisa he???/

G: di aap bhi naa?.

N: suno gunjan, bauji tumhaare shaadi ki baat kar rahe the?.. isse pehle ki unhe koi aur ladka pasand aaye, tum unhe sab batha dena?

G: haan di, par samrat ko aaj yahaan bahut teek behaviour karma padega? tab hi😳😳???

N: teek he gunjan ab mein chalti hun? Mayank ko sambhaalna he mujhe?😳😳.

PRECAP: KAL DEKHIYE MJHT ME??

SAMMY AUR MAYANK BHAANG KE NASHE MEIN NAACH GAANA KA RAHE HE?. WHO BHI IS GAANE PE???

"DO ME A FAVOUR LETS PLAY HOLI"

FROM D MOVIE "WAQT - RACE AGAINST TIME"😳😳

guyz pl. leave ur comment.... i can PM u only then as i PM ppl. by thier comments abt the latest update..... evn aku does d same way....

thanx 4 ur support

luvs

poori

Edited by poori1993 - 16 years ago

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#186

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Hi Poori..

How r u...

No prob yaar..im in Pakistan ...in the summer there is a powercut up to 10 hrs...so no worrys...

Now where was i?....yes abt the update..

I luv the beginning...what is wrong wid Ammy.....why is he bothering MayUr?...

Wen i read the line SHAADI KE BAAD ....i was like wen did they get married then i remembered what FF this was...silly me...Actually i read abt 8 FF thats why...

Wanna know what happens next..

Sammy is sure gonna be in a BAD behaviour...becoz of Bhaang..

I wanna know how they act...

Really nice .....but no complaints yaar....

Continue wenevr u feel like it....okay...

TC...

1st to comment!...

Edited by styleislife13 - 16 years ago

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payas bansal

@_Payuu_

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

oh thanxxxxx for dedicating it to me di

i just luved it

thanx for including samrat and gunjan alsooooooooo

hope u continue soon

i am also veryyyyyyyyyyy proud of u

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#188

HI POORI!! HOW R U?

LOVE THIS UPDT!!!

SO EXITED 4 NEXT PART!!

YAAR EK AUR BHI TO MISSION HAI!!!

SAMMY KA MISSION.....BAUJI KO PATANA!!!

HA HA HA HA HA

LOVE THE PRECAP:SAMMY AUR MAYU BHAANG KE NASHE MEIN!!

AND WOH BHI "DO ME A FAVOUR LET'S PLAY HOLI"

GUNJI AND NUPUR KA KYA HOGA???

IM SO EXITED!!!!IT WILL BE SO FUNNY AND CUTEY!!

CONT SOON!!! WHEN AS POSSIBLE!!!

THANX 4 PM ME!!!

SEE U VERY SOON!!!

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Tanya

@TINAMALHONTRA

Navigator

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Posted: 16 years ago

#189

Hey poori welcome back....
Abt your update LOVED it....waiting eagerly for ur next update
Sammy has to be in good behaviour par bhaang ke nashe main
kya hoga waiting to see.....Aur Nupur ne bechaari Gunjan ko tension main hi daal diya.....Love saas bahu interaction bechara Mayu akela pad
gaya.....Waiting to see what Army aur Rhea have in store
Jaldi update karo waiting eagerly..